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Phantom of Hogwarts
Good_Witch1,533 Reviews | 7.33/10 (1,533 Ratings, 0 Likes, 788 Favorites )
*NOW COMPLETE* How in the world does Hogwarts come to be doing a performance of The Phantom of the Opera? And just why is Snape so pissed about it?
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I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY
Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts
I don't like Albus anymore! How could he say that to Severus "you owe me"!! Severus had been his spy for half of his life...now I'm angry at Albus. Severus is going to get a big surprise when he visits Hermione. This is starting to get intense.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Yup, we're back on an upswing of the intensity factor. I'm sorry you don't like AD anymore, but this was a scene that was waiting for a long time to get here. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Great Story! I love it I love IT I LOVE IT!!!! I found nothing wrong with the ending. In Fact It was WONDERFUL! I can't wait for more. Thanks for sticking with it.~
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! Well, I know that some folks hate those kinds of cliffies, so I'll still consider myself prepared. So glad you're enjoying it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Squeeeee-licious!~LotmSmug Beta Git™
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aw, shucks, I bet you say that to all the authors... LOL!! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
*sniffy look* ...I only say that when it's deserved.More, dammit--pretty please? *flutters eyelashes*~Lotm
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! OMG...I LOVE IT!!! I cannot believe Dumbledore was so mean to Severus to not give him a good recommendation...Me thinks that barmy old man knows something. I hope Severus doesn't upset Hermione when he goes to see her. What a surprise he is going to find too....WHOA!!!OH YOU SNUCK this one in on me...THANK YOU!!! LOL!!!I LOVE IT!!! MORE, MORE, MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I promise I didn't do any sneaking; I posted about it on my LJ, honest! LOL So glad to see you here, darlin. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Loved it as usual. I'm so confused with Dumbledore though. Could you clear that up for me? I don't understand what went on between him and Snape....Thanks and I can't wait for the next chappie!Sarah*sulks away mumbling about evil cliffies*
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
To put it simply: when Slug and Jiggers contacted Dumbledore about Snape's employability, Dumbledore pretty much said that if they were to hire Snape out from under him, they'd lose all of Hogwarts' business (which is no doubt a sizable amount). At that point, they couldn't possibly hire Snape, even if they had wanted to. Dumbledore laid the threat down fast and thick. He's a self-serving manipulator of the highest order, in my opinion, so I feel it's IC. Sorry about the cliffie, but you have to admit that what Snape's gonna find when he gets there is gonna be plenty for a whole chapter in and of itself. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from FHisLife (Reviewer)
Thanks so much for clearing that up. I never was a big fan of Dumbledore. When Sirius died, I was bawling my eyes out. When Dumbledore died, I litterally said to myself, 'oh well, that's too bad.' I'm glad someone else shares my opinion ;) Hehehe....can't wait to see Snapes reaction to Hermione......teheheheheSarah
eeeeee! Evil cliffie!!! You wicked wicked wicked witch! aaaahhhh. Great chappie BTW and please send another as soon as possible, I gotta know what happens next . Dumbledore, huh of all the nerve, I have never not liked him until right now. Hermie needs to find out and get even with him for her man. Better yet let both of them plan the revenge mmmwwwwwaaaaaahhhhh. *rubs hands togather* Seriously tho, I hope he will get a certain come uppance. Absolutly love Phantom of Hogwarts. Please continue huggs
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Well, this chapter certainly set off a firestorm with people on all sorts of different sides about what Dumbledore did. I stand by my interpretation of him... LOL Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
BAD WITCH, BAD!!!!! (NOW TO LET OUT MY BREATH).....you naughty naughty witch....and not in a good way.....dumbledore is supposed to be the oblivious oddball nutcase not the bad guy! bad witch!. Why You so Mean? anyway.....see you on thursday....
