The Enticement of the Tower Room
Chapter 3 of 25
beaweasley2Young Severus, enamored by Lily’s attentions, hasn’t really minded the times they’ve spent in the tower, but he’s noticed that things are not exactly right. For one, Lily’s quite different when she’s in the tower.
Twenty years later, Hermione, on the other hand, is becoming more and more confused by the driving need to return to the tower and by her submission to her professor, Severus Snape, no matter how incredible each visit has become. Even more baffling are his actions towards her. Why is she so drawn to the tower room and to him?
I owe a huge thank you to my beta, Southern_Witch_69, her for all her help and support. Thanks to her infinite patience with me, I actually have something readable for you.
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The Enticement of the Tower Room
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~Spring 1977~
Severus was now confused. He and Lily had managed to find time alone together, and Severus had of course managed to, on occasion, find a quiet corner so he could pull Lily in for a kiss, but usually, she stopped him just before he'd been able to open her blouse or just after he'd managed to get it open again. He didn't understand it. Each time me and Lily have gone up to our secret room in the tower, we've kissed and stuff, but we've gone a little further okay, a lot further. Lily isn't as shy then. However, when I've had her alone in a secluded corner of the dungeons or in an unused alcove in an unused corridor, she isn't as well, not as easy, as willing.
The last time I'd been in here with her I'd even managed to place kisses on her breasts above her bra, and she'd liked that. She was moaning and sucking in her breath in what sounded like she liked it. She hadn't pushed me away then! So what is it about this room that makes her so willing? Is it because only she and I know about this room? There is no evidence that anyone else comes up here.
Nevertheless, he was standing at the window in the tower, watching the sunrise when Lily slipped in, carrying two large cups of steaming hot chocolate. "Good morning," she said cheerfully. "I thought I'd find you up here. Jinni, our common room house-elf, couldn't find you this morning. So I thought I'd try here."
"I told you I get up every day before dawn," he said, accepting the large cup and noticing that the door had closed. He smiled knowingly and Lily smiled too.
"So you forgive me for last Thursday?" she asked, sipping her chocolate.
His mind was not on last Thursday. Thursday... in the library? Potions class? The incident before lunch with Black? When I hexed Potter and Black after Transfiguration in self-defense? "Yes, forgotten," he said nonchalantly, not sure what she was referring to. The options were endless.
Lily smiled her 'oh no you didn't say that' smile. "Liar, you never forget anything. But I'll accept that as a yes, I forgive you," she chided him. "So, what are you doing up here? Potter and Black are never up this early."
No, they don't get up until at least eight or nine on weekends unless Potter has a morning practice. "I've been coming here to watch the sunrise. It's quiet." He eyed her slyly as he drank her peace offering, attentively watching her with an appraising stare. "Why are you up at this hour?"
"I was going to go to the library before breakfast but it won't open until eight today," she replied, finishing drink.
She still has a bit of chocolate just on the line of her upper lip and in the corners as well. He smirked at her, and she looked up at him perplexed.
"What?"
"You've got chocolate on your face," he said, pointing at her mouth. Convenient...
She, of course, tried wiping her mouth with her thumb, tracing her lips from right to left, still missing some of the chocolate. Severus shook his head, and she licked her lips, looking up at him expectantly. He shook his head again, smiling at her. He took her cup and placed it on the windowsill with his.
Never pass up an opportunity. Severus tilted her chin up to examine her face, more for the enjoyment of doing so than to look for chocolate. He cupped her face, as if to wipe the offending drink residue with his thumbs and leaned in toward her, gently licking the corner of her mouth to remove the bit of chocolate, turning her head to repeat the move on the other corner. He looked at her intently before sweeping his tongue across her upper lip, kissing her, enjoying the feel of her lips even if they were still chocolate flavored.
She didn't resist, kissing him back tenderly, and wrapped her arms around his waist.
He pulled her to him, holding her close, as he kissed her lips slowly, enjoying the softness, making tiny sweeps with his lips across her lower lip, then claiming her mouth in a rough, demanding kiss. She moaned against him, matching his kiss, submitting to him. After a while, he glided his hand to her waist, slowly easing his way up to cup her breast as they kissed. With nimble fingers, he opened her robes, trailing kisses to her neck as he undid her blouse and exposing a pink bra.
