Chapter 6 ? Devoted to a Madman
Chapter 6 of 26
ancientgirl**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
ReviewedI'd like to thank all of those readers who have taken the time to read this and review. Thank you all for your wonderful comments and support.
I had planned some Severus and Lucius interaction here but as you will see, my muse got the better of me. He really can't make up his mind sometimes. I hope you enjoy this regardless.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks as always to June for all of her help and suggestons
Chapter 6 Devoted to a Madman
Lucius stood in the middle of the Riddle mansion's large ballroom, a light shining on him. He heard the murmur of the crowd he knew surrounded him in the darkness. His mind was going at a million miles an hour. So much had happened in the last twenty-four hours, so much had changed.
"It seems that I was hasty earlier." Voldemort emerged from the darkness to stand in front of him. "When I condemned you to death I failed to ask you about Severus."
As Voldemort spoke, Bellatrix and Rodolphus crept into the room. Bellatrix's eyes went wide, when she saw her brother-in-law standing in the middle of the room, very much alive.
"Narcissa was supposed to kill him!" she hissed at her husband.
Rodolphus leaned down and whispered in her ear, "Your sister's infraction."
The woman felt her stomach turn; now realizing why Narcissa had asked her to leave her alone with Lucius. Would the Dark Lord punish Bellatrix for not ensuring her sister's obedience?
Voldemort stared at Lucius, trying to perform the same advanced Legilimency spell that he'd used on Severus. He saw nothing. The state of Lucius' emotions was saving him from being found out; Lucius' mind was a whirlwind of activity, so nothing was clear.
The Dark Lord mistook this for an error in spell casting; he looked to Wormtail and tried the same spell. Unfortunately, the pudgy wizard had grown quite mad over the years, and he was now nothing more than a human robot, coming to life only when spoken to and directed.
Not able to see anything in Wormtail's mind either, Voldemort surmised that the spell was not consistently effective and needed more work. He made a mental note to give his Spells Master an incentive to work harder; a few lashes might give him the push he needed.
He turned his attention back to Lucius. "For once I am quite pleased that someone did not follow my orders. Had Narcissa killed you as I ordered her to, then you would not have the opportunity to continue serving me."
Lucius let out a breath he hadn't realized he'd been holding.
"Pity she is no longer with us," said Voldemort as he turned and walked to his throne.
Lucius felt his heart skip several beats. Narcissa was dead, and she was dead because she had allowed him to escape. All of those nights he'd lain awake, hating her for leaving him, but now he realized he had always loved her even when she chose to become Voldemort's concubine even before Lucius knew why she'd done so. As Lucius tried to maintain his emotionless expression Voldemort continued to speak.
"I have decided that we have been wasting our time attacking small towns and communities." The Dark Lord now sat on his throne. "Perhaps getting the attention of the wizarding world requires going after what they find most important. We will attack all financial institutions and schools. I will be discussing our plan with a few of you in the days to come."
Lucius' mind began to focus now.
"Lucius, how long has it been since you have been properly fucked?" asked Voldemort with a smirk on his face.
"A little over a year, my Lord," said Lucius shakily, not knowing what the insane wizard had in mind for him now. He'd only had short affairs here and there, but nothing that meant anything to him. After Narcissa left him, he felt that no woman could be trusted, so he rarely became involved emotionally.
Voldemort looked around the room. When he spotted Bellatrix near the back of the room, he motioned to her to come to him.
She approached him slowly and bowed her head when she reached him.
"Yes, my Lord?" she asked quietly.
Voldemort ignored her.
"Lucius, I have not rewarded you for ridding us of the traitor, Severus. Take Bella here and reacquaint yourself with the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black." He waved both Death Eaters off towards a small bedroom. "One Black pussy is no different than another, as I know well. Have your fill, and then go to your home. I will call upon you when I have decided which of your fellow Death Eaters will help me to begin planning our assault."
Lucius looked at Bellatrix, who still hadn't lifted her head. He then looked at the smiling face of Voldemort and nodded, then grabbed hold of Bellatrix's arm and dragged her into the small bedroom earlier indicated.
Once inside the room Lucius let her go. He walked to the other end of the room and fell into a large chair.
Bellatrix remained next to the door, not moving.
"You are supposed to be dead," said Bellatrix.
Lucius looked up. "At this moment, with every fiber of my being I wish to the heavens that I was."
"He killed her because she allowed you to escape." Bellatrix moved to sit on a small chair next to the door. She studied the large bed in the center of the room, a feeling of sickness now running through her.
