I was searching for something to read Christmas Eve and this story was presented to me when I asked for a random story. All I can say is "Huzzah"!

This is a wonderful and well-written story about a character that always seemed to be a throw-away in the books. George and Fred, it seemed to me, were presented as one-dimensional characters with almost no redeeming qualities. You have taken JKR's canon and made them real.

Thank you for the enjoyable story. This one is definitely going into my keeper file. ^_^

... i've read what you said about tinkering here and there and to my mind, although it's your story, but since you've enraptured and captured us into your fantasy world, and this is a fanfic, unlike those dragonlance stories where once printed, never changed or improved, i hope you can weave our constructive comments in little by little, because then, it's still a living thing, not dead you see?

firstly, i'm only offering my opinion because u've done such a good job in weaving the closure together such that so many things have come a full circle. naturally i've been gobsmacked by your brilliance so many times in the story, i'm not telling you that i'm superior or whatever. i'm just saying that there are some more circles you can bring in and inter weave into the last two chapters if you like. maybe not just the last chapter otherwise it'll be lopsided...

some suggestions: fred's son was one of the more glaring omissions that i even with my foggy brain could spot. i think he should have some part of the inheritance and maybe a paragraph or so where we know whether he's a squib or not, and maybe a partial happy ever after for him here in this fanfic (even with a spin-off)

the dog could be in heaven with fred or meredith too

i felt the aunties' interactions with the great grand daughter was not really doing much. who were the 4 who had annie's violet eyes?

so only these 3 suggested improvements...i couldn't write a fanfic to save my life. but i can be a backseat driver!

this story kept me company through a bout of flu and cough. so i thank you once again!

i've to say, original character fanfics aren't my first choice, and i only started reading this because i've exhausted hgss and dmgw etc. fanfic lore,... and this was completed. but this chapter made me tear twice afresh. which is a feat and makes me realise authors writing about my fav pairings don't seem to be able to plumb my emotional depths as well. this is a nice vision of heaven, one that i'm not so sure i agree with,... but it makes for good thinking. thanks for being a writer of stamina and complexity, with enough moments of freshness.

guess nobody japanese reads this site as yet... as they aren't particularly good at English. but don't worry! once they do, they'll certainly leave a review or contact you to give feedback. only, will you still be around to edit the jap translation or reading the responses? :,)

"Did I miss the memo declaring my house a bloody
common room?"

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hahaha! and your last two plot twists are marvellous! at least as a fanfic writer you can get away with anything but they are simply brilliant and creatively darn awesomeness! :))

so sweet. i'm sure this would have helped angharad in her insecurity or jealousy about not being a witch and having magical powers, if she hadn't already found peace within herself.

"We found each other just in time to help each other
through our darkest hours" - awwww! maybe that's what i lacked... i didn't open my mouth, just thought it tacitly with my ex-fiance. sometimes, i am not enough encouraging. they are quite a model of positive relationships though!

loved the fact that bill and ron were totally inept goal keepers when it's a child scoring!

what a wonderful plot bunny! i wish sasha and charlie were bi though. polyamory yummy with jane. what happened to her?

well done! nice bit of action there! :)

i've no idea what quote by jkr u used, it went by so swimmingly. i was so engrossed with the flow! thanks once again for your time and commitment in writing!

awesome... not sure if i'd before left a review or read this all without reviewing thus far only because i was transfixed by your brilliant interlocking of fanfic and jkr's original story. i think yours take much more planning to integrate annie's life but thanks so much for writing this. you have a wonderful gift that you are exercising!

you're an awesomely fresh writer. it's definitely a talent you have!

hahaha, didn't know this story would be such a fount of useful information!

thanks for the thought u've put into this chapter.

i'm so happy to be having such a story to sink my teeth into! it's awesome and worthwhile reading it.

I'm so happy that Annie finally gets to see the wizarding world. sniffle :)

oooooh, they are in *so* much trouble, aren't they? <grin>

Awww. I can't even imagine twins, Anne's lucky to have Molly nearby, and endless other Weasleys for help.

Poor Angelina, that has to be rough on her.  Have we really seen the last of Stephen?

A mother of seven would definitely know when a bucket was needed. I'm sorry I suspected poor Michael.

Wow, I'm glad Meridith remembered Anne's stories. They should fess up and move Anne into the Burrow. I'm getting concerned.

Hmmm, still suspicious of that dog. And stephen. I'm just the suspicious sort.

Appariton lessons with fred and george, what fun :)

awwwwww, sniffle :)