This chapter was terrifying - when Hermione jumped up and said that her parents were being attacked - I expected it to be the worst but was glad that it was not.  It was heart-wrenching to say the least - good work.

Hestia - again I say since we know she is passed amoung the deatheaters - is a complete slag - I cannot believe Severus would even touch Miss Nasty - Ewww.  Severus coming to the Grangers was a nice touch.  Again I say, too many people are prying into Hermione's life and I fear the consequences and confrontations that are going to come.

The confrontation with Remus was good writing - it makes the plot more interesting because you do not know what trials Hermione is going to face and what Remus is going to do yet.  Good chapter.

The scene at Flourish and Blotts was just brillant - like an old married couple.  When Severus found the bruise that was so beastly masculine and I loved the spell he whispered - makes him so he man - you mine kind of guy but in a dead sexy way.  Great chappie. 

Loved the chapter - from the potions buying. enlisting the twins to finds the founder items to Remus knowing that the man Hermione was snogging was Severus - you were right when you ended it was an "oh shite."

Loved this chapter - they really should not be running around alone.  Loved the protectiveness of Bill and Severus and how both wizards admonished  them for skating their guards. 

Great interaction with Bill and him removing the curses - like the chapter and cannot wait to read the next one

Creative with the reenactment for Voldemort - but I feel that people will start pushing Hermione soon for answers that she cannot give and how you deal with these upcoming events will make for some good reading

Oh the cottage - what a romantic idea and I loved the house elf name - twinkie.  It is good to see the improvements that you wrote on Harry and Ron's skills and I loved the end with the date - it really sounded like fun

I loved the chapter and the creative events that you had occurring from the attack on Collin's family, to Hermione's worry for her parents and to finding the locket - it kept the chapter very interesting

Well at least in this story - Ron took the rejection like a man - most of the time he is portrayed as a screaming brat - I liked the way you wrote about his reactions and it made the story better with you portraiting him the way that you did 

I just love Hermione's preparedness - she is the glue that holds everything together and the planner that helps them move forward - good chapter.

Loved the conversation between Hermione and Severus - it was well written and a great plausable conversation that fits with the story - good job

Loved what she did to the twins and she was right to let Severus brew a few days - let him experience the longing of the bond - it makes him realize not to take her for granted just because of the bond.

Loved how you portraited Hermione in this chapter and how she took on the Dursleys.  I felt so sorry for the worry that Mrs Granger was feeling.  This was written very well.

Good chapter - love how she told Lav Lav off and loved the jealous addition when Severus saw Ron hug Hermione

Such a sad chapter - I feel sorry for them both and the position that they are in - great writing.

Even the HBP - this part of the story always saddened me to a great degree because Dumbledore is such a wonderful character. I loved the way you wrote it in this chapter.

The invisible Hermione with Snape - that was so sensual - loved that idea.  Severus is so closed off and Hermione is going to get hurt with what is coming - my curiosity is how when it all comes to the end of the story what will you write to patch the rift that will grow between them - great story

I so love a strong Hermione and when she put up her mind shields and pushed him - I shouted to myself - way to go girl.  The intimate scenes were great - good chapter

The wedding was a great original creation and very pretty - the wedding night was good - I like the story

I do not know how Severus is continuing to hold it together around Hermione - when the finally do marry - it is going to be one explosive wedding night.  I loved the plan to fool Voldemort - good scheming

"The truth was she did find herself jittery today. Nearly three days without her Severus Snape fix was wearing on her,"

 I think we all know the feeling.  LOL!

I love Hermione's revenge!  Most awesome.  I really would have liked it if she could tell them about the seriousness of the side affects of their potion.  But that, perhaps, isn't prudent since it may raise too many question concerning her "soul mate".  Anyway, loving the story.  Great job!                 

Loved the desperation of their desire to marry quickly - that was cute.  Hestia - ewww- a deatheater lover - she just sounds like a slag.  It is novel that at this point know one besides Dumbledore knows of the situation between them - great plotting but eventually something will slip - the where and when remains to be seen

Good chapter and loved the ending - Severus letting her ask questions to her hearts content - that is a definitely effected Severus you have created - ah love what it can do