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Potions Under Duress Chocolate Enchantment
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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


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9/10

Merlinsbeard

Great chapter.

Glad Ron is trying to understand.  Hope Severus and Hermione don't suffer too much from her telling them about the marriage.

9/10

CharmedForce

I'm glad they made up. (Even though I hate Ron.) And they do need any bit of joy they can get.

Great update! 

10/10

Gardengirl

Yea, an update. Nothing like pruning vigorously when you're out of sorts!

9/10

i_am_gray

Great story, I've enjoyed reading it tremendously. Well done, well done indeed!

10/10

aura

Still a little PO'd at Remus, but his reactions were realistic, and at least someone knows the truth about them now.  Hopefully, he'll come to accept, if not like, what's going on. That would sure make things easier for Severus and Hermione in the long run.

Me thinks this was a bit of an understatement: “He was a bit put out that you left bruises on me yesterday, so he ensured it wouldn’t happen again. I didn’t tell him it was you or you would undoubtedly be dead now.”

One word for this part: “So if I killed him you would die soon after. That was what you meant when you said you would be mad with grief if I killed him. It was literal.” Comprehension seemed to dawn on him. Finally!!! 

Guessing this realization (and Dobby's entrance into the story here at all):  She didn’t bother to wonder how the house-elf had made it through the combined wards she and Remus had put up—nothing seemed to keep house-elves out. will come up again, and maybe play an important role later on. 

Had a couple of thoughts here:  Even if Remus came to her later that day and said she was brilliant and there was nothing he’d like to do more than to accept Severus back into the bosom of the Order—and that was about as likely as feeling happy around a Dementor—she still had to eventually convince the others not to hex Severus on sight. The first was that they could use Harry and Ginny's connection somehow to verify (for the Order) the things she had been saying about the soul-mate bond: the time and distance making one gittery, feeling eachother's emotions, and knowing if their partner is lying parts; but of course that would have to wait until it was safe to reveal that Harry had a soul-mate himself. That led to my second thought: since Harry has to be the one to finally strike Voldemort down, they're going to need to protect Ginny, and probably keep her away from the Final Battle.  If Gin were to get cursed (Crucio'd) while Harry's dueling the Big Bad, the unexpected pain he'd feel through their bond would be enough to give an advantage to the Enemy.

Looking forward to the next!  I'm loving this fic!

10/10

Vampire_Exotica

Can't wait for the next chapter.  I can relate to Hermione in a way. My partner and I have been together 5 years and due to unfortunate circumstances we live roughly 200 miles away from each other.We speak every night on the phone and I do believe he is my soul mate.Hermione and Severus' conversation at the end there reminded me of our conversations and text messages before bed. Wish I had that diary though. Would save a hell of a lot of my phone credit!I hope to be living with my partner again soon and I hope  Hermione and Severus make it out the other end of this war intact. I really do love this! Keep it going.  It's really touched me.(Queen - 'You're my best friend' Came on as I was reading the end and have to say its very appropriate. lol )

9/10

Izzgy

What a beautiful story!
I hope to read more from you in the future...

9/10

LillaQ

Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading the part with the talk with Remus.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love the bander they have with each other.  I believe Remus will come around with time.  Once he sees that Severus truly loves her and doesn't want to kill them all, he'll come around.  Great story  Looking forward to more.

10/10

CharmedForce

Another great update. Remus is justified in his reactions, according to his character as written by JKR, but I still think the character is an idiot when it comes to Severus.

It's nice to see you didn't have him suddenly becoming friendly. His loss of control with Hermione is fairly canon, since he did react similarly with Harry in DH.

Can't wait for the next bit. Good job! 

0/10

marisamarinee

Enjoyed this immensely 

0/10

marisamarinee

She should have been in Slytherin 

0/10

Anathema

"And it does have properties he didn't bring up with her"You evil thing! It's already like sitting on pins, waiting for the Hermione-Remus confrontation. Now you had to add another nugget for my overactive imagination to work with. Please, update quickly!

10/10

marisamarinee

One of my favorite chapters. 

0/10

marisamarinee

She's pregnant! Not a fan of how Snape didn't tell her though but I see why. 

0/10

marisamarinee

Crazy!

0/10

marisamarinee

Your take on soul mates reminds me a lot about In Your Eyes a great movie that I higky recommend 

10/10

marisamarinee

Oh! The scene at the bookstore was brilliant! It was predicable from previous chapters that Remus had his suspicions but reading this chapter still had that oh!! factor. 

0/10

marisamarinee

Oh shite! The snake is out of th bag!!

0/10

marisamarinee

Hermione may not enjoy being called pet but I always liked it when Sev calls Hermione his pet in the other stories that I read. 

9/10

Severus49

Great story! I'm so glad I did a search and found this one.  The writing is fabulous, the lemons - supremely tart and although Snape might seem OOC to some, I think behind closed doors he's just fine!

10/10

aura

Loved Remus' shock here: “I can’t believe he just stood there and took orders from you.” This has got to be the first fic where I've begun to actively dislike Remus (granted, he thinks he's justified, and he doesn't have all the facts, so he may eventually redeem himself). He got off easy with Hermione. Her calling him on his closed-mindedness, and 'priorites', before going back to the (colder) formal address of Mr. Lupin was much less than what I wanted to do to him as I read it.

Then I wanted to smack Severus for leaving the love-bite and causing problems with the trio, but he made up for it with his protectiveness at seeing her bruise. I can't wait to see the rest of what the spell he used entails! Their domestic moments (sitting and eating in bed) were so sweet, and I liked how he was able to figure out what she was planning to brew with only the round-about questions she asked for clarification. His pride at her idea was great. And the scene in the lab, where they talk about and show eachother their feelings was very touching.

Looking forward to the next!

0/10

nightshift

I like possessive, protective Severus. I have a sneaking suspicion that Ron is going to get shocked a time or three.

0/10

marisamarinee

Well then. I'm looking forward to what's gonna happen next 

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Overly protective Severus.....................wonder what other properties that spell holds.

Brilliant as always. 

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