Oh what a roller coaster you've woven. I really like how you've developed the 70's and the horrible conditions that the rise of the war brought. Hermione's beating was tough, but then she did slap him.  Severus is so heartbreaking in this because we know what he becomes... or is that changing? Very well written and I'm hooked.

I am always so happy when I see a new chapter of this story.   It is so engrossing!  I love what you have done with it, it is the most original time traveling story I have read about our favorite couple.  Keep up the good work, cannot wait for the next update!

I'm surprised Dumbledore let her go, is he keeping tabs? I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I assume Halloween will be near?

I ask not so much for lemons, though they can be very good, but for more story. I want to see how this unfolds. Great story!

Oh, a lovely, yet horrifying chapter. Ironic how the two generally coincide. Oh, Severus is still Severus. It's funny how I love him even when he gets all possessive and cranky. Poor Hermione. I enjoyed, again, seeing the first chapter explained a bit more. Nice work. I'm on the edge of my seat...

and it won't be any too soon!  faboo update.  thanks so much

Oh dear. This is getting quite dramatic.I only just got to read this now -- somehow the email notification seemed to have slipped by me;pThe Potter's and Evan's dead?Lily using James? To what end? To make Hermione jealous?I can't wait for more!A~~

Oh, I felt shivers at Dumbledore's warning to Hermione. And Sverus' report really showed how the war is escualting...The forced 'tower-in' didn't seem so bad, but Remus' explanation of the Evan's death and the POtter's was sad. good chapter, hon.

The power Voldemort has and is using to pull Severus in is quite scary.  I'm kind of sad to see what will happen soon. Of course, it will be nice to have all of the answers to the many questions from the first chapter. 

Holy Crap, That was a shocker!  That makes a lot of sense though. Sometimes when traumatic things happen to people it really pushes them in strange directions.  I was so happy to hear Hermione say "Mrs. Severus Snape".  It made my heart flutter!  I remember the days when I would have those kinds of gushy fairy tale marriage feelings....wait I still have those feelings who am I kidding.  Anyways, another amazing installment from a totally awesome author!  You Rock my Sox Livvy!  Much Love ~ Brena

Interesting direction.

This story is a very unique twist on the whole Time-Turner fics. It's really fun watching Hermione interact with everyone, and playing such an intricate part in the first war against Voldemort. I'm curious to see how Hermione's relationship with Severus progresses, and all the other events that lead up to the first chapter.

Excellent detail as always - hopefully the next chapter isn't too terribly shocking...

Do we know who killed her parents? That is an interesting way to bring Lily and James together.

I can see Severus is being seduced "by the Dark side." HP has some similarities to Star Wars, yes? Hermione is going to have her hands full keeping him in the Light if they are not supposed to keep their relationship, even secretly. Lily blatantly snogging publicly reminds me of Ron and Lavender.

Yet another interesting chapter. I like the way you have brought James and Lily together- It's awful under the circumstances of thier parents dying, but I have to compliment you on the idea. Look forward to the next chapter.

very creative way to deal with moldybutt's visit.  terrific update.  thanks so much

And the web continues to be woven.  I wonder is this the visit to Hogwarts old Voldy made requesting the Dark Arts position?

I actually managed to read this update from my cell phone while on vacation.  My husband kept asking me what was so important that I needed to read right away...  Well this is what!  What a fabulous chapter.  I've been waiting to find out how Hermione handled Voldemort.  And I was so very impressed with how she interacted with him.  It was a very interesting conversation.  I'm sooooo looking foreward to sitting down and reading the next chapter (from my actual computer)  Much Love ~ Brena

Lily is such a bitch in this.  It makes a refreshing change. :)

Severus is willingly deceiving himself about Voldermort. He would never be content to let Severus keep his hands clean, so to speak. The humane killing of Lily's parents doesn't sound like the average DE, does it.

A Change has been such a good story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it.

A very nice chapter, every one makes me more anxious for the big reveal, whatever that entails...I loved the line about Alice (Longbottom), you have a great knack for details!!!I'm looking forward to the next chapter!gab

Everything is coming to a boil!  I can't wait to see how you are going to interpret the attack on Halloween.  I'm curious, though, about why you chose to make Lily gay.  Was that just a whim or is it going to be important later?  Or did you see something in the books that I missed?

I'm sad Severus is starting to lean towards Voldemort... sigh. More dead parents. The reality is really sinking in. Lovely writing, as always. 

This was great! I'm very intrigued as to the Lily's motivations. This is definitely not the Evans I am used to seeing in fanfic and it's very refreshing.

Can't wait to see them out of Hogwarts, but of course pace it how you need to.

Update soon!