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Potions Under Duress The Price of Madness
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The Price of Madness

1: Dangerous Assumptions

2: No Time For Tears

3: Keeping Secrets

4: Sense and Sensibility

5: Traveling by Pensieve

6: In Hagrid's Head

7: Whores and Serpents

8: Putting Aside the Past

9: Getting Things Sorted

10: Throwing Tantrums

11: An Uncomfortable Shower

12: Uneasy Thoughts

13: Love and War

14: Shaken Up

15: Kiss and Tell

16: To Shop or Not to Shop

17: Return to the Tower

18: A Shower of Confessions

19: Frustrations

20: Knee-high Whores

21: Gringotts Revisited

22: A Gentleman Caller

23: Goblin Magic

24: The Missing Madman

25: Paying the Price

26: Albus Lives!

27: Courage Under Fire

28: The Seventh Horcrux

29: A Stubborn Wizard

30: Explorations

31: The Sky's the Limit

32: The Madness of War

33: A Dash of Madness

34: Love and Madness

The Price of Madness

PlaidPooka

1,095 Reviews   |   1,095 Ratings, 1 Like, 528 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 107,692 Words 39 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's possible in wartime that madness eventually comes for us all. Yet some madness might be carefully purchased; some sanity knowingly sacrificed. This story is such a tale.

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Chapters (34)

Chapter 1: Dangerous Assumptions

Chapter 2: No Time For Tears

Chapter 3: Keeping Secrets

Chapter 4: Sense and Sensibility

Chapter 5: Traveling by Pensieve

Chapter 6: In Hagrid's Head

Chapter 7: Whores and Serpents

Chapter 8: Putting Aside the Past

Chapter 9: Getting Things Sorted

Chapter 10: Throwing Tantrums

Chapter 11: An Uncomfortable Shower

Chapter 12: Uneasy Thoughts

Chapter 13: Love and War

Chapter 14: Shaken Up

Chapter 15: Kiss and Tell

Chapter 16: To Shop or Not to Shop

Chapter 17: Return to the Tower

Chapter 18: A Shower of Confessions

Chapter 19: Frustrations

Chapter 20: Knee-high Whores

Chapter 21: Gringotts Revisited

Chapter 22: A Gentleman Caller

Chapter 23: Goblin Magic

Chapter 24: The Missing Madman

Chapter 25: Paying the Price

Chapter 26: Albus Lives!

Chapter 27: Courage Under Fire

Chapter 28: The Seventh Horcrux

Chapter 29: A Stubborn Wizard

Chapter 30: Explorations

Chapter 31: The Sky's the Limit

Chapter 32: The Madness of War

Chapter 33: A Dash of Madness

Chapter 34: Love and Madness


About PlaidPooka

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PlaidPooka

24 Stories  |  Favorited by 599  |  109 Reviews Written  |  1,071 Review Responses

I'm a 53 year old woman who wrote fanfic for years and adored doing it.  While I lost the heart for fanfic after book 7 came out, I am still writing, and can be found at http://julianneqjohnson.com

You can find my published work on Amazon under the name Julianne Q Johnson.

Author Website
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Reviews for The Price of Madness

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10/10

Sampdoria

You are amazing, the story is amazing, the update was amazing, and I love it all:-)) You would not know how grateful I was to see an update of your story, and so well timed, nothing could be better to shorten the time waiting for book7 to be released!  My over all favourite and most loved HG/SS story has always been "In Annulo" by Ladyofthemasque, but there is no doubt that "The Price of Madness" are very close to take the top placement and for anyone who knows how much I love "In Annulo" would know what kind of compliment that is. Your story is of such quality that JKR her self should be vary of the competition:-)) Just promise me that if JKR does something stupid in her book, like not redeaming Severus and/or let him die, that you will still finish your story the way it has been so far? And, don't you dare kill Severus in the final battle even if JKR should do something that stupid? I know that as much as I look forward to start reading DH in a few hours, just as much do I look forward for your adding of the last chapter to this fantastic story so I can start reading it all over again, this time from start to finish in one sitting!!! Keep up the wonderful work, I am a bit scared of what JKR migth do in her final book so I keep all my faith in the talented fanfiction authors out there to redeam what JKR migth do wrong:-))

