Enchanted Discovery
Chapter 1 of 25
beaweasley2Teenage Severus Snape and Lily find a room in the castle with a partially hidden staircase that leads them up to a private room at the top of a tower that even the Marauders don't know about.
Then twenty years later, Hermione Granger finds the room. Suddenly she’s confronted by Severus Snape, who’s always considered tower room to be his own private little nook, finds herself not only under the rooms spell, but must now meet the conditions of the room with the one professor that has always been her biggest enigma.
I simply cannot forget to say thank you to my beta, Southern_Witch_69. I owe a great deal of gratitude to her for all her help and support. Thanks to her infinite patience with me, I actually have something readable for you.
Disclaimer: I was crazy one day and decided to borrow a few charatcters for a romp. I hope JK doesn't mind.
~Spring 1997~
Hermione remembered this room from her first year. So much had happened that day that actually, at the time, she'd paid little attention to the room itself other than to try and find a way out. What she did remember was the high arched ceiling and the rock walls that looked as if they had been sandblasted smooth. The room had seemed remarkably bright and well lit even though there were no windows and no torches for illumination. True, it's usually Harry and Ron, or when they had been here, Fred and George, who were the curious explorers of the castle, but some of their curiosity was bound to have rubbed off on me, right? Actually, she wanted to see the flying keys, and since Fluffy had been let lose in the Forbidden Forest at the end of her fist year, entrance to the room would be safe. Well, safer at least... except possibly the drop from the trap door in the floor. She fingered the Fizzing Whizbee wrapper in her pocket, pleased that the sweet had eased her descent from the trap door.
What escaped her notice was the fact that the lure of the room had begun to plague her shortly after her seventeenth birthday. The room was as she remembered it, the keys still floating in the air like hundreds of tiny, golden birds. However, the brooms were gone. Beyond the door into the next room of the maze, she assumed. Right where Harry, Ron and I left them. She doubted it, but it was a nice thought.
There was a staircase that began halfway up the wall. It simply came out of the wall, curving along the walls of the room, spiraling up to disappear up into the high-arched ceiling. It was an odd place to begin a stairwell, even odder that it ended going nowhere. Hermione stared at the staircase, her desire to climb it growing, just to see where it would lead. It was as if it had intrigued her for years.
Hermione walked around the curve of the wall, running her fingers along the smooth stone, passing the familiar heavy wooden door, looking up and trying to discern where the stairwell went. Her eyes followed the curve of the stone steps, tracing them as they curled around and up the wall disappearing into the ceiling above. "Somewhere up there," she sighed. It begins halfway up and ends just under the topmost arch with no apparent reason... It beguiled her curiosity, taunted her need to know, her desire to find out. Suddenly. her hand disappeared into the stone as a magically obscured opening gave way. Although she couldn't see it, she knew it was the passageway, and she eagerly entered, feeling the cold, sandy texture of the rock as she slipped through, finding herself standing on the stairs.
Quickly, she climbed up to see where it went, going round and round up the tower. The stairs ended at an arched doorway, which was in fact tucked between the juncture of the topmost curves of the arches that created the ceiling of the vaulted room below her. The door opened easily with the slightest touch of Hermione's hand, revealing a room, obviously the very top of the tower. The room was round with a steeply slanted, conical shape ceiling and very little adornment except for a few corbels spaced along the wall and one large window inset in the stone. The three-paned glass, two thin panes beside one large pane, was pristine and clear, beveled slightly on the edges. The view from the window took her breath away. She could see the forest from here, the vast stretch of treetops, and the rise of the mountains creating the horizon. It was beautiful and peaceful, quiet and serene.
Watching the sunrise from here would be amazing, she thought, crossing her arms. If only there was a way here that didn't rely on falling through Fluffy's trap door. Although, thankfully, someone probably Professor Sprout had kindly removed the Devil's Snare from under the door. If it weren't for the Fizzing Whizbee, that drop would've broken my legs.
