Chapter 10 ? A Talk Amongst Friends
Chapter 10 of 26
ancientgirl**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
ReviewedThank you to those who have left me such wonderful reviews. I appreciate all of your kind words.
Just a small warning, there is a teensy weensy male/male kiss in this chapter.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Chapter 10 A Talk Amongst Friends
It was Friday, the day after Voldemort's raids on the Muggle banks and "boarding school." Severus went early to Malfoy Manor; one of the house-elves told him Lucius was already up, so Severus was allowed in and directed to the library.
"Wrapping gifts?" said Severus as he approached Lucius from behind.
The blond wizard chuckled and looked over his shoulder. "What do you think?" he asked as he held up his handiwork. Lucius was finally able to finish wrapping his present to Ginny.
Severus raised an eyebrow and smirked. "Not bad, but your bow is crooked." He turned and took several grapes from the fruit bowl and sat on the couch.
Lucius looked at the bow and scoffed. It was perfect.
Severus popped a grape into his mouth as he looked at him. "Lucius, are you certain that you can trust Rodolphus?"
"I believe I can." Lucius set Ginny's gift on the table and sat next to Severus. "Rodolphus is a dead man, Severus. He knows that he will either be killed on the battlefield or in Azkaban. He cares very little of what happens to him anymore."
"All the more reason to wonder if he can be trusted."
Lucius shook his head. "He's been teetering for a long time. I see it in the way he looks at his wife sitting at the feet of Dark Lord. And now, after watching his own brother burned alive, I think something inside of Rodolphus has snapped. There will be no questions from him."
"Hermione doesn't want me to go along with your plan," said Severus. "She reminds me that I'm supposed to be dead, and that I will be truly dead if I am caught."
Lucius smiled. "Things are quite serious between you two then."
"We have been friends for quite some time. It's only recently that we have taken our relationship to the next level."
"Severus, I want to thank you for watching over Draco all these years." Lucius leaned forward. "You knew that he and Harry were together?"
"I did," said Severus quietly.
"I told him, about...about my experience with another man." Lucius looked at Severus now. "I didn't tell him you were the man in question. It isn't my place to tell anyone. But I feel that I should tell you, I am interested in Miss Weasley...Ginny." Lucius looked thoughtful for a moment. "I realize that it has only been a short time since Narcissa's death..."
"There is no need to explain yourself to me. I don't see anything wrong with you wanting to pursue something with Ginny. I'm actually happy for you, to see you taking an interest in someone." Severus moved closer to Lucius. "I'm assuming you are telling me this because at some point you are going to tell Ginny about your past."
"I think she should know," said Lucius, "as I think Hermione should know."
"She will, when the time is right." Severus stood and walked to the window. "I just don't know how she would take something like that. She accepted her best friend having a man as a lover, but how would she feel if she knew her own lover once had a relationship with a man. That he once..." He stopped. He felt Lucius behind him.
"That he once what?" asked his friend.
"Once was in love with a man." Severus turned and looked into Lucius' eyes.
"Was?" asked Lucius.
"Still." Severus kissed Lucius' soft lips as the other man held him tightly against him. There had been too much passion shared between them in their youth for it to have all faded away. But they had grown into men with different pursuits now.
"I've always missed not being able to kiss you," said Lucius softly as they broke apart.
Severus smiled, knowing that there were many a time when he often thought the same thing. Neither had any interest in being together physically again, but they had missed the intimacy of the kiss and there was nothing wrong with a kiss among two friends now and then after all.
"We should start planning," said Severus as leaned against the window frame. "I still don't know about Rodolphus, but if you trust him, then I suppose I should give him the benefit of the doubt." Severus felt uncomfortable knowing their lives could possibly be in the hands of Rodolphus Lestrange, but they had no choice; the Order needed both spies.
Lucius walked back to his gift and picked up some parchment and a quill to write a short note to place on the package to Ginny. He would send it off to her soon.
"As I said, I do trust him, and I plan on watching the others as well. I saw the look on everyone's faces as Rabastan burned. No one was permitted to leave or turn away, and while they had to keep still, I knew they all wanted to run they did not want to be next. I have never seen Death Eaters with such an expression of horror while watching something like that." Lucius sat at his desk. He looked down at the parchment, then looked back to Severus. "They are afraid, Severus. I think the Dark Lord has truly gone mad. If he was just evil, that would be one thing."
Severus nodded. "But evil and insane make for a very dangerous combination."
Just then, an owl arrived. Lucius read the message. "It's from Rodolphus. He has the items and wants to meet me in Knockturn Alley." He turned to Severus. "Send word to Albus our plan is ready to start. Wait for me here."
Severus nodded. No need to tell Lucius to be careful; he was a Slytherin.
