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Chocolate Enchantment
Vivian B595 Reviews | 6.62/10 (595 Ratings, 0 Likes, 304 Favorites )
When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire—finding themselves pulled together by true love chocolates. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his Unbreakable Vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle. This story was completed prior to the publication of DH and is HBP compliant
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Well, everything considered I even think Ron took it to well, just hope Harry and the others will let it drop to. Keep up with the good work.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Don't worry, Ron hasn't really let it go, he's just sucking it up for the moment. There will be a bit more drama over her soul mate, never fear.
Love! Lovelovelove it!
I'm glad that she chose to go to Remus, that he was available and trusted her. I'm also glad she gave him as much info as she did an was honest with everything she said rather than resorting to half-truths.
This part got me thinking: “So, Hermione? What’s up with Fred and George’s freckles, anyway? You gonna tell us why they’re multi-colored?” Charlie slid an arm behind her on the chair and turned his whole body toward her from his seat to her left. Hermione had to admit to herself that had she not already established a relationship with Severus, and her past interest in Ron not withstanding, she would have a terrible crush on the man. He was hot. “I’d just as soon not get into it tonight.” “I know,” Bill said with a somewhat loopy grin, and Hermione doubted he had heard her response. “Seems they helped her way to a soul mate with their chocolates, and she’s not too happy about it.” “Not Ron or Harry then, huh?” Charlie’s smile became a bit forced. Me thinks that Charlie had a wee bit of a crush as well.
Bill called over to her, “So, are all their freckles multicolored, or just the ones we can see?” She had to smirk; it was impossible to hold back. “All of them. And they glow in the dark.” She so could've been in Slytherin.
I'm glad she told this to Ron: “I can’t for the same reason I couldn’t tell you during the school year. And it’s a good thing you don’t intend to kill him, as no person affected by Amoriata has survived more than a few years after their soul mate died. And that few years was plagued with madness. A huge madness and growing need for the lost love. This is a war, Ron, and if one of us dies, the other won’t be far behind.” Since he's staying the night at the Burrow, I hope he shares this lovely tidbit with the others, especially Molly, and they hex the twins as well. Ginny and the twins still don't know about this side-effect, and Harry doesn't even know it applies to him yet.
I'm looking forward to the next!
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I loved writing that scene because it was so ripe for drama and interesting responses. I would so love to respond to something you aid here, but I would far rather keep you guessing. lol
Wonderful story - I check every day to see if a new chapter has been posted.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
That's very flattering. If only the Admins didn't have so much work on their hands validating all those other stories too! lol
Thanks... =)... I love the story!!!
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I'm so glad your enjoying it!
Thank you for another fun chapter!
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
You're welcome (you all have me grinning hugely about now) Another coming soon.
well... not of immediate urgency i guess! surely a potions master wouldn't require permission of dumbledore merely an informing?
awesome cliff-hanger. :) so did severus start brewing the birth control potions yet?
Even after leaving the school, it seemed
the twins couldnt help but knick food from the
kitchens.
- nick, not knick.
This story is fun to read. I hope you won't stop writing it until it's completed.
Horay! Way to go, Hermione! Those Dursley's had that coming! Can't wait to see what happens when they stay there. I'm looking forward to the reunion with Snape too.
I loved Hermione giving the Dursleys their due. This story is turning out quite fun!
Super chapter, I am looking forward to the next
So little... snifff.Your stoey is like a box of chocolates, you can't just have ONE chapter.Lovely.Now go write more.
I knew that : in each fic Severus and Hermione are soulmate because she is just like him. Sarcastic and so subbtle in the same time. She just hides it much more than he does. This chapter was very funny and as I notice your updates are quicker I really hope it will continue this way. Thanks for the good job.
Oh my, that chapter was brilliant! I so want to slap Vernon for the way he has abused Harry, glad to see Hermione is getting that job done for me.
More please.
ROFLMAO!!!! Great chapter. Poor Hermione has NO ONE to talk too. I can't wait until Sev is back in the picture.
I'm really glad that Hermione stood up to the Dursleys. That was quite enjoyable. I'm anxious for more!
I loved, loved, loved the confrontation with the Dursleys!!!
I can't wait to see what Hermione has planned and happens next. I'm sure the confrontation with the twins is going to be great! Seeing Severus again will be interesting too.
Thanks for the quick update, I'm looking forward to the next!
I feel sad reading this chapter but it's so beautiful at the same time. Many thanks to you. Keep up the good job.
Such a sad chapter but beautifully written.
I would like to slap Lav-Lav too.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Thank you!
Sadness all around, however, your alternative to cannon seems to at least promise a little happiness for our favorite couple, particularly our leading man. Nice chapter.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I'm all about happily-ever-afters. We just have to slog through a pile of crap to get there sometimes. lol
Does anyone else out there really want to smack Lavender after reading this chapter?
It's good that Hermione was able to shed some light on the potion's side effects to Ginny, I imagine she'll have to sit down and have 'the talk' with Harry at some point too, but it's even better that Ginny agreed to keep Hermione's secret and not ask too many questions.
I wonder who the new secret keeper is...
I'm looking forward to seeing how she manages to meet up with Severus (especially since it's suppossed to happen the following day) I doubt her parents will want to let her out of their sight so soon...unless she didn't tell them which day she was returning, she is a sneaky one. Also, to finding out what she was so eager to research at the end of the last chap. It could just be Horcruxes, *snort*just*shakes head at self* or it might be something she wanted for when she next encountered her hubby. I hope she's kept up with her animagus training, something tells me it'll be helpful, if not needed, soon.
And speaking of soon, *hint hint* I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
I guess you could tell I'm not all that fond of Lavender, but then, neither is Hermione, so it follows well enough. You brought up some good points and questions and I promise an answer to them all . . . eventually. lol
Thanks for the review!
Please hurry with the next chapter...this is such a good story
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
Thanks!
Ahh, I knew this time would come--the aftermath, how apropos. Very sad, but well articulated. You did a wonderful job depicting the tumultuous emotions.
Response from Vivian B (Author of Chocolate Enchantment)
If only I knew all of my characters in my other stories as well as I know these guys! I guess that's what happens when you live with them in your head for so many years. lol
Yet again a brilliant chapter.