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Phantom of Hogwarts

1: 1- And So It Begins...

2: 2- Can You Hear the Caged Gryffindor Sing?

3: 3- From the Dungeons, the Angel of Potions

4: 4- Old Friends, New Lovers?

5: 5- Overture

6: 6- Research and Revelations

7: 7- At the Other End of the Castle...

8: 8- Establishing Relationships

9: 9- Stunning Sights and Shocking Realizations

10: 10- Decisions and Denial

11: 11- Surprises at the First Rehearsal *part one*

12: 11- Surprises at the First Rehearsal *part two*

13: 12- Consequences and Costumes

14: 13- Detention with the Phantom

15: 14- Mistakes and Misery

16: 15- Epiphanies and Elation

17: 16- Trouble, Transfiguration, and Treats

18: 17- Rehearsal and Acting

19: 18 - A Solution for Staging

20: 19- Anticipation

21: 20- Dinner with the Grangers

22: 21- The Play and Dessert

23: 22- A Hard Day's Night

24: 23- The Next Morning... Ready For Breakfast?

25: 24- Behind the Scenes and In the Pensieve

26: 25- Suspicions

27: 26- Clarification, and Dumbledore's Great Idea

28: 27- Secret and Not-So-Secret Santas

29: 28- Preparations

30: 29- Crisis Averted

31: 30- Correspondence

32: 31- Game On, a Row, and More Rehearsal

33: 32- Christmas is Coming

34: 33- Christmas and the Cast Party- part 1 of 2

35: 33- Christmas and the Cast Party- part 2 of 2

36: 34- Found Out!

37: 35- All Good Parties Must Come to an End

38: 36- Alone At Last

39: 37- Taking Baby Steps

40: 38- Post-Holiday Blues and a Hanging

41: 39- Unwelcome Encounters and Welcome Research

42: 40- A Kiss Is Not Just a Kiss

43: 41- Bubble, Bubble, Toil and Trouble

44: 42- Concessions and Confessions

45: 43- Birthday Surprise

46: 44- Questions and Answers

47: 45- Apparition Practice and an Introduction

48: 46- Getting to Know You

49: 47- A History Lesson

50: 48- Fathers and Sons

51: 49- Growing

52: 50- Point of No Return

53: 51- Trepidation and Plans

54: 52- Valentine's Day... of Doom? Part One of Two

55: 52- Valentine's Day... of Doom? Part Two of Two

56: 53- Aftermath

57: 54- Unfogging the Future

58: 55- Pieces Come Together

59: 56- Trying New Things

60: 57- Betrayal

61: 58- So Far, and yet, So Close: Part One

62: 58- So Far, and yet, So Close: Part Two

63: 59- Of Guilt and Friendship

64: 60- Mirror, Mirror, on the Stage...

65: 61- Progress

66: 62- Home Stretch

67: 63- Showtime!

68: 64- Competition

69: 65- Home Sweet Home?

70: 66- Bravi, Bravi, Bravissimi...

71: 67- Of Victory and Triumphs

72: 68- Countdown

73: 69- Next Step: Adulthood

74: 70- Of Magically Binding Things

75: 71- Confrontation

76: 72- Condemnation

77: 73- Conciliation

78: 74- Conversation and Consideration

79: 75- Consummation

80: 76- Combustion

81: 77- Cohabitation

82: 78- Castigation

83: 79- Culmination

84: 80- Epilogue

Phantom of Hogwarts

Good_Witch

1,533 Reviews   |   1,533 Ratings, 0 Likes, 788 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 668,038 Words 85 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Neville Longbottom Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Parvati Patil

*NOW COMPLETE* How in the world does Hogwarts come to be doing a performance of The Phantom of the Opera? And just why is Snape so pissed about it?

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Chapters (84)

Chapter 1: 1- And So It Begins...

Chapter 2: 2- Can You Hear the Caged Gryffindor Sing?

Chapter 3: 3- From the Dungeons, the Angel of Potions

Chapter 4: 4- Old Friends, New Lovers?

Chapter 5: 5- Overture

Chapter 6: 6- Research and Revelations

Chapter 7: 7- At the Other End of the Castle...

