Chapter 26 - Epilogue - Starting Anew
Chapter 26 of 26
ancientgirl**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
ReviewedWe have come to the end of this story. I began with a tale of two men, but I think I ended with a tale of three.
I hope those who have read this have been entertained if only for a short while. Thank you for reading and leaving me such wonderful reviews.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
As always, a huge thanks to June. Without her help and suggestions, this would probably have run on sentences and missing commas galore.
Chapter 26 - Epilogue Starting Anew
Ten months after the battle, in the Tuscany region of Italy...
The dark-haired man with a well manicured beard sat in his villa, overlooking the vineyard he'd purchased with the money he'd taken from Gringotts.
Even though he lived in Italy, he'd taken to reading El Pais, a Spanish newspaper, which had both Muggle and magical editions. He would read the papers regularly, looking for any bit of information on Isabella Ortiz. Immediately after the war, she was a popular news subject because she was the longest-held prisoner from the St. Mungo's attack, led on a magical chain by Voldemort himself. She had been rescued by Rodolphus Lestrange, the tragic hero who had snatched her out of the Dark Lord's burning lair. She refused media interviews, but facts had leaked out from her Ministry interviews.
Months later, he read of her work as a highly regarded expert on Muggle diseases. She was consulted by Muggle and magical authorities, and he read her professional articles.
Today he noticed her mentioned in the Muggle society page; the formal engagement photo showed her with a young man. He noted there was a caption, but didn't bother to read it. Today he would see her. He'd waited long enough and hoped he hadn't waited too long.
Rodolphus had truly started over. He was a very successful man. He had taken what was once a decrepit home and made it into a small palatial estate, and had worked its dry lands until they produced some of the finest wine grapes in Europe. All of this would normally take years, but he and all his workers were wizards. Also, he had ordered some herbal plant remedies and fertilizers from Longbottom's. He could sell his wine only to wizarding customers for now, since Muggles would be suspicious of good wine grapes grown in less than a year.
He was now called Dante Monte Cristo. His name was taken from a book he'd read just after purchasing the villa and its vineyard. The book's hero was a man who had been blessed with a great future, only to have it taken away by greedy and power-hungry men, who were envious of him. But in the end he became a great man, never forgetting his past, but living his life to the fullest after avenging himself.
"Alejandro!" he called his servant as he prepared to leave.
"I am here, sir." Alejandro, a short stout older man, walked into the study from the kitchens.
Rodolphus had hired the old wizard shortly after buying the property. Alejandro was Spanish but his family had emigrated to Britain years ago; at Rodolphus' request, Alejandro had taught him to speak and read Spanish. Most of Rodolphus' workers had fought in the war as Order members or sympathizers, as Alejandro had. All his workers had lost their homes and livelihood, and many had lost family members, such as the Aurors' widows he'd hired. Now they all lived in the workers' residential housing surrounding the main villa, enjoying their life in the sunny countryside of Italy, raising grapes, making wine, and working for a patron who was kind and shared the profits of his business.
"I need to go out for a while, Alejandro. Cancel my afternoon appointment, please, and reschedule it."
"Yes sir. Is there anything wrong?"
"No, I just need to finish something," Rodolphus never revealed to anyone his true identity, but many of his workers had guessed who he was, who he'd been. They shared their copies of the Daily Prophet and Witch Weekly, and had read the stories of who he used to be, but they also knew that without his help, their world would have been a darker place. Besides, all of them wanted to forget the war, so no one mentioned Death Eaters or Voldemort. Alejandro knew that his patron was making up for past deeds, and everyone deserved a second chance.
Rodolphus walked outside his villa and Apparated to the home he knew to be Isabella's. After he rescued her from Voldemort's mansion, he'd taken her back to her own home in Barcelona. Since the final battle, he'd often come here to watch her from a hidden spot behind the large stone fence. He knew she had been betrothed to a young Muggle man of noble birth before she'd even been born, but he could not stop himself from thinking of her and her dark brown eyes.
