Curious
George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
Chapter 4 of 80
shosierWhen Annie doesn't show up at the treehouse for a week, the twins decide to investigate.
Chapter 4: Curious
1987
"What do you think?" George asked his brother. They were sitting together in the tree fort, pondering the situation. The day had been dry so far, but who knew for how much longer? Grey clouds hung heavy in the cold sky.
Fred's brow furrowed in response. "Where is she?" he muttered.
"It's been a week now," George added.
Fred shook his head slightly. "Did she get in trouble again, do you think?"
George shrugged. "Dunno. I suppose it's as likely as anything." Whenever Annie got in trouble at her Muggle school, she was usually punished by not being allowed into the forest for a day or two.
"But she usually figures out a way to let us know, at least," countered Fred.
"I know," George agreed. It wasn't like her at all, to be gone so long without a word to them. "You don't think she's angry at us for something, do you?"
Fred shook his head. "She's never been one to simmer in silence before, has she?"
George snorted and smiled slightly. His brother was right: Annie certainly had a temper, and she was never shy about showing it. But what flared quickly always died away just the same.
"I don't like it," said Fred, standing up. "You don't think she's... gone, or anything?"
"Where would she go?" George replied.
The twins had figured out, without being directly told, that Annie didn't live with her parents that she lived with her grandmother instead. They also knew she definitely didn't like to talk about it. Could her parents have returned from wherever they were and taken her away with them? George wondered.
Fred threw his arms out in exasperation. "How the hell should I know?"
"She wouldn't leave without telling us... or saying goodbye," George argued. Would she?
Fred sighed and thought for a moment. "Well, it's no good sitting on our arses here. Let's go."
George followed his twin brother out of the fort and down the tree. But instead of turning west toward home, Fred turned eastward.
"Where are you going?" George asked, confused.
Fred didn't answer just kept marching. They reached the edge of the forest, the borderline of Weasley property, in less than two minutes at the pace he set. Together they stood just hidden from view behind the tree line and gazed across the open field at the little white house with weathered black trim. They had watched Annie emerge from this house's garden gate countless times before.
For the past two years, the three of them had seldom gone more than three days without seeing each other. Usually, whenever Fred and George would reach the tree fort, she would be there waiting for them. But on the occasions when they had found it empty, they would walk to this spot and whistle a loud signal that sounded like a bird's call. Without fail, their friend would then come out from her Muggle home at the edge of the Muggle village that was visible in the distance and dash across the grassy area that separated them.
Fred tried the signal once more, just like they had done every day for the past week. They waited ten minutes. Nothing.
"This is bollocks," Fred barked in frustration and began to walk out into the field.
"Fred!" cried George. "Come back!"
Fred dismissed his twin with a disgusted wave and kept walking.
George hesitated only a moment longer, then dashed out of the forest to catch up. "What are you doing?" he demanded.
"Getting some answers."
George stepped in front of him, blocking his path. "How? You think you can just walk up, knock on the door?"
"No!" Fred cried, his tone of voice indicating how stupid he thought the suggestion was.
"We can't do this, Fred," George urged, beginning to panic a little.
"Go back, then, if you're scared," Fred retorted and stepped around his brother. He marched off more quickly than before.
"If we get caught..." George hissed, jogging to catch up. It would likely be a death sentence. Their mother would have a fit like none other.
"We won't," snapped Fred.
"Fred..." George said, trying to come up with an excuse that would work to turn his brother around.
"Don't you want to know? Aren't you curious?" Fred asked as the distance between them and the little house was rapidly closing.
George pursed his lips. He had to admit, he was terribly curious. Why had Annie not come to the forest for a whole week? Was something wrong? And now that they were nearly at the garden gate themselves.... What was it like, the home she lived in?
He felt the temptation of his curiosity begin to take over. Here he was, within feet of an actual Muggle house! He could smell something delicious in the air surrounding them, they were so close. Muggle food cooked with ekelrity-something!
We've already come this far, he rationalized, might as well take a quick peek.
Fred and George crept up to the tall wooden fence that surrounded the back side of the little home. After listening carefully for what felt like several minutes and hearing nothing that would indicate anyone was on the other side, Fred reached out for the handle of the gate. George held his breath.
It opened easily.
George watched, his heart beginning to race, while Fred peeked his head inside the gate and looked around. He waved a signal for George to follow him and then passed wholly into forbidden territory.
