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Death's Dominion
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Severus Snape’s life was changed when he was hit by an errant spell, and he comes to a decision that defies Dumbledore’s wishes. Even the fate of the wizarding world is altered by this one ill-cast curse and Snape’s subsequent resolve. Long after the spell itself has dissipated, its effects continue echoing in the lives of Severus, Albus, Minerva, and Hermione, and they bring with them a shadowy figure whom Snape does not trust and whose motivations and influence on Minerva are murky. Conspiracies and schemes swirl around Severus as he continues on his path of deception to his final confrontation with the Dark Lord.
Canon-divergent post-July 1996 in the HP universe. Not DH-compliant. (Partially HBP-compliant.)
A “Light” fic of love, loyalty, and redemption.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.
Voted First Place, Gen Fic: Best Legacy Story, in the HP Fanfic Fan Poll Awards for Spring/Summer 2013.
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I liked the new spell you came up with, and of course Minerva's history tid bit was fun as well. All in all a very enjoyable chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Glad you liked the spells and enjoyed the chapter! Thank you!
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Glad you liked the spells and enjoyed the chapter! Thank you!
Those are some very nasty spells. Neville has become such a great leader!
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Glad you like Neville here! Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Glad you like Neville here! Thanks!
Poor Severus!!!--he must feel like he's in some truly hellish version of Groundhog Day. First he's made to Vow to kill Albus; he manages to avoid that one only to wish he hadn't; now he has to kill Minerva. Same office, same chair, probably even sipping from the same teacup, but informing a different Head and victim. If I were Minerva I'd make sure any and all toxic potions and weapons were out of his grasp, b/c he's never had better incentive to off himself. It's a good thing Minerva's defensive schemes are progressing, b/c she may have to do something to provoke the attack sooner rather than later. Somehow the way he sets it up all deadpan, "[oh, just] the usual..."--this scene brings to my mind the canon one where AD tells him he must kill him and SS makes the quip about giving him time to prepare an epitaph. Snape uses dark humour to cope w/ the truly awful prospect he's facing.Go Neville! I was wondering if we were going to see Strong!Neville in DD. It's one of the parts of DH I presume most people liked. Nice that Snape is the catalyst, and that he learns of it.I'm glad Minerva puts enough stock in the prophecy to put some countermeasures in place. And Hermione is a good choice. Hooch's jealousy on Albus's behalf is quite touching, and very understandable. Too bad Albus isn't around to see how protective people are of him even after his demise! And that they really appreciated the depth of his devotion to Minerva, and what they thought was the reverse.Veddy veddy interesting that Robbie knows so much of Aberforth's past, eh? If Rolanda had been present for every scene in this chapter--Melina and Minerva and Robbie discussing the potion she need to brew and where and with whom...the penny might have droppe for her...So is "Gary" what Gareth goes by when he's outside the UK? At first I thought it was some sort of subterfuge on Melina's part in Hermione's presence, but he did sub in Defense, so isn't unknown to Hermione, and Melina calls him Gareth several times later in the scene. "Gareth" suits him better, IMHO.Minerva all misty-eyed at Bill and Fleur's family planning, and giving advice Bill probably didn't expect. Hmm...I wonder if she'd always hoped in the very back of her mind that V could be vanquished quickly enough that she and Albus could have children afterwards....but even if Albus were still alive, that would probably no longer be an option... Hugs and ginger newts to Minerva....That last line of the chapter, though...poor Snape--he could use a nonverbal Cheering Charm about now, and Minerva will have to pull another amazing plan out of her hat...
Response from esoterica1693 (Reviewer)
Another thought....Minerva's totally understandable exhaustion is showing through, and her emtions are closer to the surface. Perhaps a quarter- or half-dose of pearlescent purple peace potion wouldn't be amiss, though she needs all her and everyone else's wits about her in the coming hours and days. It is good she has Robbie to lean on, especially in private. His reaction to Severus' new task should be interesting to see, though it can't have been unexpected. I imagine she can empathize w/ Albus's dilemma even more now.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Fortunately, Minerva's reaction is likely to be a bit different from Albus's, so Severus's position might be a bit better. I can't remember that scene you mention with the epitaph line -- must mean that my self-Obliviates trying to excise DH from my memory are finally taking! haha! But I'm sure that was a good line. (There were some good lines and some good scenes in DH, including several toward the end. Before the epilogue, of course!)I like the idea of Neville really growing into his own -- I think that is one thing place we do see personal growth on the part of a character in the series, though he's always been a Gryffy for a reason -- the scene where he tries to get HP, RW, and HG from leaving Gryff Tower was a good example of that.Minerva has always considered the particular possibility that they believe the prophecy points to, but the prophecy made them consider a specific approach to take. She's still sceptical of prophecies in general. Like she says, she thinks it's more who knows the prophecy that's important, and how they interpret it.Yeah, Hooch was amusing there. I think she would have been very confused if she had heard certain conversations . . .Re: "Gary" Melina just likes to shorten people's names. She's one of the only people who calls him that, and she's called him that since he was a toddler. He wouldn't particularly like it coming from someone else, though he wouldn't ever make a big deal about it, either. He's definietely a "Gareth" (named for mother's brother, and his middle name is from her first husband).As for what you say about Minerva & her conversation with Bill, it would only be a very remote possibility, though technically still a possibility for a little while longer. But as you say, Albus isn't around, and it's rather late days to be thinking about such things even if he were.I think that the fact that Minerva would have no intention of going along with being killed will make this a bit of a different experience for Severus -- though still fraught with difficulties and disturbing consequences for him.Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
RE: your addendum. I'm sure that Robbie had Minerva take a mild sleeping draught on Tuesday and Wednesday night so that she could get a couple good nights' rest. No Dreamless Sleep in case she had to get up in the middle of the night, of course. As Severus says, twenty hour days do not invigorate! She was having trouble concentrating in the Monday and Tuesday portion of this chapter; by the time that Snape sees her on Thursday night, she's a bit better rested, though it's still late in the day.
