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A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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wonderful epilogue. i love the ending very much. i'm glad he had a happy ending.
waiting for more wonderful stories from you ancientgirl.
in the meantime have a very merry christmas and a happy new year.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked what I did for Rodolphus. I really enjoyed writing him.
I haven't had any incredibly original idea as of yet, but once I do I'll get cracking on it and post it.
You have a great holiday too.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
this just popped into my mind.
The kids of Hogwarts are out enjoying the winter fun. One small problem. Just as the snowmen have been built they melt immediately. What could be causing this problem or who? Could it be Professor Snape? Could it be the evil side of Albus? Or is there something chemically wrong with the snow? Or should is it a touch of the females that need to build the men or is their touch to hot for the men of Howarts.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
You know, that actually sounds very interesting.
I'm going to have to print this out and see if I can come up with something interesting. Thanks for the idea! of course you will get full credit for inspiring my lazy muse.
Oh, I loved the ending! I'm so glad they all ended up together. And it was very touching that Rodolphus gave his home to Neville. That was really neat!Great story!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked the end. I thought that Rodolphus would just want to give his home to someone who he felt would take care of it.
I don't like killing characters off. At least not principle characters. JKR can do that, but this is for my own pleasure.
What a wonderful ending for Rodolphus! I'm so glad you included him in this story. I really loved it! Now I'm hoping you'll make some more Death Eater stories.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks. He started off as a minor character I'd planned on killing off, but he became such an important part of the story. LOL, I really should have named it A Tale of Three Men, because he grew the most during this story.
I've finally been able to finish reading this! Wonderful story. I liked the redemption of Rudolphus and Bella. While SS/HG are my favorites, LM/GW are right behind them. Thank you for creating a story where they could all live happily ever after. :-)
I've finally been able to finish reading this! Wonderful story. I liked the redemption of Rudolphus and Bella. While SS/HG are my favorites, LM/GW are right behind them. Thank you for creating a story where they could all live happily ever after. :-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm so glad you liked the redemption of the Lestranges. I wanted to add something different here, something that I'd not read before.
I also can't get away from the happy endings. RL is depressing enough, and I know things are going to end happily for everyone in the books, so why not do it here.
Thanks for taking the time to read this and thank you for the lovely review.
Response from lilyginny27 (Reviewer)
I just realized I may have sounded a little rude in my first sentence. I've had your story bookmarked to read the last few chapters for awhile now, but RL has been so insane I haven't been able to get back to it. Since that craziness is over, yours was the first story I went back to. Again, thank you for a wonderful read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I don't think you sounded rude. No worries. I'm glad you were able to finish it and enjoyed it.
Thanks again.
All in all this was a great story. Very enjoyable. Loved the epilogue about Roldhpus.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the epilogue as well.
Well, I just read this whole thing through. All of it, in one hit! It was really good. I really enjoyed the Lucius/Ginny even though there's the, what, 27 or 28 yrs between them? I think I enjoyed that storyline more than the HG/SS (my primary ship) perhaps because of the development--not sure. Although, my only gripe--if you can call it that-- was Molly's happiness over the pairing. I guess this is just my pov. I would imagine her a little suspicious. But that's kind of minor, really. Well done on a lovely story. The Lestrange/Isabella bit at the end was lovely, I could have read one more chapter on them, but it worked as it was.All I can say is I hope you're thinking of your next story! Sorry, I know all I've said is lovely, but reading that many words in one evening was -- overwhelming!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I know they are quite apart in age, but its something that happens in RL, and since magical people live longer, I don't think an age difference of that much would matter.
I know what you are saying about Molly, but I wanted to make this a somewhat happy story, and I honestly just didn't want the angst of having someone constantly questioning them and trying to keep them apart.
Thank you for leaving me such a wonderful review. And thank you for taking the time to sit and read it in one sitting. That's great. I've done that a few times myself.
Response from like_queen (Reviewer)
Yes, you are so right about the age thing. I imagine it would have had a few interesting moments. And about Molly, again, I see your logic. I'm not fond of all the hand-wringing either. Sometimes the disapproval/angst/whatever is still occurring 30 chapters into a fic... that can get tedious. So, yes, I get your point. Thanks again for writing such an entertaining story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes, as a rule I really try to stay away from reading and writing angst. I read fanfiction to get my mind off of RL, and I don't need to stress over a made up story.
Thank you for seeing my POV on the matter.
What a wonderful ending to such a delightful story! I really enjoyed each chapter. I liked the Ginny/Lucius pairing very much, thanks for that and I was surpised at how much I wanted Rodolphus to be happy in the end. He is someone you don't see too often with a positive spin on his character. I was even approving of the sacrifice Bella made for Neville. I look forward to reading your next offering. Thanks for posting. JoAnne
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so much. I'm very happy you enjoyed this. I didn't originally plan to keep Rodolphus around, but I saw it as an opportunity to do something really wonderful to a character you don't really hear about often.