Today, when he Apparated to Isabella's home, he noticed people in the garden. Placing a Disillusionment charm on himself, he made his way into the home, walking past guests laughing and talking about the "young couple."
He easily walked to her room, having seen it from the outside many times.
"No more visitors, Isabella. Your hair is done, you are dressed, and you are alone now, so get some rest, and I will go to the kitchen to check on the food," her mother said.
Rodolphus mentally thanked Alejandro for teaching him Spanish. He watched her mother leave the room and shut the door, before she headed for the kitchen. He looked around to make sure no one else was coming, and made himself visible before he Apparated into the room.
Isabella was there, looking out the window. She was wearing a wedding dress. Slowly she turned and looked at him.
"Am I to dream of you my entire life?" she whispered. "How cruel this vision of you is to me." Isabella turned away from him and continued looking out the window.
"I am no vision, I am real."
Quickly she turned back to him, her breathing now coming in gasps.
"I...I thought you had died. You never came back." Isabella approached him.
"I'm sorry, I...I didn't think it would matter," he said.
"Not matter? You risked your life to take me away from that beast, to keep me from burning in that prison he held me in. You were safe here, but instead of staying with me, you left me to fight in the war against...against Voldemort, and you didn't think it would matter to me if I never saw you again?"
"Isabella, I once followed him. You are a Muggle-born witch. I did not think you would ever want to have anything to do with me beyond that moment when I brought you home."
Isabella now wiped her tears, and raised her head.
"I know who you are. I have read the papers, I have asked questions. I have spoken to Neville Longbottom; you know he and I were prisoners together. A Death Eater does not help a Mudblood live, and does not give away their family home to a friend of Harry Potter's."
He winced at her using the word Mudblood. It had always been such a harsh word, especially now that he'd changed his views on so many things.
"I don't care what you were in some other life. I am interested in who are you now; that is what matters."
From the day he'd Apparated away into the battle, Isabella had done nothing but think of the man who'd rescued her. His face was engraved in her mind; his scent was everywhere she went. He had become an obsession to her, so much that she now dreaded her impending marriage more than ever.
Two days after the war ended, she'd received an invitation to Neville Longbottom's wedding. During the reception, she spoke with Neville, telling him about the unknown man who had saved her. When Neville told her how the Lestranges had given their lives to help him and that she was now standing in their old house, she'd asked about the man, Rodolphus. Neville showed her the only painting there was of him, a small one at that; she realized he had been her rescuer. When Neville said he had died on the battlefield, she was devastated, but by that time it was already too late. She'd fallen in love with a ghost.
"For the past ten months, your specter has followed me everywhere and there were days when I would be looking outside and see your face in the gardens," she said. "I thought it was a ghost, but seeing you now, I realize it was not a ghost. It was you, but you never spoke to me. Why did you come here today?"
"I came because I needed to see you, one final time. And...to congratulate you on your marriage." He shook his head. "Were I not such a coward, I would have come long before now." He bowed his head and turned away from her.
Isabella walked to him and placed her hand on his shoulder. "I am not married, not yet."
He turned to her now. But before he could say a word, there was a knock on the door and an older man walked inside.
"Isa, it is..." Isabella's father, Hernan, stopped and looked at the two standing next to each other. "Who is this stranger?" he asked as he quickly approached, only to realize it was the same man who had rescued his daughter.
"Papa, this is..." Isabella looked uncertainly at Rodolphus, as he held his hand out.
"Dante Monte Cristo, sir."
Isabella's father looked to her, then back at the man standing next to his daughter. Hernan shook the man's hand but said nothing. Being a Muggle, it had been difficult to do his own research in the wizarding world, but Hernan had a contact there, a man by the name of Albus Dumbledore. When Isabella had her eleventh birthday, the old wizard had visited him about his daughter having a place at Hogwarts if he chose to send her there. While Isabella went to a wizarding school in the Americas, Hernan often kept in contact with the wizard. And Dumbledore had been very informative about this man, who now called himself Dante Monte Cristo.
