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The Enchanted Tower Room
beaweasley2544 Reviews | 6.23/10 (544 Ratings, 0 Likes, 296 Favorites )
Teenage Severus Snape and Lily find a room in the castle with a partially hidden staircase that leads them up to a private room at the top of a tower that even the Marauders don't know about.
Then twenty years later, Hermione Granger finds the room. Suddenly she’s confronted by Severus Snape, who’s always considered tower room to be his own private little nook, finds herself not only under the rooms spell, but must now meet the conditions of the room with the one professor that has always been her biggest enigma.
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
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Reviews for The Enchanted Tower Room
Manipulative, isn't he? But that is very hot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Oh, yes, he is in my book... Just you wait and see... he gets more so!
Lovely, I have always wondered if Lily and Severus spent more time together than what was in the books. I just love Hermoine and Severus together. I think sometimes that he would be more civil to her when alone and no one could see or find out. Will definetly put this is favs.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thanks. Well, as my prompt led me, so I followed and then went on my merry little way Well, typed away that is! I'm having so much fun with this one. So glad you like it!
This is an intriguing first chapter. I like your style of narrative, crisp and clear and giving us the facts without interrupting the flow of the tale--which is difficult to achieve. Am in love with the plausibility of the premise and the fact that it uses some canon. It makes perfect sense for them to be drawn to the place for their own reasons--and I am speculating on how His Acerbicity is going respond to finding Hermione there again. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you for the nice compliment. I always try and keep some canon in my stories - even just a little - since it is the Potterverse we are attracted to. Expect Severus' acerbicity to remain constant for a while... at least, well...
Such a nice start. I hope you update soon.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. I'll try and get it out as soon as I can... got a bit more to do first.
wonderful!....and I am follwing you and the story. Thanks, its spot on!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Wow, thank you. wow.
A great start to this story... I'm certainly looking forward to more! *taps screen hopefully*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you… I’m working at giving you more just give me a sec…
Great first chapter! I really like that you came up with an original idea from an existing canon place. I'm fascinated by the possibilities you've opened for Snape and his Gryffindor ladies.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. I liked the room with the keys and that it was tall enough to fly brooms in. So I assumed it was a tower - convenient huh?
Fascinating combination of prompts, and about Severus too. I look forward to the progression of this story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. Should have the next up in a bit.
looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
This will go round and round and get steamier - much steamier...
Oh, I really like this story. So cool with hte kiss to leave and all that. Can't wait for more!Livvy
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. Cool n' a bit weird, I know but more to come and all will be revealed...
Oh, this is just lovely! I can't wait to see where you go from here with it! And I agree, 17yo Snape and 37yo Snape would be very, very different with Lily and Hermione respectively.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. It's fun to write a story with Severus at both ages... Actually, I intend to have fun with both pairs for a while.
oooh, yummy beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thanks. I've the next one written. Just checking for those nasty typo's...
snogging a professor in the corridors! love it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yes, naughty girl!
This is great and so very hot! I like the way you alternate between the past and the present. Looking forward to more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. It's fun having Severus at seventeen and Hermione at seventeen as the POVs. I'm very gald you are enjoying this.
This is brillant. I can't wait for more
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much... there is more to come - just gotta have it checked over first!
holey moley this a hot story! thanks and more, please!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thanks - I'm working on the more part - really!
Why more blood?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
A few drops weren't enough. More blood made the counter-spells stronger - since the spells were so strong, there had to be more of the 'wizard' behind the breaking. And it pulled the Baron into the physical world, weakening his spectral self. Only the POV was Hermione's, So you only heard and saw what she did. The Grey LAdy knew something was different - off, so she encouraged Hermione to have Susan do what Severus was telling her to do and not the Baron. Sorry, if that was not understood.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Thank you for the clarification!
