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A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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wonderful chapter. very easy to follow. i'm glad you put it up today. waiting for more wonderful words from you. p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was afraid it might be a bit hard to follow since there is so much going on.
I'll probably post the next chapter this weekend.
This is coming to the end so, I'm thinking maybe two more chapters left here.
i had 50 kids come to my house i still had candy left what about you. good chapter
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I didn't have anybody, so I got to keep all of my candy.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you write stories fast after this is done soon do you have another hermione and severus one for us to read.
I just started this story and read through it all night to get to this chapter, can't wait for more, I hope all the key players fare well in the end.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for taking the time to read all through the 22 chapters! I hope you enjoyed it all the way through to this one.
I do have the next chapter over with my beta, so it should be up by the end of the week.
Also, I don't plan for this to have an angsty end.
Thanks again for reading and leaving me a review.
When i read the chapter title i was like "YES YES YES" very excited...
is that muggle Isabella going to get with Rodolphus... i think thats what your doing and i think thats cute... even if i hate him in all other fictions, i feel sorry for him in this one so he should, if he don't die i reckon.
love the chapter and am waiting waiting waiting for more!
_KarlaMarie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well, you'll be happy to know that I've just sent off the next chapter to my beta. Hopefully I'll have it up before the end of the week.
Isabella is a Muggle-born witch. I really haven't read many stories with Rodolphus, but the few I have he's a total bastard. I thought I'd do something different here and I'm glad to see others have enjoyed him this way.
Thank you for reading the chapter and leaving me such a lovely review.
This is a great story. I love it. Looking forward to reading more. I really like the game you mentioned, "Wizardopoly" and that Lucius kept going to jail. What a hoot!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I thought that would be an interesting game for them to play. LOL, it was the only one I could think of that would get Lucius in jail. Thanks for leaving me a review.
Wizardolpoly? *lmao* I like how Lucius keeps ending up in jail.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed that. I couldn't help that last bit about Lucius. I imagine him being quite put out by that.Thanks for reviewing.
LOL!Wizardopoly is great!!! I wish there really was a game like that. And of course Lucius ended up in jail. LOL!The part where Rodolphus buried Bella was very touching.I'm glad Neville has joined them now. I think he can probably help them out more than they think.Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, I think Wizardopoly would be fun. Poor Lucius though. I really wanted to show how much he cared for her, even though most people thought she was a horrible person.I see Neville as a lonely person. He's alone and has been since his family died. So I'd like to have him come into the fold and find an extended family with his friends.I'm hoping this week won't be so bad and I can do some writing at work.Thanks for reviewing!
Wizard monoply... thats cool. anyway i is wanting more action so bring it ;)
and i cant stress this enough... Hurry with your next update, I'm waiting ...lol
-karlamarie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, I'd love a wizardopoly myself. I'm going to try to get to the next chapter soon.Thanks for taking a moment to read and review.
Finally got around to reading this one. It's good. Only one major problem that I can see--when are ya gonna update it, woman??~Lotm
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, sorry, I try to update once a week and this past week has been horrible. I'm glad you enjoyed what you've read so far. I'm going to try and begin a new chapter soon.Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
no get out jail for free card for luc.
hopefully this isn't a prophecy for dear luc.
ginny might have to brew something for neville to maintain all this new knowledge without losing his mind.
waiting for more.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, noooo, no prophecy for our lovely blond wizard. I just couldn't let the opportunity pass though it have a bit of fun with him.
If I'm feeling well tomorrow I'll start the next chapter.
Thanks for the review and for keeping up with this. I always appreciate your feedback.
what a cute game you almost have to show a pic of what it looks and and how to play in real life.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, if I could draw worth a damn, I would love to draw a picture.
I thought it was an interesting idea though.
Bwahahaha carriage in Azkaban. Snerk
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I thought about his game peice being a little snake, but a carriage seemed more out of place and of course I had to use it.