Back in the room at the base of the tower, Hermione slid her hand on the smooth stone again. "If only there was another way out," she said with a sigh. A door shimmered slightly and faded. She quickly walked to where the door had vanished, examining the wall again. "A way out," she tried saying, then added, "another way out." Nothing. "Please let me out," she said, and the door quickly reappeared and vanished again. "Please let me out," she repeated, grabbing the door latch before the door vanished. It opened and Hermione passed through. She was standing on the third floor corridor, several paces past the door to Fluffy's room. She turned around, and only a fragmented, sliver of a line could be seen of the door, a barely discernable outline in the rock. "Please let me in," she tried asking the corridor, and the latch appeared momentarily, then vanished again. Hermione smiled. She knew the way in. She counted her steps until she stood in front of Fluffy's door. Eleven. I'll be back at dawn.
~Spring 1977~
"I want to show you something!" Lily said, running ahead of him.
"What is it?" he asked, although he would have followed her anywhere in the castle just to be alone with her.
"It' s right... wait..." She slowed down, running her delicate hand along the stone. "Please let me in," she asked.
"Sure, just tell me where?" he asked, breathing slightly heavier from the run.
Her fingers had caught on a latch, pushing open a stone door. "No, silly, in here." They entered a tower. The room was large and the walls smooth. Lily lit her wand and gazed up the walls. "Isn't this great? That door leads to a steep tunnel that goes for kilometers, and... ah... this one ends just under a trap door on the ceiling; however, it's really rusted and locked. But this is what I wanted to show you! Look, stairs, halfway up on the wall... How are you supposed to reach them?"
"Fly," he said, lighting his wand.
"We don't have a broom," she said cheekily. "I wonder where they go."
"Somewhere up there," he said offhandedly, and his hand sunk into the rock. He quickly grabbed her wrist, pulling her through the rock space with him, feeling the gritty stone slide over his skin, but not snagging on his clothes. A magical obscured passage... interesting.
They landed on the stairs. Severus stubbed his toe and warned Lily as he proceeded up the staircase. The stairs ended at an arched doorway, recessed between the conjectures of two of the arches in the ceiling. The door opened easily with the slightest touch of his hand, and he gallantly opened the door to let Lily pass. The room was small, obviously very high up in the castle with one sizable window. The glass was clear and pristine, beveled slightly at the edges, with a wide windowsill, just deep enough to sit upon and wood that framed the window in the thick stone walls. You could see across the tops of the trees from the window and the crests of the mountains beyond.
Lily walked straight for the window, placing both hands on the windowsill and leaned forward slightly. "Oh, this is breathtaking!" she said in awe of the view.
Yes, great view. "Yes, it is," he admitted, watching her eyes alight with happiness.
After staring out the window, Lily turned to leave. "The door, it won't open!" she exclaimed.
"There's Dark Magic on the door, I think," he said, examining the wood and doorframe. He could detect a nearly imperceptible shiver of magic.
Lily's eyes grew large. "Dark Magic? Are you sure?"
The words Arcanum Donec Amas subst Osculari were carved in the arch over the door. "We can't leave without kissing."
She turned to face him, her hand still on the wall beside the door. "You're kidding!" she exclaimed, looking at him first in shock, then in mild indignation. "You just want to kiss me!"
"Yes, I do," he said, stepping over to her and gently curling a strand of her hair around his finger. "But you know Latin as well as I do, and it translates into 'sealed until a lover's kiss.'"
Lily backed up until her heels hit the stone wall behind her. "This is a trick! It's just you did this somehow to so you could kiss me, didn't you?"
"No, I didn't. I don't know this magic," he said, letting his voice curl seductively around each word. "You'd like to think I would or that I did this to trap you, but it's just happy coincidence." He placed his hands on the wall on either side of her and leaned into her slightly until he could just barely brush her lips with his own. "So, Lily, now that you have me here, what are you going to do?"
"I didn't bring you here," she replied, her voice edged with a slight tremor. "I..."
He leaned in and kissed her lips, savoring the silky soft feel of them and the scent of her perfume. The door latch clicked after several heartbeats, and he swore softly as the door opened.
Lily was staring at him, her face flushed and her eyes wide.
~Spring 1997~
Hermione ran up the stairs in the key room, hoping she wasn't too late to watch the sun rise over the mountains. She'd been eagerly anticipating returning to the room again, really looking forward to spending the predawn hours to watch the change of light on the landscape from the window. She slipped into the room quickly and closed the door just as Professor Severus Snape turned around. Damn. "Ah... Good morning, sir."
"What are you doing here?" he asked, his tone icy.
"I um... wanted to see the room ah view," she stammered, uncertain as to why she was there suddenly. "Because I wanted to..."