Response from esoterica1693 (Reviewer)
Another thought....Minerva's totally understandable exhaustion is showing through, and her emtions are closer to the surface. Perhaps a quarter- or half-dose of pearlescent purple peace potion wouldn't be amiss, though she needs all her and everyone else's wits about her in the coming hours and days. It is good she has Robbie to lean on, especially in private. His reaction to Severus' new task should be interesting to see, though it can't have been unexpected. I imagine she can empathize w/ Albus's dilemma even more now.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Fortunately, Minerva's reaction is likely to be a bit different from Albus's, so Severus's position might be a bit better. I can't remember that scene you mention with the epitaph line -- must mean that my self-Obliviates trying to excise DH from my memory are finally taking! haha! But I'm sure that was a good line. (There were some good lines and some good scenes in DH, including several toward the end. Before the epilogue, of course!)I like the idea of Neville really growing into his own -- I think that is one thing place we do see personal growth on the part of a character in the series, though he's always been a Gryffy for a reason -- the scene where he tries to get HP, RW, and HG from leaving Gryff Tower was a good example of that.Minerva has always considered the particular possibility that they believe the prophecy points to, but the prophecy made them consider a specific approach to take. She's still sceptical of prophecies in general. Like she says, she thinks it's more who knows the prophecy that's important, and how they interpret it.Yeah, Hooch was amusing there. I think she would have been very confused if she had heard certain conversations . . .Re: "Gary" Melina just likes to shorten people's names. She's one of the only people who calls him that, and she's called him that since he was a toddler. He wouldn't particularly like it coming from someone else, though he wouldn't ever make a big deal about it, either. He's definietely a "Gareth" (named for mother's brother, and his middle name is from her first husband).As for what you say about Minerva & her conversation with Bill, it would only be a very remote possibility, though technically still a possibility for a little while longer. But as you say, Albus isn't around, and it's rather late days to be thinking about such things even if he were.I think that the fact that Minerva would have no intention of going along with being killed will make this a bit of a different experience for Severus -- though still fraught with difficulties and disturbing consequences for him.Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
RE: your addendum. I'm sure that Robbie had Minerva take a mild sleeping draught on Tuesday and Wednesday night so that she could get a couple good nights' rest. No Dreamless Sleep in case she had to get up in the middle of the night, of course. As Severus says, twenty hour days do not invigorate! She was having trouble concentrating in the Monday and Tuesday portion of this chapter; by the time that Snape sees her on Thursday night, she's a bit better rested, though it's still late in the day.
Oh, now that is cute. Just totally off hand. Oh and he wants me to kill you!!!!!!!!! I just love it when you revive his sarcasm. I really cannot tell you how much I enjoy the way you write these characters. Thank you for giving me something really terrific to read and being an inspiration.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yeah, just the usual megalomaniacal stuff, and by the way, he wants me to kill you. heheheh Severus does have that little twist to the way he looks at things and expresses himself. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know how much you like it. I really appreciate it!
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Yeah, just the usual megalomaniacal stuff, and by the way, he wants me to kill you. heheheh Severus does have that little twist to the way he looks at things and expresses himself. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know how much you like it. I really appreciate it!
This is excellent. So much detail. And I love how you write Minerva. And you are doing very nice things with Poppy Pomfrey, too. Both characters seem to get forgotten by so meny writers. I enjoy this very much. Your have a very good feel for both the characters and Snape's inner turmoil.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you very much! Minerva is probably my favorite female HP character, and I've come to appreciate Poppy, too, so I'm glad you enjoy them.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you very much! Minerva is probably my favorite female HP character, and I've come to appreciate Poppy, too, so I'm glad you enjoy them.
Waaahhhhhhh! I have this horrible, terrible, painful lump in my throat and I am crying, so if I mess up, it is all your fault. The singing stones were a wonderful gift for Filius and it is awesome to know that Severus has that beautiful music playing as a representation of his magic. The fact that Albus gave him his watch was just... so heartbreaking and it had to be so for Severus too. At the end, though he still couldn't say the words to Albus about his love for the older wizard, yet it was implied, was very characteristic. *sob* It is so hard to see Albus with his failing health and how everyone is finally noticing what they have worked so hard to hide. I know it is part of Minerva's plan, but it is still hard to witness.I keep wondering where this is all going. I mean, I know where it is going but I don't, if that makes any sense. Minerva says, “I wish there were another way, Albus. A way to save you, and keep you from this suffering," I notice the and is in italics and I wonder if it has any significance. I just wish Albus didn't die! Darn it! This is so sad. How could you talk me into reading this? Okay, now that I have blown my nose and had my Sybil moment, I am better. Sorry about that. I do trust you, it just gets a little hard sometimes, and I am getting, almost, to the point of having to wait for a chapter. So, needless to say, I am worried. *Sigh*But, regardless of my ranting, you are still 'DA BOMBE" to me. *sniff sniff*Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Oh, dear . . . I'm sorry about the painful lump in the throat. But it's good that you have so much empathy for poor Severus!I am glad you managed to collect yourself and got over your Sybil moment, as you call it! I would have worried otherwise! Don't forget your mantra! And I'm glad that I remain "DA BOMBE" despite the pain you're going through at the moment in this part of the story. I'm hoping to have a chapter to update on Sunday (crossing my fingers here), so even if you finish these chapters soon, there will be another coming fairly shortly.Thanks for the reviews!
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Oh, dear . . . I'm sorry about the painful lump in the throat. But it's good that you have so much empathy for poor Severus!I am glad you managed to collect yourself and got over your Sybil moment, as you call it! I would have worried otherwise! Don't forget your mantra! And I'm glad that I remain "DA BOMBE" despite the pain you're going through at the moment in this part of the story. I'm hoping to have a chapter to update on Sunday (crossing my fingers here), so even if you finish these chapters soon, there will be another coming fairly shortly.Thanks for the reviews!
