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A Tale of Two Men
ancientgirl286 Reviews | 6.19/10 (286 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
**COMPLETE** *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. SS-HG LM-GW.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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i just thought of something esle for this story some people might not get why hermione and ginny well get so turn on by severus and Lucius's flashback scene. well her is what can happen hermione and ginny could have little flashback of there own. both women could have a bad break up with boyfriends in the flashback which turns severus and lucius see there girlsfriend have sex with each other. that way will the flashback scene with severus and lucius will some happy knowing that there might be a hermione and ginny flashback sex scene.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Well, Ginny has already had a bad break up with someone, someone she cared for very much.
Hermione I see as someone who just made bad decisions in the past. I established right before she slept with Severus that she's slept with men she had as friends and things just didn't work out.
I think a lot of women are turned on by seeing too very attractive men together, some just aren't willing to admit it.
Thanks for the suggestion, but I don't see Ginny and Hermione turning to one another in that way here. While they have been friends, their past in this story isn't as close as Severus and Lucius.
You will see in the next chapter that there is still something there with both men that goes beyone just being friends and having a past physical relationship. It goes deeper.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
i am looking forword to a stump being put in the double standard am sure a lot of us are sick of it i know i am. the men in my family love useing double standards
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh yeah, I agree. I mean why is sexy to watch two women but not two men?I'm a woman, and watching women fondle one another does nothing for me at all. But put two sexy attractive men together even just kissing and you've got my attention.My friend and I are watching the final season of Queer As Folk, and whenever her husband comes into the room during kissing scenes he says "That's gross" So we tell him it does the same thing for us as watching two women does for him, he shuts up and leaves without a word. LOL.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
you go girl that is telling him.
What an intense chapter. It was full of every emotion going. Brilliant no other word. Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes, things are heating up in Voldyemort's camp, and not in a good way.
Thank you for reviewing. I'm very happy you liked it.
Wow, you've taken the Lestranges - who are almost always the villains - and made them a bit sympathetic. So Bella might use the Black house key to get herself and Rodolphus to safety... the Order would be very surprised to see those two on their doorstep! Of course, Lucius and Severus might be trying to get that key away from Voldy themselves, so this simple key might be very critical later - good job of setting things up for future cliffhanger!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I've always thought it might be interesting to make people who were thought of as bad, as maybe people who just made REALLY bad calls.
Right now, I've got two scenario's I can use regarding that key. One is something I've been thinking about from the start, and another is an idea Whimbley gave me.
It's all up to how I can work either into the story.
Thanks for reviewing. I'm really having fun with this one. I know I keep saying that with every new story, but this one just has so many possibilities.
"What's that smell?"...a great lead-in to one of the best lines I've read in a long time. Curiouser and curiouser! Can't wait for the new guy to disappear (after he gets shaved, of course) :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, that Voldy.
I'm glad you're enjoying this. Yeah, Mr. New Potions guy will be goner than gone soon.
I haven't reviewed on any of the other chapters, but I wanted to drop a quick note to let you know how much I am enjoying this fic. I usually shy away from stories including LM/GW, but I'm glad I gave this one a shot. As always, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you, I'm glad you gave it a chance.
I've been adding LM/GW to my SS/HG stories for a while. I do it mainly just to add something different and get a fresh approach to another couple.
I'm glad you are enjoying this so far and thanks for reviewing.
I'm so glad that she knows where the key is. I'm nervous for Severus going back. It was a great chapter Ancientgirl. More Please.....
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Severus is certainly going to have to keep on his toes, but he's got plenty of practice.
As for Bella, she's finally beginning to realize that there is little hope for any of them.
Thanks for leaving a review and taking the time to read this.
The draco/lucius scene was very good. I hope you will write SS/LM in flashback, seeing how they might go down that path would be interesting.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm glad you liked that scene. I thought it would be something important that they needed to do. I will be writing that flashback scene. Not sure just when yet but I've got a good idea of how I want to set it up.Thanks for reading.
are you still going to use the idea i gave you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'd like to if that's allright with you. I've not figured out the exact scenario as to using it, but I've got a pretty good idea of what to do.If you don't want me to use it I won't. I had a different idea, but your's really was quite intriguing.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
go right ahead and use the idea that is why i gave it to you. it would make the story more fun to see that women can be turn on by watching men have sex with each just like men get turn on by watching women have sex with each other.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks. There certainly is a double standard isn't there. I for onr think watching two very good looking men kissing and having some fun is very erotic and so will Hermione and Ginny.
