Reputation
George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
Chapter 14 of 80
shosierA footrace in the park turns ugly. George learns some very disturbing things about his brother and best mate. And I do believe those are hormones beginning to trickle in…
Chapter 14: Reputation
Summer 1994
Age 16
"What the hell happened to you? How did you manage to injure every single one of your toes?" George asked, gazing incredulously at his friend's sandaled feet. They were walking down the street next to the park in the village, bored and searching for entertainment. The sun had just set, leaving the clouds in the sky livid.
Annie wiggled her blood-red toes within her shoes. "It's called nail polish, dufus."
George smirked. "They look positively gory," he praised her. "Since when did you get so girlie?"
"Some of us mature as time passes," she retorted.
Fred laughed. "You'll have to excuse my brother, Annie. George still thinks all girls have cooties."
"Shut it! Like you know any better," George said with a forceful shove to his brother.
"Actually, I've recently discovered a few things girls are rather useful for," Fred answered, stumbling a step before righting himself.
"Watch it, Fred. Don't make me defend the honor of my entire sex," Annie warned him jokingly.
Something about hearing Annie say that word made George want to giggle. He smothered that embarrassingly immature feeling immediately with a quick swallow.
"No offense intended, I assure you," his brother said, patently lying. "Girls are excellent at lots of things. Better than me at loads of stuff like school for one. Or wearing skirts." For emphasis, he knocked at the back of Annie's own rarely seen but currently exposed knees with his foot, making them buckle.
That is unusual, George agreed silently. Instead of her typical jeans, Annie was wearing a skirt made of denim, pleated in a style vaguely similar to the girls' uniform skirt at school. This one looked better, though; a bit more stylish, in his opinion. The ones at school were absolutely dreadful.
"This list had better get a lot longer, and quick," Annie threatened Fred, brandishing a fist in his direction. "And should not be limited things like cooking and cleaning, if you know what's good for you."
"But you're really good at those things, Annie. You have loads of domestic talents. What's wrong with that? Nothing to be ashamed of," Fred taunted her in a smarmy voice.
Annie halted, planting her feet. "I'm better than you at just about anything you care to name, Fred Weasley, including standing up to pee," she huffed, hands on her hips.
"Ha! How about kissing, then?" Fred dared her.
Annie rolled her eyes disdainfully, then started walking again. "Grow up."
"Like you've ever," George chimed in as well. Where is all this rubbish coming from? What's Fred on about? he wondered. They'd always ribbed each other about every little thing, but never about... kissing.
"You don't know everything about me, George," Fred snapped, clearly annoyed with George's lack of support.
George snorted in disbelief. As if....
"For your information, I have kissed a girl, which is more than I can say for either of you two gits." Fred folded his arms, getting defensive. He sat down in a swing with a huff.
"Why would I want to kiss a girl?" Annie asked, purposely misunderstanding him.
Fred stuck his tongue out at her for her mockery.
"In your dreams," George taunted, nearly at the same time. He's lying! he thought with confidence that was beginning to waver slightly.
"Actually, it was in the library... last spring. With Allison Stewart," Fred boasted.
"Bullshit! She's a seventh year!" cried George. What the bloody hell is he trying to pull?
"I know mate! I was a bit shocked myself! She just... sort of... cornered me. Said I was really cute...." His brother smiled with the memory of it.
"When the hell did you ever set foot in the library?" protested George, suddenly nervous. He wracked his brain to think of any significant span of time they'd spent apart during the last school year. Since when were they keeping things like this a secret from each other?
"Doesn't sound as if there were any reliable witnesses to this supposed kiss. How convenient for you." Annie added, sounding rather dubious herself.
"Don't be jealous, Annie! There's plenty of Fred to go around. I'll still be your first, if you like," Fred teased smugly as he let go of the chain and reached out to take her hand. He puckered his lips like a dying fish.
