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Chocolate Enchantment
Vivian B595 Reviews | 6.62/10 (595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )
When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant
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Another great chapter , I'm off to the next.
Lavender is such a cow! Nice cliffie!
ooh bad move , someone's going to see something they shouldn't...
I agree about the vow, I haven't read any other fics where Harry's attack on Draco has been picked up as a threat to Severus, aren't you clever.
Lovely chapter, it makes a pleasant change to see the sex scene implied rather than described in graphic detail, not that well written lemons are bad either.
I should have read this chapter before reviewing the previous, now I know who else was affected by the potion. I like the bit about the trousers zipper being employed or deployed.
good chapter again. I wonder who else has been affected by the chocolate?
I hope Harry's not looking at the map right now hehe
I love the mix of humour with the more serious storyline, it just gets better each chapter. Keep up the good work!
I liked the spoon reference as well, but also the part where Dumbledore puts it into perspective.. Hey you may have found a true love you didn't want, but I know I am going to die shortly!
And Yay! Ron has finally found someone else! Much less stress on Hermione that way.
Glad her parents are trying to be understanding of her situation. But yeah, she's definitely pregnant, and now that we know she wasn't wanting kids for ten years of so... Severus is really going to be in for it when she finds out.
I like the idea of one of Riddle's hiding places being at the orphanage. It makes a lot of sense, so does the fact that they found it it one of the worst burnt rooms (I imagine the dark magic probably caused the girl who set the fire to go a bit loopy), and that the area it was located it was "untouched by scortch marks" (afterall, he would have protected the thing).
And Yay! Ron has finally found someone else! Much less stress on Hermione that way.
Glad her parents are trying to be understanding of her situation. But yeah, she's definitely pregnant, and now that we know she wasn't wanting kids for ten years of so... Severus is really going to be in for it when she finds out.
I like the idea of one of Riddle's hiding places being at the orphanage. It makes a lot of sense, so does the fact that they found it it one of the worst burnt rooms (I imagine the dark magic probably caused the girl who set the fire to go a bit loopy), and that the area it was located it was "untouched by scortch marks" (afterall, he would have protected the thing).
Imagine the twins as potions ingredients, they would create totally unpredictable explosions no doubt * chuckle*
Poor old Fred and George, they just can't help themselves can they!
Great start, nice to see a scene with Severus talking to Dumbledore about the vow, but I didn't think he knew what Draco's task was until later??
Aha! One down, one to go! I feel sorry for Hermione when she has to tell her mum about severus...hopefully she takes it well! Intriguing chapter, keep it up!
I wonder when Hermione is going to suspect she's pregnant. Maybe not until someone else mentions the possibility. Is Severus going to be willing to meet Hermione's parents. He would probably be better off meeting them first when he's disillusioned. I liked how Hermione mentioned that his disguise doesn't show his real age, because then it's her parents' fault if they think he's really younger.
Very good as always. A bit of action was very welcome after the big fight. I just precise this is not a criticism, just a statement.
I'm guessing it was the Horcrux that started the fire. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I can't believe that Hermione is expecting. I don't think she or the Order are going to take this very well. Poor Sev isn't going to know what hit him when she gets done with him.... Unless of course, you are just making us think that....but I don't think so. Poor Hermione.
Ah, good chapter! Up coming events should prove to be quite interesting. I can hardly wait to see Hermione's reaction when Severus lets her in on Moldy Voldy's baby announcement. I also can't wait to see how various Order members respond to the idea of Severus taking the Unbreakable Vow. You have me sitting on pins now!
Oh crap - the dark lord expects Severus to impreginate Hermione and then kill them both before she births - getting more and more dangerous. The vow and the meeting to come with Severus is going to be tricky but I agree that having it at the Burrow is the best choice - great chapter - please update
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Wow, you are such an awesome reviewer! I loved checking this fic and seeing so many new ones, and getting your take on each chapter was great. Thanks!
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Wow, you are such an awesome reviewer! I loved checking this fic and seeing so many new ones, and getting your take on each chapter was great. Thanks!
Yeah - the locket is gone and Ron is starting to act more mature again - When JKR married her to Ron - I just could not see it - I could see years of fighting constantly and never seeing eye to eye instead - they fought a lot even as friends. Good update.
Okay now Ron is acting like the normal git that he is - I cannot believe he called her a whore. He is lucky she did not hex him into next week. Bad news though about her revealing she is married - she is in for more poking and prodding - things seem to be getting more and more difficult.
Loved the hint at Ron's and Harry's transformation - make you so wonder what they will turn into. The hunt seems waining - means this will turn into a very long story before they get them all - I like longer stories though - loved the bedroom interaction with Severus when he found out she was not returning for her last year at Hogwarts - it was cute.