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Chocolate Enchantment

1: 1: Making Contact

2: 2: Messengers

3: 3: The Interview

4: 4: Confessions

5: 5: Trouble in Class

6: 6: Secret Meeting

7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

8: 8: Telling His Other Master

9: 9: A Night of Bonding

10: 10: Unknown Curses

11: 11: Softer than Indifference

12: 12: Castle Under Attack

13: 13: The Aftermath

14: 14: The Funeral

15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

16: 16: Getting Even

17: 17: Face to Face

18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

19: 19: The Word Gets Out

20: 20: Searching for RAB

21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

22: 22: Making Memories

23: 23: Seeking Assistance

24: 24: A Little Shopping

25: 25: Scenting The Truth

26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

27: 27: Coming Clean

28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

30: 30: Cleaning Up

31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

32: 32: One More Down

33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

35: 35: Proof of Trust

36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

38: 38: Finding the Comb

39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

42: 42: Putting On A Show

43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

44: 44: The Search For The Cup

45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

46: 46: Birthday Surprises

47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

49: 49: Arranging a Trial

50: 50: The Trial

51: Epilogue

Chocolate Enchantment

Vivian B

595 Reviews   |   595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 199,892 Words 51 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant

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Chapters (51)

Chapter 1: 1: Making Contact

Chapter 2: 2: Messengers

Chapter 3: 3: The Interview

Chapter 4: 4: Confessions

Chapter 5: 5: Trouble in Class

Chapter 6: 6: Secret Meeting

Chapter 7: 7: Pain Brings Enlightenment

Chapter 8: 8: Telling His Other Master

Chapter 9: 9: A Night of Bonding

Chapter 10: 10: Unknown Curses

Chapter 11: 11: Softer than Indifference

Chapter 12: 12: Castle Under Attack

Chapter 13: 13: The Aftermath

Chapter 14: 14: The Funeral

Chapter 15: 15: Confronting the Dursleys

Chapter 16: 16: Getting Even

Chapter 17: 17: Face to Face

Chapter 18: 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

Chapter 19: 19: The Word Gets Out

Chapter 20: 20: Searching for RAB

Chapter 21: 21: Dates and Animagus Unveiling

Chapter 22: 22: Making Memories

Chapter 23: 23: Seeking Assistance

Chapter 24: 24: A Little Shopping

Chapter 25: 25: Scenting The Truth

Chapter 26: 26: Facing Off and Finding Space

Chapter 27: 27: Coming Clean

Chapter 28: 28: Hell Hath No Fury

Chapter 29: 29: Wedding Day Disaster

Chapter 30: 30: Cleaning Up

Chapter 31: 31: Visiting Godric's Hollow

Chapter 32: 32: One More Down

Chapter 33: 33: Adulthood Acknowledged

Chapter 34: 34: Meeting at The Weasleys

Chapter 35: 35: Proof of Trust

Chapter 36: 36: Jealous Rages and Bequests

Chapter 37: 37: Gathering the Pieces, Making Amends

Chapter 38: 38: Finding the Comb

Chapter 39: 39: Injuries and Discoveries

Chapter 40: 40: Sweet And Sour Revelations

Chapter 41: 41: Coming To An Understanding

Chapter 42: 42: Putting On A Show

Chapter 43: 43: Another Meeting At The Burrow

Chapter 44: 44: The Search For The Cup

Chapter 45: 45: Meeting the In-Laws

Chapter 46: 46: Birthday Surprises

Chapter 47: 47: The Final Horcrux Falls

Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Going to Battle

Chapter 49: 49: Arranging a Trial

Chapter 50: 50: The Trial

Chapter 51: Epilogue


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10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh stop fighting it Severus.  You just want love and now you can have it.  give in

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

So what does it take to completely soothe the desire they feel for each other?  If it's sex, do they have to do it often to keep it at bay?  Wow what a way to go.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Excellent chapter.  I'm dashing off to Flourish & Blotts to see what happens...........................

Update soon please. 

10/10

aura

Another great chapter!

Loved the conversation with Bill, especially after Hermione figured out he was going to call their baby-sitters. And the diary part was great! Can't wait 'til they get to the bookstore! 

10/10

aura

Love this fic! 

Hopefully the time spent with Ginny will make Harry more reasonable all around, and glad to see that some time and recreation are easing Ron's hurt feelings. The party idea sounds like something that Hermione would do. 

I'm so glad they went to Bill for help! I always thought it was so dumb that they didn't in the books. I mean he's a Curse Breaker, for goodness sake! It's his job to deal with this kind of thing!

Looking forward to the next! 