Chapter 8: 8- Establishing Relationships

Chapter 9: 9- Stunning Sights and Shocking Realizations

Chapter 10: 10- Decisions and Denial

Chapter 11: 11- Surprises at the First Rehearsal *part one*

Chapter 12: 11- Surprises at the First Rehearsal *part two*

Chapter 13: 12- Consequences and Costumes

Chapter 14: 13- Detention with the Phantom

Chapter 15: 14- Mistakes and Misery

Chapter 16: 15- Epiphanies and Elation

Chapter 17: 16- Trouble, Transfiguration, and Treats

Chapter 18: 17- Rehearsal and Acting

Chapter 19: 18 - A Solution for Staging

Chapter 20: 19- Anticipation

Chapter 21: 20- Dinner with the Grangers

Chapter 22: 21- The Play and Dessert

Chapter 23: 22- A Hard Day's Night

Chapter 24: 23- The Next Morning... Ready For Breakfast?

Chapter 25: 24- Behind the Scenes and In the Pensieve

Chapter 26: 25- Suspicions

Chapter 27: 26- Clarification, and Dumbledore's Great Idea

Chapter 28: 27- Secret and Not-So-Secret Santas

Chapter 29: 28- Preparations

Chapter 30: 29- Crisis Averted

Chapter 31: 30- Correspondence

Chapter 32: 31- Game On, a Row, and More Rehearsal

Chapter 33: 32- Christmas is Coming

Chapter 34: 33- Christmas and the Cast Party- part 1 of 2

Chapter 35: 33- Christmas and the Cast Party- part 2 of 2

Chapter 36: 34- Found Out!

Chapter 37: 35- All Good Parties Must Come to an End

Chapter 38: 36- Alone At Last

Chapter 39: 37- Taking Baby Steps

Chapter 40: 38- Post-Holiday Blues and a Hanging

Chapter 41: 39- Unwelcome Encounters and Welcome Research

Chapter 42: 40- A Kiss Is Not Just a Kiss

Chapter 43: 41- Bubble, Bubble, Toil and Trouble

Chapter 44: 42- Concessions and Confessions

Chapter 45: 43- Birthday Surprise

Chapter 46: 44- Questions and Answers

Chapter 47: 45- Apparition Practice and an Introduction

Chapter 48: 46- Getting to Know You

Chapter 49: 47- A History Lesson

Chapter 50: 48- Fathers and Sons

Chapter 51: 49- Growing

Chapter 52: 50- Point of No Return

Chapter 53: 51- Trepidation and Plans

Chapter 54: 52- Valentine's Day... of Doom? Part One of Two

Chapter 55: 52- Valentine's Day... of Doom? Part Two of Two

Chapter 56: 53- Aftermath

Chapter 57: 54- Unfogging the Future

Chapter 58: 55- Pieces Come Together

Chapter 59: 56- Trying New Things

Chapter 60: 57- Betrayal

Chapter 61: 58- So Far, and yet, So Close: Part One

Chapter 62: 58- So Far, and yet, So Close: Part Two

Chapter 63: 59- Of Guilt and Friendship

Chapter 64: 60- Mirror, Mirror, on the Stage...

Chapter 65: 61- Progress

Chapter 66: 62- Home Stretch

Chapter 67: 63- Showtime!

Chapter 68: 64- Competition

Chapter 69: 65- Home Sweet Home?

Chapter 70: 66- Bravi, Bravi, Bravissimi...

Chapter 71: 67- Of Victory and Triumphs

Chapter 72: 68- Countdown

Chapter 73: 69- Next Step: Adulthood

Chapter 74: 70- Of Magically Binding Things

Chapter 75: 71- Confrontation

Chapter 76: 72- Condemnation

Chapter 77: 73- Conciliation

Chapter 78: 74- Conversation and Consideration

Chapter 79: 75- Consummation

Chapter 80: 76- Combustion

Chapter 81: 77- Cohabitation

Chapter 82: 78- Castigation

Chapter 83: 79- Culmination

Chapter 84: 80- Epilogue


About Good_Witch

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Good_Witch

Member Since 2005  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 360  |  32 Reviews Written  |  2,096 Review Responses

I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)

Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY 

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Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts

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10/10

Deborahs_Conscience

ooh! very nice! (y) having your trousers so low is a compromising situation, especially with Minerva, student or not, it's sure to impress. lol.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

BWAHAHAHA!!  I couldn't help but grin like a maniac when Minerva showed up like that.  Glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

Response from Deborahs_Conscience (Reviewer)

