Chapter 13 ? A Manual, An Offer And A Bamboo Rod
Chapter 13 of 26
ancientgirl**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
ReviewedThank you once again to those of you who have taken the time to read this story and leave me such lovely reviews.
As you will notice in this chapter, I have moved things along a bit.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks as always to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Chapter 13 A Manual, An Offer And A Bamboo Rod
Three weeks passed and all seemed well.
Severus and Hermione found a way to slowly infuse Voldemort's stamina potions with a special additional mixture that kept him strong, yet would enable the Order at the proper moment to cast a simple spell that would deplete him of half his magical power. It would allow Harry to meet him on a more even keel as well as keep the Dark Lord's possible victims on the battlefield safe from his full power.
While the potion modification was developed fairly quickly by Severus and Hermione, Severus' time at the Riddle home seemed to go as slow as pouring honey. After "Higgenbottom" began giving Voldemort the "new and improved" potion, Dolohov was allowed to once again torment the hapless minor Death Eater. The Dark Lord's meetings were now being held twice a week, and Severus would usually arrive in his rooms with welts on his back from the caning he'd taken at the hands of Dolohov.
Hermione was incensed every time he returned, but there was nothing either of them could do; Severus had to play the part of the docile potions maker. However, with the help of the book Lucius had given her, Ginny was able to prescribe a fast acting balm, which promoted quick healing and left no scarring. It was usually after she'd healed Severus that Hermione and her own potions maker had their most heated lovemaking sessions.
After Lucius informed Albus of the information Rodolphus had given him, the Order members readied themselves. As Minister of Magic, Arthur had the authority to post Aurors wherever he saw fit without having to explain his actions. By his instructions, St. Mungo's was watched day and night, as were all of the wizarding schools in the world.
Lucius continued to court Ginny, much to her immense pleasure. She'd never imagined dating an older man would be such a different experience than all the younger men she'd gone out with.
He was patient, and always seemed genuinely interested in listening to her ideas and views when they were together. Lucius never embarrassed Ginny by making her feel she was less intelligent than him. He'd also made only a few subtle flirtatious remarks about attempting to bed her, which made her wonder if he was even remotely interested in her that way. She worried that he only wanted to be her "friend" or "uncle" which was not what she wanted.
One evening, Ginny decided to ask her mother if all wizards Lucius' age were like that.
"Ginny, dear Lucius is just more experienced. Older men don't like to rush into things; they've been taught to act like gentlemen and treat women with respect," said Molly as she tried to comfort her daughter. "Besides, he would have to be blind not to think you were the loveliest young woman in the world."
Still, Ginny wondered how Lucius really felt about her. She would learn soon enough this very evening, in fact but the news would make her more nervous than happy.
That evening, Hermione was in Severus' rooms looking for an old manual he'd told her she could use for her class, when she thought she heard someone knocking at her own door. She ran down the hallway that connected both their rooms and opened her front door.
"Ginny!" Hermione was out of breath from running. "I didn't expect you here tonight. I thought you and Lucius would be doing something together, since it's Friday evening."
The young healer walked into the room. "I'm seeing him later. He's having dinner with Draco. He wants to tell him about us."
"I thought Draco already knew you were seeing each other," said Hermione.
Ginny shook her head.
"No, Lucius has been afraid to say anything. It hasn't been long since...since Narcissa's death," Ginny whispered. She and Draco had been friends for several years, having buried the hatchet long ago. She knew how hurt he'd been to know his mother was a concubine to Voldemort; however, the loss of his mother still haunted him. Ginny hoped that Draco would accept her in his father's life, despite her being a year younger than Draco.
Hermione wrapped her arm around her friend's shoulder and guided her into Severus' rooms.
"I'm sure there's nothing to worry about. Now, why don't you help me look for the manual I need for my class next week. I've been looking for the bloody thing for over half an hour."