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*grin* As we've since discussed, you and I have differing views on Dumbledore. LOL He's not all sweetness and light, I promise. *shakes head, glaring darkly* Oh, and it's C U Next Thursday! LOL ;)
That's a pretty evil cliffie there. After such a long time too. BAD GIRL! *pouts* Dumbledore is being awful! How could he do this to Severus. I must say though, it is nice to see a Dumbledore that just wants what's best for everyone, even if it's the prize student fucking her potion's professor. That never seemed very believable to me. Beautiful writing, as always.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Sorry about the cliffie and the delay, but as you can imagine, I was quite painstaking in writing much of this chapter, as I had to get it <i>just right</i>. As for AD, he may usually front that he wants what's best for everyone, but I really think that that's just because it'll best serve him, too. I truly don't think he's as fluffy as some might think. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
You did not just end it there, I cannot believe you would do this to us, you definately need to change the name from good witch to evil witch after this cliffy. Seriously, I am not sure how I feel about a self-serving dumbledore. Even though in cannon he is certainly selfish in many respects, I like my dumbledore to be caring and giving. But the story is still great and as always has me wishing the next chapter was waiting for me. I do have a question for you, do you think you will be finished before book 7 hits the shelves?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Re: finished before book 7--if I could hide out in a hotel and just write, a la JKR, maybe. As it is with work and school and life, not a chance. *sigh* Sorry! But, we're moving along faster timeline-wise now... *attempts winning smile* To be honest, I'm sort of glad that the thought of AD doing what he did makes people uncomfortable, simply b/c I want people to feel what the characters feel when something like this (which is all-too-human and happens in real life far too frequently) happens. AD is caring and giving, as long as it's beneficial to be so (which is usually the case, hence the shock of such a switch). Of course, that's my interpretation... LOL I had no idea just how <i>much</i> of a reaction this chapter would get after that scene, but it makes me happy if only for the fact that I love being able to affect people with what I write. *beams* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I'm on pins and needles over here now, reading this a third time through...Dumbledore's betrayal is so believable that it's uncanny...I just thoroughly believe he would and could do something like that, but it still smacks me upside the head...O_oI love it when a chapter can make me go "OOof!" even on a multiple reading!Can't wait for more, and to see what happens up in Hermione's room!~HR
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* You just made my day. Clearly, there are others who don't buy AD being so selfish and cold, but I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks he's got it hiding under that barmy twinkle. And I love that I've managed to affect you so much! *beams* Thanks so much for the feedback and for reviewing! :)
Oh, evil cliff-hanger! Dumbledore's a bit evil, too, in this story. He's been like a father to Severus, but many a loving parent has turned possessive and selfish from the fear of being old and alone. I'd like to think that's what's come over Albus, and not that he's maybe channeling Tom Riddle or something.
Anyway, another good chapter, Lady. Can hardly wait for the next.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!! No, not channelling Riddle. (Though, can you imagine what kind of rabid plot bunny THAT would be? *hides*) I firmly believe that AD is not all twinkling fluff and nice-nice. Everyone has a dark part in them. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Oh, no, I want to hug you fiercely and shake you by the shoulders for that CLIFFY!!!
Really, I do love you for the update, and thank you!!!
* bows low before your greatness*
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I'm sorry it was a cliffie, but everything that's gonna have to happen after Snape gets to Hermione's room is gonna need its own chapter... And you're sweet. *blush* You shouldn't be bowing, really. I'm just glad you're enjoying it! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
*squeaks in terror* Ohnoohnoohnoohno!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*facepalm while giggling and hearing "Mr. Bill" in her head* Sorry... I know that was way not what you meant. LOL Dunno if you should be terrified, but anxiety is def. in order. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
the next scene should be very interesting
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Indeed! *wicked grin* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Poor Severus... what an unexpected betrayal. Looking forward to more (and some cuddling 'n kissing with Hermione, of course!).
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Poor Severus, indeed. I had hoped that I got the intensity of his feelings across. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Oh, he's going to see her! I need the next chapter, ASAP!!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Working on it! *salutes* LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wow. I have to say that I didn't see that comming. I never would have expected that from Dumbledore.But what'll happen when Severus goes to see Hermione? I can't wait! You're doing an awesome job on this story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!! I'm pleased that I've managed to surprise folks even after all this time, but I had hoped that the stuff I've peppered in throughout might have given at least some inkling to his manipulative disposition. As for when he gets to her room... that's a whole 'nother chapter! LOL Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I didn't like the manipulative and selfish Dumbeldore, but this is your story.Anyway, I hope you update soon and the rest was good.Erica
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
We're not meant to LIKE AD being that way, as it's horrible. I would hope that people would dislike such a coldly scheming AD, but I stand by my belief that he has it in him. This scene has been in the works for a long time, and I had hoped that while it would be a surprise (because, really, who WANTS him to do that?), I had managed enough in all that has led up to now to give it a set up of sorts. Glad you enjoyed the rest, though! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OH SHIT!!!!
