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The Godfather
Muggline828 Reviews | 7.15/10 (828 Ratings, 0 Likes, 586 Favorites )
Snape is asked to be the godfather of a child and Hermione plays a vital part...
DH spoilers, but with some important changes...
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Ooo, can't wait to see what that decision is! That was very caring of him to go and help her dad. The man really needs to give himself a break.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
I guess we all agree on that...
Sneaky Severus with the healing draught. Very clever to not completely heal him and raise suspicion.
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Would be quite disturbing if he were almost dead one day and completely healed on the next...
I'm so sorry for Mr. Granger. It was no suprise that Severus gave him a potion... I expected a bit more, a few mended bones, a potion for his liver, but that would have been noticed. Having Hermione open up to him yet again, telling him about her parentls, I'm surprised Severus didn't shut himself off again. I was most surprised that you made Tobias an educated man, a dr. and researcher. It doesn't fit with living in Spinner's End. So how did they end up in that h--l hole?and You done it again! An evil cliffie! Please update soon... I really am enjoying this story.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Well, the more intelligent a person is, the more he/she tends to think too much and bugger up normal, everyday life. I know a physics professor who works as a postman because he needs time for his "personal spiritual development" and can't stand a normal working environment any more.
Ooh, what decision? Tell us, tell us, naughty authoress!
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Wait and see - it's all in the next chapter.
Yay!!!
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
What? Do you expect something good? ;-)
Interesting! I can't wait to find out what she has planned!Livvy
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Don't worry - the chapter went out to Prof M McGonagall today.
Aaaarrrrggghhh, this cliffies are killing me?! What did she decide to do? Kiss him? Invite him to somewhere? Hug? Well, excellent job as always. So sweet of Severus to help Hermione's father, and then he is opening up to her.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
There's still a lot of opening up to do, but they are getting somewhere...
That was a nice touch, having him sneak in with a potion. :)
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
At least he could put all his spy skills to good use!
Fantasitically crafted chapter, this one. It said so much about Severus, abdout his relationships wiht the others, and about his feelings for Hermione. Just beautiful. Waiting with baited breath for the update!
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
don't worry, it's in the making. However, this will be the last available chapter for now, since I will catch up with the German version with chapter 31. Marisol promised that she has finished it, though, and there would be 2-3 more chapters.
OOOO - Will she let him use Legilimency? Will they find a Pensieve to share her memories? Or do we have something else even more revealing in store for us?The lense most of us use to view ourselves is so often more harsh and more critical than the way the world sees us.Wonderful, as always, Muggline.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
You will see, don't you worry.
Oho, little cliffie for the readers to hang on! I hope Marisol's mother is doing well and I am looking forward to the next chapter and finding out how this is going to wind up
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
It's a wonderful solution, really. But you will see, soon.
What an EVIL place to stop, but what a brilliant chapter:) I can't wait for the rest of it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Don't worry, you'll get it!
Argh a cliff hanger. Since the story in complete I hope all will be revealed soon. I hope Marisole's mum is better and all is well.Thanks for the update.Irish
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
The story is complete (at least Marisol said so), but not entirely posted in German yet. The next chapter will be the last available one until now.
Cliffie... I do hope Severus believe's in what Hermione says and gives himself break and not bottle up all those feelings he has. Look forward to more.
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Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
You are so going to love the next chapter...
I am really interested at your approach to Severus' dad. I think that's better than the drunken, blue-collar sort he's usually paointed as. Much more depth for the abusive nature, bravo to you!! Clever and enthralling as always!
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Yes, I also liked this approach, although the other one is just as believeable
This chapter and the last one seem to me to be pivotal in this story and the direction it will take. I wonder what Severus had been doing in Ireland, and why he had made the statement to Hermione about not knowing you were hungry, but then you see something you like and all of a sudden you realize you're starving. And now in this chapter, he had made it a point to take one of his potions to Mr Granger because he wanted him to be better and didn't hold Muggle doctors in high regard. After hearing what he told Hermione about his upbringing, I'm not at all surprised at that. Still, it was a very thoughtful thing for him to do... and Mr Granger did get better faster than the doctors thought he would.When Hermione and Severus were walking along the road and talking, I hope he took to heart what she told him about how she sees him. "I wish you could see yourself through my eyes only once, Severus."And then she made a decision... What was the decision? What? I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting to know.Great chapter!BethFor Marisol, I want her to now that I will keep her mother and all her family in my thoughts and prayers.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Well she's going to make him see through her eyes...
Beautiful chapter ,. I hope he will finaly give him self a go.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
You will see soon.
Nice chapter, I liked the way Severus helped Hermione's dad.I am sorry to hear that your mom is ill. My mom also has a heart condition, so I can relate. It goes without question that I will remember her in my prayers.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Thankfully, it's not my mother but Marisol's who is ill. I will copy those reviews and send them to her via email since I don't really know how often she reads these.
Some I find it appropriate that they should reunite in the same room that they first spoke to eachother. It has come full circle.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Now, they haven't reunited yet, you know....
Oh I hate these situtations where someone has to "break down" and talk to the other first. Maybe they could just run into eachother in the street and then it will all be nuetral?
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Just you wait and see...
Yippeee for Ginny putting it all together!
Harry's comments are disconcerting. He doesnt think Snape is whole enough or good enough to be a partner for Hermione? Then why does he include this man in his family?When Severus started berating her my chest hurt. I actually felt pain because he is being so cruel. I expect he is pushing her away because he feels vulnerable. Stupid, stupid man.
Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)
Why should Harry not include Snape in his family? He is a good godfather to little Albus Severus, isn't he?
Beautiful just beautiful! I hope this is the begining of a strong relationship.