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A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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Nooooooo! Not Snape!!! Don't make the charm work. This is a very intriguing beginning. I like this version of light!Lucius.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've got the second chapter at my beta. I like portraying Lucius this way. I happen to think there is more to Lucius than we are being led to believe.Thanks for reviewing.
Oooo...very interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh... shit... Thats not good >.>... Please dont work, DONT WORK. hahaha cant wait for upcoming chapters.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've got the second chapter almost finished. I was planning on posting it at the beginning of next week, but I might get it up this weekend if I can get if finished.You'll see in that chapter what happened.Thanks for reading.
This is good. I wonder how Snape will get out of this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you like it so far. You'll find out first thing next chapter. I hope to have that up early next week.
An intriguing start, as always. Looking forward to the next bit!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I'm hoping to give it some good drama here. I'm working on the next chapter and hope it will be up soon.
And all this too shall soon come to an end :(
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yep, its got to end at some point.
Thank you for this fine story of redemption.
I really like this epilogue. The inclusion of Rodolpus and Bellatrix in the story was great.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Wow, you read the entire thing fast! You know, I really wanted to include them, sort of give them the opportunity to repent. Though I hated Bellatrix in the books and movies, Here they enabled me to give the reader characters that were far from perfect, yet were able to realize the error of thier ways and try to correct the bad they had done, even though it would mean death for them.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I couldn't help but read this in one sitting. It is such a great story. That's why I neglected to review individual chapters. Also, sorry for the initial brief two line review. I was tired and writing on my iphone at the time.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
No apologies needed. Thank you for taking the time out to actually read it in one sitting! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Wow, you read the entire thing fast! You know, I really wanted to include them, sort of give them the opportunity to repent. Though I hated Bellatrix in the books and movies, Here they enabled me to give the reader characters that were far from perfect, yet were able to realize the error of thier ways and try to correct the bad they had done, even though it would mean death for them.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
I couldn't help but read this in one sitting. It is such a great story. That's why I neglected to review individual chapters. Also, sorry for the initial brief two line review. I was tired and writing on my iphone at the time.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
No apologies needed. Thank you for taking the time out to actually read it in one sitting! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much.
Wow. You amaze me. I never ever thought that I would cry over Bellatrix's death, but seeing Rodolphus as he buried his wife was heartwrenching. You've actually made me start to like who Rodolphus is becoming and who Bellatrix was starting to be before she died. That's something I never thought possible. I'm glad Bellatrix was able to regret what she had done and ask for forgiveness before she died and I like your choice of her as Neville's rescuer. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. By the way, seeing the characters play the wizarding version of Monopoly was very cute. I smiled when Lucius kept ending up in Azkaban.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for reading this. I'm very glad you liked what I've done with these two minor characters. I saw it as a chance to do something different. There is so little written about them. I pretty much saw it as an opportunity to just do something interesting. I thought Bellatrix was the natural choice to save Neville, and while I originally thought of killing off Rodolphus, I grew to enjoy writing him and his journey here.
I also couldn't help having fun at Lucius' expense.
Thank you for such a lovely review.
The random story button was an excellent choice today. I am happy you ended with Rodolphus as you did, I think you may have put more into his character development than the mostly off-screen relationship foundations of Lucius and Ginny.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for reading the entire story. I began this fic as just a sort of study into my imagined relationship between Severus and Lucius, but as I was writing Rodolphus, he came to life. I realized I'd never read anything about what his journey may have been like. I really enjoyed making Rodolphus into what he became.I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for reading the entire story. I began this fic as just a sort of study into my imagined relationship between Severus and Lucius, but as I was writing Rodolphus, he came to life. I realized I'd never read anything about what his journey may have been like. I really enjoyed making Rodolphus into what he became.I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I absolutely loved this story - thank you so very much for writing it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for reading it. It was the last story I wrote in this fandome, and I think its my best and certainly my favorite.
I just read the last few chapters. They were truly amazing. You could just feel all the emotions. I loved Hermione and Severus got married. Just wonderful.
I just read the last few chapters. They were truly amazing. You could just feel all the emotions. I loved Hermione and Severus got married. Just wonderful.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I had hoped that the emotions would come through the way I'd seen and felt them in my mind.
I thought getting married was something the Severus in my story would want. While he felt confident, there was still that feeling in the back of his mind that he wouldn't make it, so he wanted just a few moments of normalcy while he lived.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this and leave me a review.
Ooh, I just love what you've done with Rodolphus. Such a cool way for Bella to say goodbye, by saving his life. Can't wait for the next chapter - write faster!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks. I'm liking the way he's evolved in this story. I think I needed for Bella to give him the go ahead to live his life and let go of her. I've got most of the next chapter done. I'm thinking it might be the last one.