Lucius nodded. "She knew she would die, she told me..." His voice faltered for a moment. "She said that she still loved me."
Bellatrix closed her eyes and nodded; she already knew this. She was after all her sister's confidant. While she never knew why Narcissa had left Lucius, nor her plan to keep Draco under Voldemort's radar, Bellatrix did know that her sister loved her husband.
"I have no desire to be with you, Bella, as I am sure you have little desire for me at this moment."
The dark-haired witch nodded her head in agreement.
"We will stay in here until an appropriate amount of time has passed and then go about our lives," instructed Lucius.
They both sat in silence for the next two hours.
~*~*~*~
Back at number twelve, Grimmauld Place, Severus was in the study observing the other Order members "discussing" the revelation of Lucius' identity as their spy.
Albus, Arthur, Remus and Shacklebolt were in a heated conversation with Moody. The old retired Auror didn't trust Lucius. Even though their spy had risked his life for the last three years by sending them secret messages, Mad-Eye felt that the Death Eater was merely seeing the writing on the wall. Thinking that the war would be won by the side of good, Malfoy was trying to endear himself to them by pretending to help, Moody claimed.
Harry sat with Draco, holding his hand and allowing his boyfriend to take comfort in him. Harry first brought Draco to Order Headquarters two years ago. They had run into each other in Spain, where Lucius had sent his son into hiding after he'd almost been killed during a Death Eater attack in a Muggle store. Harry was wary of his former nemesis at first, but after they spent time talking he realized that Draco wasn't the same person he knew in school. Since his return to England, Draco had also spoken to Harry on many occasions about his father's seemingly changed attitude towards his world and beliefs. It had taken long conversations and arguments, but soon the Boy-Who-Lived believed his lover. If Draco said Lucius was to be trusted, then that's the way it was.
For his part, Ron kept out of what was happening. He decided he would have to form his own opinion based on what the elder Malfoy brought to the Order. He would keep a very close eye on the blond.
Molly kept herself busy in the kitchen, making supper. Minerva and Tonks sat at the table discussing what might have driven Lucius to finally decide to switch sides.
Hermione, who'd noticed Ginny leave the room quietly, followed her to the library. She saw her friend sitting at the window seat looking outside.
"Ginny," she said as she walked further into the room. "Is there something wrong? You don't seem yourself."
The red-headed girl smiled sadly and looked to her friend. "Seamus broke our engagement."
Hermione's eyes went wide. "Ginny, I didn't know you two were engaged."
"It happened last weekend. We were planning on telling our families this weekend."
Hermione sat down next to Ginny. "What happened?"
Ginny shook her head. "Two days after we got engaged, he broke things off and said that he'd changed his mind, that I wasn't passionate enough for him." She wiped a tear that had escaped from the corner of her eye. "Me not passionate enough. Hermione, there were times when I wondered if I would have had a better time with myself and a vibrator."
Hermione laughed as Ginny crossed her arms.
"So Seamus just broke it off? He didn't even want to try and work things out?"
"Oh yes, he came back last night, asking me to forgive him. But how am I supposed to forgive something like that, when he likens having sex with me to being with a corpse, and he's the one with a limp noodle for a penis."
Hermione fought back her laughter, not wanting to further agitate her friend. "Well, don't think on it. You'll meet someone else who will know how to appreciate you."
Ginny shook her head. "I'm done with relationships, Hermione. I'm just so tired of having my feelings trampled on. At this point, I don't even know if I could love anyone. Love is something I just don't think exists anymore. At least not for me."
They turned their attention to a faint knock on the door.
Severus had grown tired of the jabbering in the living room and went in search of Hermione. When he found she wasn't in the kitchen with the other women, he surmised she'd be in the library. He entered and noticed she was there, but not alone.
"Excuse me for interrupting, ladies," he said.
Ginny knew the two friends might want to spend some time alone, so she stood and began to walk out.
"We're done, Severus. I'm sure Hermione is tired of listening to my romantic woes."
"Ginny, don't say that," chided Hermione.
Ginny smiled. "I'm only joking. I'd better get back to the kitchen and help Mum with supper." She walked out and closed the door behind her, leaving the two alone.
"Might I ask what that was all about?" asked Severus, as Hermione hugged him.
"Seamus Finnigan proposed to her last weekend, and then broke their engagement a few days later. He said she wasn't passionate enough."
Severus chuckled as he approached her. "I get the feeling it is Mr. Finnigan who is lacking in the passion department."
