Things appear to be too good. I'm a little concerned as to what you have in store for them. Have they told Dumbledore of their plans? Won't marrying her blow Snape's cover?

An evil part of me wanted Remus to sweep her up into his arms, but I'm happy there is a sense of calm. Nice work, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter!!! Your plot is so thick, so thought through, yet so fitting, I love it more with each chapter!! So, will the truth get out, or will something else happen? I'm excited!!!

A very 'comfortable' chapter - showing the normalcy of their relationship. It also ties in well with canon events and characters. Hermione is being a bit cowardly not telling Severus about the time issue. Hmmm.Great writing as per usual and I am looking forward to the next chapter.Cheers.

At least Hermione has been reunited with Severus and they can finally be together openly.

Oh, it was hilarious how this chapter began.  I'm sure waking up with Professor Snape stalking towards you would be a little disconcerting.  And yet it was so fun.  And then I had to deal with stupid Mad-Eye who wants my foot up his bum.  What a crotchety man.  I seriously wish at times she would change something for the better.  But at the same time I keep telling myself that she already changed Severus for the better.  Anyways.  Please update again soon.  Much Love ~ Brena

OMG, this was so awesome.  I was soooo happy that they finally got to be together.  And it was so lovey-dovey at the end and it just wanted to make my Hufflepuff heart burst.  I'm seriously worried about how he's going to handle finding out where she actually came from.  Thank you for finally bringing them back to eachother.  Much Love ~ Brena

Oh my, she's still in the thick of things, somehow I imagined the Longbottoms were already hurt. Time is closing in on her and I'm still wondering how long she can remain with Severus. Masterful storytelling and I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter.

You've written a lovely reunion. I'm so glad they have a time for themselves. I have a lot of questions about what happens now and will there be a young Hermione for Harry later but will wait and see what happens. I've gotten behind and happily there is another chapter for me to read.

This has been an awesome story so far.  As a loyal reader I am so looking forward to a refreshing lemonade.  Yeah, Livvy6.

Oh God.  I knew that scene from Chapter 1 was going to happen eventually but, it still ripped my heart out reading it in "real time".  Knowing how it came to pass and everything.  I do have to say that knowing that a lemon grove is almost upon us does warm my heart.  I'm such a sucker for some smut.  Seriously what a very great and heart-wrenching chapter.  Of course as always, I can't wait for more!  Much Love ~ Brena

Oh this was so sad. I wanted to slap Severus, too, when he went on about Lily. I can see why Hermine has lost hope.

Very powerful chapter. Thank you! I can not wait for the next chapter... not just for lemons either ;)

That was awful, in a good way. How have you done this? I knew how it would come out, you even put it in the note at the first - and I still sobbed like a baby! Devious. *bows* Well done, dearest. Very fitting way to fill in the circle. =] Now about those lemons...

Oh, gads, livvy, that was so hard!  I'm still bawling.  But to be completely honest, it was a bit better than I expected.  I was expecting Severus to lash out at her and say more awful things. I'm glad he didn't.  One thing I honestly don't get is why she turned to drugs and stuff in the Muggle world.  It's one thing to leave the wizarding world to prevent knowlege of the future.  I think she's probably right to do so.  But she seems stronger willed than to let herself fall into the drug/alcohol/slut trap.

Poor Hermione, Severus is ensnared by his pride and ambition. The Slytherins were brutal in their attack on her and it was sad to see that she thinks it could have been worse. Wonder what Severus thought about what happened? Knowing his words hurt her, then his Slytherins hurt her.

Dang, intense chapter, I can't wait for the next. Well done.

Gah, a cliffhanger! Does it pick up where chapter one left off? Do we see bits of those three years in between first? Does Hermione ever get back to her time? The suspense is killing me! I'll be waiting, same bat time, same bat channel.

wow - lady, you are incredible - can not wait to see the next chapter and have it come full circle - really nice job with this work - thanks for all you do

Hello, Livvy!

It's a long time since my last review - I'm a little bit reluctant to write reviews since English is a foreign language for me - but I'm eagerly tracking your story!

After reading chapter 23 I've reread the first chapter - this time with much more understanding and emotion. It's quite fascinating to follow your storyline and I can't wait to find out, how this story will unfold from now on. So please, update soon!(As for the last chapter: It was quite understandable, that the almost supernatural strong Hermione broke down in despair when she learned of Severus jealousy related to Lily. Poor girl!)Regards,

It appears all has happened as it must.  I am anxious for Severus' wellfare not only physically, but psychologically.  He has not only lost Lily, but feels he has been foresaken by Hermione as well.  It appears in your world this is the trigger that truly sends him over the edge.

So now she waits... :)

You have built this up perfectly, another wonderful chapter. You say lemons? Highly look forward to the next chapter.

Quite frankly Livvy, this is all too clever for me. How can I put this? I stopped watching all the UK soaps years ago because I couldn't be bothered with all the kids' and teenagers stories in them. I was never really in to "time-turner" stories for this reason. And I only really got into HP and the books after I saw the POA film and realised Alan Rickman was in it. But you've done my nut in. Your story is totally COMPULSIVE and yes....it's fantastic to note that you're just about half-way through. Thank you for this rite of passage into the time travel genre which will make me look at this device with a bit more of an open mind from now on. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. 

Wow, great, intense and perfect. Everything is coming together so neatly, your writing is just amazing!!! I'm sooooo looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

To restate what previous review said I am not so anxious for the lemons but for the story! I check every day for updates and LOVE every one of them. You mentioned earlier that this story is already written, I'm just wondering how many chapers this story has. I am sooo excited to see where this goes!