He stood aside, his face hard. "By all means, look," he said with a sweep of his hand.
Cautiously, Hermione approached the window and set both hands on the windowsill as she looked out the pristine glass at the view of the forest and rugged mountains, all the while extremely aware of the presence of Professor Snape looming behind her, just a little to her left. He was quiet, making no movement or sound as he stood there. Hermione kept her eyes on the window, her breathing becoming forced and even as she waited. As if on cue, the colors changed, the subtle variations of morning broke as she watched, acutely aware of the man behind her. He shifted and stepped up to the window silently, leaning against the side of the window frame next to her.
They didn't speak until the colors faded as the sun appeared over the mountains and the sky turned a bright sky blue.
Hermione turned and faced him finally. "Um, thank you. I it's time I go, I suppose."
"Indeed," he said, his expression unfathomable to her. "By all means, go."
She walked to the door and tried the latch. It wouldn't open. She drew her wand and said, "Alohomora." Nothing happened.
He chuckled softly, standing closely beside her. "Your magic won't open the door, Miss Granger." He pointed above the door and Hermione's eyes followed his finger.
The words Arcanum Donec Amas subst Osculari appeared as if carved into the stone arch over the door. "But that means," she gasped.
"Yes, Miss Granger, as inappropriate as it is," he said as his hand slid into her hair and cupped the back of her head, drawing her closer to him until his face was barely an inch from hers. "Yes, I'm going to kiss you so that I can leave and have breakfast." His lips landed on hers in a soft, sensual kiss, his lips caressing hers, catching her lower lip briefly, then covering her mouth again, sending shivers down her spine and curling her toes. Hermione sucked in her breath, bringing with it his scent, which only affected her baffled mind further. His kiss ended as quickly as it had started when the door opened. "Thank you, Miss Granger, thirty-five points from Gryffindor if you mention this to anyone."
He left the room in a swirl of black robes that billowed behind him as he descended the stairs.
Oh, bloody Merlin! I just kissed Professor Snape!
~Spring 1977~
Lily was crying as she ran down the corridor, and he followed, his soft worn trainers making little sound on the hard stone floor. Avery and Mulciber had cornered her, taunting and threatening her, calling her a Mudblood, and then coated her new jumper and jeans with mud and quagmire from their wands, drenching her shoulder to knees in front of everyone. Some of the Slytherins surrounding her had started laughing and taunting her while some stood aside looking surly, but doing nothing. The few Ravenclaws and Gryffindors who stood watching were too stunned and bewildered to take immediate retaliation against the crowd of Slytherins.
Severus gave all outward appearances of being like one of his Slytherin housemates, standing aside as if doing nothing but scowling. His scowl was not at Lily, although his eyes were on her. Nevertheless, after years of dealing with Black and Potter, he'd learned the deception of covert movements while appearing disinterested and indifferent and honed his ability to utilize his peripheral vision. And it was Severus who quickly cast the three curses at Avery and Mulciber with enviable speed, watching his laughing dorm mates collapse on the floor with swelling, oozing tentacles and pustular boils, erupting everywhere on their bodies. Serves you right.
Lily had turned, shoving some of his snickering housemates aside as she'd pushed her way past them angrily, just before his curses had struck and both Avery and Mulciber fell to the floor. She obviously hadn't seen what he'd done since she'd fled, running up the stairs and down the third floor corridor. He quickly followed her, still scowling.
Her hand stopped on the wall, which would lead her to the hidden room high above the castle. "Please let me in," she said, nearly falling though the doorway into the room with the partially appearing staircase in her haste. Severus followed quickly and saw her cross the room swiftly, finding the hidden entry, disappearing, then reappearing as she ran up the stairs and up into their room. He found the entry for the stairs and ran after her quickly.
"Lily?" he asked, deeply concerned when he entered their private hideaway.
She was leaning against the window, her forehead on the cool pane of the pristine glass with one hand on either side of her head. "Go away," she mumbled against the window, crying angry, humiliated tears.
He walked over to her. "No," he said simply, his hand grasping her shoulder to turn her around and face him.
Tears streaked down her face. "I'm a mess," she said with a sniff.
He flicked his wand, cleaning her up the best he could and pulled her to him. "No, you're not." He kissed the side of her head before she leaned away from him.
"I'm covered in mud from your friends and and you just stood there! Scowling at me!" she stammered, her green eyes accusing him.