You worry to much about the lemons. You're stories stands through wonderful feelings and very funny happenings.Your plots are always taking a different path. Yes it is Adult Fan fic. Yet, many wonderful full bodied writers whose sex scenes steam from the page often enjoy reading Jane Austen...or even fairy tales.I state that my stories are pwp. Porn with plot...mostly because I find it easier to write a really naughty piece of porn, yet, knowing that those who are enjoying the loving, have to find the item or reason for a death. Many times I wish I could write the chapter the other way, with loads of love and stubbled hights reaching for release. Rather than going with such force that a thunder storm, with electric forks shooting across the sky, rapaging and finally ending in the slow sliding love which requires the soothing of a lover.Still I have come to the conclusion it does not really matter. However, you reach and bind the love...be it by a violent, raging storm with arching eclectric force.Or by a stream which ripples over many barrier's formallating it a villiage pond. As long as you acheive via fate where you are meant to be, that is all the matters. Best wishes and thanks for a joy of another wonderful chapte.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I like thunder and lightning. I love pwp, but I've only really written maybe one, and even that one had a plot and not a huge amount of porn. LOL, oh well it was a one-shot and doesn't matter.But yes, there is something for everyone. I think I'm more a softcore writer when it comes to smut. For no other reason than I just feel like a dork writing it. And I just love a good plot.However, at least I'm feeling better about writing it so maybe that's a sign that its getting easier for me.Thanks for the insight and I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Good chapter; I really enjoyed it and you did a good job with that lemonade as well, young lady! I guess that was the reason tpp made me register suddenly X)And of course, you know I'm dying to read all about Snucius.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh thanks! See you write good lemons, so hearing you liked it makes me feel that I did a good job at it.Don't worry, you'll be reading some Snucius soon.Thanks for reading!!!!And gooooo Dragoons!
If you search for tenderness, it isn't hard to find..
You can have the love you need to live
If you look for truthfulness you might just as well be blind
Honesty is such a lonely word...
Great song ;)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I'm not sure what song that is. Who sings it?
Response from Antagonist Len (Reviewer)
Billy Joel.
Great chapter too, btw ;)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I like the words.And thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
The good news that in the UK gay couples can have a civil partnership which gives them the same rights as a married couplehttp://www.opsi.gov.uk/ACTS/acts2004/20040033.htm
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I actually did think things might be different over there in respect to gay couples. I know that in the US they have no rights as couples, which really sucks for them.I wanted to eventually have Draco and Harry have an opportunity to actually have a ceremony and have legal rights.Thanks for the article. I'll read it and see if maybe I can have Hermione give them the news about their rights.I appreciate you taking the time to check on that.
Interesting back story about Severus and Lucius. It does explain a lot about their closeness. I hope you delve more into that.And very touching conversation between Draco and Lucius. *Hee! and how funny... I had to go back and correct Lucius's name. I kept typing Luscious.*
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh yes, you know I'm going to delve more into their relationship. That's a given here. It's the main reason why I wanted to write this fic, I wanted it to be about them as much as the women in their lives.I'm glad you liked the fatehr son conversation, it was important to get it done.LOL, I sometimes write Luscious too as I'm writing his name. I have to go back and replace it.
Sorry, for being late with my review, I had just finished reading chapter 7 when my computer went down. Apparently dust had got into the modem. I can believe it, I am still wiping and polishing down from the rewire and the improvements.Can I ask a question...how do you deal with reviews on your old stories. I have one story which was my second to be posted. Recently due to a couple of successful stories, readers have been going on to read the others posted on the same site, they want sequels, what should I do, or rather what do you do? In all honesty I considered the stories finished.Sorry if I am being annoying, best wishes,Just remembered I didn't plead for a new update...I am once more intrigued where the story is going.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
You are never annoying! If you ever want to email me feel free to do so.I've had sequels asked of me before. It's all a matter of how creative you are feeling. I mean there are just some stories that you feel are done, you've said all you need to and could say. You can't force it. I just tell the reviewer thank you for wanting a sequel but if I ever think of anything that feel will contribute to the story then I will persue it.Sometimes I've re-read something that I've thought I was done with then think, hey I wonder what they would be like a few years later?I had never planned on writing a sequel to The Long Wait. But after I wrote it, I started wondering what would happen if they had another child. Then when I finished that story I did the little one shot, of when the kids were a little older, and then after that I came up with the idea for the final story.I hope that helped you.And as for an update for this, I'm about halfway done with the next chapter. I may be able to have it up by this weekend.And get those dust bunnies outta there!