"Sev?" she asked breathlessly.
He mentally swore. "Yes, Lily love," he replied, saying each word slowly and deliberately against the skin just below her ear, and sucked on her earlobe.
She sucked in her breath. "Please," she pleaded.
He slid his hands over her ribs under her blouse. "Anything you want. I just want to touch you. You are soo soft," he said, using his silky voice. "Do you have any idea how good you feel?" His other hand managed to pull her robe off her shoulders, and he pressed her hips against the windowsill. "Your skin is so soft... Just touching it makes me want you."
She arched her head back as he slowly worked his way down her neck to her shoulders, flicking her skin with his tongue between kisses. "Yes...! Oh, that feels good... but I I can't," she stammered.
"Please, Lily, I just want to touch you. You know how much I care for you," he said in what she called his velvet voice, nipping her collarbone and lowering his mouth to the top of her prefect breast.
"Severus," she gasped and sucked in her breath as he trailed his tongue along her bra. "I can't go this far."
"Not any further than you want me to. I promise." He set her up on the windowsill and parted her knees as he moved closer to her, her skirts hitched up a bit, and he smiled inwardly. He pushed gently to have her lean against the glass and glided his fingers on her skin as he continued to kiss her chest and neck. He cursed silently as he fingered the closure of her bra, not sure what means of Muggle stupidity held it together. Figuring he could always repair it, he slipped his wand out and tried a few unlocking spells and an opening spell, then finally an unlatching spell. The bra gave. Unlatching works! Great, good to know.
"Hey!" She opened her eyes, startled as her bra gave, and Severus pushed the fabric aside to suckle her nipple. "But you said... Ohhh!" She gasped and moaned in pleasure, grabbing his head and raking her fingers in his hair. "Oh my, Severus...!"
His laugh was muffled by her soft flesh as he fondled her other breast, flicking her nipples, one with his tongue and the other with his fingers. She arched her back, her hand stroking his hair and the other grabbing his shoulder. He placed his free hand down on her knee, gliding his hand on her skirt, slowly edging it up with each stroke until his fingers trailed along skin.
She reached down and grabbed his hand just as he was about to touch her knickers. "What are you doing?!"
"Touching you," he said, confused. What does it feel like I'm doing? "I just want to touch you."
"Not there!" she shrieked, trying to sit up.
He held his hand firmly on her thigh, just centimeters from her knickers, and cupped her neck with is other, pressing into her as he leaned against her, kissing her lips to silencing her. His kiss was firm and a bit more demanding than he'd used before, but his pent-up emotions poured from him in that kiss. She relaxed into him, collapsing back against the windows, and he slid his hand closer to his goal. Her knickers were damp and hot to his touch, and she inhaled sharply. That's the 'I like it inhale!' He stroked her a few times, hearing her breathing hitch. Oh, this is good! This is real good. He pulled his hand away and picked up his wand, engorging her knickers so that they gaped open, and slid his hand back to her hot core slowly as he kissed her. She groaned, squirmed a bit, but he had her pinned. Slowly, he slipped his fingers into her knickers and began to fondle her. Merlin's beard! She's wet down there!
Her breath caught each time his finger passed a certain spot, and she cried out his name, stunned, but obviously liking it, so he tried to find the spot, to figure out what part of her made her gasp so. Her body jerked a few times before he figured it out. After a while, she stopped kissing him, gasping for air as if she were running really hard, and grabbed onto his shoulders painfully. He leaned back, watching her. Her eyes were closed, her body was tense and her mouth open, her breathing so hard her breasts rose and collapsed with each quick heavy breath. And I'm doing this to her. Suddenly, her back arched, her legs straightened, her fists clenched, and she was crying, gasping out his name, god's, Merlin's and pleading for him, begging for him. His mouth curled into a wicked smile. So girls come like we do only without shooting stuff out. Cool.
