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Chocolate Enchantment
Vivian B595 Reviews | 6.62/10 (595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )
When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant
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I just read the last few chapters. Enjoyable as always
Superb, I like the idea as the twins for test subjects of shared blood spells. Very original
So sweet. I especially liked the part where she focused in on his emotions. This is a Severus any woman could love. Thank you.
I hope she can hold it all together and not forget who knows what and who is not supposed to know etc etc
I wonder how Hermione is planning on hiding her pregnancy. Being that Molly is a mother, I have a feeling that she'll figure it out eventually. Hopefully this won't cause too much of a problem.I am glad that Hermione is starting to forgive Severus. Maybe after the dinner with her parents she will realize she doesn't want to hold herself from him any longer.
I'm glad Hermione is giving Severu's the what-for regarding his high-handedness over the conception, but I am also glad that she is accepting his comfort and not driving him away. I hope that her will doesn't ruin things between them. Though I am wondering the effect her hold-out is having on the Enchantment...
Love love love it. I say it every chapter but I'm so glad each time my mail box says "you got mail" that I can't help but express it.
wow as usual! thanks for updating :) can't wait for more!
Poor Severus. His life is going to be like hell if he's already sleeping on the sofa after just one month of pregnancy. :D
Wow, that's all really convincing. I feel so bad for Hermione; she's stuck in so many roles that it's starting to weigh her down. Hopefully things will be coming to a head soon, and she won't have to worry about it anymore. Now to top things off, she and Severus had a bit of a falling out.
Hm... I think Ron is going to screw it all up.
Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive... I hope she can keep her webs straight!
The fur flies - well she cut off the sex and now he is pouting and angry - what did he expect? He got her pregnant on purpose, without her consent, and she did not want to have children yet. Severus has got to learn a lot about marriage. I cannot wait to see the next installment.
Super job. Loving this. Keep it coming!
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I started reading this story about half way through, and it's really interesting! Just one thing I wanted to mention that kind of fell outside of the admin remit was that Sev closes his book twice in the scene with Hermione. Hope you don't mind me mentioning.
I like the paternal rights law that Snape uncovered. Very well done!
Wow, Hermione really exploded. I don't blame her; I'm sure I would've in her place as well. I didn't think she has forgiven and forgotten so soon, but it's good to see it was put on the back burner for now. I wonder how Harry is going to take everything. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
And now, on to the fireworks.
Hiding her pregnancy is going to spin around and bite Severus later--Hermione trusts him now, but I don't know if she will after that secret is spilled.
yay! fabulous :)
Liked the chapter - She gave him grief over the child thing but not as much as he deserves. She took it well considering what he did. Most men would have gotten furious with their wives if their wives had done the opposite and stopped taking birth control. Interesting way she responded - they said nothing that could damage the relationship - only a few angry words. Cannot wait to see what is up next.
you have shown well how she is torn between being in a mighty snit about him not confiding in her re the pregnancy, and understanding why he didn't. Great chapter
Well, now that Hermione knows about the pregnancy it's almost time to tell others. Even though it's her secret, the loss of her magical powers could have a serious impact on the fight against Voldemort. Hopefully Ron and others don't go berzerk.
Ha. She should make him a eunuch. Getting her pregnant without her knowing. And hell, if anyone called me pet I'd probably beat them with a stick! :)
I was a bit dumbfounded by how well Sev took to finding out she has an animagus form, but I suppose there were bigger issues at hand.
Can't wait to read what's coming up next!
Glad to see Hermione is remaining calm although I suspect it's only for the time being. Brilliant chapter.