New Chapter for A Tale of Two Men
A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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HAhahah blaze of glory, thats one way of describing it. =P
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I just had to put that line in there.
Your story certainly is about two men. Perhaps I should bow out now, but it is a compelling read. However, I find it hard to believe that the womens' discovery and subsequent confrontations with the men would result in their misgivings being cuddled away. An extensive, hands off, indepth discussion would be what I would demand. Sure, Lucius and Severus are entitled to privacy, but they clearly have an ongoing relationship. Loving, lingering kisses are not given to "friends." An admission of "it's complicated" would sound an alarm in my head. Perhaps my own insecurities are showing, but to me, each woman is being expected to "share" their men. I find that unacceptable. Even a three-way relationship that involved deep feelings between all three with each person intimately involved with the other partners seems much more agreeable. (Thanks for listening to me rant.) I think you are doing a great job telling your tale. I still cannot make up my mind whether to walk away from reading more or not.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well you are certainly entitled to your opinion. I respect that. I made it clear that there would be no physical involvement with the men other than what they had in the past. This began for me as an exploration of the relationship two men could have. This is about two men who have loved each other deeply and passionately in the past. They have been friends for most of their lives and would it not have been for some out side factors things between them might have gone a different way. I don't feel that two people who have loved one another deeply in the past can just stop either. But they have moved on even though their feelings are still there.I see the women in their life as being secure enough with themselves and their feelings to accept that there was something special in the past of the men they are in love with. You find it unacceptable, yet what you find unacceptable someone else might be okay with or have no problem with.Yes, it is complicated, but life is complicated and relationships are complicated. I've known people in my life that have found it difficult to love just one person. But I've known people that there has only been one person in their lives that they could love. I still remember my very first high school love. A person who I have compared most men in my life against. Whether that's good or bad, I don't know, but its something I feel and I believe its something a lot of people feel.You are welcome to stop here, if that's what you wish. If you stop, then thank you for taking the time to have read what you have so far. If you wish to continue, I thank you for going on with it.
Response from Maddie (Reviewer)
To the Author: Please do not be offended by what I said. My thoughts and feelings do not equal what I consider the right way for everyone, including myself. I just wanted hear more from you about the discovery and confrontation between the couples to understand your point of view better. I admire your writing talent and, having retired from a legal career, I enjoy arguing too much. I'm sorry--perhaps I should just keep my opinions to myself. Jean aka
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh no, you didn't offend me. Please don't think that. I respect the fact that you have your opinion and you are fully entitled to it.I also thank you for voicing your feelings.I do plan to address both couples feelings more. This chapter was just a part one and there will be more talking and expressing their feelings in the next chapter. But as I began writing the chapter it was beginning to get too long, and I wanted to just break it off into two chapters.But as I said, if you do wish to stop reading, I'll understand. I won't be offended. I'm just happy that you had enjoyed it thus far.
Oh my another great chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked it.Thanks for leaving a review.
The new chapter was perfect. The flashback via the pensieve just showed Hermione that Severus and Lucius had at least for a time the joy of love.However, I found the transfiguration of Dolohov into a chair then used as firewood, slightly yuk! Brilliant! but still yuk.Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Sorry you found it yuk. I didn't want Severus to get his hands dirty, so I thought he might want to be a little more creative about it. Had he spilled any blood or performed any darker majic then he would have been found out.I am glad you liked the pensieve scene. I wanted both women to see that these two men had known love at some point.Thanks for readying and leaving a review.
Fitting end as firewood :D
Great chapter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh moremoremoremore!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I should have more by the beginning of next week. Hopefully I won't be too busy at work and can begin my next chapter there.Thanks for readying and reviewing.
A fitting end for an evil...um chair?
karlamarie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, hey you never know who you might be sitting on.Thanks for leaving a review.
I like the way you keep Severus' hands "clean" of Dolohov. Must say I really, really like how you offed the man! Dolohov finally provides a useful service - firewood for Voldy. Not smart to mess with potions makers!!