~Spring 1997~
Hermione walked swiftly down the stairs, carrying a large cup of Pekoe tea from Kippy, the house-elf who was once again cleaning the common room. She wore a green lace bra under her white cotton blouse, robes and, as requested, a skirt. Fifty points is fifty points and the house needs them. Neville had dropped a bucket of water aven pods on the floor right at Snape's feet when they'd nearly collided in the corridor. And although Professor Spout had given Neville twenty points for delivering the pods to Professor Slughorn for her, Snape had taken sixty points from Gryffindor for dropping them on his robes and boots! No, fifty points is fifty points. She'd also Transfigured a pair of her knickers to match her bra. Not that he's going to see them! All he wanted was for me to wear the green bra and a skirt right? She knew she was kidding herself.
She had no idea why she was going back there. There's nothing wrong with enjoying a quiet vigil, watching the sunrise, even with Snape's company, she thought as she walked swiftly down the corridor. She nearly turned back as she passed Fluffy's door, pausing for a moment. Okay. Just to watch the sunrise nothing else. "Please let me in," she said and placed her hand on the latch, walking in before she changed her mind again. This is bloody ridiculous! Why am I coming down here and he expects me to! Oh, bloody Horntails, why am I doing this? she asked herself, half way across the room. She again debated leaving before walking over and sliding her hand on the wall to find the concealed entry to the stairs. Why is he doing this? Why does he want to? Her hand slipped into the stone, and she pushed her way through the barrier. The way he makes me feel like I I'm irresistible, desirable... His eyes the way he looks at me, it's as if he knows, wants me. It's almost possessive, predatory... The thought sent shivers down her spine. And his hands! Gods, his hands his fingers... the way he kisses.... Her skin shivered again in anticipation as she reached the door.
She opened the door slowly, carefully checking as she stepped inside.
The room was empty. He wasn't there. She crossed to the window and removed the Anti-Spilling Charm from her cup of tea.
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She had no idea why she was so angry. She should have been grateful to have had the room in the tower to herself without being accosted by her professor. Instead, she'd been restless and antsy. Still, there was nothing to do for it now. She'd have to wait a week before going back. Hermione berated herself. So you've got your period. Big deal! There's no reason you can't go and just enjoy your tea and watch the sunrise. He's not likely to be there anyway. He wasn't the last two times you went up there.... No, he'll be there, could be there I shouldn't. And what if he wants to go further? We haven't gone that far yet. I doubt he'd want to. But what if he does?
Frustrated, she picked up one of the twelve books she'd checked out of the library to read up on Dark Arts Charms. There is no reason to think that he wants to do that. That he will take things that far... with me. She opened the book where she'd left off. It isn't on Professor Snape's list of subjects, but you never knew when you'd have to face something, and it was best to know how to handle it right? Besides, when I go with Harry to fight Voldemort, we will be dealing with Dark Arts and may run across some of these. It won't hurt to read about them anyway.
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Six days later, Hermione was once again hurrying down the corridor with a steaming hot cup of Kippy's Broken Orange Pekoe, hoping that she'd find the room empty again this morning. Well, that wasn't at all true. She'd worn her green bra and knickers again, dabbed on a tiny touch of J'adore perfume and slipped out well before dawn to watch night sky turn into morning.
Halfway down the corridor on the third floor, Hermione began to have doubts again. Why am I doing this? she asked herself. What is he going to think? She stopped at the door, reconsidering, and almost turned to go. Oh! This is crazy! "Please let me in," she said, grasping the latch before she lost her nerve. What in blazing Horntails am I doing here? What am I thinking wearing perfume! He's going to think that I expect that I want him to! Why is he doing this to me? If today is anything like last time, she thought just before she pushed into the wall and emerged onto the stairs, then I'm in for it big time. The image of Severus standing in front of her with his shirt off made her catch her breath and smile. He's so masculine, that voice of his, his lean muscles. I'd never considered that he'd look so good under his robes. He even gave me permission to touch him! Gods, his skin was so warm against mine. She could feel herself get a bit moist just thinking about him.