Hermione nodded. "How are you feeling?" she asked. She'd noticed Severus flinching slightly when she hugged him.
"Tired." He rubbed his eyes and sat down. "And worried."
"About Lucius?" Hermione could see the concern on his face.
He nodded. "Yes. I only hope the Dark Lord takes the article about my fake death into consideration when he decides Lucius' fate. Perhaps reading of my death will allow Lucius to once again be in his good graces."
Hermione noticed the concerned tone Severus had. She'd never seen him like that, as though he feared that Lucius may not come back alive.
"Were you and Lucius good friends in school?" asked Hermione, curious as to how close a friendship the two men had.
"I began my first year as he was in his seventh." Severus then looked into the fire, remembering his first meeting with Lucius Malfoy.
~*~*~*~*~
Hogwarts 1971
As he sat under the Sorting Hat, young Severus Snape couldn't help but wonder what his life for the next seven years would be like. He'd already gotten a taste of what might be to come on the Hogwarts Express. He'd been targeted by two boys who thought it amusing to make fun of his pale complexion and long stringy hair. One of the boys was tall with dark hair and gray eyes, the other wore glasses and had hair that looked like it had been through a windstorm.
"Slytherin!" yelled the Sorting Hat after a few moments.
For the first time in his life Severus turned to look at a table full of smiling people. His classmates applauded him as he walked slowly towards the long table. He sat next to two large older boys. Severus sat quietly; he wasn't used to being around that many people and he was the type of person that kept to himself.
After the Sorting Ceremony he filled his plate with foods he'd never seen but that looked delicious. As he ate, he didn't notice one of his seventh year classmates watching him from the other end of the table. At one point, Severus felt eyes on him and looked up. He met eyes with a handsome young man, who had long pale blond hair and cold gray eyes. Not knowing why he was being stared at, he went back to his meal.
As the evening passed the students were taken to their new rooms and left to settle in. The next morning, as he was walking into the Great Hall for breakfast, Severus passed by the Gryffindor table and felt the cold sting of being hit by a glob of oatmeal. He didn't dare hex the two perpetrators there in front of everyone. But he saw who they were the same two boys from the train, only he now knew their names: Sirius Black and James Potter.
Severus sat at his table, and was joined by the same older boy that had stared at him the night before.
"That you will find is one of the many faults Gryffindors have," said the young man in a bored tone.
"And what's that?" asked Severus.
"They are obscenely obvious." The blond smirked. "My name is Lucius, Lucius Malfoy. I'm in my seventh year." He held his hand out, so Severus hesitantly shook it.
"You aren't going to let them get away with that, are you?" asked Lucius as he began to butter his toast. "As you have probably noticed, the professors here feel that it's best for students to iron out their differences on their own."
"What do you suggest I do then? I can't very well hex them here."
Lucius' eyebrows shot up. "You know how to throw a hex?"
Severus smirked. "Not just any hex, I create my own."
"Well then, I have a free period after my morning class. I read your schedule, you do as well. What say you we show those two what else can be done with oatmeal?"
Severus smiled, and then frowned.
"Why should you care what they do to me?"
"You are a Slytherin, and we defend our own, always."
~*~*~*~
"He was like a brother to me that year," said Severus as he looked back to Hermione. "The adjustment is very difficult on some children during their first year. Lucius made it bearable for me. When he left school, we stayed in touch. I wrote to him often when my problems began with those blasted Marauders. He was always there to counsel me. When I graduated it was Lucius who took me to my first Death Eater meeting."
He shook his head. "There were many times when things did not go the way we planned, during raids. We watched out for one another. After I became a spy, I had to tread lightly around him. But I never felt in any danger around him. I believe him to be one of the few true friends I have."
Hermione moved closer to him. "I'm your friend."
He smiled down to her. "You are more than a friend and one day soon, I will show you." He kissed her and held her close to him.
~*~*~*~*~
At the Riddle home Lucius opened the door of the small bedroom and peered outside. There were only a few Death Eaters walking about. He made his way to the foyer, passing Rodolphus on the way. He stopped as the other man looked at him, looking as though he wanted to say something.
Rodolphus approached Lucius and quietly spoke. "I'm sorry for your loss, Lucius. It was her fate to die this day."
Lucius nodded. "The fates have nothing to do with death that is the trade of man. And we are all devoted to a madman."
~*~*~*~*~*~
The Harry Potter Lexicon has Lucius listed as beginning Hogwarts in 1965 that would have him still there from 1971-1972 as a seventh year. It also lists Severus Snape as begining Hogwarts in 1971. Going by that timeline Lucius and Severus will have attended one year together.