Annie shoved him away roughly, making the chain rattle and Fred chuckle. "You're nearly a year too late, dork," she informed him. She strolled casually over to a merry-go-round nearby, spun it forcefully, then hopped on.
Annie, too? George was getting increasingly uncomfortable with this conversation. It was extremely disturbing to think his twin brother and best friend had spent the last year snogging people without his knowledge. And he had... well, he had not. "Are you still running, Annie?" he asked, attempting to redirect them.
"Yeah," she answered, sounding eager to change the subject as well.
"Away from all the boys, obviously, George," Fred baited her.
Annie smiled at Fred with dangerous sweetness. "I can sure as hell outrun you."
The hairs on the back of George's neck stood up at the knife-edge tone in Annie's voice as she challenged his brother.
"Care to prove it?" asked Fred with all the machismo he could summon.
But George heard the slight hesitation in his brother's voice and was willing to bet Annie did, too. He smiled in anticipation of the imminent battle. This promises to be entertaining.
"Name the time and place you can stand to be humiliated," she taunted him without reservation, throwing down the gauntlet.
"What's wrong with here and now? Unless you're chicken..." Fred replied coolly.
George could see Fred knew he was trapped with no escape and was coasting on bravado alone at this point. A part of him was hoping Annie would teach Fred a lesson he nearly always deserved to get taken down a peg or two, after all. But he felt a little traitorous, taking so much enjoyment from watching his brother squirm.
"Nothing at all," Annie said with a confident shrug. She began to remove her sandals, which were unfit for running.
George was momentarily distracted by her red toes now standing out against the green grass. Her feet looked far too small and delicate to be up for the challenge. He and his brother were wearing trainers, after all. Doesn't quite seem fair, really, he thought with a tiny pang. Then again, Fred gave her every chance to back down. Typical Annie not to do so, though.
"First one to reach the far end of the park that sign over there wins," she said.
"That far?" asked George, slightly concerned. It went without saying that anything Fred did, George was expected to do as well. Plus, family honor was at stake now, and even though it was all in fun, George wasn't about to leave his brother without a second for support. He and Fred would definitely have an advantage in a sprint, he reckoned, but over longer distances....
"Winner gets what...? A kiss?" teased Fred, presumably attempting to make her think twice about the dare.
"Why would I reward the loser and punish the winner?" she cried, hands on her hips.
George laughed nervously. Though exactly why he felt nervous at the moment was unclear to him. Why does he keep banging on about kissing tonight, anyway?
"Ouch! Okay, just for bragging rights, then," Fred said with a laugh. "Ready?"
Annie nodded, accepting the terms of the contest. All three of them toed an imaginary line.
"Steady?" George asked.
Annie looked over at him and winked. "GO!" she yelled.
The three of them flew across the flat expanse of the park. Fred and George's equally long legs carried them farther per stride, but Annie's strength and training kept her neck and neck with them the entire way. She forced them to run flat out, that was for sure.
There was no clear winner by the time they reached the finish line. All three doubled over, sucking in air for several minutes before they were able to speak again. At which point they started laughing.
"You know... kissing isn't... so bad.... You should... let a boy... catch you... sometime..." Fred teased her as he struggled to breathe.
"Oh, I know... it isn't.... It was just... the idea of... kissing you, Fred," she giggled.
George bellowed with laughter. "Good one, Annie!" He held out his hand to her, and she high-fived it gently.
Annie started walking back to the starting line to collect her shoes. The boys quickly caught up with her, taking turns bumping her with their shoulders into the other one. She shoved each one back in turn. Both boys kept on walking slowly as she paused to put her shoes back on. Afterward, she jogged a few paces to catch up, then launched herself with a leap up onto Fred's back.
"Argh! A little warning would be polite," he complained as he caught her knees with his hands to support her weight, stumbling for a moment.
"Suck it up, wimp. She can't be that heavy she's barely four feet tall," George teased his brother.
"Shut up, George!" Annie complained. "I'm five-two now!"