Hermione opened the door and found the room empty again. Sighing, she crossed to the window to stare at midnight blue sky and wait until dawn. She sipped on her hot tea, scalding her mouth, and set the hot cup down on the windowsill to let it cool a bit so she could drink it. At least I'll be able to enjoy the sunrise this morning... No, that's not fair. He's never prevented me from watching it; he usually waits until the sun peeks over the mountain just right over there, she mentally pointed, her eyes focused on the exact spot of the mountain crest that the sun appeared as she picked up the cup to check the tea's temperature. The tea was still too hot. He's gracious enough for that before he... um... he approaches me or begins... When he, well, he never asks. It's more along the lines of he just sort of reaches out, pulls me to him, into his embrace, and kisses me... and I let him. She felt a light headiness just thinking about his actions. I've never said no or pushed him away not once! She stared at the pattern the tops of the trees made, reflecting on her realization. I don't push him away. I don't encourage his attentions, and he's never given me any inclination before that he even likes me let alone wanted this to be happening. She looked at her chest as she set the cup down again. "Yet, I did exactly what he asked. Dressed exactly how he told me to all three times!"
She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't hear the door open or his soft footsteps on the stone floor until he was right behind her. "Did you really, Miss Granger?" he asked silkily.
Hermione felt like she'd jumped out of her skin as she whirled around to face him. "Did I what, Professor?" she asked as her heart thumped wildly in her chest.
The dark, sultrily predatory look in his eyes faded as soon as she'd said 'professor,' and his expression became darkly contemplative. "You're back." It wasn't a question nor did it really sound like a statement, rather a mix of both. His dark eyes continued to hold her gaze as the emotions of suddenly being in front of him jumbled and warred within her. He was once again wearing only his shirt and black trousers, his robes hanging against the wall near the door, most likely from a magically conjured hook.
She stared at him, taking in his appearance, mentally comparing the man standing before her to the man he usually was in the classroom. There was little difference and yet no comparison at all. His eyes were fathomless dark orbs, yet they held a hint of anticipation. His stance was more relaxed, yet every bit as poised as ever. He was calm, cool and composed, as she would expect of him, completely in control of himself and his surroundings.
Finally, after a long pause, he lifted a large cup of something hot and took a slow sip. "It's tea, Miss Granger. Broken Orange Pekoe, my preferred blend," he said languorously. "The house-elves keep it on hand for my pleasure."
Hermione's eyes widened, and she quickly looked at her own cup sitting on the windowsill. "Yes, Miss Granger, I'm very well aware that you have been drinking the same tea. I could taste it on your lips on four occasions."
Hermione felt her cheeks redden, and she turned her head back to the window.
"Your tea is getting cold, Miss Granger," he said smoothly. "Would you like me to warm it for you?"
Actually, when she picked the cup up, the temperature was perfect. "No thank you, sir, it's fine," she said, sipping the tea, now far more aware of the rich flavors of the blend. His favorite blend... Kippy had said he made a pot every morning. Did he make it for Snape? She'd set a spell on the cup before coming here to keep the tea hot longer than the large cup normally would have, that way she could sip the tea, unhurriedly as she waited, watching the subtle change of the sunrise.
Nevertheless, just as the sky began to lighten, Snape stepped forward, placed his cup on the windowsill and stepped back, moving to stand just behind her. He placed his hands on her shoulders and pulled her gently against his chest, wrapping his arms around her as if they were longtime lovers. At first Hermione stiffened, but then finally relaxed against his chest. However, as soon as she did, he reached up, moved her hair from her neck and sensually kissed her skin. The cup of tea in her hand fell to the floor.
"Don't worry about it," he said in his silky drawl just behind her ear. "I'll fix it for you later." He continued to kiss her, his hands moving to open her robes and blouse.
Hermione inhaled slowly as she simply stood there and let him as if entranced.
"Relax, Miss Granger, just feel," he said as his hands roamed over her. He pulled her blouse free from her skirt and pulled the fabric off her shoulders, letting the fabric bunch at her elbows, trapping her arms at her sides. His kisses trailed from her neck to her shoulder, and she turned her face toward him. He laughed softly, gripping her chin, and turned her face back toward the window. "No, Miss Granger, watch your sunrise," he said silkily.
Her breathing became heavy, her head spinning as she stood there, allowing him to caress and fondle her. He shifted, moving her hair so that he could kiss the other side of her neck, and she closed her eyes, her head spinning as if drunk on Firewhiskey. Even before the very edge of the sun made its appearance, she turned in his arms and kissed him. He stiffened at her bold move, but recovered control quickly, holding her in front of him.