Also, I know that some of you might be thinking Bellatrix and Rodolphus are acting a bit odd, there is going to be a lot of odd behavior in future chapters not just from them.
Thank you for reading.
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Wow! Thank you for this story. I did not think it possible for the Lestranges to redeem them but you made a very plausible argument. I only hope he calls his wife Isa or Isabel and not Bella ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it through. I thought it would be a nice change, to give these horrible people a way to redeem themselves. And in my world, yes, he would have called her Isabel. :)
Your story is amazing. I really like the way you portray the relationship between Lucius and Severus. What amazes me is that this chapter made me wish for sort-of happy end for the Lestranges ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. I wrote it so long ago, but this is actually my favorite story I wrote. I thought it would be nice to give it a little bit of a twist. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Methinks these deep waters need further exploration. Perhaps in a PWP oneshot, I should believe. Yes? Yesssssss... Oh and if you want to include Hermione, I assure you I wouldn't be disappointed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I would love to, if it wasn't so hard for me to write sex scenes. Love reading them, but just can never feel like I can do them justice with my own writing.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I think you would do a fantastic job! The scenes you wrote of their intimacy (SS/LM & SS/HG) were very romantic and intense. I just realized I read this story two years ago and reviewed back then. I was happy to read this like it was new!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well thank you! It's always encouraging to hear that you did a good job, especially when you weren't sure about it to begin with! I appreciate you reading it again!
a w0ndeful fic!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so very much for reading it all! I appreciate your kind words and reviews!
i laugh at seveus's last cmment t0 hemi0ne.. t00 funny!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Severus had some good lines here.
that m0lly's s0n died fighting....
like eading lucius fics
I was spontaneously thinking Severus should add a magical variant of what we call Sechuan pepper (in German. I'm not sure of the English name). Already the Muggle variant is fizzing so oddly on the toungue--surely the magical spice gives a great sensation?!The title of the book is perfect, btw. The grammatical structure is just a bit off in the right direction to make it appear genuinely 500y old ,-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much for reading this. Of all my fictions, this is by far one of my favorites.
I just read your story. It was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it I lost sleep to finish it. You are very talented.Stacy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. This was my last SS/HG Potter universe fic and it's my favorite story I've written.
I just finished your story. It was so wonderful. I was enthralled the whole way through. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing this story with us.Shelly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you Shelly! This was my favorite story that I've written.
I read this story some time ago, I remember I liked it very much, so here I come again
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reading it again.
It was a very good story, thank you for writing. my only comment is on the spanished used here in the last chapter.Mi esposa me va a matar, is the very simlpe way or personal translation done by a novice, but a traditional spain spanish person woul say Mi esposa me matará, which is the future tense of the werb. other then that, it was a wonderful story and i was glad i found it on Wed. thanks for writing, Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever seen Rodolphus or Bellatrix LeStrange written in this way.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give some of the Death Eaters a different take. I thought it would be interesting to make them the heroes.
*gasp* Not good... *hurries onto next chapter*Great beginning!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
I enjoyed it so much it kept me up until 3:00am! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us. Keep up the good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Well thats it everything tied up nicely. Thank you for an excellent read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
its great that most everything is a happy ending
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
that was so cool you write wonderfully very gifted
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
wow what an action packed chapter it was really good
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Oh wow what drama. And powerful. The emotions. Just wow.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Yay, I've reached the end. The last couple of chapters were a little too sweet in places, but it is wonderful to imagine a happy ending for everyone and all of the next generation of the Wizarding world. You did a neat job making Rudolphus a sympathetic character.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I did know it would get a bit sappy in a few places, but if I wanted a happy ending for everyone it was bound to happen.
I'm very pleased with what I eventually did with Rodolphus. I wanted to give the usual baddies a different twist.
Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still enjoying this story. I like the way you temper the drama with the funny stuff like Wizardopoly with poor Lucius always ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you're still liking it. I usually like to add a little bit of humor in dramatic stories. After all, life isn't always so serious.
This is an interesting story so far. I was thinking of skipping it because of the slash warning, but decided to give it a try. Although the writing is stilted in places such as the beginning of this chapter, there are some beautiful moments such as the one between Severus and Hermione. The Latin password is profoundly appropriate. I'm looking forward to clicking the "next" button.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It isn't completely slash. It's basically a warning of a miniscule bit referring to Severus and Lucius' past.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I think I can handle slash-lite ;) Now I just need time to keep reading. Weekends are soo busy.