~*~*~*~*~
Back at Hogwarts, Hermione was sitting in the staff lounge reading when she heard the door open behind her. She turned and saw Ginny.
"What brings you here?" Hermione stood and hugged her friend.
"Well, since I know you have the afternoon free, I thought you might feel like to do some shopping with me in Diagon Alley. I'll buy you lunch."
Hermione laughed. She hadn't been on a shopping spree in ages; quite frankly, by the look of her current robes, she needed it.
"You've talked me into it. Let's go to my rooms first and then we can go from there."
They walked to Hermione's rooms, where she left Severus a note. She really had very few expenses, so she had plenty of galleons to spend. She lived at Hogwarts during the school year, and spent most of the summer in a small cottage that overlooked the moors of Scotland. It was owned by her parents, who rarely had time to visit there since summer was their most busy time, so Hermione usually had it all to herself.
Hermione's parents had taught her to save her money, and that she did. The young witch kept herself on a tight budget, but every once in a while like today she was easily persuaded to spend a bit on herself.
The two women walked past the gates of Hogwarts and Apparated away to Diagon Alley.
"I think Madam Malkin's should be our first stop," said Hermione. "These robes have seen better days."
Ginny smirked. "Your entire closet has seen better days."
After spending a hefty amount buying themselves new robes and several mix-and-match skirts and blouses, they decided lunch was in order and headed towards the Leaky Cauldron. They ordered a pint of ale for each of them and sat at a booth, where they unloaded their shopping bags under the table.
"Well, we've shopped, we have some ale, and now," said Ginny as she sipped her drink, "I want all of the details on you and Severus."
Hermione nearly spit out her drink. "I knew you had an ulterior motive, you little gossip monger," she said in jest.
"Oh, come off it, I have to live vicariously through someone, don't I?" Ginny began to pick through the nuts in the bowl in front of her. "It isn't as though my love life will ever amount to anything but a disappointing page in the story of my life."
Hermione rolled her eyes. "Ginny, I've heard this a million times from you."
"Yes, but I've never been engaged and then unceremoniously kicked to the proverbial curb." The redhead sulked.
"Seamus did come back," said Hermione lamely.
"Are you saying I should have taken him back?"
"No, not at all, especially since he never really supported your career." Hermione reached across the table and took Ginny's hand. "You just haven't met the right man for you, that's all."
Ginny covered her face with her hands and shook her head.
"Oh, no, don't say what my mum keeps telling me. 'Ginny, when it's the right time the Fates will put him in your path.'" Ginny took a long swig of her ale. "Bah! The Fates can bloody well go shove a broom up their bums." She rolled her eyes. "Please, as if I'm going to run into the man of my dreams just like that."
"All right, we'll say nothing more about men or fate for the rest of the afternoon," Hermione promised.
As the two women finished their meal, they decided to walk to Flourish and Blotts to have a look at some of the newest books. On their way, Ginny realized she'd left something at the Leaky Cauldron.
"Hermione, you go on ahead, I left one of my bags back there," said Ginny. Hermione nodded and went on ahead. As Ginny turned, she literally bumped into one Lucius Malfoy.
"I'm sorry, sir, I...oh, Lucius." Ginny unconsciously smoothed her hair down and began adjusting her dress.
Lucius smiled, trying to hide the packages he held in his hands.
"Ginny, how lovely to see you. I, um..." For the first time in his life Lucius felt awkward. He'd hoped she didn't see him coming from Knockturn Alley. "I was just doing a bit of shopping."
"So was I. Hermione and I just had lunch and I forgot one of my packages at the Leaky Cauldron," she said nervously.
"Then I won't keep you. I...I wanted to thank you again for coming to my aid. Perhaps you would allow me to take you to dinner some time?" He could have kicked himself. He hadn't even sent her the thank-you gift yet and now he was asking her to dinner. She was a young woman, and most probably wasn't even interested in being seen with a man who was old enough to be her father, on top of the fact that he was still very new to being a Death Eater turned spy instead of a Death Eater. Expecting her to be horrified, he readied himself to just tell her to forget he even mentioned dinner.
But Ginny spoke before he did.
"I'd love to have dinner with you some time." She inwardly cringed, hoping she didn't sound as desperate as she thought she had.
Lucius smiled.
"Ah, well, that's wonderful. I will owl you soon then." He bowed slightly and walked away, making sure to keep his packages hidden from her view.
Ginny retrieved her own package and ran to Flourish and Blotts to tell Hermione the news.
~*~*~*~*~
Lucius went home where Severus as well as Albus were waiting for him. He held packages containing a small Pensieve and a pouch filled with hair.
"We were about to send out a search party," said Severus.