Lovely chapter! Very action-packed and well-written. Keep up the amazing work! Love it! I can't wait to read what Hermione's question is. I'm thinking maybe: 'Do you still love me, Severus?' I might seem stupid for putting this question, but I couldn't think of anything else.~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. Oh, sorry, the question was a tease. *blushes* I was being a brat. *hangs head* I love reading what the readers think. I like your guess. So I'll say you're RIGHT!! Congrats! One more to go! Whoot!!Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~
This was so worth the wait. But leaving another tiny cliffie shame on you. Just kidding. This was a truely bloody fantastic chapter. I like how you were able to bring about the end of the curse and still made the story on the edge of your seat thrilling.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you so much. I'm sorry it took so long. I'm very flattered that you liked this so much. The cliffie was only to let you know I wasn't done yet, sorry. I have one chapter left, so I hope you like it. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Wow. That was thick, scary tension you created in this chapter, but I understand Hermione's need to set things to right with the tower. I like how she researched and reasoned her way through the solution. It was rough going there for a while; I was worried about poor Susan losing too much blood and the lovers, Severus and Hermione, possessed by ghosts, potentially forever?! The Bloody Baron just won't take 'NO' for an answer. But in the end, the enchantments were broken, and there is hope for the future, maybe even a happy ending. *sends bea subliminal message for a happy ending*I trust that whatever you have in store for our favorite couple, it will be enjoyable.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. This is exactly what I was after, tension, scary and the realization that now it's over. The poor Baron, trapped by the backlash of his own spells. I hope now that they are broken he can finally find closure. Susan will be fine. A few potions and good as new. lolYes, had the Baron won, Severus could ahe been trapped in his own mind, forced by the Baron... Ghosts crave being whole agian, once able to possess, they can't let go easily. Helena only tore away because she hated being in the Baron's arms so much, which was good for Hermione. But the tearing apart was painful.me have... recieve... subliminal message... to... Oh, sorry, final chapter written and art drawn. I just need to have it beta'ed and cleaned up... then I can post it!
Response from Clairvoyant (Reviewer)
You are such a tease, bea. I wouldn't have it any other way but to go with your flights of fancy. I know I'm in for quite an entertaining, intricate adventure when I read one of your stories.
I am really loving this story. You wrapped up the tower problem extremely well. I kinda feel sorry for the Baron after all he has held on to a love forever and now he has finally gotten a real answer. NO! I hope Hermione's question was "Do you still love me?" I mean I can see why she would want to know after the curse was broken.Anyway great job!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm so glad that you do, and thank you for the compliment. Yes, the poor guy had been under the backlash affects of his own spells for all these eyars. Now that the spells are broken, I hope he finds closure. That is a good guess at the question tease. Sorry, but I love reading what my readers come up with. Thank you so much for the review and the pretty stars. Hugs~
Fabulous chapter, and brilliant story. I have never read anything quite like this.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. It's been fun to do two 'generations' of Severus' life - at the same time. And I've enjoyed doing the art as well. I'm glad that you enjoyed it as well. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars. Hugs~
So he was still obsessed. I ended up liking the Grey Lady, something I didn't expect. how much of the book did Hermione read? I know they directed her to certain passages, but she had to get a glimpse at other things. I like that Susan and her other played a part in breaking the curse. So what does Hermione ask? I'm guessing she'll wait until later to discuss the enchantment and how breaking it effects them. Maybe she asks for a cup of tea?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yes, even after all these eyars, but then remember the spells on the tower affected him in life and carried over into death. Maybe now they are broken, he'll accept her 'final' decision and find closure. I liked her too. She's proud, yes, but a nice person, er, ghost, really. Hermione was allowed to read the parts that the headmasters and Headmistresses thought might apply to the situation. So, not all of it. She only needed to know about their limited scope of 'magic' and abilities, possession (most likely Dumbledore's suggestion) and how spells ffect them - or such. My guess.Actually, I threw that in as a tease, just to see what you think. I love to see what readers come up with. lol
That was amazingly dramatic. The Baron was really quite selfish even after all this time.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
It's really hard for a ghost to possess a witch or wizard, in the fact that they desore to keep the body. Plus, he had another opportunity to hold Helena, and took it. I know, but I chose this route for two reasons, one - Helena left Hermione's body willingly and second, He actually has her final answer. No. Some possible closure for him.