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A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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Holy shizz, poor neville! But I loved the severus hermione and lucius ginny scenes. hahaha =P
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I wanted to give the couples equal time. Neville is going to have a bit of a time over at the Riddle house. You should see more of that in the next chapter.Thanks for leaving me a review.
So good to see Lucius and Ginny have this talk and get things out of the way! Now for the fun part of their relationship - becoming stepmum to Draco and step mum-in-law to Harry her ex-boyfriend, and wife to a Death Eater spy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
She's got her work cut out for her here. She's got two Malfoy's and a Potter to deal with.I'd like to start the next chapter this weekend. I'm itching to get a certain scene written.Thanks for leaving me a review. LOL, you know you'll be the first to read the next chapter.
oh no why did you do that to poor Neville?
I was laughing until this part. Now you've made me fell very sad.
Woman, you better have an update soon. as my kids say "that's not fair".
your writing is wonderful as always.
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Neville is very important here, I've got it worked out in my head, now I just have to get it down to where I can describe it like its playing out in my head.I'm hoping to get another chapter written this weekend and at the very least update at the beginning of next week. Hopefully I'll have something by then.Thanks for leaving me a review. And don't worry about Neville. I like him, and I can't bring myself to kill him off.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Thank you. I feel a little bit better. Too bad old voldypants wouldn't take a turn and mark him as well. lol
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
I don't mean the dark mark either.
Trying to kill him like harry and it would backfire..
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh, I think you'll like what I've got in mind. At least I think you might.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
You know what I like!
Pass it on to hubby.. lol nah just teasing.
Custard and spotted dick is a very cute line. i think hermione and ginny should be allow to view the rest of the Pensieve memory it would make foreplay with there men very hot. and hermione want severus's penis even more. it could be thought of as wizard porn and both men as porn stars the wives or girlfriends of the men want their penis.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I think I'd certainly enjoy something like that myself. I wanted them to just finally get over that hurdle though, so I think this chapter did it.Thanks for reading and leaving me a review.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
what did you think of challgen
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I thought the challenge sounded interesting. I can't say right now if I'd be able to do it though. Not until after I finish this, and even then I'd have to see if I could come up with something.
hahahahaha! is there a foursome to come??? god id kill for that. great work ancientgirl, keep it up!spotted dick...hahahaha
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I hadn't planned a foursome, even though I thought it might be interesting after I finished writing this chapter. But, I think both couples, while they are very good friends, might not want to share their significant others.Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.
*gasp* Poor Neville! I seriously hope he doesn't end up like his parents or worse. I have a soft spot for Neville.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I like Neville too, I wouldn't do anything horrible to him.
Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review!
Yay, I've finally caught up and it was so worth it. Just love what happened to Dolohov. Brilliant.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm pretty happy with what happened to Dolohov myself. I'm glad you are caught up. I've started the next part to this chapter so hopefully I'll have it finished before the end of the week.Thanks for taking the time to catch up!
another wonderful chapter and now you can see i'm up to date.
so when is the next chapter going to be posted??? MMmmmm
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yep, all up to date. I'm hoping to begin the next chapter at some point this week. Hopefully if work isn't too crazy and my boss decided to spend some time out of the office, I can start.I'd like to post the next chapter if now by Friday, then at some point this coming weekend.Thanks so much for reading this all the way through!
excellent. but what will hermione say???
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hermione will be more okay than Ginny. But there is a part two to the next chapter, so its not all going to end there.
oh that was excellent. how is snape going to dispose of the body???
maybe with a little help...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, you'll see.
another great chapter.
a funny quirk to the book that was given to Ginny would be her placing her hand on the book and thinking what could i do to right this especially after they've had a disagreement. :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
That would have been a good thing. Hell, I'd want one of those books myself.
good chapter.
just thinking about the last bit is squeaking me...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I can't remember what it could be but I'm telling you now, there is a brief slash scene coming, nothing very descriptive, but you'll have ample warning so if you want to skip it you can.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Just the idea of putting someone whose dead skin on my own... *shivers* is squeaky.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I went back to read what it might have been and yes, that would give me the willies too. But, Higgenbottom didn't actually die. I should have made that more clear. I was planning on having Rodolphus make a comment to Lucius at some point. I'll make a note to myself, just so that people don't think the poor old guy is dead.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
OH that's right. Brain must have been on overload. lol
sounds like a plot for a short story. Whatever happend to Mr. Higgenbottom? Is he related to Neville Longbottom? ;)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well you did read quite a bit today, LOL.Higgenbottom was left at a hospital, at least that's what Rodolphus was supposed to do. I'll write something in an upcoming chapter about him, just so that people know Rodolphus didn't up and totally mutilate the guy LOL!No, Higgenbottom isn't related to Neville, but, funny you should mention Neville. You'll see him soon.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
excellent. love Neville.
woo hoo this is moving along wonderfully onto the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Lots if interresting things on store.