10/10

Gardengirl

And at last they have some professional assistance! This is very good. I could wish that Ron could have a nice surgical rectal craniectomy soon, but I won't hold my breath. At least Harry's listening to sense.

Thanks for the update, and I wish you and yours a very Merry Christmas too!

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

rectal craniestomy. lol I'll have to remember that one. Ron always has been a bit of a git when his feelings are hurt, but he does (eventually) get over himself.

10/10

snitchette

You're forgiven because it's nearly Christmas. maybe we couls have more before New year 's Eve ? Anyway Merry Christmas

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

The next chapter is already in queue and should be posted very soon. The next chapter is ten minute's work from being ready to post in queue, so you should get two or three updates before new year's.

10/10

aura

Love this fic!

Their pillow-talk is very Hermione/Severus. It made me laugh to thing they were still in bed during all that intullectual and theoretical business.

*smacks all adult Order members*  No one thought about sending a patronus? *sighs exasperatedly*  And now (I'm pretty sure at least) Remus knows who she was meeting. Is he going to believe her anymore, about the fact that she has a soul-mate (let alone that it's Snape), or that the information she's relaying is accurate? *worries about the Longbottoms*

Looking forward to more!

10/10

Charmaine

So Remus knows?

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

Dun, dun, dun. dun . . .

A werewolf always knows. lol Don't worry, we'll pick right back up where we left off in the next chapter. 

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

This story is very good.  I can't wait to read the rest.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

This story just keeps getting better and better.

10/10

snitchette

A bit of tenderness in this brutal world. That's what you evoke in me with all the bits of the relationship between our two heroes. HUGE THANKS TO YOU.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Hate to mention it but what exactly is a shirt shelve? Did you perhaps mean shirt sleeve? Loving the story. Truly enjoyable.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Lovely. Remind me to get Hermione to help me make my own lists. This is soooooooo much fun.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Great! I personally cannot think of any woman between the ages of 14 and 60 who wouldn't want to call him "Master".

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Ah yes, loved the reference to Sev's probable ancestor, the Sheriff of Nottingham. (cutting the heart out with a spoon) This is getting better by the minute.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

To rip a phrase from Dickens, More Please!. And soon. This is a great seasonal find for Snapeaholics.  Blessed be, my dear. Thanks for the enjoyment.

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

I know I am a stickler for detail but Malfoy's Tweedledum and Tweedledee are CRABBE and Goyle.  This is getting yummy. Reading as fast as I can. Love it.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Another lovely chapter!  I quite liked Hermione's handling of Petunia.  It brought a smile to my face!  Nicely done.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it!

10/10

snitchette

Grrr You live us with too many to think about Hermione's project but I guess transfiguration work will be animagus tranformation. AS for the potion maybe felix felicix but that doesn't take a month to brew. Again it's a so great chapter.

10/10

aura

Another great chapter! 

Loved Hermione's treatment of Petunia, and Harry's reaction to it: 

“How did you do that with Petunia? She didn’t even protest,” Harry asked, a bit bemused. “Dumbledore did a smashing job of railroading them last summer, but he was so blatantly magic.” “Acting as though I have a right to dictate to her was the key. Though, I did my best to be conciliatory. That she was probably frightened of what I could do to her surely didn’t hurt.”

The boys shouldn't have been surprised that she wanted to keep training, most of their opponents in this war are at least double their age and have been learning Dark Magic for most of their lives.  Of course they need more training! 

Liked these lines about Ron too:

Twenty minutes later she decided he had been perfectly honest when he said his mind was clear as glass. She could see everything in it. 

Wonder how she's suppossed to pass info, especially 'time-sensitive' stuff to the Order.  Where's she suppossed to say she got it from, and will they just take her word if she says it's from a reliable source?    Curious about the potion.  What could she possibly need 96 doses of? 

Looking forward to the next! 

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Some of your questions will be answered in the next chapter, and Fred and George let her secret slip. Stay tuned!

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Excellent chapter.  Of course, now I'm curious as to what Hermione is going to be brewing.

Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)

You'll see before too long, Hermione will have to start making arrangments soon.

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. 

10/10

blackaces924

awesome! i'm so glad u are going with the original storyline instead of incorporating Deathly Hallows :Dcan't wait for the next chapter!

10/10

Charmaine

Superb

10/10

aura

Hermione is probably the first person who has ever taken him at his word.  True, she did ask a lot of questions, and she had the potion's effect to help, but she didn't require any vows or proof from him.  I can definitely see where the joy came from.  Very moving.

Liked her mom too.  Much more understanding than most would be.

I'm looking forward to the next. ^_^

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