They chatted together as they searched Severus' small library, distracting each other from their fears. Ginny was nervous about Lucius' dinner with his son; Hermione was tense because Severus had been Summoned to Voldemort's side this afternoon. Two women in love with two Death Eater spies, yet neither realized that they would soon learn something the men had kept a secret for many years. But that would come later.
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At Malfoy Manor Lucius, Draco and Harry were sitting in the study and having drinks while waiting for Emil to usher them to the dining room. Lucius had asked Emil and Dari to make sure that all of Draco's favorite foods be served.
"I've missed this place," said Draco as he looked around the room.
"This is your home, Draco; it will always be your home. You are more than welcome to live here." Lucius looked towards Harry. "Harry, you are welcome here as well."
"We wouldn't want to intrude on you," said Harry. Truth be told, he and Draco had been looking for a larger place to live. While number twelve, Grimmauld Place belonged to Harry, he'd decided long ago to allow all Order members to stay in the home whenever they needed. At first Harry lived there fulltime, but he quickly found that privacy was an issue. When he and Draco became lovers, they moved into a small flat in Godric's Hollow, "small" being the operative word. After nearly three years together, they felt that more space was needed.
"You wouldn't be intruding," Lucius reassured him. "As you can see there is ample room, but you could always move into the guest house across the gardens." Lucius knew that the young men lived in a very small flat, as Ginny had mentioned it on several occasions. He didn't like knowing his son was living in such a small home.
Draco and Harry looked at one another, both knowing what the other was thinking. Draco voiced their concerns.
"What if Voldemort finds out we're living here?" said Draco.
Lucius shook his head.
"Draco, your grandfather warded this property with impenetrable magic. You are probably safer here than anywhere else in the wizarding world."
Emil walked into the study. "Dinner is ready."
The three wizards stood and followed the small elf to the door.
"Just think about it; you don't have to answer me now. But, before we go to dinner, there is something I need to speak with you about." Lucius stopped and looked at Harry. "Harry, I need to speak with Draco in private. We'll join you in a moment."
Harry smiled at Draco and nodded, then walked to the dining room with Emil.
"Is something wrong?" asked Draco, wondering why his father had sent Harry away. Could it be that his father wanted to tell him that he really didn't approve of his and Harry's relationship?
"Nothing is wrong, quite the opposite." Lucius smiled sadly. "I hope that you can understand me, Draco. I don't know what I would do at this point if you were to become angry or disappointed in me."
Draco frowned. "Father, I could never be angry at you. You've done so much to keep me out of danger. You and mother."
Lucius sighed heavily. "Draco, I need to tell you something. I've..." Lucius took a huge gulp of his drink and set the glass heavily on the table next to him. "I've been seeing someone."
Draco looked stunned.
"Please understand, son, I know the death of your mother is still weighing heavily on the both of us, but..."
Draco approached Lucius and placed his hand on his father's shoulder.
"It's all right, Father. I understand, I really do. She left us seven years ago."
Lucius looked at Draco and felt relief wash over his entire body.
"I loved your mother; despite all she did, I loved her." Lucius' eyes glittered with tears. While he knew his feelings for Ginny were growing, his heart would never completely let go of Narcissa; they'd had a child together.
"She would understand." Draco now began to lead Lucius out of the study and both men walked to the dining room.
"So, who's the lucky woman?" he asked, wanting to lighten the mood.
Lucius smirked. "One Miss Ginevra Weasley."
Draco's jaw dropped. Not only had his father found a woman who was intelligent and beautiful, but he'd found one half his age. He started laughing. "Father, you are a lecherous old man."
Lucius arched his perfect brow. "Not yet, son, but I hope to be soon."
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Severus had been called to the Riddle home alone. Voldemort wanted to have extra stamina potion for the weekend, and Severus guessed this meant that this was the weekend Rodolphus had warned them about.
