Absolutely love it!

Can't wait to see more. ^_^ 

You know, I'm really liking this. You make their motivations quite clear and their mixed emotions as they both realize the problem quite evident as well.

My only quibble would be that since we know their backstory, you might have spent a bit less time on it. 

I hope to see the next chapter soon! 

An excellent start! I'm looking forward to more.

A very well written first chapter, I loved the plot and I look forward to follow your story. Please update again soon!!

Great first chapter!!! I so want more!

Ooooh, I want to know what happens next!  Update soon!   And thanks for your work!

Hee hee, cute :)  Those darn weasleys!

Oh those Weasley twins!  Great start.  I really love what you have so far.  I can't wait to read more!

Hurray!  I'm so glad you're posting this over here where this wonderful story can find a wider audience!

Good start!  I'll be looking forward to more chapters!

waiting for more this was really good

It's cute that Severus was the one to worry about a honeymoon and romance rather than Hermione. And the cottage sounds like a perfect little get-away (guessing it, and Twinkie belonged to Albus), like a cosy B&B in the country.  I do wonder what his "more impressive", "other option" might be, and if Hermione is planning on asking to use the cottage for her brewing... although, she just thinks he's borrowing it from someone, so she might not think it's safe to leave anything behind.  I realise that Severus is worried about his and Hermione's survival, but I hope he doesn't plan on abandoning the war. Hermione might not forgive him for making her leave her friends while they're in danger, and her friends might not forgive her either if she leaves them.

A starling!  Some of the pics I googled  were quite pretty.  I can't wait to see what the boys turn into.

Looking forward to the next!

First of all, the name is Bellatrix Lestrange. A not e.Other than that little fact I am enjoying this very much.Very good so far.  

Simply wonderful.  This has quickly become one of my favorites :)

very good

wow.  Huzzah and applause!!

Great, jam-packed chapter! Thanks for a fantastic read. Poor Hermione, pulled in so many directions. An emotional drawing-and-quartering - not deadly, but probably very painful.

I did notice one oops: " The Aurors on duty in Little Winging that night" should be "Whinging". Perhaps spell check didn't like it?

Hermione is really a clever witch. That spell she did at Wesley's was great! And the way she dealt with Dudley to. Spoiled brat! I hope next chapters we get Severus/Hermione interaction again, maybe then she'll consider asking him about horcruxes. I get the felling he could be really useful.

It's already Christmas. I mean 2 chapters in so little time. Not that I complain of course. And I just want to add that I miss Severus. Just a couple of phrases isn't enough for my well-being. Could I get some more please ?

I love this story, it is one of my favorites

I like Hermione's brand of revenge. Not permanent, per se, but definitely longstanding and very visible.

Fast paced chapter, excellent.

Glad to see that Tonks character is developing a bit and she isn't such a scatter brain.  I'm guessing she is assuming that Draco is Hermiones contact, thus her soul-mate.  I think a few people are going to be quite surprised when the truth does come out. 

Love it! And Yay! for the quick update. 

The spell she cast at both the Burrow and on her tent was cool, but Tonks wasn't at the Burrow when they discussed it, so how does she know about Hermione's soul-mate?

It's good that she finally told Harry and that he's accepted things between Ginny and himself, but apparrently the rest of the Weasleys (or at least Ron) don't know about them. I imagine Ron's top would blow if he realized how much more danger his sister is in. But since Ron's so bad at Occulmency it's probably a good idea to keep him in the dark for now. At least Harry's motivation for trainning has improved.

Dudley's appearance was too cute!

I imagine Tonks'll start suspecting Draco is her source, since they're assuming Hermione's soul-mate is around her age, and Snape never mentioned any other school-age recruits; after all, where else could she be getting this kind of info but from the Death Eaters. Since Remus is under pressure to reveal his source, and Harry and Ron aren't used to Hermione keeping them in the dark, she's going to be under increasing pressure from all sides to tell; and if she waits too long, distrust is going to brew between everyone.

Curious as to what they'll do with the locket until it can be destroyed, and if it'll have any psychological effects like in DH or not (also, since we 'know' what the horcruxes 'really' are, will you use them or whatever you planned on origionally)? Also as to where she's going to end up brewing her potion... but I guess I can wait until its all reveiled in the fic, if I must.

I'm looking forward to more!

what I'm most curious about, actually, is this: what happens to hermione's growing baby when she turns into a bird?

Thank you for a wonderful story, I also check every day for another chapter. I love the mixture of romance and drama, and it is so well written and in character with the canon people