Unless I do a short epilogue with Rodolphus, which actually I might just do.
smithereens!!! thats a funny word, one which i never in all my life imagined the dark lord saying, so i should thank you for opening that possiblity for me...lola fitting end for the evil bastard, i just want the women to hex the fellas for warding them in the hut, i know if i were a witch id hex the lot of em....lol-KarlaMarie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, I could totally see him saying that here. I don't know why, but I like the word, it's all business. You know what you're going to get when someone tells you that.
Nah, they won't be too upset. They'll just be happy the guys are alive.
Thanks for reading the chapter and leaving me a lovely review.
oh come now...that was awesome...something good has to come for ruddy...please a few more chappies...awesome job girlie...keep up the good work...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Hey, I'm glad you liked it.
Don't you worry about Rudy, I've got something good planned for him.
I'm writing the next chapter this weekend.
Thanks for taking the time to read this and leave me such a lovely review.
Lucky Harry, hope you update again soon!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes, he had lots of help, but in the end he fulfilled the prophecy.
I've been writing off and on most of the day, so hopefully I'll have something to pust by next week.
Thanks for the review.
Poor Rodolphus...couldn't you have Bella show herself to him as a ghost or anything? I was kind of expecting the Character Death warning to apply to him as well, and for him to just kill himself or something - he just seems like the type who would rather kill himself than be without the woman he loves. I dunno. So now I'm wondering if Harry's scar is gone, what happened to the boys' Dark Marks? Is that part of why the energy blast knocked them off of their feet? Am I asking too many questions? Huh? Am I? Am I?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, heck woman, give me a chance to write the next chapter.
I never planned on killing off Rodolphus. I've grown rather fond of him here.
Harry's scar is gone though, so at least they know for sure Voldy's not coming back in anyway shape or form.
Finally, Voldemort dead!!! I like the idea of Rodolphus and some of the other death eaters turn on Voldemort. It was nice to see old Voldie begging for his life. I love how Narcissa and Bella came back to rub it in his face. Great job!!! Looking forward to seeing how Hermione and Ginny react to his death and to see that the love of there lives are alive and well.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
It took me a while, but I finally got him AK'd, well Harry did.
Thank you for reading this. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I'm going to sit down at some point today and begin the next one. There are certainly going to be two very happy Gryffindors.
yippee excellent chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I had hoped it would be good ending to the battle.
That was bloody brilliant!!!
Now finsh the battle before i burst because of something that i cant think of a word for... im a tad lost for worda at the moment and its all your fault!!!
although i think its sexist the whole women stay behind as the men go out to fight i still LOVE the chapter!
-Karla Marie
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, yeah, I kind of thought about it at the end, having the women be inside and all, but it's more fun to let the guys get rough.
I have the next chapter already finished. It's just waiting for June to have a look through. I'm thinking it should be ready to be posted by Saturday.
Thank you for such a wonderful review. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it so much.
Wonderful chapter!Although I'd like to kill Hermione and Ginny for running out into the battle like that.The interaction between Draco and Harry was really sweet.I'm glad Neville and his girlfriend made it out of there safely too.Looking forward to how this is all going to turn out.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Ah thanks! I'm glad I took your suggestion and added that bit. It was needed for those two.
I"ve got chapter 24 knocking at June's door so I can hopefully post it soon!
Thanks for leaving me a review!
A nice touch in the beginning, mentioning you uploaded it early.. when you leave it hanginw on cliff like this!!!
Grr.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, sorry. But if its any consolation, the next chapter is already written. I sent it off to my beta, June, this afternoon.
I'm hoping to post it Saturday.
See, just a couple of days wait.
I do hope you enjoyed it, even with the cliffy. Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review.
A superb chapter, really a breathtaking read.So well done Ancientgirl, I bow to you. You are by far one of the best writers I have ever read.My hope for you and I, is that you will one day write your own story, and be assured, I will be first in line to buy the book. Best wishes, and please update soon, I am slightly overawed at the last chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Gah, I was so enthralled by your lovely review, I accidentally hit the flame button! Don't worry, I closed it before anything happened.
I'm such a dork.
You are so kind. I can't tell you how wonderful your review made me feel.
I really should begin getting my own work written down. Those notes I have written aren't going to exactly going to turn themselves into a story by themselves.
As always, I very much appreciate you taking the time to read my work and review it. I do have the next chapter finished and its already been sent to June. My plan is to post it this weekend. In the meantime, I should probably get started on the next one, which might be the last, or at the very least next to last.
Thanks again!
Oh my goodness. This story is exciting. I love it. I am looking forward to see what happens to everyone in this story. What a great job you are doing. Keep it coming.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks so much. I've tried to pack as much action as I could in these final battle chapters.
I appreciate your lovely review, and thank you for taking the time to read my story.