I was inspired by a scene in this chapter that i couldn't stop myself from drawing it. i hope you like it. If you like it, think of it as a thank you, if you don't then please let me know and i'll fix it. (i'm sorry Hermione looks a bit strange, wasn't intentional; its not because i'm jealous or anything )http://deborahs-conscience.deviantart.com/art/75-Consummation-135059219

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Awww, that's awesome!  *beams*  They look so sweet!  And their cheeks are all rosy...  *giggle*  Thank you for sharing that with us.  :)

10/10

ginnylovesharry07

love that they where finally able to show their love the most profound way.what a surprise at the door....can't wait to hear what she says.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*beams*  It was "finally" in many ways, LOL.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

sunny33

Minerva nearly got an eyeful! :)

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*sporfle*  I couldn't help it!  It's just too much fun!  LOL!!!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

braye27

Consummation!  At last!  At LAST!!This first night in their home has surely been worth all the drama they have gone through during the past few hours.  And even though they have now consummated their relationship, Hermione is no longer a student, and under Veritaserum, Severus could still testify that they had not had intercourse before she had finished school, and she was not a student nor a minor when they did.  Besides, Dumbledore has seen for himself that Severus is very serious about his love for Hermione and his intention to protect her from all perils.  For herself, Hermione has made it clear that she is completely in love with Severus and intends to spend her life with him as his wife.Now there's Minerva.  What a shock it was for Severus to find her standing on his doorstep first thing in the morning.  Hopefully she has come to understand their relationship through having heard what Ginny and Dumbledore have had to say.  As important as Dumbledore's support for them will be where the Ministry is concerned, I think on a personal level, support from Minerva would mean the world to them both and especially so for Severus.Thank you for such a fabulous update!  I can't wait to see what happens next.Beth

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*falls over.  iz ded*  Wow!  What a fantastic review!  And you hit SOOO many nails on the head!  *bounces happily*  Give the pretty lady a prize!  :D  At LAST, indeed...  LOL  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

Wench

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! Yea! So excited you updated!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL  I'm pretty excited about it too!  ;)  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

Selene

Question:  Do you know not how to end on a cliff-hanger leaving your poor readers desperate for more?I love that their first time is real, I'm so tired of these romance-novel perfect sex scenes.  Poor Severus is going to get such an earful, especially since he's almost naked!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL  I'm sorry about yet another evil cliffy, but it would have detracted from the chapter about the two of them if I had continued and added Minerva to the mix.  As for the realistic first time...  *happy dances*  I love that you enjoyed it!  I feel the same way about the perfect-first-time sex and I wanted it to be believable.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

kimjo2

yay!  finally the "consumation devoutly to be wished"  lovely thanks muchly

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

ROFL!!!!!!!!  Shakespeare reference FTW!  ;)  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

JTBJAB

Hehehehehe... lets hope that Hermione is more modest when she wakes up, lol.But I really hope that Minerva has some form of grudging acceptance... and that she's just there to threaten Severus with looking after her Gryffindor... I mean, if she didn't have her wand trained on him when he opened the door... I can only hope that Ginny got through to her.Very hot chapter :DOh.... I hate RL and having no time to write!!! *Sighs* I will do my best to be patient for the next chapter!!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

ROFL!!!!!!!  Oh, you're baaaad...  I love it!  ;)  Minerva needs a chapter all her own, I daresay.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)

Oh, don't get me wrong... as much as I would like to know what Ginny etc said to Minerva... please, not a whole chapter... that would be... be torture or something. Not because of the chapter itslef, but because that chapter would retract from Hermione waking up and finding Severus gone... and Severus desperately trying to do up his trousers ;p and and and and and and and and...*sulks* *perks up*Unless, of course, you manage to write 2 chapters ;p 1 for Minerva, and 1 continuing on... both loaded at the same time. It would be like an orgy of PoH!!! Ooooh, I like that idea very muchly :D*ponders of the ethical use of Imperio*

