I love the head elf - he is an interesting original character with the clothes and his speach. I loved the emotion that the elves showed while they worried for Lucius - it shows how much he had changed. The last part has me stumped - I guess Lucius and Severus have been intimate by the way that you wrote it at some point in the past.

Great chapter - I loved how Lucius and her just sat in the room - long enough to fool Voldemort. Great writing with the throw in about Severus showing Hermione what he feels for her and soon.

Interesting plot twist - how will Voldemort react when Lucius goes back after he wanted him back - will he take him back into the fold? What will the Death Eaters do - seeing Voldemort killing his most faithful for little reason? How will they get the last Black key back? All interesting turns for you the author to deliver to us - good work.

What an ending - claps and cheers for the chapter alone. I loved how even in death Narcissa told Voldemort off and that we shall see. Such great defiance and wonderful tension in the plot. I loved the whole idea that Narcissa had slipped him the Black's key and it was a portkey. Wonderfully creative.

All the plotting and planning and the crazyness of Voldemort made this an interesting chapter. I loved how you showed that Narcissa did not willing betray Lucius and her son for the Dark Lord but did so to protect them. Narcissa sacrificing her own life for them was a great touch. It brought a tragic and heartfelt feel to the chapter. Good job.

Good chapter - loved how you set-up Lucius helping Severus and then the whole scene at the castle where Severus kissed Hermione's hand and she then kissed him - slow romance bubbles nicely. Creatively written and very entertaining.

Oh I am so glad to find this story - what an interesting plot with many twist and turns in just the first chapter. I loved the whole set-up of how Lucius turned against Voldemort with him knowing. A spell to penetrate the mind - crap - Severus is in trouble

This was a fascinating story. I love the way you portrayed the Lestranges and the fact that Bellatrix saved Neville's life.

I waited to review until I read all of the chapters   THIS STORY ROCKED!!!! I love the fact that peace was made between the weaslys and malfoys!!   very well written!!

Bravo!  Excellent ... a wonderful read

This was a fascinating story.  I do believe it is the first time I've ever seen a GW/LM pairing.  I would never have even considered it before and now I wonder if there are any others out there. 

"Pudding!” Eli announced as he brought in a tray of dessert. “Custard and spotted dick!”"It had to be spotted dick in this situation what else ?TeeheeI hope Lucius' and Severus' are spotless thoughCheers MoepiAKA Michèle

Wow that was deep.  I can't wait to see how everything goes.

Oh no I hope that this doesn't make him lose focus. 

This chapter really shows the love those two guys have for their women.  I wish my husband would think along those lines.  Not that he doesn't love me, just that he don't have not one romantic bone in his body. lol  But thats ok, at least he puts up with me. lol  Sorry back to your review.  Voldie is so going down.  I just hope no one on the side of good dies.  That would suck.

I really love the Wizardopoly scene.  And Neville,  you have to love his weakling butt.  lol  And he is now afraid of Lucius too.  Too funny.  Or does he think he can give Lucius a run for his money with Ginny?  Keep dreaming, Neville.

oh my this story keeps getting better and better.  I cryed reading the Neville/Bella pair.  Truly too sad.  The crazier Voldiebutt loses it the more in his ranks turn against him.  You are brilliant.

oh no not Neville.  I don't want to think about it, so I won't.  I love the lemons.  funny how now what Ginny saw turns her on. go figure. lol

I can see why this is one of your favorite stories. 

Oh my what a chapter.  Now that the girls know, what will the guys do? I can't wait to find out.  Isn't it going to look strange that Dolohov is missing while keeping an eye on Severus?  I'm sure he will come up with a really good excuse.

Yea Severus kill his sorry butt.  Draco took the news rather well.  Still wonder how the girls will take their news.

Voldiebutt always had bad timing.  Thats why he never wins. lol  Of course Hermione is worried.  Wouldn't you be worried if your man went off to a madman and you just got start in your relationship.  And poor Ginny she was just getting ready to lock lips with Mr. Blonde Hottie, when the git monster had to go and ruin it.  How rude.

Ahh  Lucius is trying to keep Molly from hurting worst than she already does.  That's sweet.  And Ron is finally coming around to the way of things.  Good its about time.  He always was a little slow.

I wonder how the girls are going to take hearing about Severus and Lucius' past. 

This chapter rocks.  Everything is falling into place nicely.