He was almost finished making the extra doses of stamina potion Voldemort had requested of him. It was quite simple for him to add in the mixture he and Hermione made in order to weaken the Dark Lord's power during the final battle. The only problem Severus had was that, for the last two weeks, Antonin Dolohov had been given the nod by Voldemort to continue torturing "Higgenbottom."
Much to his dismay Dolohov was almost always there in the potions lab, watching him. Severus came to realize that it wasn't so much that Dolohov just wanted to cause him pain or rattle him, but that Voldemort didn't completely trust Higgenbottom. Dolohov was there to watch him on behalf of the Dark Lord, and the fact that he could annoy and hurt "Higgenbottom" while doing so, made things more pleasant for the sadistic wizard. The only glitch in that plan was that Dolohov was and had always been horrible at potions; he could watch Severus day and night without noticing anything wrong. The man couldn't tell water from urine, he was that bad. Whenever Dolohov asked what an ingredient was and why it was necessary, Severus very smoothly gave his answer.
But Severus was quickly growing tired of the wizard.
That evening, when he arrived, Dolohov decided to push the potions maker to the limit. Little did he know that Voldemort's potions maker was the "deceased" Severus Snape.
Dolohov held a thin rod of bamboo in his hand. He began hitting it against the table, each time getting nearer and near Severus' workstation.
"If you continue making those noises, I will not be able to concentrate," said Severus in the weak tone of the wizard he'd been impersonating.
"Then finish quickly so that I can use the rod on you and not the table," laughed Dolohov, who then began poking Severus in the back with the rod.
Severus held himself back. He had to restrain his temper not only because he needed to finish the potion for Voldemort, but because he could not give himself away. The Pensieve of Higgenbottom's memories clearly showed that the wizard was afraid of Dolohov, but Severus was growing weary of the act. He wasn't used to allowing someone else to abuse him in such a way. While he'd taken many a beating at the hands of Voldemort, he'd never allowed another Death Eater to so much as lift a finger against him. But this same routine went on every time he visited the Riddle home to make the Dark Lord's potions.
Just as he put his final ingredients in the potion, Severus heard the telltale whooshing sound of the rod coming at him and quickly felt the shooting pain on his back from the strike. Then he heard laughter.
Severus took a deep breath. He finished the potion, but he was also losing time. He needed to take another dose of Polyjuice Potion soon, yet he could not until Dolohov left the room.
Another hit came from Dolohov.
Severus was not only growing agitated but he felt himself changing to his own form.
"Stop hitting me and please allow me to finish the Dark Lord's potion. Leave," said Severus-as-Higgenbottom.
Again Dolohov laughed. "You've finished. I have watched you make this potion before. All you need to do now is allow it to settle, and it can do that on its own. Now it's my turn to have a bit of fun." He swung his arm hard, and again the bamboo rod connected with Severus' back.
Severus held himself against the table, his hands gripping the edge; he felt his body now begin to morph back to himself. Something unpleasant was about to happen.
"I am asking you one more time, don't do this. Please leave," said Severus as he kept his back to Dolohov.
Dolohov stepped forward and ripped the back of the thin robes Severus wore as Higgenbottom. He swung again and this time hitting Severus' bare back drew blood.
"I'm in the mood to see blood. I don't want to leave."
Severus, who had now finished morphing back to his own body, turned so quickly that to Dolohov, he was a mere blur of motion. He grabbed Dolohov by the throat and shoved him roughly against the wall.
Dolohov's eyes grew wide at the sight of a man who was supposed to be dead.
Severus narrowed his eyes and smiled. "That's too bad, Dolohov. Because now you can't leave."
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'm building up to a few things so I thank you all for your patience.