8/10

ladyljd

Er ... I haven't finished the chapter yet but I'm confused.  I thought they were waiting to allow Dumbledore to straighten everything out before they consummated their love?  I thought Dumbles said the fact Hermione was still a virgin might come in handy in his efforts?  I have to go back and re-read the big HG/SS/AD confrontation first.  I must have missed something.  But if I didn't they must have even more troubles ahead for them now, right?    That would be fine with me - I never want this story to end!!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Ah, you're missing the crucial piece: they're out of Hogwarts now.  :D  AD will be working to quell the uproar by being able to vouch that they never had sex (in the very limited, PIV sense) while she was a student or even at Hogwarts as a guest (as Snape described since she was still there although she was done, but was waiting to do the performance).  When they leave, they're both consenting (and engaged now!) adults in their own home, so that part's irrelevant to the question of their relationship while at school.  :)  It's all very precise (in my crazy head).  LOL  Thanks as always for reviewing!  :)

Response from ladyljd (Reviewer)

Gotcha ... kinda!  Now that I've read the chapter I love how you managed to "keep it real" as a first time experience for them.  Now I'm really curious to see what happens next with Minerva.  She was such a Snape supporther throughout this year.  It will be awful to watch if she chooses to shun him over this.As usual, you've managed to leave us wanting more.  I  hope RL allows you to relieve our cliff-hanging before the holidays!

10/10

laurenhermione

Amazing!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*beams*  Why, thank you!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

pip

Look what I found this morning...a new chapter YAY!....of all people to show up at the door Minerva was not one I expected lol. As always my dear GW just pure magic.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL!!!  I know, I'm evil incarnate sometimes.  *snerk*  But it's so much fun!!!  Glad you're still enjoying it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

Becky

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! OMGOSH!!  AT LAST!!!  WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL!!!  WHOOHOO......This was WONDERFUL...I LOVED IT!! I'm sure you can tell!! LOL!!!!  I'm so glad they are finally together...Now what in the world does Minerva want? Oh dear I hope it isn't bad!!!  MORE...MORE....MORE!!!  WELL WORTH THE WAIT!!!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL!!!  I daresay Minerva wants and explanation!  ;)  Glad you enjoyed it, darlin!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

keske

woah! not minerva! ugh how awkward lol!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*gigglesnort*  I know!  I couldn't help it!  hehehe  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I was almost drooling while reading:-) Though, like Severus, Minerva knocking on the door, getting an eyefull, cools one down rather quickly:-))

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

BWAHAHAHA!!!  I love it!  Dont drool onto your keyboard--wouldn't want it to short out!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

gifarlme

I gotta love a wake up call like that!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Amen, sista.  Amen!  LOL  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

JunoMagic

*giggle*Of course it's Minerva.Oh, Sev, you should have known.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Of course!  ROFL!!!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

bournespeed

Always worth the wait for an update on this one, you never disappoint.  Really enjoyed it, almost as much as they did ;o)

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

BWHAHAHAHA!!!  *cough*  Well, I'm glad you liked it.  ;)  Need a tissue too?  *snort*  Thanks so much for reviewing1  :)

10/10

Nessa

Well Minerva has got an eye full hasn't she lol.Great chapter, lucky Hermione being woken up like that.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Lucky Hermione, indeed!  *is envious*  ;)  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

Steph501

This was everything I thought it would b! Great Job!

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*beams*  Excellent!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

Nessa

I guessed Dumbledore would understand in the end. I do hope Minerva understands too. I'm sure the Grangers will accept Severus, won't they? If not well tough hehe.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

It was a tough sell, but it worked out.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

luvsev

Nice, smutty-sweet chapter. I loved it.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*wicked grin*  Excellent!  I enjoyed writing it, that's for sure.  *whistles innocently*  LOL  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

luvsev

Great chapter, and I loved the lemony scene even though it did get a little angsty. Hermione and Severus needed to have that discussion so they could move on and learn to please one another without having any reservations.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

Yeah, I didn't want first-time stuff to be all instantly perfect, as that's not the way it works in real life!  LOL!!!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

10/10

luvsev

Indeed, Ginny could be quite helpful if they allow her to. Looks like Hermione is finally going to get her night alone with Sev. Lucky girl.

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL  Lucky girl indeed.  Ginny is my shameless self-insertion, as she is the most like me.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

0/10

kimjo2

well, that went better than i anticipated.  great update.  thanks so much and i look forward to the next confrontation. 

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

*beams*  Glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

9/10

Kat7

Wow, Dumbledore took that better than expected, only a few curses! haha I can't wait to see how Severus handled the parents.  This is going to be very interesting. 

Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)

LOL  Yeah, her parents are scarier than AD since Snape actually cares what they think!  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)

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