"Monte Cristo," said Hernan. "Do you have any connection with the Monte Cristo family, the wine makers in Tuscany?"
"Those are my vineyards, yes," said Rodolphus proudly. His vineyards produced some of the highest regarded wines in the wizarding world.
"I first tasted your wine at a reception held by the Spanish Ministry of Magic. I have a few friends who are high ranking wizards in the Ministry here. I enjoy your wine very much, Mr. Monte Cristo. I should also thank you for saving my daughter. You left before I had the opportunity to do so the last time I saw you."
Rodolphus looked back to Isabella, who was now nervously twisting the handkerchief she held in her hand.
"I was just leaving. I came to congratulate Isabella on her marriage, and to wish her well." Rodolphus turned to leave, but was held back by Hernan.
"Wait." Hernan looked at his daughter and stood next to her. "Before my daughter was born, my family and another decided that our children would someday marry. Isabella and Arturo have known one another since they were children. I know it is an archaic practice, to choose your children's partner, but I know a bit of your world, so I think you will understand this."
Rodolphus nodded and sadly looked to Isabella, whose tears were flowing freely down her cheeks.
"Arturo is not a wizard, like you are. You and my daughter, I imagine, would have much in common. I also know that my daughter will live far longer than any non-magical man she could ever marry. This is something her mother has not wanted to understand, but I do."
Hernan now turned to Isabella, and lifted his hands to caress his daughter's cheeks. "She is a treasure, my Isabella. A treasure I am entrusting to you now, Mr. Lestrange."
Both Rodolphus and Isabella now took a deep breath, not believing what they'd heard.
"Papa, how did you know?" asked Isabella in wonder.
"I cannot tell you all of my secrets, Isa. Go, take your wizard and make your life. I know you will never truly be happy with Arturo." Hernan placed Isabella's hand in Rodolphus' and smiled. "Don't worry about your mother. She will be upset, but I am sure she will eventually overcome her anger. Perhaps a grandchild or two will ease her pain slightly."
Rodolphus was speechless. He pulled Isabella close to him and looked at Hernan.
"Thank you." He took a card from his pocket and handed it to the man who would soon be his father-in-law. "My home is your home, sir."
"Goodbye, Isa, I expect to see you soon. And remember, take care of my daughter."
Rodolphus nodded and Apparated out of the room, with Isabella in tow.
When they were gone, Hernan shook his head and sighed heavily.
"Mi esposa me va a matar."
In Tuscany, Rodolphus and Isabella arrived outside the gates of his home. Here they would live and be happy as Dante and Isabella Monte Cristo.
In the coming years, they would have four children, all magical, and all would attend Hogwarts. Their children would often invite their schoolfriends to their villa for the holidays. There were many Christmas parties at the Monte Cristo home, and they would all include Snapes, Malfoys, and even Longbottoms.
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Translation: Mi esposa me va a matar. = My wife is going to kill me.
There you have it. I had originally thought, when I wrote him into this, that Rodolphus would be his end very quickly, but I soon grew to really enjoy writing him this way. I think in the end he deserved to start over, even though he'd been a Death Eater, he risked his life and lost those he loved to rid the world of Voldemort. He saw the error of his ways, and in some small way tried to repay Neville for all that he'd suffered at the hands of the Lestranges.
I also thought that the use of Dante Monte Cristo, would be a way for him to remember his past as well. If any of you have read the Count of Monte Cristo you will note that I have taken the last name of Edmund Dantes, and the name Monte Cristo, thus his past and present. I think that is something Rodolphus would want to never forget, both his past and present.
I thank you all for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed it.