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Wow! Thank you for this story. I did not think it possible for the Lestranges to redeem them but you made a very plausible argument. I only hope he calls his wife Isa or Isabel and not Bella ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it through. I thought it would be a nice change, to give these horrible people a way to redeem themselves. And in my world, yes, he would have called her Isabel. :)
Your story is amazing. I really like the way you portray the relationship between Lucius and Severus. What amazes me is that this chapter made me wish for sort-of happy end for the Lestranges ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. I wrote it so long ago, but this is actually my favorite story I wrote. I thought it would be nice to give it a little bit of a twist. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Methinks these deep waters need further exploration. Perhaps in a PWP oneshot, I should believe. Yes? Yesssssss... Oh and if you want to include Hermione, I assure you I wouldn't be disappointed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I would love to, if it wasn't so hard for me to write sex scenes. Love reading them, but just can never feel like I can do them justice with my own writing.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I think you would do a fantastic job! The scenes you wrote of their intimacy (SS/LM & SS/HG) were very romantic and intense. I just realized I read this story two years ago and reviewed back then. I was happy to read this like it was new!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well thank you! It's always encouraging to hear that you did a good job, especially when you weren't sure about it to begin with! I appreciate you reading it again!
a w0ndeful fic!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so very much for reading it all! I appreciate your kind words and reviews!
i laugh at seveus's last cmment t0 hemi0ne.. t00 funny!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Severus had some good lines here.
that m0lly's s0n died fighting....
like eading lucius fics
I was spontaneously thinking Severus should add a magical variant of what we call Sechuan pepper (in German. I'm not sure of the English name). Already the Muggle variant is fizzing so oddly on the toungue--surely the magical spice gives a great sensation?!The title of the book is perfect, btw. The grammatical structure is just a bit off in the right direction to make it appear genuinely 500y old ,-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much for reading this. Of all my fictions, this is by far one of my favorites.
I just read your story. It was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it I lost sleep to finish it. You are very talented.Stacy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. This was my last SS/HG Potter universe fic and it's my favorite story I've written.
I just finished your story. It was so wonderful. I was enthralled the whole way through. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing this story with us.Shelly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you Shelly! This was my favorite story that I've written.
I read this story some time ago, I remember I liked it very much, so here I come again
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reading it again.
It was a very good story, thank you for writing. my only comment is on the spanished used here in the last chapter.Mi esposa me va a matar, is the very simlpe way or personal translation done by a novice, but a traditional spain spanish person woul say Mi esposa me matará, which is the future tense of the werb. other then that, it was a wonderful story and i was glad i found it on Wed. thanks for writing, Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever seen Rodolphus or Bellatrix LeStrange written in this way.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give some of the Death Eaters a different take. I thought it would be interesting to make them the heroes.
*gasp* Not good... *hurries onto next chapter*Great beginning!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
I enjoyed it so much it kept me up until 3:00am! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us. Keep up the good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Well thats it everything tied up nicely. Thank you for an excellent read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
its great that most everything is a happy ending
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
that was so cool you write wonderfully very gifted
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
wow what an action packed chapter it was really good
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Oh wow what drama. And powerful. The emotions. Just wow.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Yay, I've reached the end. The last couple of chapters were a little too sweet in places, but it is wonderful to imagine a happy ending for everyone and all of the next generation of the Wizarding world. You did a neat job making Rudolphus a sympathetic character.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I did know it would get a bit sappy in a few places, but if I wanted a happy ending for everyone it was bound to happen.
I'm very pleased with what I eventually did with Rodolphus. I wanted to give the usual baddies a different twist.
Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still enjoying this story. I like the way you temper the drama with the funny stuff like Wizardopoly with poor Lucius always ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you're still liking it. I usually like to add a little bit of humor in dramatic stories. After all, life isn't always so serious.
This is an interesting story so far. I was thinking of skipping it because of the slash warning, but decided to give it a try. Although the writing is stilted in places such as the beginning of this chapter, there are some beautiful moments such as the one between Severus and Hermione. The Latin password is profoundly appropriate. I'm looking forward to clicking the "next" button.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It isn't completely slash. It's basically a warning of a miniscule bit referring to Severus and Lucius' past.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I think I can handle slash-lite ;) Now I just need time to keep reading. Weekends are soo busy.