Now I know why your wringing your hands. That is so mean. He is going to feel so devasted by her and her extracurricular activities.. Oh how can you do this.... I can't stand the angst..
Okay please excuse the tirade above and the language. Trying to be better behaved. I was so tickled that you updated and then WHAM BAM I fell like Severus cause I know what he is going to find... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaahhhhhhhh
I am hoping you have the next 2 chapters read. Because after his discovering what she's doing I'm going to need that next chapter fast.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!! Okay, that was actually quite the satisfactory response. It's always nice to know when something you've written manages to hit someone in the gut like that. (Not that I want to cause pain, but... well, I'm sure you know what I mean!) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I'm in agreement with the reviewers that say Dumbledore is being a right bastard! Ack! The man's 40 years old, for crying out loud and he needs someone to guide him??And I'm wondering what's going to happen when he gets to Hermione's room. I really hope he doesn't take it badly. He deserves something good and getting his knickers in a knot will muck that up. Hopefully he just gets mucho turned on and decides that he can't wait for graduation....hint, hint.And BTW, I'd say that cliffie qualifies as felony calss cruel and unusual punishment....
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wails* I'm sorry! I don't mean to be cruel and unusual, honest! (It just comes naturally? LOL) Don't forget, in many ways, Snape has had a stunted growth--witness his adolescent angst and fumbling re: Hermione and relationships. Of course, I just see AD as a calculating manipulator, and this just happens to be one of the most painful examples of it. As for getting so turned on that Snape won't wait anymore... I got the hint. ROFL!!! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What is this? Having an anxiety attack over Book Seven coming out and you decided to take it out on Hermione and Severus? Gads, this is harsh, first the turn-down by Slug & Jiggers and then what the Old Man pulls on Severus. I truly empathize with his feeling that he wasn't "good enough" and to find out that it was Dumbledore. In my book, deliberate betrayal is forever. Is there any recovering from a friend stabbing you? I'm going to be counting the days until your next update!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! No, I'm excited about book 7, no two ways about it. This chapter has been in the wings for a LONG time, and we just needed to get to the point where it happened. There will def. be consequences of this incident... Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I feel so sad for him! It must be earth shattering to have Dumbledore turn on him like that. It's enough to make the heart ache. Excellent writing, you really manage to make me feel what he feels.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Awww, that makes me all giddy... LOL I love that you feel that way. Not that I want you to be sad, but I love that I can affect my readers. Oh, you know what I mean! *facepalm* LOL Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Hmmm...okay, I see two different ways this could go. Either Snape will become livid to see that she's furthering her 'education' without him, or he'll be so incredibly turned on by what he sees that he'll jump into bed with her. Personally, I'm hoping for the latter. Your sex scenes are always so incredibly well done!! Peace! ~ j
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!!!!!! Oh, that made me scare the cat laughing. Next chapter will def. have a lot to be going on with... Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I was just slightly less excited about seeing an update to this story as I was about learning the release date of HP book 7. That being said you are an evil author. Ending this chapter with such a cliffhanger.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
OMFG... You flatter me beyond imagination! *falls over. iz ded* LOL I'm sorry to leave such an evil cliffie, but the situation about to occur will need its own chapter, trust me. Thank you so much for giving me a thrill and for reviewing! :)
Oh. My. God.What the hell jsut happened? Dumbledore forbid Snape to move on? What's wrong with him? What will Hermione say? How will Snape find her?You must send more soon, I can't wait, this is sooooooo good!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles* I must admit that I'm pleased that I can still manage to surprise you folk after all this time. I've been waiting for that scene to get here for a LONG time. *grin* I firmly believe that AD is a self-serving manipulator of the highest order, and that's just a taste of it. So glad you're enjoying it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)