"It's not the weight it's the force of the impact," Fred groaned, then yelped as his earlobe was pinched.
"Isn't that a pretty picture," called out a female voice from a picnic table a short distance away. It was dripping with venom, unfriendly to the utmost degree.
"Excuse me?" Annie turned toward the voice, easing herself down off Fred's back. She squinted into the darkness, trying to make out the source of the malice in the dimness, and took several steps forward.
"You heard me, slag," snarled the voice.
Annie recognized the girl now: a particularly stupid one from school had been seated at the table and was rising from it threateningly. She was tall and solidly built, but otherwise unremarkable. Annie had heard through the rumor mill that this one had had a big crush on Geoff last year, but she had never spoken a direct word to her in her life. At the time, Geoff had made it clear to anyone who would listen that he was uninterested.
Annie took several more steps closer to the table. She had completely forgotten the fact that anyone else was with her. Nothing registered apart from the threat emanating from the girl in front of her.
"Care to say that to my face?" she answered in a soft, threatening voice.
"Run yourself through all the boys at school, have you? Casting yourself about for something new? You disgusting whore," the girl baited Annie malevolently.
Annie felt hot blood gush out of her gut and into her limbs and had little motivation to subdue it at the moment. Perhaps some of those vicious school rumors about her, the dirty looks launched her way, might be avenged tonight.
She noticed a few other girls rising to stand near the big girl. She hadn't realized before that there was a group of them at the table. But Annie didn't care. No matter collateral damage, if they're stupid enough to get involved.
Her breath was coming in rapid gulps, oxygenating her blood for the imminent attack. Her mind emptied of everything but the immediate battle to come. Her muscles tensed as she shifted her weight slightly to the balls of her feet in preparation to spring. Her hands curled themselves into fists, throbbing with the craving for impact. She took several more steps forward, ready to engage the enemy.
Annie was startled by a hand on her arm that suddenly yanked her backwards.
"Now, now, ladies. Let's all be civil, shall we?" warned Fred, standing a few feet to the left side of her.
"Step off, Annie. She's not worth it," whispered George, maintaining his grip on her arm. He turned his back on the group of girls strategically arranging itself and faced her instead, standing firm between them.
"I'm gonna to put my fist through her fucking teeth!" Annie shouted as she ducked her head around him, glaring at the girl. She pushed back against George with her arms, forcing him to take a step backward.
"You and what army, bitch?" the girl retorted.
"You're the one with the army, you bloody cow!" Annie spat back at her.
She kept trying to get around George, but he continued blocking her with his arms and body. She didn't want to hurt him, but if he didn't get out of her way soon....
George was now having some difficulty restraining his friend. He and his brother had learned a long time ago that there was some strange reserve of strength she could tap into when angry, and he realized she was definitely connected to it now. "Annie! Leave it!" he hissed quietly, reluctant to get much more physically forceful with her.
"Let go of me!" Annie snarled at him in a whisper. Frustratingly, every time she got one arm free, the other one was captured. Against her wishes, he had forced her to take several steps backward at this point. "I'm warning you, George...."
"Lovely manners with a face to match," growled Fred toward the big girl as he took a few steps backwards to help George restrain Annie's nearly murderous rage. "Pleasure to meet you. See you next Tuesday, all of you."
"That's right," the girl called out after the retreating trio of friends. "You'd better get that slut out of here! She won't be in any state to fuck you if I get my hands on her!"
Annie screamed and clawed at the body between her and her prey, finally breaking free of George's grip. In the instant of freedom that followed, she stumbled for two steps, righted herself, then lunged toward the insulting girl, sneering with pleasure at the look of shocked fear that crossed her intended victim's face. She roared in triumphant anticipation as the girl panicked, taking several quick steps backward, then fell on her backside.
Fred grabbed her from behind just as Annie was about to pounce, pinning her arms and dragging her away from the confrontation. Kicking and howling, Annie spewed threats and epithets at the girls who now stood stunned and speechless. Working together, the brothers managed to turn her around, each firmly holding one of Annie's arms, and marched her out of the park between them.