Looking forward to seeing Lucius and Ginny. It makes sense that Ginny and Hermione are accepting of male-male action, since Harry and Draco have been together for a few years. Write faster, please!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I actually originally thought of Dolohov's demise as a joke to myself. "Oh, maybe I'll just turn him into a chair and be done with him ha ha." Then I figured, hey why the hell not? I didn't want Severus to get his hands dirty. This was the cleanest way I could think of and keep Severus above any suspicion.I see Ginny as having a bit more of a problem with it, only because of her past relationships. She hasn't exactly been lucky in love in this story. She just wants to find love the poor girl.If I'm lucky, I can get the next chapter started at work tomorrow. I'll certainly have it done for the weekend though.Thanks for reviewing!
This story keeps getting better. I really liked the Pensieve scene, it was well written. It totally fit with how you have written Severus and Lucius in previous chapters.My favorite part though? Severus' creativity in disposing the Dolohov's body.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I've been trying to write them in order to set things up for this scene. I'm very happy it worked out well.And I loved writing that last scene LOL. I didn't want Severus to get his hands dirty, so to speak. I appreciate your lovely review. Thanks again for taking the time to read this.
Chair!Dolohov was a very clever way to get rid of him.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I didn't want Severus to get his hands too dirty as far as Dolohov was concerned. And this way he doesn't have to dispose of a body, it's done for him.Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review.
YES the dubble stander has been crush. am very happy with chapter. looking forword to more chances of see the dubble stander get crushed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Damn, I forgot to give you credit for giving me the idea for the pensieve. I'll do that now.I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
well there be more scenes from the pensieve so the girls get turn on more.
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hubby is off. got to read another chapter. yippee.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Cool. You'll be caught up in no time.
*sniff* *sniff*
do you have any extra puffs plus?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Sorry, made you cry. :(
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Don't be sorry. It's okay to cry
I really like how you are building up to presenting the past realtionship between Lucius and Severus. I think this is going to be a really great story!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It's sort of a slow build up, but I think it will be worth it in the end. I'm glad you are enjoying this so far.Thank you for taking the time to read this and leave me a review.
I enjoyed the last couple chapters and thought the scene between Severus and Lucius was very tasteful. I look forward to more as soon as the muse permits :) Thank you for writing
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks, I didn't want the kiss to be raunchy or anything. I also didn't want it to be in there for no reason, and I've tried to set things up so that readers would know something like that might eventually happen.Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you've been enjoying this so far.Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave me a review.
Oh hottness, loved the kiss between those two =P Cant wait for more chapters!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I got a bit of flack for the kiss but hey, it was coming. LOL, I think it was pretty obvious that something might happen and that something has happened between them.I've begun the next chapter and hopefully can finish it up this week.Thanks agian for the support and for reading this and reviewing.
i can feel the double stander jump on by all your female readers as the story goes. my foot prints are on it now who wants to add there.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I'm not a fan of female slash. I admit, I like watching two good looking men kiss, and I don't find anything wrong with someone who doesn't like it.But, I think I've given pretty good warning that this was coming.I'm not planning on any female slashing going on and if it works out that Hermione and Ginny kiss then so be it, but at this point I can tell you it might not happen.I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Thanks for the support.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
are yout foot prints going to jump on the double standers to like my are on them now. the more foot prints the better.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I agree, there is a double standard when it comes to these kind of things, but I'm not putting any female slash in here.The story I set out to do was a story about two men and their relationship past and present. I think it would cheapen the entire thing by having both the women being lovers in the past.I don't get why some women don't mind reading female slash yet turn their nose up to male slash. Hell watching or reading about two women for that matter does nothing for me.I will say this, I'm going to make sure that I have plenty of warnings from here on out. I have no problem with someone not wanting to read that part of the story. I'd like to let someone know what's coming so that they can at least come to that part and skip it altogther.I was sabotaged by a writer once that way and I'm not going to do it to people who read my stories.LOL, I guess what I'm saying is, I'm not going to stray from my original idea and have two women here having a sexual relationship or even sharing a kiss. I'd considered the kiss for a moment, but now I decided it just won't work.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
it will still be cool to see that ginny and hermione get turned on by seeing the flashback of severus and luciuse. any male or female reader that wants to bitch at you for writing that part. it is there fault for reading if they don;t like it. i hope you enjoy kicking the double standers ass. if your friend's husband is which a porno that has two women going at it say that is so gross. and if he gets mad say what goes around comes around.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
i am a beliver in the what goes around comes around saying. you reamber about what i told you about what i ex did to me back in june. well i hope he gets his heart broken by some woman that will call him on the phone and give him a line of bull shit about it being to much presure to go work full time and help her family and friends out with there stuff. and nice little topper for it for her to say and date you and this other guy.
