Chapter 5 ? And the World Will Bleed Once More
Chapter 5 of 26
ancientgirl**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
ReviewedI was going to post this chapter over the weekend, but I decided to just have it up today.
I'd like to thank all of those who have taken the time to read this and leave me such lovely comments.
Thank you to June, who had a time with this one. I promise June, I will never send you a chapter again at four o'clock in the morning. Insomnia isn't pleasant.
Thanks to Whimbley for some of her suggestions.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Chapter 5 And the World Will Bleed Once More
At number twelve, Grimmauld Place, Lucius sat on the couch next to Draco. Ginny had performed some temporary healing spells on Lucius so that he might be more comfortable during his talk with the rest of the Order. Any more permanent spells for his recovery would be done in private as any medi-witch or wizard would do for a patient. Feeling that Lucius's recounting of what he'd gone through might be emotional, Minerva suggested that the women leave the room, allowing the wizard a modicum of dignity.
Moody and Shacklebolt stood near the window, keeping an eye on Lucius. Remus sat quietly in a large leather wing back chair next to the fireplace. Harry stood next to Ron, Arthur and Albus. Severus sat on the coffee table in front of Lucius. They were all waiting for the blond wizard to speak.
After a long silence, Lucius realized he still held the key that had brought him to Grimmauld Place. He held it in the upturned palm of his hand and stared.
Draco looked at it and took it from his hand.
"Mother's key," Draco said. He knew that the key belonged to his mother, as he had seen it on several occasions in her jewelry box when he was a young child.
Harry approached the couch to get a better look at the key.
"That's a key to this house." Harry looked to Albus.
"And used as Portkey, it seems," said the old wizard.
"But how?" asked Ron. "This house is protected by a Fidelius Charm; no one can find it unless the Secret-Keeper tells them the address."
"Or unless the person is a member of the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black," Lucius interrupted quietly. All eyes were on him now. "The Black family's blood magic supersedes any Unplottable spell and Fidelius Charm if it is performed by the head of the family." Lucius took hold of the key and held it tightly in his hand; he brought it close to his mouth and closed his eyes tightly, wanting just one final time to hold something near him that had been held by his wife. "Phineas Nigellus Black and his wife Ursula Flint Black had five children, four of which received keys to this house. Their second child, Phineas, supported Muggle rights; he was disowned and did not get a key. Their third child was Narcissa's great-grandfather, Cygnus Black. This house was to be the family's safe haven if ever they needed one. In time of emergency, the key is activated and brings the holder here, always here."
"Narcissa had that key with her all these years," said Severus as he looked into Lucius' icy eyes. "She could have come here any time, and she could have brought anyone."
Lucius smiled sadly in return. "But she did not. My wife was smarter than I ever gave her credit for. She knew well before I did the truth about the Dark Lord."
Albus approached the couch and sat on the edge on the far end of Lucius' spot.
"Harry has one such key from Sirius, who kept it after he was disowned, so we have two keys here. Do you know where the other two are, Lucius?"
The location of the other two keys worried all those in the room.
"The other two branches of the family have become estranged or died out, so their keys were redistributed to the remaining relatives. Regulus Black was in possession of one that he carried with him at all times. I can only assume it was with him when he was killed," said Lucius.
Remus then spoke, "No, I've seen a key like that on several occasions at Andromeda's home. I've always thought it strange that it looked so much like Harry's key. I've only seen it from far away, but I'm sure it has the Black family coat of arms."
Arthur now stepped forward. "Regulus must have sent it to Andromeda, knowing he would be killed."
"That's three," said Severus. "Tell me that Bella doesn't have the fourth."
Lucius nodded. "She did."
"Who has it now?" asked Harry nervously.
"She gave it to the Dark Lord years ago, just after the Dementors revolted and freed her and nine other Death Eaters from Azkaban. Her mind was still not fully rational; she gave it to him as some sort of piece of jewelry. I do not recall ever seeing it again."
"Why didn't she use it when she was in Azkaban?" wondered Ron aloud.
"Apparently, the Portkey and Black family magic had not been powerful enough to help her escape Azkaban; perhaps that is why she went insane from trying to use it over the years," explained Severus.
"I believe I have seen it though," said Severus as he struggled to remember. "It hangs on a nail next to the Dark Lord's fireplace." Severus looked at the others. "At least it was there up until two months ago. I was Summoned to his room to give him his stamina potion and I noticed the key ring for the first time. I saw the key from a distance, but couldn't place the crest until now."
"That key needs to be brought back here," said Arthur. "We can't take the chance of him getting too close a look at it. Voldemort will know that's the Black Family crest."
At once, Lucius' arm began to burn; he grabbed it and looked at the others. He was being Summoned; no doubt Voldemort wanted to finish what Narcissa could not. It was possible for Voldemort to summon only a selected few Death Eaters, thinking Severus dead there was no need in wasting his time and summoning him.
"I'm being Summoned and Narcissa is most likely dead," he whispered. Lucius dropped the key he'd still been holding and covered his face with his hands. "Narcissa, forgive me, my wife, forgive me for hating you so all of these years after you left us." A wave of guilt washed over him now that he knew of her sacrifice.