George felt a thrill of adrenaline surging through him as he entered the garden and looked around. The neat planting beds were well-cared-for yet mostly empty, waiting for warmer spring weather to thaw the ground. He knew that Annie's grandmother was an avid gardener and often asked Annie to help her with planting, weeding, and harvesting chores, just as their own mother did. Only Muggles never had trouble with gnomes, for some reason, according to Annie. In fact, nothing here looked outlandish at all hardly any different from their own garden at the Burrow....
"Where d'you suppose her room is?" George barely whispered.
Fred pointed toward the eastern side of the house; the one that faced the village. George nodded. Annie had mentioned before how she could see the steeple from her window.
They crept around the corner. Luckily for them, the entire eastern side of the house had only one window, making it simple enough to deduce which one was hers. Unfortunately, it was at least six feet above the ground.
"Gimme a boost," Fred commanded after a moment's consideration.
George braced himself so Fred could climb up to his shoulders. Together, they were just tall enough so Fred could rap lightly on the window.
Seconds later, the window sash flew open. "Fred!" cried a hushed yet familiar voice. "What are you doing here?!" she whispered.
"Trying to find out where you are, git," he answered.
"Fred, you weigh a bloody ton," George grunted. His spine was beginning to feel crushed.
"Oh, sorry," his brother responded and promptly slid off George's shoulders.
Once both boys were freely standing on the ground, they looked back up at the window. Annie was leaning out, smiling down broadly, clearly pleased to see them.
"Ooh, wicked!" the twins whispered in unison, impressed with the sight of her.
Annie's face and arms were covered with little red spots, each spot surrounded by odd-shaped pink splotches that looked like she had been painted with polka dots by someone in a hurry. They could see above the windowsill she was wearing a plain white t-shirt.
"What's all over your face?" asked George after the momentary shock had passed.
"Chicken pox. I got 'em Monday sent home from school, even. Everyone's gotten it now. It's not too bad, actually, except they itch like crazy!" she explained, holding her arms out from her body and twisting them to better display the spots.
"Are they everywhere?" asked Fred.
George elbowed him, letting him know the question was inappropriate.
"Nearly." She nodded and absently scratched at her neck. "Sorry I couldn't come out. I heard you whistle a few times. But Gran keeps coming in to check on me every hour or so and put more of this bloody pink stuff on me," she said, now scratching her armpit.
"Well, hope you feel better soon," George offered, nervously glancing around at the mention of Annie's Gran. The last thing they needed was for yet another Muggle to know about them. Annie was one thing, but if anyone else saw them....
"Thanks. It's really nice of you to come and see me," she said, smiling.
"Yeah, well, George was worried about you," said Fred.
"It was your idea, git!" George protested, shoving his brother.
"Get off!" barked Fred in a loud whisper, shoving back.
"Shh!" Annie hushed them. "You'd better go.... I'll come back out to the forest as soon as I can. Gran says I'll be back at school by the middle of next week, so I guess I'll see you then," she said.
"Okay... see you then," agreed the boys.
Now that they were satisfied nothing was seriously wrong with their friend, they turned away from the window and began slinking back toward the gate. Just before he rounded the corner, George glanced back. He saw Annie was still leaning out the window, watching them leave, smiling slightly to herself. He gave her a little wave.
She returned it, then slowly, quietly began to shut the window. "Gran!" he heard her call before it completely closed. "Could I have another glass of water?"
George smiled. Annie was providing them a diversion, to help them escape without notice. Good old Annie they could always count on her.
Once they were outside the gate and halfway across the field, George peppered Fred with questions.
"What was it like?" he asked with bated breath.
"What?" Fred replied, exasperated.
"The inside! Did you see any plugs? Or batteries?"
"Merlin's hairy arse you and Dad are complete nutters. Yeah, I saw some plugs, I think. They were stuck to the wall."
"Really? What else?" George asked excitedly as they re-entered the forest.
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Latest 25 Reviews for George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
266 Reviews | 2.97/10 Average
I was searching for something to read Christmas Eve and this story was presented to me when I asked for a random story. All I can say is "Huzzah"!
This is a wonderful and well-written story about a character that always seemed to be a throw-away in the books. George and Fred, it seemed to me, were presented as one-dimensional characters with almost no redeeming qualities. You have taken JKR's canon and made them real.