Okay, I will try to type through my tears, because that last bit was so sad. This is so sad. Severus thought that he could save Albus but then Albus wouldn't let him. Somehow, feeling he was not worth Albus' life, not worth saving, has to be the hardest thing for Severus. He is coming to understand what it means but it is till hard for him because of all he did in the past. Does that make sense? Oh, well. Sorry if it doesn't, but I think his emotions, after being locked up for so long, he is having a hard time dealing with the how Albus chose to deal with the situation and I just want to give him a great big hug.All right! I think I am in love with Gareth now. He is a perfect combination of Malcolm and Quin all rolled into one. And his banter back and forth with Severus is awesome. I was a little miffed when he intruded on Severus and Hermione's time together, but after the initial irritation wore off I found myself warming to him. It seems like Severus tolerates him well also. LOL! I was very nice of him to offer Severus a hand with his shower, and the previous chapter, when he had the intent of healing correct was very interesting. He strikes me, in that, as quite a bit like Malcolm.Btw, the desserts sounded delicious, too! I adore coconut cake, YUM!Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, Severus is filled with a lot of confusing and painful emotions, and he is having a hard time dealing with them all, and he feels very alone. Gareth is Malcolm's son, that's certain, and he has a lot of Gertrude in him, too -- though I can certainly see the comparison with Quin, as well! He is a very generous and straight-forward wizard, certainly. He is mercurial, just as his father was, but in a different way. He has a bit of a harder edge to him, and a bit more cynicism, but that doesn't keep him from being generous, though he sees himself as falling short in that area. Yep, Severus is manageing to tolerate him quite well! I love fresh coconut -- and coconut cream cake just, mmmm! Both Gareth and Hermione were trying to get Severus to eat something, and something not just for the sake of nourishment, but for the simple pleasure of it. It was a kind of nurturing, if you know what I mean.Good night!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, Severus is filled with a lot of confusing and painful emotions, and he is having a hard time dealing with them all, and he feels very alone. Gareth is Malcolm's son, that's certain, and he has a lot of Gertrude in him, too -- though I can certainly see the comparison with Quin, as well! He is a very generous and straight-forward wizard, certainly. He is mercurial, just as his father was, but in a different way. He has a bit of a harder edge to him, and a bit more cynicism, but that doesn't keep him from being generous, though he sees himself as falling short in that area. Yep, Severus is manageing to tolerate him quite well! I love fresh coconut -- and coconut cream cake just, mmmm! Both Gareth and Hermione were trying to get Severus to eat something, and something not just for the sake of nourishment, but for the simple pleasure of it. It was a kind of nurturing, if you know what I mean.Good night!
Poor Minerva, I am very curious about her plan. I just wish Albus didn't have to die as a part of it as it seems. I can only imagine how hard it is to kill something, let alone someone. I noticed a similarity between the conversation of Albus and Minerva in this chapter and Minerva and Robbie in the last. Either there are some similarities or you are playing with my head. You are playing with my head, aren't you? I can just imagine you sitting there with an evil grin. BAH!!! I think I shall let out my inner Severus, grrrr. It doesn't seem that Albus' fainting had anything to do with Minerva's plan though. I do hope it all works out, and I am sure it will, because you are MMADfan, and I trust you. At times you are driving me nuts, but I trust you... see? I am following my directions, though I am thinking about a brain holiday at the moment.Sorry, I will get back to the chapter... um... where am... was I? Oh yeah, I felt so bad for Severus in this chapter when he realized what Albus planned to do. *sniff* Alright, off I go to the next installment, repeating my mantra...Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I don't know as I'd describe it exactly as an evil grin . . . maybe a self-satisfied smirk? LOL! Poor Severus! You are right, it's very hard on him.Enjoy the next installment!TTFN!
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I don't know as I'd describe it exactly as an evil grin . . . maybe a self-satisfied smirk? LOL! Poor Severus! You are right, it's very hard on him.Enjoy the next installment!TTFN!
I love the fact that Minerva can still chastize Moody even though he's a big boy. LOL! She does have a point though, he has changed. I can see why she chose the first image they saw in the pensieve. He was so young, full of energy, and desirous of following the right path. He seemed more whole than he is now, weathered by the years of fighting dark wizards. Sometimes I feel he blurs the line too much. It was a bit odd that Severus would ask who Carson was first, but then, they were talking about him and he was not in any of her memories she shared, so I suppose it makes sense. In this chapter we see Severus going back and forth with his temper. But I am glad Minerva talked him into staying. I loved it when Severus asked Melina if he looked like a sunbather. HA HA!I remembered something I read, Minerva reminded Robbie to take his potion in one of the previous chapters. What potion does he need to take?? Did I miss something? (And I am sure I missed a few things, but I don't think it was mentioned anywhere else that Robbie was in need of any potions.) And Gareth is back? This ought to be interesting.This was a long chappie, but you know I like that a lot!Cheers,Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
She's very good at chastizement, having been a teacher for more than forty years -- and it just being another facet of her "Mother McGonagall" character and coming naturaly to her! I'm glad you got a laugh out of Severus's sarcastic question to Meina! teehee! A sunbather! Ha! But Melina certainly maintained her good humor, didn't she?I think that's the only time that Minerva has reminded Robbie to take his potion. Gareth is in and out. Mostly out, but occasionally back. I'm glad you liked it a lot. The next several chappies are rather long, but every time I looked at them and tried to find places to split them, I didn't like it, so I kept them as whole chapters.Thanks!
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She's very good at chastizement, having been a teacher for more than forty years -- and it just being another facet of her "Mother McGonagall" character and coming naturaly to her! I'm glad you got a laugh out of Severus's sarcastic question to Meina! teehee! A sunbather! Ha! But Melina certainly maintained her good humor, didn't she?I think that's the only time that Minerva has reminded Robbie to take his potion. Gareth is in and out. Mostly out, but occasionally back. I'm glad you liked it a lot. The next several chappies are rather long, but every time I looked at them and tried to find places to split them, I didn't like it, so I kept them as whole chapters.Thanks!