He looked down at her, his dark eyes raking over her, his lips curling into a smile. "Fifty points for Gryffindor, Miss Granger, for wearing proper attire. I do keep my word," he said as his hands cupped her breasts, his thumbs sliding across her nipples through the lace. He pulled his wand out, aiming the tip to her back, and her bra fell loose as both the back clasp and adjustable straps sprung free.
His flicker of surprise as the bra fell into his hand nearly made Hermione laugh. "It's not exactly the same bra sir, but I know you wanted me to wear green, so I changed the color." He cocked his eyebrow, and his lips curled into a smile again, making her stop speaking as effectively as if he'd interrupted her.
"I approve. Ten more points for Gryffindor, Miss Granger." He dropped the bra and placed a hand on her abdomen, backing her up to sit on the windowsill in front of him, and his cup fell to the floor with a crash. Before she could apologize about knocking it off the windowsill, he leaned in and kissed her. He pulled her knees apart, pushing to stand between her thighs as he pressed her against the glass. She exclaimed under his kiss at the sudden coolness, and one of his arms wrapped around her holding her tightly to him.
With unreasoned boldness, Hermione reached out to touch him, her fingers trailing along his abdomen, opening a few of his buttons.
"Did you want help," he asked, humored by her difficulty with the small buttons. She shook her head as his kisses trailed down her jaw to her ear. "I'd be happy to oblige you." He stood up anyway, quickly undoing the last six and pulled the shirt off, allowing her only a moment's stare before he leaned in to her, pulling to him with one arm.
Hermione became lost in his kiss again, her hands exploring his body, so she failed to notice when his other hand began to move smoothly on her leg. At first it seemed accidental, then as his fingers swept up her leg, slowly pushing her skirt up, she realized what he intended. She stiffened, crying out, "No, wait," and gasped.
"Yes," he said, "relax, Miss Granger. I'm only touching you." His other hand moved to cup her breast, his thumb flicking her nipple as he spoke. His silky, rich voice sent as many shivers through her as his thumb and lips were. His fingers on her leg continued to slither upwards. She felt him slide a finger against the lace, and she inhaled at the implication. He pushed her back against the glass and kissed her neck. "Just say stop and I will," he said as he nipped her skin just below her ear.
Instead of saying no, she moaned, and his fingers slid easily under her knickers. "But... Oh, gods," she said in ragged breaths as a jolt shot through her body from his contact. She instinctively tried closing her legs, but his legs between her own prevented her from doing so. She felt the quick pulse shoot through her a few more times, and she opened her legs wider, enjoying the pleasant sensation and wanting more. "What is...? How are you...?"
"Relax and feel, Miss Granger," he said smoothly. She felt more pulses shoot through her as his fingers rubbed and flicked the soft tissue just above her opening. The sensations were intense and extremely pleasurable and increasing in intensity. He continued to fondle her breast, his kisses moving from her neck to her breast and back to her neck as he fondled her under her knickers.
Oh, Merlin what he's making me feel... "Please... Oh, Merlin, please don't stop," she panted, her breathing becoming labored and deep, her heart racing, pounding in her chest and an intense pressure-like sensation was building up within her. She couldn't think, her hands simply splayed against his firm stomach, and her head fell back.
"That's it," she heard him say, "relax and feel it."
Oh, mother of Merlin! Oh gods!
"Relax, let it happen."
I'm going to pee... He's... Oh, bloody hell!
His rich silky drawl caressed her mind, "Let it go," erasing all other thought but his voice and the feel of his hands on her crotch and her breast. "Don't hold on to it," she heard him say languorously. "Hermione, let it go." At the sound of her name in his rich silky drawl, the pressure, reaching its crescendo, broke.
"Oh, dear god! Severusss...! Oh my, Severusss...!" she cried out, her body melting, floating, expanding and sinking all at once. "Oh! Severusss...!" She fell back against the glass, her hands grasping for the sides of the window, her fingertips barely grasping stone, falling onto the sill on either side of her.
