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Phantom of Hogwarts
Good_Witch1,533 Reviews | 7.33/10 (1,533 Ratings, 0 Likes, 788 Favorites )
*NOW COMPLETE* How in the world does Hogwarts come to be doing a performance of The Phantom of the Opera? And just why is Snape so pissed about it?
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I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY
Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts
ooh! very nice! (y) having your trousers so low is a compromising situation, especially with Minerva, student or not, it's sure to impress. lol.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
BWAHAHAHA!! I couldn't help but grin like a maniac when Minerva showed up like that. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Deborahs_Conscience (Reviewer)
I was inspired by a scene in this chapter that i couldn't stop myself from drawing it. i hope you like it. If you like it, think of it as a thank you, if you don't then please let me know and i'll fix it. (i'm sorry Hermione looks a bit strange, wasn't intentional; its not because i'm jealous or anything )http://deborahs-conscience.deviantart.com/art/75-Consummation-135059219
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Awww, that's awesome! *beams* They look so sweet! And their cheeks are all rosy... *giggle* Thank you for sharing that with us. :)
love that they where finally able to show their love the most profound way.what a surprise at the door....can't wait to hear what she says.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* It was "finally" in many ways, LOL. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Minerva nearly got an eyeful! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*sporfle* I couldn't help it! It's just too much fun! LOL!!! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Consummation! At last! At LAST!!This first night in their home has surely been worth all the drama they have gone through during the past few hours. And even though they have now consummated their relationship, Hermione is no longer a student, and under Veritaserum, Severus could still testify that they had not had intercourse before she had finished school, and she was not a student nor a minor when they did. Besides, Dumbledore has seen for himself that Severus is very serious about his love for Hermione and his intention to protect her from all perils. For herself, Hermione has made it clear that she is completely in love with Severus and intends to spend her life with him as his wife.Now there's Minerva. What a shock it was for Severus to find her standing on his doorstep first thing in the morning. Hopefully she has come to understand their relationship through having heard what Ginny and Dumbledore have had to say. As important as Dumbledore's support for them will be where the Ministry is concerned, I think on a personal level, support from Minerva would mean the world to them both and especially so for Severus.Thank you for such a fabulous update! I can't wait to see what happens next.Beth
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*falls over. iz ded* Wow! What a fantastic review! And you hit SOOO many nails on the head! *bounces happily* Give the pretty lady a prize! :D At LAST, indeed... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! Yea! So excited you updated!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL I'm pretty excited about it too! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Question: Do you know not how to end on a cliff-hanger leaving your poor readers desperate for more?I love that their first time is real, I'm so tired of these romance-novel perfect sex scenes. Poor Severus is going to get such an earful, especially since he's almost naked!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL I'm sorry about yet another evil cliffy, but it would have detracted from the chapter about the two of them if I had continued and added Minerva to the mix. As for the realistic first time... *happy dances* I love that you enjoyed it! I feel the same way about the perfect-first-time sex and I wanted it to be believable. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
yay! finally the "consumation devoutly to be wished" lovely thanks muchly
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!!!!!!! Shakespeare reference FTW! ;) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Hehehehehe... lets hope that Hermione is more modest when she wakes up, lol.But I really hope that Minerva has some form of grudging acceptance... and that she's just there to threaten Severus with looking after her Gryffindor... I mean, if she didn't have her wand trained on him when he opened the door... I can only hope that Ginny got through to her.Very hot chapter :DOh.... I hate RL and having no time to write!!! *Sighs* I will do my best to be patient for the next chapter!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!!!!!! Oh, you're baaaad... I love it! ;) Minerva needs a chapter all her own, I daresay. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
Oh, don't get me wrong... as much as I would like to know what Ginny etc said to Minerva... please, not a whole chapter... that would be... be torture or something. Not because of the chapter itslef, but because that chapter would retract from Hermione waking up and finding Severus gone... and Severus desperately trying to do up his trousers ;p and and and and and and and and...*sulks* *perks up*Unless, of course, you manage to write 2 chapters ;p 1 for Minerva, and 1 continuing on... both loaded at the same time. It would be like an orgy of PoH!!! Ooooh, I like that idea very muchly :D*ponders of the ethical use of Imperio*