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Wow! Thank you for this story. I did not think it possible for the Lestranges to redeem them but you made a very plausible argument. I only hope he calls his wife Isa or Isabel and not Bella ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it through. I thought it would be a nice change, to give these horrible people a way to redeem themselves. And in my world, yes, he would have called her Isabel. :)
Your story is amazing. I really like the way you portray the relationship between Lucius and Severus. What amazes me is that this chapter made me wish for sort-of happy end for the Lestranges ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. I wrote it so long ago, but this is actually my favorite story I wrote. I thought it would be nice to give it a little bit of a twist. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Methinks these deep waters need further exploration. Perhaps in a PWP oneshot, I should believe. Yes? Yesssssss... Oh and if you want to include Hermione, I assure you I wouldn't be disappointed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I would love to, if it wasn't so hard for me to write sex scenes. Love reading them, but just can never feel like I can do them justice with my own writing.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I think you would do a fantastic job! The scenes you wrote of their intimacy (SS/LM & SS/HG) were very romantic and intense. I just realized I read this story two years ago and reviewed back then. I was happy to read this like it was new!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well thank you! It's always encouraging to hear that you did a good job, especially when you weren't sure about it to begin with! I appreciate you reading it again!
a w0ndeful fic!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so very much for reading it all! I appreciate your kind words and reviews!
i laugh at seveus's last cmment t0 hemi0ne.. t00 funny!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Severus had some good lines here.
that m0lly's s0n died fighting....
like eading lucius fics
I was spontaneously thinking Severus should add a magical variant of what we call Sechuan pepper (in German. I'm not sure of the English name). Already the Muggle variant is fizzing so oddly on the toungue--surely the magical spice gives a great sensation?!The title of the book is perfect, btw. The grammatical structure is just a bit off in the right direction to make it appear genuinely 500y old ,-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much for reading this. Of all my fictions, this is by far one of my favorites.
I just read your story. It was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it I lost sleep to finish it. You are very talented.Stacy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. This was my last SS/HG Potter universe fic and it's my favorite story I've written.
I just finished your story. It was so wonderful. I was enthralled the whole way through. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing this story with us.Shelly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you Shelly! This was my favorite story that I've written.
I read this story some time ago, I remember I liked it very much, so here I come again
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reading it again.
It was a very good story, thank you for writing. my only comment is on the spanished used here in the last chapter.Mi esposa me va a matar, is the very simlpe way or personal translation done by a novice, but a traditional spain spanish person woul say Mi esposa me matará, which is the future tense of the werb. other then that, it was a wonderful story and i was glad i found it on Wed. thanks for writing, Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever seen Rodolphus or Bellatrix LeStrange written in this way.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give some of the Death Eaters a different take. I thought it would be interesting to make them the heroes.
*gasp* Not good... *hurries onto next chapter*Great beginning!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
I enjoyed it so much it kept me up until 3:00am! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us. Keep up the good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Well thats it everything tied up nicely. Thank you for an excellent read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
its great that most everything is a happy ending
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
that was so cool you write wonderfully very gifted
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
wow what an action packed chapter it was really good
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Oh wow what drama. And powerful. The emotions. Just wow.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Yay, I've reached the end. The last couple of chapters were a little too sweet in places, but it is wonderful to imagine a happy ending for everyone and all of the next generation of the Wizarding world. You did a neat job making Rudolphus a sympathetic character.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I did know it would get a bit sappy in a few places, but if I wanted a happy ending for everyone it was bound to happen.
I'm very pleased with what I eventually did with Rodolphus. I wanted to give the usual baddies a different twist.
Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still enjoying this story. I like the way you temper the drama with the funny stuff like Wizardopoly with poor Lucius always ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you're still liking it. I usually like to add a little bit of humor in dramatic stories. After all, life isn't always so serious.
This is an interesting story so far. I was thinking of skipping it because of the slash warning, but decided to give it a try. Although the writing is stilted in places such as the beginning of this chapter, there are some beautiful moments such as the one between Severus and Hermione. The Latin password is profoundly appropriate. I'm looking forward to clicking the "next" button.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It isn't completely slash. It's basically a warning of a miniscule bit referring to Severus and Lucius' past.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I think I can handle slash-lite ;) Now I just need time to keep reading. Weekends are soo busy.