Slowly, she opened her eyes. He was still standing in front of her, his hand still in her knickers, a smug smile on his face as he stared at her intently. His fingers still made small sweeps, causing her body to jerk with shooting pulses with each flick he made. She couldn't move, her breathing was hard and fast, her heart pounding erratically in her chest. Slowly, he withdrew his hand, his eyes locked on her face as he did something that completely gobsmacked her. He licked his fingers, sticking first one, then another, into his mouth, pulling each one out slowly as if it'd been coated in the best tasting thing ever. But they had been in my knickers! That's it's from me! My wetness... from down there!
He smiled and chuckled at her reaction. "Yes, Hermione?" he stood up and pulled her to stand, supporting her against his body. Her legs still felt rubbery, unable to hold her own weight as he kissed her, his mouth hungrily devouring hers, the taste of her wetness still on his lips. It thrilled and appalled her. The flavor foreign and yet familiar, mixing with his taste, his sweet, rich taste. She clung to him, stroking his tongue with hers, kissing him with fervor.
Gradually, his kisses softened and became teasing, and he stopped, looking at her as if he was once again seeing into her very soul. His kiss left her utterly breathless, gasping for air and her knees still weak.
"Thank you, Miss Granger," he said, brushing her hair from beside her face. "That was most enjoyable. However, my dear, you cannot speak about this. I don't think I have to explain why. Also, as much as I enjoyed hearing you call out my name, do not, under any circumstances, get in the habit of using it. It would not do well for others to hear you say it again. You will have to control yourself."
Hermione nodded, completely understanding.
He smiled as he let her go. "One hundred ninety-five points from Gryffindor if you mention this to anyone. I would suggest that you do not come back here, Hermione. Please, for both our sakes, do not return."
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Author's Notes:
So, yes, things are progressing forward, and our Potions professor is manipulating Hermione quite a bit. Still, is it just the spells on the room or something developing here?
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Enchanted Tower Room
544 Reviews | 6.23/10 Average
I wonder how Severus is going to explain the extra points in the staff room.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
lol, er, um, huh. Probably won't. But then points earmed are magically recorded, hopefully it won't say why.Thank you for reading and for the review.
The differences between lily and Hermione andmore and more obvious, Lily did not need any potion to get her to keep Severus at arms length.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
No she didn't. But she didn't like his leaning toward his Slytherin housemates and their influences on Severus. Soo... But we already knew where that pairing was headed. Thank you for reading and for the review.
The difference between Lily and Hermione is getting more and more obvious, Lily only seema to want Severus in the tower room,whereas Hermione wants him outside of the room as well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
That is the sad part of writing this, I knew what happened to the Lily/Sev relationship and to show it's decline. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
That is the sad part of writing this, I knew what happened to the Lily/Sev relationship and to show it's decline. Thank you for reading and for the review.
So others have been snared by the room, I hope we will hear more about them in the coming chapters.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yep, it's been there for a long time... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Hermione is not going to listen to him is she, at least I hope not.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
It's not a matter of will she, but there are magical forces involved (oops, you'd realized that already, hadn't you?) She'd have to excersize all her will power agaist the enchanted tower room. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm wondering, if it is just the magic of the room bringing Hermione back, or is it Severus himself.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Oh I can't answer that for you now. But beleve me, you, Hermione and Severus will figure it out ... when..?Thank you for reading and for the review.
A lovely start, I love the two time lines.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. It was fun to write, I'm honored that you are reading it. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Thank you for the review.
This is my second time reading this, it get better each time. Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Wow, I'm deeply flattered. I'm delighted that you are enjoying it. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Wow, I'm deeply flattered. I'm delighted that you are enjoying it. Thank you for the review.
Ohh I'm in love with this story. I'm normally completely against any story with Lilly in it I'm not a big fan of her but this was unique. I loved the flashbacks and the idea of this tower. I loved the little twist at the end with Severus being in the tower when Hermione was a first year. Such a good read!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm dleighted that you gave my story a read, and really appreciate your candor. Thank you so much for the review, and I can't tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed this one. :)
That was a delightful way to end your story, although I confess I was expecting to read more about Snape's angst after Lily's death. Then, the modern Severus sounded a bit out of character, but it's understandable he might change after the war. At least for Hermione's sake...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I could have dragged on another chapter and taken that route, but we already know the angst he felft over Lily. As for Severus, he had everything he didn't even allow himself to dare hope for: love, family, home, child, respect... He let go of the past and was living. That, imho, would have mellowed him. Thank you for reading and for the lovely review.