"I most certainly did not. I'm afraid you missed the show, running away like that," he said, caressing her soft hair as he looked into her beautiful green eyes, which were filled with tears. "It will take someone quite a while to reverse the curses I used on them."
"You didn't?"
"I surely did."
She hugged, him and Severus held her securely in his arms, a smile on his face as he breathed in her scent from her hair.
"Severus?"
He felt her shift and wiggle. "Yes, Lily?"
She leaned away from him, looking into his eyes. "Thank you," she said softly.
He leaned down and kissed her. "You're welcome," he murmured against her mouth. She returned his kisses, her hands pressing on his back as he tasted her lips, deepening their kiss. He felt euphoric kissing her, holding her against him, savoring her lips. Her hands moved first, gliding over him, so he reciprocated gladly. At first, he mimicked her and then became bolder. One hand gently slid up her side, his fingertips brushing the side of her breast, and he laughed in pleasure.
She stumbled a moment, and he tightened his embrace to keep her from falling, wondering if it was his kisses that had made her knees give like that. He hoped so.
Neither heard the latch of the door click, nor did they care.
When she finally pulled away, breathless and slightly disheveled, he couldn't contain the smug smirk on his face.
She saw the open door next to him, her green eyes jumping from his smug expression to the door and back. "Severus Snape! How wipe that smirk off," she scolded at him teasingly as she adjusted her jumper.
~ T B C ~>
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Author's notes:
I know I shortchanged the scenes with Lily, but that is the difference between a man and a boy. As a man, Severus would know more and have more control than his seventeen-year-old self.
Latin words used are:
Arcanum, which means closed
Donec, which means until
Amas subst, which means lover
Osculari, which means kiss
The Potter Place Post DH Prompt Challenge Prompts used are:
#34. Teenage Severus Snape and Lily find a hidden part of the castle that even the Marauders don't know. What happens, if anything?
# 37. Teenage Severus is really distraught over the incident after O.W.L. exams. He and Lily have one encounter that we know about from the memories Severus gave Lily. What if there were other attempts to win her back. What were they?
Then nearly twenty (more or less) years later, Severus, who considered this place to be his own private little nook, finds (fill in the witch/wizard) in the room. Who is it? What did he find her/him doing? And what does Severus do? Or not do?
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I wonder how Severus is going to explain the extra points in the staff room.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
lol, er, um, huh. Probably won't. But then points earmed are magically recorded, hopefully it won't say why.Thank you for reading and for the review.
The differences between lily and Hermione andmore and more obvious, Lily did not need any potion to get her to keep Severus at arms length.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
No she didn't. But she didn't like his leaning toward his Slytherin housemates and their influences on Severus. Soo... But we already knew where that pairing was headed. Thank you for reading and for the review.
The difference between Lily and Hermione is getting more and more obvious, Lily only seema to want Severus in the tower room,whereas Hermione wants him outside of the room as well.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
That is the sad part of writing this, I knew what happened to the Lily/Sev relationship and to show it's decline. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
That is the sad part of writing this, I knew what happened to the Lily/Sev relationship and to show it's decline. Thank you for reading and for the review.
So others have been snared by the room, I hope we will hear more about them in the coming chapters.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yep, it's been there for a long time... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Hermione is not going to listen to him is she, at least I hope not.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
It's not a matter of will she, but there are magical forces involved (oops, you'd realized that already, hadn't you?) She'd have to excersize all her will power agaist the enchanted tower room. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm wondering, if it is just the magic of the room bringing Hermione back, or is it Severus himself.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Oh I can't answer that for you now. But beleve me, you, Hermione and Severus will figure it out ... when..?Thank you for reading and for the review.
A lovely start, I love the two time lines.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. It was fun to write, I'm honored that you are reading it. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Thank you for the review.
This is my second time reading this, it get better each time. Thank you.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Wow, I'm deeply flattered. I'm delighted that you are enjoying it. Thank you for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Wow, I'm deeply flattered. I'm delighted that you are enjoying it. Thank you for the review.