Albus nodded his head. "Yes, we thought Rodolphus might have changed his mind and you ran into some trouble."
"No, everything went as planned. I was slightly detained, however, on my way back. Nothing worth mentioning."
Albus and Severus noticed the blush on the man's cheeks. Deciding that whatever he was blushing about was none of their business, they quickly turned to the task at hand.
Lucius opened the packages and took out the Pensieve with Samuel Higgenbottom's memories, setting it on a table. He then handed Severus the pouch that held the potions maker's hair.
"Was the man staying at the Riddle home, Lucius?" asked Albus.
"No, he was not. From what Rodolphus has told me, Samuel Higgenbottom was a minor Death Eater and did not stay at the home fulltime."
"That's good, I don't know if we could get away with my staying under Riddle's nose. I have a limited amount of Polyjuice ready made and I am currently brewing more. If I have to stay there for longer than a few hours at a time, we may be in trouble," said Severus.
"I doubt you would. The Dark Lord spends much of his time in his rooms, either alone or with Bella or..." Lucius paused, he'd almost said Narcissa. "Well, I suppose with another concubine. Rodolphus did tell me one bit of news, though. This morning, Bella told him the Dark Lord is planning to venture out in the evenings to Muggle towns."
Albus looked thoughtful. "Tom is most likely looking for the weakest spots. After the disappointment of last night's raids on the Muggle banks and West Point, even Tom must admit he needs more research."
Both younger wizards agreed.
"Our only problem is knowing when Voldemort will contact his potions maker. He would contact Higgenbottom directly thorough his own Mark." Said Albus.
Lucius reached into his pocket and produced a thin piece of what looked like old and worn parchment.
"Rodolphus also gave this to me." He handed it to Severus quickly, as though just touching it was burning his fingers.
Severus took the object and realized it was skin human skin that held the tattooed Dark Mark on it. Severus looked back at Lucius.
"Don't ask. Just put it in your pocket for now. When you have the Polyjuice ready to become Higgenbottom, use a Sticking Charm on this and place it over your own Mark. I don't know how it works, so don't ask me," said Lucius tersely.
Albus and Severus looked at each other. They didn't even want to know what else Rodolphus had done to the Death Eater.
~*~*~*~*~*~
I wanted to address the issue of the kiss between Severus and Lucius, just in case people had questions. In my story as you may have noticed they have a very special bond. I wanted to show that there was something deeper than just mere friendship. They were very passionate at one point and those still waters are running there, deep, but still there.
While they are moving on with their lives and are pursuing two women, I felt that I still wanted them to have the same feelings for each other that they have always had.
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter.
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Wow! Thank you for this story. I did not think it possible for the Lestranges to redeem them but you made a very plausible argument. I only hope he calls his wife Isa or Isabel and not Bella ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it through. I thought it would be a nice change, to give these horrible people a way to redeem themselves. And in my world, yes, he would have called her Isabel. :)
Your story is amazing. I really like the way you portray the relationship between Lucius and Severus. What amazes me is that this chapter made me wish for sort-of happy end for the Lestranges ...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. I wrote it so long ago, but this is actually my favorite story I wrote. I thought it would be nice to give it a little bit of a twist. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Methinks these deep waters need further exploration. Perhaps in a PWP oneshot, I should believe. Yes? Yesssssss... Oh and if you want to include Hermione, I assure you I wouldn't be disappointed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I would love to, if it wasn't so hard for me to write sex scenes. Love reading them, but just can never feel like I can do them justice with my own writing.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I think you would do a fantastic job! The scenes you wrote of their intimacy (SS/LM & SS/HG) were very romantic and intense. I just realized I read this story two years ago and reviewed back then. I was happy to read this like it was new!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well thank you! It's always encouraging to hear that you did a good job, especially when you weren't sure about it to begin with! I appreciate you reading it again!
a w0ndeful fic!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so very much for reading it all! I appreciate your kind words and reviews!
i laugh at seveus's last cmment t0 hemi0ne.. t00 funny!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Severus had some good lines here.
that m0lly's s0n died fighting....
like eading lucius fics
I was spontaneously thinking Severus should add a magical variant of what we call Sechuan pepper (in German. I'm not sure of the English name). Already the Muggle variant is fizzing so oddly on the toungue--surely the magical spice gives a great sensation?!The title of the book is perfect, btw. The grammatical structure is just a bit off in the right direction to make it appear genuinely 500y old ,-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much for reading this. Of all my fictions, this is by far one of my favorites.
I just read your story. It was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it I lost sleep to finish it. You are very talented.Stacy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. This was my last SS/HG Potter universe fic and it's my favorite story I've written.