Okay, there was quite a bit to ponder in this chapter, so I hope I don't forget any of my questions. However, I probably will.First, it was awful what happened to Severus. I can imagine it would have been difficult doing what he did for that family and not getting caught even without the interference of Moody. But what Alastor did was downright terrible. And all of Severus' injuries, gasp! Somehow, if he were just in this to survive, I don't think he would do half of what he does. Actually, there aren't many who would do half of what he does. He strikes me as a very forthright man, whether he thinks he is or not. I am thinking this is what Albus saw in him all along.Next, I find it very interesting that Minerva shared the secret about the gargoyle with Severus but not with Poppy. Heh, heh. But then, Poppy knows about Severus and Minerva and Severus does not. Hmm.I am also glad that Severus now sees why Minerva and Hermione like Robbie. The banter between Minerva and Robbie does make me think of Albus... I am afraid that I will soon just call him Albus and be done with it.The phrase that struck me the most was "And you know what I want you to do if you live and I do not,” Minerva said.Now, what on Earth could she mean? It brought to mind another thing Robbie said earlier about only giving up himself for a little while and Minerva told him it may be longer than he thought. Am I on the right track??Also, that last bit about Minerva telling Robbie it was okay to eavesdrop reminded me of when Albus set off her alarm when he was trying to do the same thing. LOL. How very Albus. Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
The phrase that struck me the most was "And you know what I want you to do if you live and I do not,” Minerva said.Now, what on Earth could she mean? It brought to mind another thing Robbie said earlier about only giving up himself for a little while and Minerva told him it may be longer than he thought. Am I on the right track??Nope, not really. In the first conversation, she was thanking Robert for agreeing to give up his freedom for several months or longer while she needed him. When she and Robbie were talking, he explicitly says what it was that she wants him to do: go live with Gertie on Eilean Tèarmunn. So, two different conversations.Yeah, if she wanted to prevent him and Severus from overhearing what was going on, she could have set some anti-eavesdropping spells, but then, of course, Moody would be even more paranoid and not listen to Minerva, since he doesn't like or trust either wizard. Besides, she thought it a good thing for Severus to overhear, and rather than repeat everything to Robbie or have him view it in the Pensieve, the eavesdropping is just easier & also shows Severus the truth of her trust in him. TTFN!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
The phrase that struck me the most was "And you know what I want you to do if you live and I do not,” Minerva said.Now, what on Earth could she mean? It brought to mind another thing Robbie said earlier about only giving up himself for a little while and Minerva told him it may be longer than he thought. Am I on the right track??Nope, not really. In the first conversation, she was thanking Robert for agreeing to give up his freedom for several months or longer while she needed him. When she and Robbie were talking, he explicitly says what it was that she wants him to do: go live with Gertie on Eilean Tèarmunn. So, two different conversations.Yeah, if she wanted to prevent him and Severus from overhearing what was going on, she could have set some anti-eavesdropping spells, but then, of course, Moody would be even more paranoid and not listen to Minerva, since he doesn't like or trust either wizard. Besides, she thought it a good thing for Severus to overhear, and rather than repeat everything to Robbie or have him view it in the Pensieve, the eavesdropping is just easier & also shows Severus the truth of her trust in him. TTFN!
Awwww, Severus brought her a sandwich? I think the Adfectus has definitely stayed with him. Somehow, I don't think he would have done such a thing before. Severus seemed a bit jealous of Robbie spending time with Hermione, as well. Interesting. I think she is growing on him quite steadily. The bit about the "Brain Holidays" made me laugh out loud. Only you, MMADfan, only you. I am glad Hermione sees the likenesses of Albus in Robbie, too. The only reason Severus hasn't seen it is because he dislikes Robbie and tries not to be around him much.I liked this chapter much, too. Quite a bit fluffier. YAY! for fluff. I will cheer while I can, 'cuz I don't know how long it'll last!Cheers,Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Always a good idea to cheer the fluffiness while you can! Hey, people go skiing and snorkelling and such when they go on holiday, why not a "Brain Holiday"? I'm glad that you liked the lighter tone of this chapter. Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Always a good idea to cheer the fluffiness while you can! Hey, people go skiing and snorkelling and such when they go on holiday, why not a "Brain Holiday"? I'm glad that you liked the lighter tone of this chapter. Thanks!
This is good news about Quin, I hope. At least it does give some hope to his situation. I was so sad and angry to hear about his fate! The small conversation we saw between Minerva and Robbie was different. I still quite a bit of Albus in him. Somehow, I think it has to do with that spell Melina cast on Minerva.Last, I was worried that Severus would do something stupid to drive Hermione away. I am glad he forgot about his anger in time to meet with her. Their meeting was very... sweet, is the only word I can come up with at the moment. It makes me happy that they made each other feel better.Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
It's funny the effect an encounter with one brightly cheerful person can have on your mood? Melina already repaid Severus for his help there by cheering him up before he said or did the wrong thing with Hermione that might have led to more depressing thinga for him.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!TTFN!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
It's funny the effect an encounter with one brightly cheerful person can have on your mood? Melina already repaid Severus for his help there by cheering him up before he said or did the wrong thing with Hermione that might have led to more depressing thinga for him.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!TTFN!
And as Gareth says, since Severus cannot forgive, that is why he does not understand that Hermione can see past his faults. The fact that he found what he did disgusting does make me think that he, whether he realizes it or not, let the anger take over and does have a heart, somewhere in there.I mean, if he didn't, it simply would not have mattered when Voldemort killed Lily and I don't think he would have been disgusted with what he had done to Gertie. But that's just my opinion.I thought Gareth showed considerable restraint though I can't blame his anger at Severus. He makes me think a little bit about Quin in the way he handles himself and what he says there at the end. And it is true, Severus has never been able to forgive, but it seems he is growing in that direction.I was touched when Minerva took care of him and he let her. Given what he has done in the past, to people they care for greatly, I can see how Severus would be amazed at Minerva and Albus forgiving him.Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I think that Severus uses his anger and resentment as a kind of maladaptive shield. He's also in a pretty depressing situation, and that doesn't help. But you're right: he does have a heart, more of one that he realizes. I'm glad you like Gareth. Given the burden of anger and grief he carried for so many years, he was pretty restrained -- but as he said, he's a Ravenclaw, not a headstrong Gryffindor (playing to the stereotype of the Gryffindor).Severus has opportunities now that he wouldn't have had if it hadn't been for the Adfectus, and if he had gone ahead and fulfilled the Vow as Albus had wished. He doesn't really see that, of course, because he's so enmired in the situation, but I think that Minerva is very aware of it.TTFN!
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I think that Severus uses his anger and resentment as a kind of maladaptive shield. He's also in a pretty depressing situation, and that doesn't help. But you're right: he does have a heart, more of one that he realizes. I'm glad you like Gareth. Given the burden of anger and grief he carried for so many years, he was pretty restrained -- but as he said, he's a Ravenclaw, not a headstrong Gryffindor (playing to the stereotype of the Gryffindor).Severus has opportunities now that he wouldn't have had if it hadn't been for the Adfectus, and if he had gone ahead and fulfilled the Vow as Albus had wished. He doesn't really see that, of course, because he's so enmired in the situation, but I think that Minerva is very aware of it.TTFN!
