New Chapter for Chocolate Enchantment
Chocolate Enchantment
Vivian B595 Reviews | 6.62/10 (595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )
When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant
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Another update, so soon!
Your fic remarkably gains in speed, with Lupin's suggestion for Severus to "come out of hiding" and to make another Unbreakable Vow (I guess he will resent that a lot) and Hermione loosing her temper at Ron's idiocy.
Terrific read, as always. I'm looking forward to the next chap.
Oh I love it Ron got a jolt. And he still has feelings for her. And the emotional rollercoaster Harry must be going through. Im glad his friends are there for him. If Ron kept his damn hands to himself then he wouldn't keep getting shocked. She is not his to be lusting over. He is just hard up. Maybe Lavender will take his sorry arse back. When Severus find outs about this he is going to blow a gasket. Great chapter
Great job. You are correct, Ron can be a bit dim at times but he does have a good heart. But Hermione IS better off with someone who is her intellectual equal. I thought JKR didn't quite have it thought out too well when she paired Ron & Hermione. Enjoyed it very much.
If I were Hermione, I would have slapped Ron across the face for that comment.
Brilliant chapter, but need more Snape...........please.
Well, considering the canon, "scarlet woman" thing, it sounds realistic to me. She probably shouldn't have revealed the ring though...can't wait to see how Severus takes this. I love it!
I thought it was perfect. It's how I see Ron, as a right ass, anyway, just MHO. Looking forward to the next.
I'm glad for you that so many people like this fic. It means there are some pople whith good taste. Hoping for more as soon as you can.
Boy did the twins screw up that one. They should have done more research.....Cant wait to see what Hermoine is going to get them back with.....Great chappie BTW.
Great, Fantastic!! LOL Love it, Its going to be fun to see just what happens next. Great fic.
Tee Hee Hee, this is gunna be great ! Twins, gottalove them
of course you are on our favorite lists your brilliant as is this chapter.
I think you're right about not killing off the Grangers. Hermione's guilt over being married and not telling them before they died would be devastating.
Interesting chapter, leaving me with more questions than answers.
I'm beginning to think that Viktor may be up to something horrible. Can't wait to find out what Ron and Harry transfigure into.
I'm happy to see a content SS/HG right now. YAY!What are the boys turning into? I can't wait to find out!
I always love it when you let her spend some time with her hubby! Hope they get to work on her 'special potion project' soon though, especially if Severus was right about: “The way the Dark Lord is recruiting, we’ll be lucky to have that much time. I’ll be surprised if we see the Yule holidays before he makes his move.”
Interesting that between the two, the Parselmouth isn't the one developing scales... as for Harry, I was thinking, not just cuddy animals have a lot of hair on them... for Ron's sake, I hope he's not a spider!
I did wonder about Viktor's more frequent letter writing... hope he's not a Death Eater too, as he'd be in a good possition to 'check up on' Severus' job of winning over Hermione. Also, he apparently has plans to not only meet Hermione, but her parents and Harry and Ron too, while he's in town. Could spell trouble, but that's only if he is a bad guy...
Really like this fic! Hope to see another update soon.
Another great update! The story is progressing smoothly and I like where it is headed. I can't wait to see how you merge handle the rest.
Finally I manage to make up my tardiness without being caught which was not that easy. But it felt so good. I mean the feel of danger around me combined with the stress of this chapter ... It was a great feeling.
*Big sigh of contentment* I love tender Severus. He is just so sweet and loving. I want a Severus of my own. Do you have one in stock for me ?
I'm sure Lupin will come around after adjusting to the new situation. She can trust him for everything. So two chapters read, and two to be read.
I'm sorry I've had two terrible weeks and no chances at all to have a bit of privacy to read you. Yesterday was sunday and I was glad to have four chapters to read in one go. And you really pick my curiosity with this special spell. I supposed maybe I could find out before the end of the day. But life has called me back to reality :"You really expected to have an hour to spend on your own, comfortably settled in the sofa, reading? You silly !" So I'm here on monday morning, glancing around at every sound, trying to read while I'm NOT suppose to. And preying to NOT be caught and having enough time to finish quickly.
Very nice.
Glad Hermione had all those wards up. Guess we'll never know exactly why Draco hate(d) Hermione so much now... Good to know they were all caught or 'punished' so that Hermione (and her parents) don't have to worry about those particular baddies again.
It's kinda sad that her parents still don't consider magic (which they've probably been exposed to in at least small doses since Hermione was a child) 'real', but it does make her secret-keeping habits (around them, at least) understandable. It's good that they do obviously love each other so much though, hopefully that'll make it easier to come to grips with their daughter's marraige.
Looking forward to the next!
Oh see that's not fair. You can't leave that little tidbit and leave us hanging. So unfair. I know I know it keeps us hanging on and reading. ~pouts~ I for one need more PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Oh thank heavens you let them live. Poor Hermione. I can't imagine how she'd have coped if they had killed her parents.Perhaps though this will give Severus some more time where the Dark Lord is concerned.This is on my faves list now by the way!!!!
The last sentence in the third paragraph doesn't seem to be related to the rest of that sentence. Other than that it is very good. Enjoyed it very much. (The Dursleys were happy....)
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
You were right. I've changed the rest of the sentence but missed that bit. How embarassing! Thanks for mentioning it, I've fixed it.
I'm glad you didn't off her parents. She does, indeed, have enough on her plate. Well, I look forward to the next bit. Thanks for the update.