Response from Donavon (Reviewer)
Thank you. You are completely brilliant. I am going to think on it. Best wishes
How will Voldemort feel about being kept out..?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
So far he's pretty much been a recluse. At some point later in the story he will realize he can't get to Lucius' home. And needless to say, he won't like it.Thanks for reading this and leaving me a review.
severus and Lucius had a very small gay monment. i wounder if any one else seen it to
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
They were alone in Lucius' room at that moment. That moment also gives a small hint of their past relationiship and the basis of their current one.Thanks for reading.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
did they have a sexual relationship in the past.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
LOL, wellll I could tell you but then I'd have to kill you.I'm going to have at least one more flashback about their past.I do plan on having them each fall in love with women here, but their relationship with each other will be something that will always bond them.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
and here i thought you said the story was not going slash in it. bad girl your starting to come around in the world of fanfics. now all you need to do is make a whole story that is nothing but nc17.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
I have to be honest, I actually hadn't planned on it when I started. But as I began to write about Severus and Lucius, my naughty muse started going in a different direction. I wanted their relationship to be a deep one, having involved more than just mere friendship at one point. I can tell you that the next chapter will involve a bit if lemons with Severus and Hermione.
=) I can see some Ginny/Lucius later on in the story... XD hahahha like always cant wait for more updates!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh yes, there will be Ginny/Lucius later for certain. Thanks for reading.
Love it! I can't wait for more!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I'll hopefully have another chapter up some time this coming week.
Great start :) I look forward to more. Thank you for writing
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you. I'm glad you like it so far. I should have a new chapter up today.
*smiles sadly*We'll atleast he didnt die. Hahaa but then the story wouldve ended and it wouldve been like >.< Whatever, I cant wait for upcoming chapters!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh no, I've just begun the story. I can't kill anybody at the beginning.I'm working on the next chapter. Hopefully I can have it up by the weekend, but I'm moving offices so I can't be sure I'll have it done.Thanks for reading and commenting.
I must say I enjoy stories where Lucius turns over a new leaf and helps his 'brother' Severus out. Please update!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks! I like the idea of Lucius rethinking things he's done and turning to the other side. I also like the idea of he and Severus being very close friends.I'm glad you are enjoying this.I'm working on the 3rd chapter. Hopefully I can post it this weekend.
Another lovely chapter. Seems like Voldie's pushed LM just a little to far. The Hermione/Snape interaction was well done too. I'm curious now what happens to Sev and Lucius.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Yes, it began with the near death of Draco, and then his wife left him for Voldemort. I wanted to make the Severus/Hermione relationship one that's been growing. I thought it more realistic to have had it building up over a couple of years.This story will be mostly equal parts Severus and Lucius. I've been wanting to do something for a while with a bit more emphasis on Lucius, but I couldn't leave Severus behind.Thank you for commenting.
Response from Chartreuse (Reviewer)
The relationship developing over a couple of years is realistic. A Lucius fic with a backdrop of HG/SS is very appealing, I have to say (in equal parts, even better).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Lucius will have his own love interest too. I like the idea of an older Ginny. She'll be about 24.
Oooo... I thought for a minute there that Severus wouldn't make it. Now I'm worried for Lucius!Also, really loved the quote you used.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Oh yeah, it wasn't looking good for Severus. I'll have more on Lucius in the next chapter.I love that quote too. I read it years ago.
Keep up the good writing.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thanks, I'll try.
Interesting story, very believable premise. Your portrayal of Lucius as intelligent, cunning, deceptive, fed-up, and a survivor is very good. I see Lucius as being someone who, when pushed too far, will get even. Severus's brush with death could certainly be a catalyst to open his heart to Hermione.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of A Tale of Two Men)
Thank you for your comments. I certainly see Lucius as a person who when pushed too far, will not stand idley by. I think there is more to him than what we have seen. I believe he is fiercly loyal to his family.As for Severus, he would not have crossed that line when it came to Hermione had he not been so close to death.I appreciate you taking the time to review this chapter and taking the time to read it.