Ohh I'm in love with this story. I'm normally completely against any story with Lilly in it I'm not a big fan of her but this was unique. I loved the flashbacks and the idea of this tower. I loved the little twist at the end with Severus being in the tower when Hermione was a first year. Such a good read!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm dleighted that you gave my story a read, and really appreciate your candor. Thank you so much for the review, and I can't tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed this one. :)
That was a delightful way to end your story, although I confess I was expecting to read more about Snape's angst after Lily's death. Then, the modern Severus sounded a bit out of character, but it's understandable he might change after the war. At least for Hermione's sake...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I could have dragged on another chapter and taken that route, but we already know the angst he felft over Lily. As for Severus, he had everything he didn't even allow himself to dare hope for: love, family, home, child, respect... He let go of the past and was living. That, imho, would have mellowed him. Thank you for reading and for the lovely review.
This ended so well! I'd love to mention all of the things that I liked since I last reviewed, but really it was all so good. I thought that the two stories worked well all the way to the end. And I still think the artwork really added a nice touch. I was a bit afraid that their long time apart might have changed things between them, even though they had still thought of each other often throughout. But that didn't seem to be the case. I really like the magic involved, and the slowly unraveling mystery of it all. I was also pleased that they found a way to break the spell. There will be no more tragedy caused by that room, and the very last couple that was affected lived happily ever after... or so I choose to think. The explanation as to why she was able to go through in her first year was great, but it is a good thing that she didn't find her way up there at that time.Very, very enjoyable story. Now that this is done and you have more free time, I will be looking forward to more chapters from you on your other WIP's. What?! A little friendly harrassment never hurts ;) I can't help it if I really enjoy your stories!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you so much for the reviews and the supportive compliments. I'm really flattered that you liked this story so much. I'd never do that and click 'Romance' only to mislead you! Have some faith. Besides, thier love was deeper than either knew at the time--it survived nearly two years apart! Well, a year, followed by a reuniting on the battle field, only to be seperate for another year... But yes, they are happy now.I'm glad that you liked all the magic involved. The allure of the stairs didn't even affect Hermione until she turned 17. I mean, yes she could get through, but Rowena's protection on the barrier was able to stop her until then. I promise, I'm dilligently working on one of my WIP's. Which one would you like to see updated next? Don't mind the friendly poke, it gets me motivated! Hugs~
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Well, that is a tough choice... If I have to pick one, I think I'd like to see Consequences of Meddling with Time. But honestly, whatever you are inspired to work on at the moment is great. I know that when I am in the middle of a ton of stories, I sometimes forget exactly what went on ten chapters ago, or little nuances in certain characters, and have to get my bearings (usually by backing up a few chapters and reading the highlights). I have no idea how you can be in the middle or writing several and keep them straight! I'm in awe...
This is a wonderful piece of work. What a joy it has been to read it all. Congratulations on its completion, Maria
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you, Jeannie. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and for the reviews. Hugs~
Frustrating, I can hardely wait to get to the next one, this is a wonderful story and I'm so glad is finsihed now.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm sorry it is frustrating, but it's worth the wait for what comes next. I'm so glad that you are enjoying this one. Hugs~
Gads the suspense is terrible and I don't kow why they arent even writing or whatever
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Hermione doesn't know where he is and Severus needs to sort things out frist. You'll see, she'll demand an answer if/when they see each other again. Thank you so much for the review.
I really liked your version of the Last Battle, SEVERUS lives :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you. I hated how JKR worte hers, and I just knew that he couldn't have died from a simple snake bite. Arthur survived Nagini and she bit him several times! Thank you very much for the review.
Very much enjoyed the chapter like the differencs very much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. Hugs~
Oh, I loved this chapter! I had tears in my eyes when they finally confessed to loving each other. Very sweet and rewarding scene. I love this story! I just can't stop reading it. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you very much. That is quite a compliment, but I'm sorry to make you cry. I'm very flattered that you are enjoying this one so much. makes my day! Thank you so much for reading and for the review.
Back traced a bit to remember where I left off I can't tell, any way I'm really enjoying the story again.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
I'm so glad you are. Happy reading, doll. Thank you for the review.
Awesome can't wait for more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Thank you.