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I have had the end of this fic plotted from the get go, and I am not about to change anything to try to make it HPatDH compliant.  It's a HBP compliant story, and that's how it will stay.  So try not to fret.  One of the reasons I so wanted to get these two chapters posted before I read DH, is exactly so I wouldn't be even tempted to change my mind about anything.  And you mentioned me and LOTM in the same breath, I am so flattered!Thanks!  :)

10/10

sassy19

Super job!!! I love your Severus and all the rest. Thank you so much for doing such delightful  things with them and thank you for continuing on with your great story which is immensely clever and so enjoyable    Love, barb

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks, Barb!  We'll get this fic finished one of these days!  :)

9/10

athenakt

Lovely! Well done so far, both in plot and in characterization. So- are we going to find that Hestia is a traitor, or is she merely holding a grudge against Snape? Don't answer that. ;) I was also expecting that Snape would try and remove the soul shard from Harry the same way he extracted Albus'...Looking forward to the next chapters!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Well, if Snape did it the same way, then he'd end up with it, and we can't have that!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

amazonsummons

Yea! Update!  Keep going, it was much to long since your last chapter.  Loved it, Hestia was hilarious, so she has a thing for half-giants ehh?  I was hoping Severus would still call Hermione "Trollop"  Keep it Up!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'll do my best to keep writing, and keep the writer's block at bay!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

jade2099

What a fantastic treat!!!  Two chapters before the release of DH.  I absolutely adore this story and appreciate how the serious bits and the funny bits are woven together.  Hermione and Severus...just beautiful together.  If our favorite Potion's Master doesn't make it through DH then at least we have him in fanfiction. :)  I look forward to your next update!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you Jade!  And you are right, no matter what JKR does, we can always enjoy fanfic.  I've read some terrific stories in fandom.  :)

10/10

kittykat91419

*SQUEE* I just about started bouncing around just getting the e-mail notification that you'd added two more chapters!!  I absolutely adore this story.  I think you handle the characters extremely well, and that you do a great job writing.  Keep up the wonderful work!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  I promise that I'll eventually get this fic finished!  :)

10/10

Elisabeth

Thanks for coming back and updating -- and as always, moving the plot along with great pacing and always intriguing new developments!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you for being patient and still reading!  :)

10/10

June W

ps - Draco, Draco, Draco.....

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Are you missing him already?  :D

10/10

June W

SQUEEEE!! TWO new chapters!! And he calls her "trollop"!  Thank you for letting Harry finally pay attention to Severus staying with him.... grrr...  BTW, there's a typo in this chapter: a missing Avada Kedavra for Hestia Jones.  What is her problem?????  Thanks again for the two great chapters.  Can we change your name to Jo Rowling and have you take over the HP franchise?

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  I did rather make Hestia a big brat, didn't I?  But then, Hermione gets to practically shout "I'm in love with Severus" in the middle of an Order meeting, so I think it was worth it. ;)  As for JKR, that's what fanfic is all about.  Taking the bits of a universe you like, and ignoring the rest.  Love ya, June!  And thanks for those alert reader eyes!  :)

0/10

draegon_fire

Finally Harry learns what the last Horcrux is. I don't particularly care for Hestia Jones, however, but I'm glad Hermione put her in her place.  It would seem they have a very good plan to destroy Voldemort; and I think it just might work. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I suppose that Hestia was just an excuse to let Hermione defend Snape in public.  That made me giggle.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

lipa

Lovely happy hopeful development.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks!  :)

10/10

ayerf

Two updates?! You're spoiling us. Any more up your sleeve?

Great stuff. I particularly enjoyed Severus's snarkiness and Hermione's scathing comeback.

I still have a bad feeling about Hestia...

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

No more up my sleeve yet, but I'm working on it!  Thanks!  :)

10/10

ayerf

Wow! An update! Good to see more of this.

Why do I have a bad feeling about Hestia Jones?

Now Harry has a real reason to hate his scar... 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  Hestia is a big brat in this chapter, isn't she?  Thanks!  :)

10/10

amsev

Oh, my dear, but this was well worth the wait.  These last two chapters were so moving, I had tears in my eyes at times. So very, very well done.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

10/10

AJS

Oh, I've missed this! Two wonderful chapters and a last line that is utterly perfect.