This chapter was very fluffy, in a sense. Well, fluffier than the rest, anyway. Though he says she wouldn't, Albus seems convinced Minerva may try to use the Imperious curse on him, LOL! At least it feels that way.I also found it interesting that he capitulated to taking his potions over the holidays to satisfy Minerva. That seemed a compromise, of sorts.Is Gertie staying on their Island? And I am wondering what she is seeing. I would suppose seeing his hand would make her very upset, considering what happened to Malcolm and then, her arm. That is so very depressing. Sigh! I am wondering why he is refusing to let Melina give him the entire physical. Male pride? Ego? Or is he truly appalled because she is so much younger than he? Hmmm...And, oh my goodness, I want to know what this spell is that Melina cast on Minerva. It must have something to do with how Robbie and Minerva are acting towards one another.Great chapter, you calculator you!Cheers,Stef =o)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Re: the spell. Remember that the spell that was cast on Severus was the Actus Adfectus Amor Verissimus. And at the end of An Act of Love, in the epilogue, there was mention of a spell that Minerva had found but that Albus didn't want her to use, etc.? And in the epilogue, she decided she wouldn't have it cast on herself without Albus's approval? Well, she changed her mind about that, and she had Melina cast the Celebrare Adfectus Amor Ultimus even without Albus's knowledge or approval, essentailly ambushing him with it. (Remember that Minerva tells Albus that she will put him in a position where he can't refuse to cooperate? He thinks of the Imperius, but he knows that he could throw that off, and he hasn't really considered other more imaginative possibilities. . .)As to Gertie on the island, what is there that is unusual to be seen -- only occasionally by some, and which Minerva saw? That is a clue to the thing that she sees all the time, why Gluffy takes her wand away, and why Minerva speaks of what could befall Gertrude if she tried to Apparate there. I know, I'm such a tease! LOL!As for the reason behind not wanting Melina -- or anyone else -- to give him a physical examination a) he believes it is entirely pointless, and b) from An Act of Love you may remember his attitude toward physical examinations. There was a touch of that mentioned in RaM, too.I'm glad you liked the chapter! I guess I am a calculator! heheheh! Thanks for the review!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Re: the spell. Remember that the spell that was cast on Severus was the Actus Adfectus Amor Verissimus. And at the end of An Act of Love, in the epilogue, there was mention of a spell that Minerva had found but that Albus didn't want her to use, etc.? And in the epilogue, she decided she wouldn't have it cast on herself without Albus's approval? Well, she changed her mind about that, and she had Melina cast the Celebrare Adfectus Amor Ultimus even without Albus's knowledge or approval, essentailly ambushing him with it. (Remember that Minerva tells Albus that she will put him in a position where he can't refuse to cooperate? He thinks of the Imperius, but he knows that he could throw that off, and he hasn't really considered other more imaginative possibilities. . .)As to Gertie on the island, what is there that is unusual to be seen -- only occasionally by some, and which Minerva saw? That is a clue to the thing that she sees all the time, why Gluffy takes her wand away, and why Minerva speaks of what could befall Gertrude if she tried to Apparate there. I know, I'm such a tease! LOL!As for the reason behind not wanting Melina -- or anyone else -- to give him a physical examination a) he believes it is entirely pointless, and b) from An Act of Love you may remember his attitude toward physical examinations. There was a touch of that mentioned in RaM, too.I'm glad you liked the chapter! I guess I am a calculator! heheheh! Thanks for the review!
Oh, dear! I share the same thoughts as Minerva regarding the fact that Albus would never have told her anything if Severus hadn't told her. I realize he was trying to 'spare her,' but it would not have made anything any easier. And, of course, what if everything had gone wrong and he hadn't told her? Sheesh! Albus not taking his potions almost makes me think of Doppleganger Albus. He is being VERY stubborn! But then, I imagine Minerva to be a very stubborn witch as well. Talk about a stand-off.I do wonder how she will make him take his potions if he will not. And now this plan of hers sounds interesting and it doesn't sound like she is going to give him any options about it, either.At the end of their conversation, before her plan, I was so sad for them. But she is headstrong, I am wondering what she has come up with.Pressing on... trust MMADfan... trust MMADfan...Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, you are right! They are both very stubborn, but Minerva will gather allies around her, and she is very determined.I'm glad you're still enjoying it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, you are right! They are both very stubborn, but Minerva will gather allies around her, and she is very determined.I'm glad you're still enjoying it!
Wow, it's amazing (but so in character) that Severus sees the Adefectus as making him weak, but it was what gave them all the strength to save their world from Voldemort's darkness.I like what Poppy said about how we don't know who else could have died. Really, as hard as Angelina's death would be on all of them, this future has spared so many lives. Severus talking Lupin out of some stupidity and telling Minerva about Tonks seems a very natural thing to come about from the events of the previous day, and I'm hoping that saves some lives, too.I like how Hermione is never far from his mind in this chapter. It gives me so much hope that somewhere there is an inkling that there are people--and one in particular--who want him to live.I don't know what to make of the prophecy yet, but I'll certainly be keeping my eyes on the Snakes and Lionesses.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Severus does have so many more people on his side than he realizes, though when he gets into one of his moods, he rejects even the belief in those who he knows care for him, even Hermione, despite his reliance upon her. He's filled with conflicted and confused emotions.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Severus does have so many more people on his side than he realizes, though when he gets into one of his moods, he rejects even the belief in those who he knows care for him, even Hermione, despite his reliance upon her. He's filled with conflicted and confused emotions.Thanks for reviewing!