Severus placed his hand on Lucius' shoulder in an effort to comfort him.
"Lucius, don't blame yourself for your feelings. They were a natural reaction for what was done to you. Anyone would have felt betrayed."
Draco sat motionless, knowing all too well what his father felt at the moment. He was too numb to fully realize that his father might be next to die.
With great effort, Lucius stood and began gathering his things. "I cannot avoid my fate forever." He looked at Draco. "If I should not return, you will be receiving a letter from Maximilian. He will tell you what you need to do."
Severus stood next to Lucius now and took hold of his arm in an effort to keep his friend from leaving just yet.
"No, don't leave just yet."
"Severus, you know as well as I do that the next time I Apparate anywhere I will only show up at his home."
"Did he torture you because he knows you did not kill me?" asked Severus.
As Lucius was readying himself to leave it had occurred to Severus that they did not know why the blond wizard had shown up at Order headquarters in the condition he did. Surely Voldemort would have killed him instantly when he found out Lucius had not done his duty and killed Severus.
Lucius shook his head, "No, I was punished for not returning immediately after taking you to Hogwarts."
Albus approached the two men. "Lucius, I believe you are being Summoned then because he has no doubt received word that Severus is indeed dead."
Lucius looked confused.
"Our contact at the Quibbler was able to assist us in the cover-up. Perhaps you are being given a second chance to stay within the ranks and become our spy," stated Severus.
"Then I shall go back." With one final nod to all, Lucius hugged Draco and walked out onto the porch and Apparated from Grimmauld Place. As his father left, Draco felt as though he himself had just died. Harry walked to him and held him tightly, giving him what comfort he could.
~*~*~*~*~*~
After allowing the body of Narcissa Malfoy to drop heavily on the ground, Voldemort stood over her, watching the blood ooze out from her wound. He heard a door opening behind him and turned.
Bellatrix walked in, holding several packages and a copy of the Quibbler in her arms.
"My Lord, I have what you..." Bellatrix slowed her walking as she noticed the motionless and bloody body of her sister on the floor. "I...I have what you asked for, M...My Lord."
"At least there is someone who still follows orders." Voldemort took the packages and paper from Bellatrix's arms, as she stared at her sister. "I trust you will not make the same mistakes as your sister and brother-in-law made?"
Bellatrix blinked several times before turning her face back to Voldemort. "No, I am your servant," she answered, although there was little enthusiasm to her tone.
"Good, now take her out of here." The cold-hearted wizard dropped his packages on his large bed and he began unfolding the paper in his hands.
"What would you have me do with her?"
"Burn her, bury her, I care nothing of what happens to her corpse," he spat. "Just get her out of here before the stench of death fills my sleeping quarters." He began reading the Quibbler, his dead concubine now forgotten.
Bellatrix waved her wand and silently cast a spell to levitate Narcissa's body. She walked out of the bedroom and into the ballroom, passing several other Death Eaters who had been standing outside waiting for their own instructions from the Dark Lord. As they looked upon the still beautiful blond woman's body, their faces were somber and confused. No one said a word as the ever growing chill in the air grew colder by the second.
Bellatrix walked outside to the Riddle family cemetery and lowered Narcissa gently to the ground. She stared down at her sister and at once fell to her knees. Her shaky hand reached out and touched the dead woman's soft cheek.
"Cissy, my beautiful sister." Bella now gripped the limp body and held it close to her own body. "My only solace in this world. Why did you not take me with you?" It had been years since she'd shed a tear for anything or anyone. The sensation of her eyes watering and now flooding with emotion was almost too much for her to bear. Bellatrix hated the world and everything in it, except for two things. Contrary to much belief, Bella cared deeply for Rodolphus. She also loved her sister Narcissa and now she was gone. Knowing she had a duty to perform, Bellatrix allowed herself one final look at Narcissa, then stood. No doubt she would find out why her sister had been killed. The conversation she'd had earlier with her husband now echoed in her mind as well as her ears.
'If Lucius was condemned to death for such a minor infraction as being late...' Rodolphus had said. What minor infraction did Narcissa commit, Bella wondered.
"Tread lightly, Bellatrix," said the voice of her husband from behind her.
She wiped her nose on her long sleeve and proceeded to dig a hole.
"Excavar," she intoned. Waving her wand in circular patterns, the ground began to bubble slightly, until a hole was formed. Bellatrix took off her outer robe and placed it on Narcissa, and then lowered her sister's body into the unmarked grave. After the dirt was replaced and her sister finally buried, she turned and faced her husband.
"What shall we do, Rodolphus?"
"What can we do?" The wizard looked towards the Riddle home. "We dug our graves when we first took the Dark Mark. There is no turning back for us. We must follow this path we have set for ourselves. We have crossed the Rubicon, my wife, and we must play this game out to the end." Rodolphus looked into her dark eyes. "No matter what the outcome."
Bellatrix nodded as her husband took her by the arm.
"Come, he is waiting for you." Rodolphus felt her stiffen. "No, not for that," he said. "Severus is dead. There is an article in the Quibbler. We are all being Summoned," he sighed deeply, "It is time for the world to bleed once more."