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks for reading, thanks for your patience, and thanks so much for the kind review!  :)

10/10

averygoodun

*happy sigh*

I'll review more thoroughly when I'm awake enough to do so, but I just wanted to drop a note saying how much I adore this story.  It's everything I want DH to be and know it won't be.  I love it.  Thank you for writing such a lovely story.  It really is divine. 

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

And thank you for reading it, even when there are ages in between updates.  You rock!  :)

10/10

jenonymous

Hmmm, Hestia Jones is definitely out of your favor.  I wonder if that has significance or if she drew the short straw on who plays the whinger?

I am SO GLAD you're back in the saddle!  This is really one of my favorite fanfics, and I was afraid I'd never see the end of it.  Welcome back.

And it was really well-written, too, by the way.  I liked Harry backing toward the door, the silliness about the pyramid snow-globe and the way Albus and Minerva talked to one another.  Looking forward to the next bit.  That low and gravelly voice and the lovely pet-name can only mean lemons! WOO HOO!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Yes, I think that Severus deserves a lemony present after all that's happened to him lately.  ;)  As far as Hestia goes, she drew the short straw.  *giggle*  I haven't decided if I'll take it any farther than that.  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Severessa

Thank you PlaidPooka, for the update! I hope that you are still with us in AU land after Saturday...

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Not to worry!  I'll finish this fic no matter what JKR does.  Thanks for reading, and thanks for your patience!  :)

10/10

firefly124

“You look divine, trollop,” Severus said, his voice low and gravelly. “Come here.”

Squee! 

Yay, you found a way for Harry to be a Horcrux and not have to die! And things appear to still be going well with Hermione and Severus.  From your keyboard to JKR's ears, I hope. *g*

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thanks, Firefly!  Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

firefly124

I'm so glad your muse decided to speak up!  Yay, update!

Ack!  And they've already determined that they don't know a way to get it out of a living creature without killing it!  Ack!  ::runs on to next chapter::

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

*giggle*  Yes, I'm naughty that way!  Thanks!  :)

Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)

I'm just glad you posted both chaps!  Don't know if I could've handled the suspense.  Not this week.  Already enough of that going around. *g*

10/10

Ems Adara

Oh dear . . . . I believe I need more of this or I'll go as mad as a certain Potions Master with an extra soul! The whole time I was reading this, I could feel the pieces falling into place. The explaination for Albus' death and how Snape stored the soul inside himself was pure genius!! I loved how in-depth you went with it, the Pensive, the Goblin magic, everything. *claps wildly* Well done!! Will more be gracing our humble screens soon?

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and happy to tell you that I started writing again at last.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Ems Adara

“I was the bloody potions maker. I’m deranged; I’m not stupid!”Omg . . . I'm leaving a review in the middle of a chapter!!  Is it just me, or does it sound like he knows EXACTALY what's wrong with him. Acting anyone? I don't know why, but this just hit my funnybone rather hard and I fell off my chair giggling. My cat now thinks I'm nuttier than our raving, whore-shouting potions master!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I enjoyed that line myself, so I'm thrilled that it tickled you as well.  Thanks!  :)

10/10

Ems Adara

"Unhand me, werewhore!"“The Dark Whore hid it most carefully,”“Boy,” Severus drawled, “I’ll thank you not to annoy the pretty little whore while she has her wand pointed at my nipples.”Oh my great Goddess, I laughed untill I cried!! Several times. Actually, It took me almost half an hour to finish this chapter because I was laughing so freaking hard!!I adore the whore-shouting madman!! *collapses into giggles*As always, your work is beyond wonderful!! I'm off to read the rest!! *swoops away*

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

I think that I had way too much fun with the whole whore thing.  I'm glad that you got a kick out of it too!  Thanks!  :)

0/10

Akoya8

This is an amazing story!  Please keep it up!

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you!  :)

10/10

salome_slytherin

hi...i love this story...i cant wait for the next chapter!! PLS update soon!!! THANX

Response from PlaidPooka (Author of The Price of Madness)

Thank you so much!  :)

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