Yes the lemons were satisfactory.
will hermione find out about their special connection.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I just don't know why I feel so uncomfortable writing them. I mean I love smut!Will Hermione find out? I'm not telling!
I'm glad your chapters are a bit short. Easy to catch up. But once I'm caught up I'll be hanging on the cliff with the rest of the group. Hopefully they will have good conversation and food..
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I try to keep them sort of between really short and really long. I go by a certain amount of pages when I'm writing on my computer. Sometimes I go beyond, sometimes I stop before, but this way I have a good stopping point that I know people are comfortable reading to.
good chapter. belle receiving a wake up call. mmm will we have two more for the good??
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Things are as they seem on the surface at the Riddle home.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Things are as they seem on the surface at the Riddle home.
another good chapter.
time to figuire out how to counter spell and get spell master..
time to get husband person ready for work.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks. Just warning you, there are a few slashy moments ahead in later chapters. You'll begin to understand the relationship between Severus and Lucius soon.
Thanks for the update and still look forward to more :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks for reading it. I should have more at the very least by next weekend, if that is RL doesn't kick my ass.
excellent beginning.
i'm glad i waited a bit before starting this. Looks like it may keep me busy fora few days. woo hoo.
off to get the preschooler.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hey there! I'm glad you are intrigued. I hope you continue to be interested.I'm on 15 chapters right now and I'm thinking it might not go beyond 20, but who knows.I always appreciate your comments and insight.Thanks for taking the time to read and leave me a review.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Your welcome.
The family has been keeping me busy. As well as getting ringed into becoming a cheer coach for the K-2 group.
Will read more in a bit. Hubby insists that I feed him and do some housework. We will see how much is the later that is accomplished.
" a blaze…of glory?”
that is that funniest thing i have read all day...lol
you cannot believe and would not believe how funny i find it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm so happy you got a laugh out of it. I've been wanting to get that line in there since the last chapter.Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
Y'know, I'm realizing this story isn't just about two men - it's about two couples (Lucius-Ginny, Severus-Hermione) and the men who are in them. It's also about two sides - Dark and Light - and how folks like the Lestranges are choosing sides. It's also about living with "two faces" - Severus is both dead-Severus and "Higgenbottom," Narcissa was both a concubine and a secretly loving wife, the Lestranges are both faithful and secretly not-so-faithful Death Eaters. Very interesting character studies!
Now, bring on more of those Death Eaters! (Severus did have a chance to tell the Order that he suspects Voldy will attack this weekend?)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes, I'm glad you noticed that. I've slowly been trying to show things in a different perspective.This is first about two men, second about their relationship with not only each other but the women in their lives. I've also been wanting to give a different view of the Death Eaters. While I don't believe they are all questioning their beliefs, I have to think there must be some who are merely going along with it, for fear of their own lives.I'm going to have a bit more in the next chapter with the DE's and the Lestranges. Don't worry, the Order will be notified of the attack, and something interesting will happen in the end of the chapter too.Thanks for leaving me a review. I always appreciate your insight on things.
Dolohov got what was coming to him--karma. I hope that Severus can forgive Hermione about the pensieve. she wasn't coming from a malicious place, but from trying to understand. anyway, I think L & S were hot, and I'm not offended. But I'm very glad for Ginny & Herms' sake they've moved on in their relationship/friendship.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yeah, he certainly got what was coming to him.I'm going to have more scenes with both couples in the next chapter. I do agree, that Hermione looked in the pensieve because she wanted to help Severus, but still she did invade his and Lucius' privacy. That will be addressed in the next chapter. I'm also going to address how both of the women feel about their lovers having had a relationship in the past.I didn't want to get too descriptive with the L&S thing. I think it was better to have it be a bit more subtle.Thanks for reading and leaving me such a lovely review.
are there going to more flashback scene from the Pensieve so both hermione and ginny will get turn on by.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm not planning another flashback scene. I am going to have more discussion in the next chapter by the two couples about what was seen though.