The scene between Albus and Severus was so touching. You are making me cry too much, Lady! It was so heart-wrenching to see that father, son relationship they have come to the surface. Especially when Severus held Albus' hand to his face. *sniff, sniff* Severus seemed more in touch with his emotions in this chapter and, like many of us, could avoid his feelings by focusing on something else. I liked the interaction of Murdoch and Poppy, though you can tell they aren't together any longer, which is sad. At least it felt that way. I had high hopes for them.The part about Draco and Hogwarts' heart was neat. I was a little surprised that Minerva took him there, but it would be an excellent place to hide him -- well -- that or Albus' old rooms. Minerva was right though, a true Death Eater would not have given her their wand.Somehow I feel something is amiss with Melina. I know she is a healer, but that last conversation seemed a little odd. I noticed that Robbie cut off before he said what Melina was doing. I wonder what she was doing, hmmm.You are tricky, but I have a thought or two.Cheers,Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Sorry about making you cry! (Kind of. )I'm glad you liked the interaction between Severus and Albus. Poor Severus.Yes, Robert changed what he was about to say -- rather than saying what Melina was almost finished with, he said something about it not being much longer. Minerva knew what Melina was doing, so he didn't have to say.Draco in Hogwarts' Heart was a way of getting him off-balance, of having Minerva establish control, and of confronting him with what Hogwarts meant to him, and it's a very good place to hide him. For many reasons, Minerva would not take him to Albus's old rooms. Those have the great advantage of being known to very few people and accessible to fewer -- and many people who are aware of their existence haven't thought about them in years. It's also much easier to secure Draco in the Heart, since he'd have to try to exit through the Headmistress's office.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Sorry about making you cry! (Kind of. )I'm glad you liked the interaction between Severus and Albus. Poor Severus.Yes, Robert changed what he was about to say -- rather than saying what Melina was almost finished with, he said something about it not being much longer. Minerva knew what Melina was doing, so he didn't have to say.Draco in Hogwarts' Heart was a way of getting him off-balance, of having Minerva establish control, and of confronting him with what Hogwarts meant to him, and it's a very good place to hide him. For many reasons, Minerva would not take him to Albus's old rooms. Those have the great advantage of being known to very few people and accessible to fewer -- and many people who are aware of their existence haven't thought about them in years. It's also much easier to secure Draco in the Heart, since he'd have to try to exit through the Headmistress's office.
Oh, the patronus scene was wonderful! There wasn't enough Hermione in this chapter IMHO, but she certainly was important. I'm beginning to wonder in this chapter if Robbie is trying to give Severus some clues. Poor Sev; you're doing an amazing job showing us what his life as a spy is like, while wallking the line of TMI.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Robbie has only said what he believes will give Severus assistance in his work -- any clues about anything that Severus does not know could be fatal to Severus, so he wouldn't intentionally give him any clues about what Severus might not know. He is occasionally a little freer with hiim -- when Robbie is feeling particularly moved for some reason, or is tired.I'm glad you liked the Patronus. I thought it was about time he moved on. Thanks very much!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Robbie has only said what he believes will give Severus assistance in his work -- any clues about anything that Severus does not know could be fatal to Severus, so he wouldn't intentionally give him any clues about what Severus might not know. He is occasionally a little freer with hiim -- when Robbie is feeling particularly moved for some reason, or is tired.I'm glad you liked the Patronus. I thought it was about time he moved on. Thanks very much!
Another excellent, hard chapter, though not as hard as some. I'm surprised Minerva said as much to Severus as she did re Albus and his death. So Severus now believes that she put Albus out of his misery some days b/4 he would have died otherwise. His estimation of her 'mettle' must have just increased geometrically.I loved her wearing her Headmistress robe when she brings him to heel at 2 am. Echoes of her audience w/ Moody.Those two scenes, combined w/ the losses he knows she's suffered at the toe-rag's hands--Malcolm, Gertrude's disabling and exile, Quin, Albus indirectly, and many others--I'm surprised he doubts her ability to be ruthless! Especially if her students are threatened, not to mention her friends and colleagues and, ahem, Robbie. He still underestimates her, methinks.The massage scene--what everybody else has said. Amazing. I also like the way Poppy subtly uses her knowledge of the Adfectus experience to manip, err, coaxe Severus to do things when he balks--esp. her telling him which nutritional potion was Minerva's favourite. Knowing that even his fair strong Minerva takes nutritional potions regularly enough to have a favourite will surely make it go down better. (I am surprised, however, that she hasn't had Severus, Robbie or Murdoch concoct a 'mixed seafood grill' flavour ) Poppy's offering to have him Obliviate her if it would free him to seek her therapeutic counsel was also quite loving.While Severus is quite harsh w/ Lupin, he sort of deserves it, and given Severus's family history, it's understandable. Also very commendable of SS-he's still on his 'making amends' trajectory.The prophecy....hmm...depending on how one counts things, we have at least two snakes in play, one or two lionesses, and one or two phoenixes. Makes deciphering it rather difficult!
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Yes, I think Severus does underestimate her, much as he does Poppy, confusing the ability to care and have compassion with the inability to be ruthless under the right circumstances. Poppy was not consciously using her knowledge of the Adfectus on Severus. Threatening to call Minerva if he didn't let her give him a massage was just the old "Headmistress trump card" -- she would have used Albus back in the day.Over the past 40+ years, Minerva has had to occasionally had to take nutritional potions, and she isn't partial to sweets, hence the spinach & veg potion to give her some variety. Hmmmm . . . fish flavor. Maybe something that tastes of New England clam chowder? Better warmed up than chilled? Of course, if you were taking nutritional potion and had any tummy upset, I'm not too sure how well that would sit . . . heheheh. But Popy knowing how well Severus respects Minerva, even aside from the Adfectus, one of the few (perhaps only) people he seems willing to obey. Even Gareth has noticed -- he says something about it a couple chapters ago. He says, "You are loyal to Minerva." He doesn't say, "to the Order" or anything similar, but "Minerva." (And Gareth doesn't know about the Adfectus, though Minerva did tell Gertrude for her Arithmancy -- Minerva didn't think it would sit well with Gareth back then, and now there is no need to tell him.)Yeah, Severus was trying to help Lupin (and his family), though his manner is a bit harsh. In a way, that's what Lupin needed, though. (Do you think it mere coincidence that Lupin decided to stay to have a cup of tea after he learned that Buckbeak had been fed? Think he might have wanted to talk to Snape? Maybe . . .)And you're right, deciphering the prophecy is rather difficult. But that's kinda the way with prophecies. Almost Pythian . . . but hopefully they'll do a better job of interpretation than Croesus! haha!Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