Well, I am at another stopping point so will weigh in at this time. This continues to be fantastic. I really like the artwork. It is very nicely done, and is so telling as to what the current tone of the relationship is in each timeline. I actually feel bad for Severus and Hermione as I think that they count on being able to find answers to any problem in a book, and they are simply making no progress. I still really like the two different timelines and their repective similarities and differences. I'm quite interested to find out more about this curse and how they will beat it, or succumb to it, or whatever is planned for them. WIP's are fun, but I am certainly glad that I won't have to wait for this to finish!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
LOL I'm so glad that you're enjoying this so far. Thank you so much for the lovely compliments. Yes, like Hermione always does, she searches her answers in books, but then so did young Severus. lol The two time lines are fun, writing them was like writing two stories at the same time with the same titles, only we already know where the one is headed and know the outcome. (I won't say whitch one. teehehe) The similarities play a huge part in Professor Snape's actions, but the differences are important. Thank you so much for reading this and for your supportive review. I really appreciate it. Good night, doll.
Hmmm... I really don't know how this story came and went without me reading it. I think I just had too many WIP's going on to really add another. But it no longer fits in that category, so I guess I can dig right in. Couldn't stop until now to review, that would take away precious reading time! But it is now too late for me to go on, so I will stop and leave my thanks for such a fun, interesting story.I'm really loving this, especially how it goes back and forth between the two times which seem to parallel each other quite eerily. I don't know how I feel about the state of things. I don't have a problem with a teacher/student relationship in fiction, but you get the feeling that he is manipulating her and knows exactly what he is doing, even though he has no business doing it. That sort of bothers me, but at the same time, she is not protesting, and he is not treating her badly. And I truely believe that he meant it when he told her to say the word and he would stop. I get the impression that there is some magic at work here that is bigger than them just enjoying themselves each morning. Now that I think about it, I guess what really nags at me, is the feeling like there is magic involved that makes her desire his company, and his touch, even though she might not feel that way in another situation. That is ok, but if he knows that is how the room works, and is allowing her to come there when she is ignorant to the rooms effect, well, I guess that is the crux of what is creeping me out a bit.Sorry, I am working out my thoughts on screen rather than in my head. And in doing so, I am expressing concern over things that are mostly speculation on my part (see, that is why it is supposed to stay in my head). And in working through my thoughts, I imagine this review might be starting to sound negative. Fear not. This has me terribly intrigued, and I have enjoyed every moment so far. If they continue on like this much longer, she will definitely not be able to tell anyone, or he will have taken so many points that Gryffindor will still be in a deficit when her kids are in school :) Looking forward to finding time to continue!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
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Hello! I’m so flattered that you’ve decided to give this story a go. It’s perfectly fine that you wanted to wait till it was complete to start it.
Yes, there is a lot of parallel (on purpose) between the relationship between Severus and Lily and Professor Snape and Hermione, as well as showing how Severus’ life unfolded. I hope you like it. Writing the bouncing was so much fun because it was like writing two stories at the same time, the prompt just lent to it so well.
To ease your mind—and not give away anything—the spells will be clarified in detail as you get further into the story, but yes, there is some magic that compels her to go up to the room, and the door won’t open unless certain conditions are met. That said, Severus Snape, imho, is an honorable man, with a shady past, but not a molester. He does know what he’s doing, as any mature man would with an inexperienced female, however, rest assured, I’m not a rape or sexual violence writer. (Victim of, worked on a Rape-hotline support group, and called the cops on the husband of a friend who had too many of the fist and finger type bruises…) Please, keep reading, the magic is there, but very carefully selected.
I have no problem with you typing your thoughts. Actually, I’m enjoying what you think. I want to say more, ease you, but I don’t want to give anything away.
Oh, good guesses!!! But really, like she is the type to blab about her ‘conquests?’ not. Lol
If after you get farther and still have the concerns over the magic, email me and I’ll explain. In the meantime, I hope you enjoy my little talke. Oh, I drew the all the art as well!
Wow that WAS A LOT OF HARD WORK, CONGRATULATIONS it was brilliant. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
LOL well, it was worth it - and now everyone is freeee! Thank you so mcu for the compliment and for the review.
Wow, he tells her never to come back. But knows she will and tell her what to wear? Go, Severus! This is a spicy story...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Yes, he knows. He doesn't want to push her but in the same time he does. It's complicated. Yes, it's spicy - and gets more... Hope you enjoy - thank you for the review, doll. Happy reading.
This sounds like a promising story, bea! I look forward to more. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
Oh good, I hope you like the rest. Happy reading. Thank you for reading and for the review.
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for an enjoyable evening.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Enchanted Tower Room)
You are very welcome. Thank you for reading this and for the review and pretty stars. Hugs~