This ended so well! I'd love to mention all of the things that I liked since I last reviewed, but really it was all so good. I thought that the two stories worked well all the way to the end. And I still think the artwork really added a nice touch. I was a bit afraid that their long time apart might have changed things between them, even though they had still thought of each other often throughout. But that didn't seem to be the case. I really like the magic involved, and the slowly unraveling mystery of it all. I was also pleased that they found a way to break the spell. There will be no more tragedy caused by that room, and the very last couple that was affected lived happily ever after... or so I choose to think. The explanation as to why she was able to go through in her first year was great, but it is a good thing that she didn't find her way up there at that time.Very, very enjoyable story. Now that this is done and you have more free time, I will be looking forward to more chapters from you on your other WIP's. What?! A little friendly harrassment never hurts ;) I can't help it if I really enjoy your stories!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you so much for the reviews and the supportive compliments. I'm really flattered that you liked this story so much. I'd never do that and click 'Romance' only to mislead you! Have some faith. Besides, thier love was deeper than either knew at the time--it survived nearly two years apart! Well, a year, followed by a reuniting on the battle field, only to be seperate for another year... But yes, they are happy now.I'm glad that you liked all the magic involved. The allure of the stairs didn't even affect Hermione until she turned 17. I mean, yes she could get through, but Rowena's protection on the barrier was able to stop her until then. I promise, I'm dilligently working on one of my WIP's. Which one would you like to see updated next? Don't mind the friendly poke, it gets me motivated! Hugs~
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Well, that is a tough choice... If I have to pick one, I think I'd like to see Consequences of Meddling with Time. But honestly, whatever you are inspired to work on at the moment is great. I know that when I am in the middle of a ton of stories, I sometimes forget exactly what went on ten chapters ago, or little nuances in certain characters, and have to get my bearings (usually by backing up a few chapters and reading the highlights). I have no idea how you can be in the middle or writing several and keep them straight! I'm in awe...
This is a wonderful piece of work. What a joy it has been to read it all. Congratulations on its completion, Maria
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you, Jeannie. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and for the reviews. Hugs~
Frustrating, I can hardely wait to get to the next one, this is a wonderful story and I'm so glad is finsihed now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm sorry it is frustrating, but it's worth the wait for what comes next. I'm so glad that you are enjoying this one. Hugs~
Gads the suspense is terrible and I don't kow why they arent even writing or whatever
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Hermione doesn't know where he is and Severus needs to sort things out frist. You'll see, she'll demand an answer if/when they see each other again. Thank you so much for the review.
I really liked your version of the Last Battle, SEVERUS lives :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. I hated how JKR worte hers, and I just knew that he couldn't have died from a simple snake bite. Arthur survived Nagini and she bit him several times! Thank you very much for the review.
Very much enjoyed the chapter like the differencs very much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. Hugs~
Oh, I loved this chapter! I had tears in my eyes when they finally confessed to loving each other. Very sweet and rewarding scene. I love this story! I just can't stop reading it. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. That is quite a compliment, but I'm sorry to make you cry. I'm very flattered that you are enjoying this one so much. makes my day! Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Back traced a bit to remember where I left off I can't tell, any way I'm really enjoying the story again.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm so glad you are. Happy reading, doll. Thank you for the review.
Awesome can't wait for more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you.
Well, I am at another stopping point so will weigh in at this time. This continues to be fantastic. I really like the artwork. It is very nicely done, and is so telling as to what the current tone of the relationship is in each timeline. I actually feel bad for Severus and Hermione as I think that they count on being able to find answers to any problem in a book, and they are simply making no progress. I still really like the two different timelines and their repective similarities and differences. I'm quite interested to find out more about this curse and how they will beat it, or succumb to it, or whatever is planned for them. WIP's are fun, but I am certainly glad that I won't have to wait for this to finish!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
LOL I'm so glad that you're enjoying this so far. Thank you so much for the lovely compliments. Yes, like Hermione always does, she searches her answers in books, but then so did young Severus. lol The two time lines are fun, writing them was like writing two stories at the same time with the same titles, only we already know where the one is headed and know the outcome. (I won't say whitch one. teehehe) The similarities play a huge part in Professor Snape's actions, but the differences are important. Thank you so much for reading this and for your supportive review. I really appreciate it. Good night, doll.