Er ... I haven't finished the chapter yet but I'm confused. I thought they were waiting to allow Dumbledore to straighten everything out before they consummated their love? I thought Dumbles said the fact Hermione was still a virgin might come in handy in his efforts? I have to go back and re-read the big HG/SS/AD confrontation first. I must have missed something. But if I didn't they must have even more troubles ahead for them now, right? That would be fine with me - I never want this story to end!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Ah, you're missing the crucial piece: they're out of Hogwarts now. :D AD will be working to quell the uproar by being able to vouch that they never had sex (in the very limited, PIV sense) while she was a student or even at Hogwarts as a guest (as Snape described since she was still there although she was done, but was waiting to do the performance). When they leave, they're both consenting (and engaged now!) adults in their own home, so that part's irrelevant to the question of their relationship while at school. :) It's all very precise (in my crazy head). LOL Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Response from ladyljd (Reviewer)
Gotcha ... kinda! Now that I've read the chapter I love how you managed to "keep it real" as a first time experience for them. Now I'm really curious to see what happens next with Minerva. She was such a Snape supporther throughout this year. It will be awful to watch if she chooses to shun him over this.As usual, you've managed to leave us wanting more. I hope RL allows you to relieve our cliff-hanging before the holidays!
Amazing!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Look what I found this morning...a new chapter YAY!....of all people to show up at the door Minerva was not one I expected lol. As always my dear GW just pure magic.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I know, I'm evil incarnate sometimes. *snerk* But it's so much fun!!! Glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! OMGOSH!! AT LAST!!! WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL!!! WHOOHOO......This was WONDERFUL...I LOVED IT!! I'm sure you can tell!! LOL!!!! I'm so glad they are finally together...Now what in the world does Minerva want? Oh dear I hope it isn't bad!!! MORE...MORE....MORE!!! WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I daresay Minerva wants and explanation! ;) Glad you enjoyed it, darlin! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
woah! not minerva! ugh how awkward lol!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*gigglesnort* I know! I couldn't help it! hehehe Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I was almost drooling while reading:-) Though, like Severus, Minerva knocking on the door, getting an eyefull, cools one down rather quickly:-))
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
BWAHAHAHA!!! I love it! Dont drool onto your keyboard--wouldn't want it to short out! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I gotta love a wake up call like that!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Amen, sista. Amen! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
*giggle*Of course it's Minerva.Oh, Sev, you should have known.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Of course! ROFL!!! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Always worth the wait for an update on this one, you never disappoint. Really enjoyed it, almost as much as they did ;o)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
BWHAHAHAHA!!! *cough* Well, I'm glad you liked it. ;) Need a tissue too? *snort* Thanks so much for reviewing1 :)
Well Minerva has got an eye full hasn't she lol.Great chapter, lucky Hermione being woken up like that.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Lucky Hermione, indeed! *is envious* ;) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
This was everything I thought it would b! Great Job!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Excellent! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I guessed Dumbledore would understand in the end. I do hope Minerva understands too. I'm sure the Grangers will accept Severus, won't they? If not well tough hehe.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
It was a tough sell, but it worked out. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Nice, smutty-sweet chapter. I loved it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wicked grin* Excellent! I enjoyed writing it, that's for sure. *whistles innocently* LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Great chapter, and I loved the lemony scene even though it did get a little angsty. Hermione and Severus needed to have that discussion so they could move on and learn to please one another without having any reservations.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Yeah, I didn't want first-time stuff to be all instantly perfect, as that's not the way it works in real life! LOL!!! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Indeed, Ginny could be quite helpful if they allow her to. Looks like Hermione is finally going to get her night alone with Sev. Lucky girl.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Lucky girl indeed. Ginny is my shameless self-insertion, as she is the most like me. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
well, that went better than i anticipated. great update. thanks so much and i look forward to the next confrontation.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wow, Dumbledore took that better than expected, only a few curses! haha I can't wait to see how Severus handled the parents. This is going to be very interesting.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL Yeah, her parents are scarier than AD since Snape actually cares what they think! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)