I just finished your story. It was so wonderful. I was enthralled the whole way through. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing this story with us.Shelly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you Shelly! This was my favorite story that I've written.
I read this story some time ago, I remember I liked it very much, so here I come again
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reading it again.
It was a very good story, thank you for writing. my only comment is on the spanished used here in the last chapter.Mi esposa me va a matar, is the very simlpe way or personal translation done by a novice, but a traditional spain spanish person woul say Mi esposa me matará, which is the future tense of the werb. other then that, it was a wonderful story and i was glad i found it on Wed. thanks for writing, Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. No not novice, the Spanish is Cuban Spanish, which is not spoken in the same "traditional" way. Im not from Spain and could not find anyone to do a translation were it done by a Spanish person. I used the correct translation based on what I speak and how it would be said in conversation or personally. My entire life I've heard it spoken that way. I guess we don't speak as traditionally as people would in Spain.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
sorry, it was not a critic of how you speak, it is that i just finished up a degree in spanish where the last class i took was from a spain spanish instuctor. also i find the web site, freetranslation.com works wonders when you question how things need to appear. loved the story and will be reading more of yours soon. thanks for writing,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think it was just the word "novice" that threw me. I have spoken Spanish my entire life, and i live in Miami. Hearing and speaking to most latin people in Miami, you very rarely hear anything other than every day speak. Not much proper language going on most of the time.
Response from huanita (Reviewer)
that is what is wrong with most persons who only go to school and not to a country for a time to learn how the gerneral public speak. i spent 2 1/2 months in mexico for a study abroad. and am going again in three weeks, so i can practice my ability to speak and translate. i truely wish that i lived closer to a hispanic community to be able to speak to others on a daily basis. i understand what a spanish teacher thinks is proper and what the public actually speaks. thank you for your understanding and not thinking that i am attacking you. i was just trying to be helpful, nothing more. i love your stories and am looking into continuing through all that you have written. thanks for writing Huanita
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've had people tell me the same thing before and insist they were right. To a degree, they were, however as I pointed out to you, people don't really talk like that on an every day basis. English isn't spoken in that way either. Hell, I can't remember the last time I heard anyone actually pronounce "comfortable" how it should be, instead I hear "comftrable." There are so many variations of the Spanish language depending on where you go. You can go to any Latin American country and hear different words that mean the same thing. It really is good to spend time in the physical place to get a better feel of how people actually talk. Like I said, I live in Miami and I know people who have lived here for 40 or 50 years and never had to speak a word of English. I don't know where you live, but if you want to live near a hispanic community, your best bet is Miami, parts of California and New York even.
I really enjoyed this story. I don't think I've ever seen Rodolphus or Bellatrix LeStrange written in this way.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give some of the Death Eaters a different take. I thought it would be interesting to make them the heroes.
*gasp* Not good... *hurries onto next chapter*Great beginning!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Luckily, you won't have to wait for chapters, since this is all finished. I hope you enjoy it.
I enjoyed it so much it kept me up until 3:00am! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us. Keep up the good work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreicate that you read it all the way through.
Well thats it everything tied up nicely. Thank you for an excellent read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hate leaving things in the air or leaving things for the reader to make up their own ending.
I thank you for taking the time to read this story and leaving me such lovely reviews.
its great that most everything is a happy ending
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought all of my stories should have happy endings. Why not right?
that was so cool you write wonderfully very gifted
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate it!
wow what an action packed chapter it was really good
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, there had to be a lot in this chapter.
Oh wow what drama. And powerful. The emotions. Just wow.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your continueing interest in this story. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Yay, I've reached the end. The last couple of chapters were a little too sweet in places, but it is wonderful to imagine a happy ending for everyone and all of the next generation of the Wizarding world. You did a neat job making Rudolphus a sympathetic character.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I did know it would get a bit sappy in a few places, but if I wanted a happy ending for everyone it was bound to happen.
I'm very pleased with what I eventually did with Rodolphus. I wanted to give the usual baddies a different twist.
Thanks for taking time out of your weekend to read this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still enjoying this story. I like the way you temper the drama with the funny stuff like Wizardopoly with poor Lucius always ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you're still liking it. I usually like to add a little bit of humor in dramatic stories. After all, life isn't always so serious.
This is an interesting story so far. I was thinking of skipping it because of the slash warning, but decided to give it a try. Although the writing is stilted in places such as the beginning of this chapter, there are some beautiful moments such as the one between Severus and Hermione. The Latin password is profoundly appropriate. I'm looking forward to clicking the "next" button.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It isn't completely slash. It's basically a warning of a miniscule bit referring to Severus and Lucius' past.
Thanks for giving it a chance.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
I think I can handle slash-lite ;) Now I just need time to keep reading. Weekends are soo busy.