I appreciate you taking the time to read it all and leave me such a lovely review, as you always do.
We shall see where the muse takes me from here.
This story has been one of the best that I have read. Thank you for writing it and moreso for finishing it! :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you! With so many stories out there, I"ll take tha as a huge compliment.
And I had to finish it. My pet peeve is stories that don't get finished or take months and years to finish.
Thanks again for the lovely review.
YAY!!!!
that was so cool, Im so happy now that everyone is happy!!!
Fantastic story from the first chapter to the last, this is one i will most likely read again!
defiantly a tale of men more the just two tho...
_Karla Marie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you so much! I"m so glad you enjoyed it. I had a good time writing it and I loved developing some of the lesser written about characters.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this and leave me such a wonderful review.
All I have to say about this chapter is.......ORION?!?!?!?!?!lol
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, hey I had to stick one of my favorite names in there.
wonderful story congrats.
TTFN
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Great Ending. I really liked your Rodulfus
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I really enjoyed writing him this way. I took advantage of the fact you don't really know that much about him from the books.
Thank you for reading this and leaving me a review.
thank you for a wonderful story.
patty
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I'm posting the epilogue tomorrow, hopefully that will be well recieved as well.
good story look forword to your new hermione and severus in the future
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I don't have any ideas yet for any future story, but when I do, I'll post it.
Thats so cool!
I cant wait to see what Rodolphus, um i mean Dante Monte Cristo, is doing now...
-KarlaMarie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it.
I was thinking the other day, this started out as a tale of two men, but turned into a tale of three men.
I'll have that epilogue up on Wednesday. I hope you enjoy it too.
Good story. Looking forward to the epilouge.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I should have it up by Wednesday.
A lovely end. And I am interested in what you did with Rodolphus.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. And I'm happy you stuck with it.
I'm hoping everyone likes what I did with Rodolphus too.
good chapter did you get my email about cosmo
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Yes I did, I emailed you back.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
i don't see your email in my inbox
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I don't know what happened, but I sent you one again.
ancientgirl, you know your readers love your writing, as a loyal reader I have to state. This is a very cruel cliffie. I will be waiting with bated breath for the update.The chapter was like the beginning of a symphony, I have a feeling it's going to be one heck of a cresendo!!Best wishes...Update soon please.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for that comment. I have to say, there are days when I wonder if anyone likes what I write. But then I get something like this, and knowing that there are a few out there who enjoy what I write, so it makes it all worth it.
I'm so very pleased you liked this chapter. A symphony, huh? Wait, just wait, I think you will be very pleased.
I'll have some time at work to write today and tomorrow, so hopefully I can post again very soon.
Thanks again for your review!
Response from Donavon (Reviewer)
Stop it, you are getting very naughty.Even your replies are better than my reviews. Happy All Hollows eve. Blessings to your family and to your gift...which is your writing. (Wiccan blessing for the 31.10.06)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
And many blessings to you! I'm staying in tonight, to enjoy the lovely evening.
I'm sorry I fell behind but I was vacationing at the Outer Banks, NC.
Wonderful story. Very cruel to end the chapter here.
Waiting for more. p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Vacationing is always fun! North Carolina is gorgeous from what I've been told, so I hope you had a good time.
I'm glad you liked the chapter. LOL, I know it was a bit cruel, but I'll be writing today and tomorrow, so hopefully I can get another chapter up soon.
Thanks for the review.
A very beautiful chapter. I really love your Lucius. And strangly I have become fond of Rodolphus too! Already looking forward to the next chapter.Best wishes to you and yours.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I know Severus has taken a back seat in this story, but even though I meant this to be a study of the relationship between the two men, I've never really given Lucius too much time. I'm enjoying doing that.
And Rodolphus is just the icing on the cake. We know so little about him, and there are so few fics about him, I took advantage here.
Thank you for for always leaving me such lovely reviews. I have the next chapter well under way.
I hope you continue to enjoy this.
good chapter if you have a idea for my challegen email i will be glad to look it over for you. do you read cosmopolitan mag if you don't i have to email you some that was in the nov issue's it is funny.
I really suck at reviews, but just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this story. Have read most of your others and liked them too.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well this didn't suck at all. Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review now and letting me know you are enjoying this and that you have enjoyed my other stories.
I hope Lucius, Ginny, Hermione & Severus all live. I'm an optimist.
Still loving the story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Optimism is very good indeed!
I'm glad you're still enjoying this. I've only got a few more chapters to go here. I'll be a bit sad to see this end though. I've had a good time writing this.
Thanks for keeping up with this and thanks for leaving me a review.