'But with whose blood?' wondered Bellatrix as she took one last look at her sister's grave.
~*~*~*~*~
I'd originally planned on having more Severus and Lucius interaction, but my plot for this chapter took a turn. I promise there will be more of the two men in the next chapter.
Bella's and Rodolphus' relationship: Since we really don't know much about this I decided that Bella may or my not love her husband completely, but she does care for him deeply, so I wanted to show them as having a good solid comfort level.
Also, I couldn't find information on whether a Summoning affects every DE or just a select few, so I chose to use the latter theory.
I also opted to use a Spanish word instead of Latin, seeing as JKR herself has admited her spells and words are a mix of what she herself made up and Latin and I believe another language I can't remember right now.
Excavar - excavate
Thank you for reading this. I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
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Wow! Thank you for this story. I did not think it possible for the Lestranges to redeem them but you made a very plausible argument. I only hope he calls his wife Isa or Isabel and not Bella ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it through. I thought it would be a nice change, to give these horrible people a way to redeem themselves. And in my world, yes, he would have called her Isabel. :)
Your story is amazing. I really like the way you portray the relationship between Lucius and Severus. What amazes me is that this chapter made me wish for sort-of happy end for the Lestranges ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. I wrote it so long ago, but this is actually my favorite story I wrote. I thought it would be nice to give it a little bit of a twist. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Methinks these deep waters need further exploration. Perhaps in a PWP oneshot, I should believe. Yes? Yesssssss... Oh and if you want to include Hermione, I assure you I wouldn't be disappointed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I would love to, if it wasn't so hard for me to write sex scenes. Love reading them, but just can never feel like I can do them justice with my own writing.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I think you would do a fantastic job! The scenes you wrote of their intimacy (SS/LM & SS/HG) were very romantic and intense. I just realized I read this story two years ago and reviewed back then. I was happy to read this like it was new!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well thank you! It's always encouraging to hear that you did a good job, especially when you weren't sure about it to begin with! I appreciate you reading it again!
a w0ndeful fic!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so very much for reading it all! I appreciate your kind words and reviews!
i laugh at seveus's last cmment t0 hemi0ne.. t00 funny!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Severus had some good lines here.
that m0lly's s0n died fighting....
like eading lucius fics
I was spontaneously thinking Severus should add a magical variant of what we call Sechuan pepper (in German. I'm not sure of the English name). Already the Muggle variant is fizzing so oddly on the toungue--surely the magical spice gives a great sensation?!The title of the book is perfect, btw. The grammatical structure is just a bit off in the right direction to make it appear genuinely 500y old ,-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much for reading this. Of all my fictions, this is by far one of my favorites.
I just read your story. It was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it I lost sleep to finish it. You are very talented.Stacy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. This was my last SS/HG Potter universe fic and it's my favorite story I've written.
I just finished your story. It was so wonderful. I was enthralled the whole way through. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing this story with us.Shelly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you Shelly! This was my favorite story that I've written.
I read this story some time ago, I remember I liked it very much, so here I come again
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reading it again.
It was a very good story, thank you for writing. my only comment is on the spanished used here in the last chapter.Mi esposa me va a matar, is the very simlpe way or personal translation done by a novice, but a traditional spain spanish person woul say Mi esposa me matará, which is the future tense of the werb. other then that, it was a wonderful story and i was glad i found it on Wed. thanks for writing, Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever seen Rodolphus or Bellatrix LeStrange written in this way.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give some of the Death Eaters a different take. I thought it would be interesting to make them the heroes.
*gasp* Not good... *hurries onto next chapter*Great beginning!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
I enjoyed it so much it kept me up until 3:00am! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us. Keep up the good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Well thats it everything tied up nicely. Thank you for an excellent read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
its great that most everything is a happy ending
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
that was so cool you write wonderfully very gifted
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
wow what an action packed chapter it was really good
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Oh wow what drama. And powerful. The emotions. Just wow.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Yay, I've reached the end. The last couple of chapters were a little too sweet in places, but it is wonderful to imagine a happy ending for everyone and all of the next generation of the Wizarding world. You did a neat job making Rudolphus a sympathetic character.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I did know it would get a bit sappy in a few places, but if I wanted a happy ending for everyone it was bound to happen.
I'm very pleased with what I eventually did with Rodolphus. I wanted to give the usual baddies a different twist.
Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still enjoying this story. I like the way you temper the drama with the funny stuff like Wizardopoly with poor Lucius always ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you're still liking it. I usually like to add a little bit of humor in dramatic stories. After all, life isn't always so serious.
This is an interesting story so far. I was thinking of skipping it because of the slash warning, but decided to give it a try. Although the writing is stilted in places such as the beginning of this chapter, there are some beautiful moments such as the one between Severus and Hermione. The Latin password is profoundly appropriate. I'm looking forward to clicking the "next" button.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It isn't completely slash. It's basically a warning of a miniscule bit referring to Severus and Lucius' past.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I think I can handle slash-lite ;) Now I just need time to keep reading. Weekends are soo busy.