This story just keeps getting better and better.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm so glad you are enjoying it! This was actually the last HP fanfic I wrote and my favorite.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm so glad you are enjoying it! This was actually the last HP fanfic I wrote and my favorite.
I'm not sure enjoy can be said in describing torture and death, but the story is well written and i want to read more. Good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for being open to continue reading the story. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for being open to continue reading the story. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Oh, the part with Bella made me cry! I'm so glad she finally was able to redeem herself. That was wonderful! And the part about Severus and Lilly is just how I imagined JKR would write it someday. I suspect they were friends in the same way as Harry and Hermione. Wonderful chapter and can't wait for more!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I wanted to do something different with Bella. I always wanted her to be redeemed for the things she'd done in the past, as in this story she was slowly beginning to realize the errors of her ways, especially after Cissy died.Well, you know my views on Severus and Lily and I wanted to put them here. I think it makes sense.Thanks for leaving me a review.
Oh Yay! Another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm hoping to start the next one at some point today.At least, that's the plan.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
need more
fast
hurry
need
now now now!!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Ack! I'm writing as fast as I can!I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, although I'm sorry I've now got you hanging by the cliff.Thanks for reading. I'll get another chapter up this week.
it is sad when old people get hurt by someone.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes it is sad, but that's what will make what happens to him all the more fun to write.
Only just caught the update. It was good I enjoyed especially the talk between Lucius and Draco. As for Dolohov I find I am actually feeling sorry for him.The sun's shining while I am writing this and my hubby is calling me to close down my computer. We are going out to a very old town in Wales there's a craft fair there today. As a treat we will stop at Chirk Castle and have lunch in the National Trust's restaurant. So I best go. Best wishes hope you are well.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I tried to make Lucius and Draco's talk as realistic as I could in their current situation.Your day sounds absolutely lovely and I wish I was there to tag along with you! I hope you wind up having a wonderful time at the fair and the lunch. Thanks for taking the time to read this before you left.
Awfult to think that there's such people around.
But yay for Severus gettign his own back, too bad it looks like more trouble for him..
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well, he'll make sure that Dolohov doesn't talk.Thanks for reading and leaving me a review.
This story had so many emotional moments, but I have to say that the one that really got me was the moment with Bella and Neville. When she threw herself in front of moldy butt and whisked Neville to safety, and then the scene with Neville holding her body so gently... absolutely phenomenal. I've read and reviewed many of your tales now, and this one is very poignant.I have long held the belief that the fanfic writers did such a better job of portraying the finality of the battle, and this story is no exception to that belief. Well done.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so much. This was the last fic I wrote, and it is my absolute favorite. I think of it as my swan song.I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
Hee! I liked that Lucius was worried about Ginny hexing his private parts off. LOL!Hopefully they will get some time alone together soon.Can't wait to see what is going to happen to Voldemort too.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, Lucius seems to know what kind of a woman he's dealing with where Ginny is concerned.I'm working towards some alone time for them though. Probably not in the next chapter, but I think maybe the one after that.
I'm enjoying this story. Ginny's reaction to the book was very realistic and I like how you had Ron handle things. He can be very mature. It's nice to see that side of him. I really hope Severus's impersonation of Higgenbottom goes well. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next installment.
Kim
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your comments. I have to say I'm often guilty of making Ron the butt of my jokes, but I wanted to show just what you said, Ron can be mature and I think that while he might not be the brightest star in the sky, he's not a complete moron. So I thought it would be nice to have him show a bit of understanding towards his sister's situation.Severus' main problem is Dolohov, he's not going to be easy to avoid, but I've got something interesting in store for when they finally get together in the same room.Thanks again for your comments and for taking the time to read this.
Keep up the good work. I know that is trite but that is why I read and don't write.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you are enjoying this still. Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave a review.
Voldemort's much too arrogant...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
He is, but that's what I get from reading JKR's books. I think he's an incredibly arrogant person. All the better when he gets taken down a peg or two.Thanks for reading this and leaving me a review.