Hmmm... I really don't know how this story came and went without me reading it. I think I just had too many WIP's going on to really add another. But it no longer fits in that category, so I guess I can dig right in. Couldn't stop until now to review, that would take away precious reading time! But it is now too late for me to go on, so I will stop and leave my thanks for such a fun, interesting story.I'm really loving this, especially how it goes back and forth between the two times which seem to parallel each other quite eerily. I don't know how I feel about the state of things. I don't have a problem with a teacher/student relationship in fiction, but you get the feeling that he is manipulating her and knows exactly what he is doing, even though he has no business doing it. That sort of bothers me, but at the same time, she is not protesting, and he is not treating her badly. And I truely believe that he meant it when he told her to say the word and he would stop. I get the impression that there is some magic at work here that is bigger than them just enjoying themselves each morning. Now that I think about it, I guess what really nags at me, is the feeling like there is magic involved that makes her desire his company, and his touch, even though she might not feel that way in another situation. That is ok, but if he knows that is how the room works, and is allowing her to come there when she is ignorant to the rooms effect, well, I guess that is the crux of what is creeping me out a bit.Sorry, I am working out my thoughts on screen rather than in my head. And in doing so, I am expressing concern over things that are mostly speculation on my part (see, that is why it is supposed to stay in my head). And in working through my thoughts, I imagine this review might be starting to sound negative. Fear not. This has me terribly intrigued, and I have enjoyed every moment so far. If they continue on like this much longer, she will definitely not be able to tell anyone, or he will have taken so many points that Gryffindor will still be in a deficit when her kids are in school :) Looking forward to finding time to continue!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
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Hello! I’m so flattered that you’ve decided to give this story a go. It’s perfectly fine that you wanted to wait till it was complete to start it.
Yes, there is a lot of parallel (on purpose) between the relationship between Severus and Lily and Professor Snape and Hermione, as well as showing how Severus’ life unfolded. I hope you like it. Writing the bouncing was so much fun because it was like writing two stories at the same time, the prompt just lent to it so well.
To ease your mind—and not give away anything—the spells will be clarified in detail as you get further into the story, but yes, there is some magic that compels her to go up to the room, and the door won’t open unless certain conditions are met. That said, Severus Snape, imho, is an honorable man, with a shady past, but not a molester. He does know what he’s doing, as any mature man would with an inexperienced female, however, rest assured, I’m not a rape or sexual violence writer. (Victim of, worked on a Rape-hotline support group, and called the cops on the husband of a friend who had too many of the fist and finger type bruises…) Please, keep reading, the magic is there, but very carefully selected.
I have no problem with you typing your thoughts. Actually, I’m enjoying what you think. I want to say more, ease you, but I don’t want to give anything away.
Oh, good guesses!!! But really, like she is the type to blab about her ‘conquests?’ not. Lol
If after you get farther and still have the concerns over the magic, email me and I’ll explain. In the meantime, I hope you enjoy my little talke. Oh, I drew the all the art as well!
Wow that WAS A LOT OF HARD WORK, CONGRATULATIONS it was brilliant. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
LOL well, it was worth it - and now everyone is freeee! Thank you so mcu for the compliment and for the review.
Wow, he tells her never to come back. But knows she will and tell her what to wear? Go, Severus! This is a spicy story...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yes, he knows. He doesn't want to push her but in the same time he does. It's complicated. Yes, it's spicy - and gets more... Hope you enjoy - thank you for the review, doll. Happy reading.
This sounds like a promising story, bea! I look forward to more. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Oh good, I hope you like the rest. Happy reading. Thank you for reading and for the review.
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for an enjoyable evening.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
You are very welcome. Thank you for reading this and for the review and pretty stars. Hugs~