It would be awefully handy if Hermione and Ginny had once been lovers, then there could be a happy quartet ;)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, that's already been suggested to me. I'll have to see if I'm feeling it at some point. I woudn't want Ginny and Hermione to have been lovers. If I did anything the most I'd do is a kiss.However, the girls will get to see something very interesting concerning their two men though.Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
Re your note: You say that Lucius and Severus had a very passionate relationship in the past, but when Lucius pressed, Severus stated he was "still" in love with a man. As it seems so is Lucius. If Hermione can handle that Severus is still in love with Lucius--his closest friend, who he spends a great deal of time with--she is a braver woman than me.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
While they have stated and it is understood that they do still love each other, they have also both moved on. They are both drawn to women, and are the only man either has slept with or had any kind of feeling like that for.Severus told Hermione before the slept together that he wasn't in love with her, but he did lover her, however his feelings for her would soon change. So Severus is falling in love with her.I believe it's possible to be in love with two people at the same time.Also, both men have not been together for years, so they have plenty of self control, only allowing themselves that one kiss in all the years since their last physical entanglement. And heck, I love watching men kiss, so I felt the need to have them kiss and they might do so again.I'm not saying Hermione and Ginny won't be shocked when they find out, but by the time they do find out, they will be secure enough with both men to allow it.I don't know anyone in a situation like this personally, but I have a friend who has known people in this kind of a situation, so it does happen.I guess different strokes for different folks. I would have a problem with it, but if I guess it depends on how much I loved the man and how committed he was to me as well as the other man being committed to his woman, if the case were the same as in my story. I would probably either have to accept it or leave him and deal with my broken heart.Thanks for leaving a review and taking the time to read the chapter.
I think because I am bi that two men kissing who at one point cared about eachother is just fine with me. Good Chap
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I thought I'd just put a warning, since one reviewer said they didn't care for it. But I see nothing wrong with two men who cared and still care for each other kissing. I've set up their relationship, so I did plan at one point to have them kiss, and there will be a flashback scene with both of them doing more than kiss, but its part of the story.I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks!
Life's like a soap opera :p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yep, drama drama drama.
Not too fond of the kiss, but that is just a personal quirk of mine. Good story though.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
<i>Not too fond of the kiss, but that is just a personal quirk of mine.</i>That's cool, to each his own. I'm glad you liked the rest of it though. Thanks for reviewing.
and the story escalates. . . . who is Severus' mystery replacement? Will Bella and her husband escape to the HOuse of Black??? I'm reading on!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've got something interesting planned for Bella, and if I can get it down the way I see it in my head, I hope it to be really exciting.
If I can get my butt in gear I can get in a bit more writing tonight and hopefully post another update this weekend.
Thanks for keeping up with this.
i just thought of something esle for this story some people might not get why hermione and ginny well get so turn on by severus and Lucius's flashback scene. well her is what can happen hermione and ginny could have little flashback of there own. both women could have a bad break up with boyfriends in the flashback which turns severus and lucius on to see there girlfriends have sex with each other. and that will make some people happy knowing that there might be a hermione and ginny flashback sex scene.