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Speaking of Severus....I went back and re-read the previous chapter too, and the way Robbie calls the temporarily-euphoric Severus "son" leapt out at me. Obviously it went over SS's head at the time, unfortunately, or else he might realize more of the level of Robbie's affection and regard for him. Robbie is a man of few words so I don't think any of them is insignificant.Since Albus also considered Severus like a son--c.f. the watch--that got me thinking...back in AAoL, Albus wasn't just watching another man, a friend, colleague and protege, moon over and ultimately have sex with his wife. He was watching someone he truly loved like a son. It's no wonder he was upset for all the reasons he was, but it also must have been almost squick-y. A bit less so for Minerva, b/c I don't think, while she loves Severus, she's every felt *quite as* maternal towards him as Albus did paternal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yep, you're right, that was there, too, but it didn't bear examination for Albus. Too weird and a little squicky for him.I think that, perhaps oddly, Minerva's feelings toward Severus have grown more maternal since the Adfectus -- in the sense that she feels more warmly affectionate toward him and wants to take care of and protect him. I believe Robbie says something similar to Severus after Severus arrived by Portkey and landed in Minerva's office.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, I think Severus does underestimate her, much as he does Poppy, confusing the ability to care and have compassion with the inability to be ruthless under the right circumstances. Poppy was not consciously using her knowledge of the Adfectus on Severus. Threatening to call Minerva if he didn't let her give him a massage was just the old "Headmistress trump card" -- she would have used Albus back in the day.Over the past 40+ years, Minerva has had to occasionally had to take nutritional potions, and she isn't partial to sweets, hence the spinach & veg potion to give her some variety. Hmmmm . . . fish flavor. Maybe something that tastes of New England clam chowder? Better warmed up than chilled? Of course, if you were taking nutritional potion and had any tummy upset, I'm not too sure how well that would sit . . . heheheh. But Popy knowing how well Severus respects Minerva, even aside from the Adfectus, one of the few (perhaps only) people he seems willing to obey. Even Gareth has noticed -- he says something about it a couple chapters ago. He says, "You are loyal to Minerva." He doesn't say, "to the Order" or anything similar, but "Minerva." (And Gareth doesn't know about the Adfectus, though Minerva did tell Gertrude for her Arithmancy -- Minerva didn't think it would sit well with Gareth back then, and now there is no need to tell him.)Yeah, Severus was trying to help Lupin (and his family), though his manner is a bit harsh. In a way, that's what Lupin needed, though. (Do you think it mere coincidence that Lupin decided to stay to have a cup of tea after he learned that Buckbeak had been fed? Think he might have wanted to talk to Snape? Maybe . . .)And you're right, deciphering the prophecy is rather difficult. But that's kinda the way with prophecies. Almost Pythian . . . but hopefully they'll do a better job of interpretation than Croesus! haha!Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
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Speaking of Severus....I went back and re-read the previous chapter too, and the way Robbie calls the temporarily-euphoric Severus "son" leapt out at me. Obviously it went over SS's head at the time, unfortunately, or else he might realize more of the level of Robbie's affection and regard for him. Robbie is a man of few words so I don't think any of them is insignificant.Since Albus also considered Severus like a son--c.f. the watch--that got me thinking...back in AAoL, Albus wasn't just watching another man, a friend, colleague and protege, moon over and ultimately have sex with his wife. He was watching someone he truly loved like a son. It's no wonder he was upset for all the reasons he was, but it also must have been almost squick-y. A bit less so for Minerva, b/c I don't think, while she loves Severus, she's every felt *quite as* maternal towards him as Albus did paternal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yep, you're right, that was there, too, but it didn't bear examination for Albus. Too weird and a little squicky for him.I think that, perhaps oddly, Minerva's feelings toward Severus have grown more maternal since the Adfectus -- in the sense that she feels more warmly affectionate toward him and wants to take care of and protect him. I believe Robbie says something similar to Severus after Severus arrived by Portkey and landed in Minerva's office.
Alright, at the moment I have so many thoughts running around in my head. And I am waaaaaaay too tired to be thinking this hard. I marvel at your ingenuity and the complexity of your plot. I believe I also told you I identify more with Watson than with Holmes, therefore I am afraid to voice some of my opinions for fear they are probably wrong.On that note, I will say that I think the fact that, at the beginning, it is pointed out how dark and gloomy Minerva always seems to keep her quarters struck me. I keep wondering about it. I also wonder about the over-heard conversation between Robbie and Minerva by Severus. I do believe they did that intentionally. Minerva mentioned before that she times when people approah, I would have to think she would also do it when they leave. And I don't think she allowed enough time for him to get to the bottom of the stairs before they said anything.
I am happy that they found the diadem and am captivated by the fact that Minerva encouraged Hermione to befriend Severus and at how worried he was about her when she destroyed the horcrux. He seems to be fighting an inner battle. Hmm... Now on to Robbie. The more you describe him the more I think of Albus. And then, there at the end, Minerva sounds a lot like Albus also. But I am reserving any further thoughts on this for the time being.Last, I am bringing out the mob again... Quin!!?? What did they do to him? This just isn't fair... it ISN'T I tell you! WWWWWAAAAHHHHHHH!! You know he is my most favoritest wizard. I think you have broken my heart. I could kill Voldemort myself. *clears throat*Umm, Severus and his whole deathwish thing is REALLY getting on my nerves. Somebody needs to jerk a knot in his shorts, dang it! Here we go with the roller coaster ride again. *Sighs and repeats mantra over and over... * I am upset, but I trust you. And so *sniff* I shall proceed *sniff*Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, proceed, trust, and keep a handkerchief or box of tissues by your computer. But keep trusting!I know -- poor Quin! Death is bad, but his fate was pretty nasty, too. But you'll learn more! I hope your heart isn't permanently broken! Interesting observations about Minerva and Robbie.Well, my eyes are closing, and my brain has pretty much shut itself down for the night, so I guess I should shut down the computer, too. Thanks for the review, and just remember your mantra!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Yes, proceed, trust, and keep a handkerchief or box of tissues by your computer. But keep trusting!I know -- poor Quin! Death is bad, but his fate was pretty nasty, too. But you'll learn more! I hope your heart isn't permanently broken! Interesting observations about Minerva and Robbie.Well, my eyes are closing, and my brain has pretty much shut itself down for the night, so I guess I should shut down the computer, too. Thanks for the review, and just remember your mantra!
I like Poppy in this chapter. She is just caring for him with no other agenda.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked Poppy.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked Poppy.