Thank you for the enjoyable story. This one is definitely going into my keeper file. ^_^
... i've read what you said about tinkering here and there and to my mind, although it's your story, but since you've enraptured and captured us into your fantasy world, and this is a fanfic, unlike those dragonlance stories where once printed, never changed or improved, i hope you can weave our constructive comments in little by little, because then, it's still a living thing, not dead you see?
firstly, i'm only offering my opinion because u've done such a good job in weaving the closure together such that so many things have come a full circle. naturally i've been gobsmacked by your brilliance so many times in the story, i'm not telling you that i'm superior or whatever. i'm just saying that there are some more circles you can bring in and inter weave into the last two chapters if you like. maybe not just the last chapter otherwise it'll be lopsided...
some suggestions: fred's son was one of the more glaring omissions that i even with my foggy brain could spot. i think he should have some part of the inheritance and maybe a paragraph or so where we know whether he's a squib or not, and maybe a partial happy ever after for him here in this fanfic (even with a spin-off)
the dog could be in heaven with fred or meredith too
i felt the aunties' interactions with the great grand daughter was not really doing much. who were the 4 who had annie's violet eyes?
so only these 3 suggested improvements...i couldn't write a fanfic to save my life. but i can be a backseat driver!
this story kept me company through a bout of flu and cough. so i thank you once again!
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
eeks! what happened to the paragraphing? i left proper paragraphs, not this big ugly chunk!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks for all the lovely & sweet reviews... what a fuzzy holiday gift for me! And thanks for the spin-off suggestions, too. I did have several in mind (including one for Ben, a kind of diary or journal of his discoveries from his point of view) and even managed to write one... "Here Be Dragons" is archived here on TPP and is Charlie and Sasha's love story. I don't write much fanfic anymore as I'm busy working on original fiction. Please visit my website at www.shanynhosier.com for more info
i've to say, original character fanfics aren't my first choice, and i only started reading this because i've exhausted hgss and dmgw etc. fanfic lore,... and this was completed. but this chapter made me tear twice afresh. which is a feat and makes me realise authors writing about my fav pairings don't seem to be able to plumb my emotional depths as well. this is a nice vision of heaven, one that i'm not so sure i agree with,... but it makes for good thinking. thanks for being a writer of stamina and complexity, with enough moments of freshness.
guess nobody japanese reads this site as yet... as they aren't particularly good at English. but don't worry! once they do, they'll certainly leave a review or contact you to give feedback. only, will you still be around to edit the jap translation or reading the responses? :,)
"Did I miss the memo declaring my house a bloody
common room?"
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hahaha! and your last two plot twists are marvellous! at least as a fanfic writer you can get away with anything but they are simply brilliant and creatively darn awesomeness! :))
so sweet. i'm sure this would have helped angharad in her insecurity or jealousy about not being a witch and having magical powers, if she hadn't already found peace within herself.
"We found each other just in time to help each other
through our darkest hours" - awwww! maybe that's what i lacked... i didn't open my mouth, just thought it tacitly with my ex-fiance. sometimes, i am not enough encouraging. they are quite a model of positive relationships though!
loved the fact that bill and ron were totally inept goal keepers when it's a child scoring!
what a wonderful plot bunny! i wish sasha and charlie were bi though. polyamory yummy with jane. what happened to her?
well done! nice bit of action there! :)
i've no idea what quote by jkr u used, it went by so swimmingly. i was so engrossed with the flow! thanks once again for your time and commitment in writing!
awesome... not sure if i'd before left a review or read this all without reviewing thus far only because i was transfixed by your brilliant interlocking of fanfic and jkr's original story. i think yours take much more planning to integrate annie's life but thanks so much for writing this. you have a wonderful gift that you are exercising!
you're an awesomely fresh writer. it's definitely a talent you have!
hahaha, didn't know this story would be such a fount of useful information!
thanks for the thought u've put into this chapter.
i'm so happy to be having such a story to sink my teeth into! it's awesome and worthwhile reading it.
I'm so happy that Annie finally gets to see the wizarding world. sniffle :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I just feel bad it took this long for her to get a chance!
oooooh, they are in *so* much trouble, aren't they? <grin>
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Yes indeedy! But George was born for trouble... :)
Awww. I can't even imagine twins, Anne's lucky to have Molly nearby, and endless other Weasleys for help.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Me neither! Better her than me, I say. :)
Poor Angelina, that has to be rough on her. Have we really seen the last of Stephen?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Poor Angelina... and poor George. His own grief is quite complicated.
A mother of seven would definitely know when a bucket was needed. I'm sorry I suspected poor Michael.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Molly certainly knows what she's about.
Wow, I'm glad Meridith remembered Anne's stories. They should fess up and move Anne into the Burrow. I'm getting concerned.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
For Annie's sake, I needed her to come clean to Meredith, such as it was. And anyone would be concerned!
Hmmm, still suspicious of that dog. And stephen. I'm just the suspicious sort.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Oh, that Stephen! ;)
Appariton lessons with fred and george, what fun :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! Apparition = fun... ghoul = not fun, at least for Annie. :)