I really like the interaction between them both in this chapter. I find the fact that Severus is enjoying her company, more as time moves on, very endearing. It makes him seem more down to Earth, or as much as he can be.I love the thought of him being her "Guardian Angel in Black." I think you should coin that phrase, or has it already been done? *shrugs* I am glad the 'new' trio didn't go to Albania. I was worried about how they would get back into the country. And, I am looking forward to Severus and Hermione's trip into the chamber. I also want to know more about Minerva and Robbie's relationship. Guess I shall keep going, I still have a bit to go through, lucky me.Cheers,Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I'm glad you like their interactions in this chapter.I've never heard him called a Guardian Angel in Black before, though it's possibly been done by others; it was an image that came to me when I was writing Hermione in chapter 6, and so I'm glad you like it!Yup, you do have a bit to go, and as the story progresses, the chapters get longer, so you have a lot to look forward to. (I hope!)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
I'm glad you like their interactions in this chapter.I've never heard him called a Guardian Angel in Black before, though it's possibly been done by others; it was an image that came to me when I was writing Hermione in chapter 6, and so I'm glad you like it!Yup, you do have a bit to go, and as the story progresses, the chapters get longer, so you have a lot to look forward to. (I hope!)Thanks for reviewing!
Thank you for updating! A very dark chapter with tints of strange coloured light, but good even though dreadful things occurred. I like Remus' appearance, even if he is quite ineffectual. Also, Poppy's appearance provided a nice lull from the dark disasters (if only Harry would think matters through! And Severus.); it is a shame that her character never was developed more. The focus on the toll that this is taking on Severus is interesting, and quite necessary, especially as he already fears failing - oclumency, etc. It is too bad, though quite understandable, that he will not allow anyone to help him, as without help, his failure becomes more likely. I like the prophecy. Presumably, as Sybil looked at him, it involves Severus - unless it involves multiple people, I guess that I know who the other two may be. Shall we ever know exactly, or will it ever only be conjecture? Thank you so much for updating! Waiting and attempting to be patient.
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Oh, and I believe that Minerva can be very ruthless, indeed, when necessity requires it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
!Of course I put in the prophecy just to tease you and you'll never ever know what it means! LOL! It certainly does seem to involve multiple people, but why only three? Rather ambiguous, these prophecy things . . . Glad you like it!Severus is getting some help despite himself. Poppy helped him, and he was certainly better off after than before, and simply having people around him who express faith in him is of some help. Not as much as he could get, but as Minerva tells him, he's not as alone as he feels.Thanks for your patience! I appreciate it! (And the review!)
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Response from BlackTea (Reviewer)
Oh, and I believe that Minerva can be very ruthless, indeed, when necessity requires it.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Hi,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
!Of course I put in the prophecy just to tease you and you'll never ever know what it means! LOL! It certainly does seem to involve multiple people, but why only three? Rather ambiguous, these prophecy things . . . Glad you like it!Severus is getting some help despite himself. Poppy helped him, and he was certainly better off after than before, and simply having people around him who express faith in him is of some help. Not as much as he could get, but as Minerva tells him, he's not as alone as he feels.Thanks for your patience! I appreciate it! (And the review!)
Hermione and Severus, discussing internal Transfiguration and other things, seemed so "normal" in the way that friends can sit around discussing whatever they want. Snape needed it too, even if it was a brief "brain holiday". Poor guy keeps having shit day after shit days, doesn't he?
Gareth and Severus at lunch is fascinating on so many levels (I see why you like writing Gareth as an OC so much!), and then again later, when Snape has a bath and tea. Very funny that Gareth warns him not to challenge Poppy or Minerva (personal experience perhaps, or is he remembering his Mom as well?)
BTW, will we get to see Gertrude again? Not at all because I want to view her in a broken state, but rather because she is still fighting in her own way against Voldy. I imagine that Malcolm (and Reg) are pleased watching from wherever Griffies go to play in the next life.
Speaking of Voldy...his "burning" of Lucius' Dark-mark while the poor guy languishes in Azkaban sounds about right--the "toe-rag" (TR?!) probably pulls the wings off houseflies too. Jerk.
I too wondered about the use of the Fidelius Charm by JKR, and its loopholes, etc. IMO, this is one of several occasions that she came up with a great plot device (like the mirror of Erised and/or Dementors) but then violated her own rules later on (sort of). There is an article at the HP lexicon that is quite good.
I still love "Robbie" and the initials "abd"...heh. Someone was almost through a Ph.D. program. *snerk*
Poor Blaise. Gotta go read the next bit first!
Before I forget, CFP
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
BTW, will we get to see Gertrude again? Not at all because I want to view her in a broken state, but rather because she is still fighting in her own way against Voldy.We just may! I too wondered about the use of the Fidelius Charm by JKR, and its loopholes, etc. IMO, this is one of several occasions that she came up with a great plot device (like the mirror of Erised and/or Dementors) but then violated her own rules later on (sort of). The Fidelius Charm will be discussed again in a future chapter, and I've disregarded the stuff in DH about it and tried to make it fit with the rules that I've gleaned from the previous books, trying to make it consistent.The "abd" is not "a" space, space, "bd"; it's "abd" -- the beginning of a word. (You're not the only one who thought it was some part of his initials.) And it ain't "All But Dissertaion," either! LOL!I'm glad that you like Gareth here! He is fun to write, and it kind of makes up for losing Malcolm, although Malcolm is different, and he's still my favorite."CFR"! --MMADfan
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BTW, will we get to see Gertrude again? Not at all because I want to view her in a broken state, but rather because she is still fighting in her own way against Voldy.We just may! I too wondered about the use of the Fidelius Charm by JKR, and its loopholes, etc. IMO, this is one of several occasions that she came up with a great plot device (like the mirror of Erised and/or Dementors) but then violated her own rules later on (sort of). The Fidelius Charm will be discussed again in a future chapter, and I've disregarded the stuff in DH about it and tried to make it fit with the rules that I've gleaned from the previous books, trying to make it consistent.The "abd" is not "a" space, space, "bd"; it's "abd" -- the beginning of a word. (You're not the only one who thought it was some part of his initials.) And it ain't "All But Dissertaion," either! LOL!I'm glad that you like Gareth here! He is fun to write, and it kind of makes up for losing Malcolm, although Malcolm is different, and he's still my favorite."CFR"! --MMADfan
There is just too much to digest in this feast to make a snap review. Thanks for updating. It is worth the wait, but then I knew it would be.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you! I'm glad it was worth the wait!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Death's Dominion)
Thank you! I'm glad it was worth the wait!