"Damn, Annie! What the hell was that?" Fred demanded once they were seated in a chip shop a few blocks away.
They had all three been silent during the walk away from the park to this place. George had just set a basket of food and some drinks on the table, then scooted himself into the booth as well. Annie sat between them in the back, staring with sullen anxiety at the table.
"Just a few of my charming schoolmates," she answered bitterly, biting her lip. She felt sick to her stomach, which was roiling full of a cocktail of nervous worry and adrenaline. What must Fred and George think of me? What if they believe that girl?
"Leave her alone," George ordered his brother. This is who Annie is forced to go to school with? They're as bad as than any Slytherins! he marveled.
He thought he could see tears beginning to well up in her eyes and had no clue what to do if she started to cry. Other than run back to the park and murder that herd of horrid girls, that is. He shook off the thought of them and returned his focus to his friend. He couldn't remember when he had seen her this upset. Not in a long time, at least.
They sat quietly for several minutes. Neither boy had any idea what to say. Fred began munching on the food.
"I'm not like that. What she said," Annie said quietly.
"Of course you're not!" cried George, astonished she could entertain the notion they could think something like that about her. They'd known each other for more than half their lives at this point. He granted he might not know much, but he reckoned he understood what a whore was, at least, and Annie was the furthest thing from it. The idea was utterly preposterous.
"Don't be ridiculous," added Fred dismissively. After a moment, he continued. "You're so cute, I bet all the girls at school are jealous of you," he said as he gently punched her in the arm.
Annie snorted at Fred with his mocking smirk. "You're so full of it...."
"Don't take my word for it, then. Isn't she cute, George?" prompted Fred with a grin.
"Cute as a bug," he agreed, laughing cheerfully. Smile, Annie, he encouraged her silently. Shake it off, mate....
"A cute little cockroach," Fred teased, using his arm to deflect a retaliatory slap to the head from Annie.
"I was thinking more along the lines of dung beetle," George laughed as he caught the playful fist she threw at him in his hand.
"An adorable little bloodsucking tick," sang Fred, quickly spinning his legs from under the table, out of kick range.
"The most charmingly annoying mosquito," George said as he swatted her pinching fingers off his arm.
Annie giggled. "Both of you can kiss my..."
"Have a chip, will you?" George interrupted as he tossed one at her head.
Annie caught it in mid-flight with her mouth and smiled.
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266 Reviews | 2.97/10 Average
I was searching for something to read Christmas Eve and this story was presented to me when I asked for a random story. All I can say is "Huzzah"!
This is a wonderful and well-written story about a character that always seemed to be a throw-away in the books. George and Fred, it seemed to me, were presented as one-dimensional characters with almost no redeeming qualities. You have taken JKR's canon and made them real.
Thank you for the enjoyable story. This one is definitely going into my keeper file. ^_^
... i've read what you said about tinkering here and there and to my mind, although it's your story, but since you've enraptured and captured us into your fantasy world, and this is a fanfic, unlike those dragonlance stories where once printed, never changed or improved, i hope you can weave our constructive comments in little by little, because then, it's still a living thing, not dead you see?
firstly, i'm only offering my opinion because u've done such a good job in weaving the closure together such that so many things have come a full circle. naturally i've been gobsmacked by your brilliance so many times in the story, i'm not telling you that i'm superior or whatever. i'm just saying that there are some more circles you can bring in and inter weave into the last two chapters if you like. maybe not just the last chapter otherwise it'll be lopsided...
some suggestions: fred's son was one of the more glaring omissions that i even with my foggy brain could spot. i think he should have some part of the inheritance and maybe a paragraph or so where we know whether he's a squib or not, and maybe a partial happy ever after for him here in this fanfic (even with a spin-off)
the dog could be in heaven with fred or meredith too
i felt the aunties' interactions with the great grand daughter was not really doing much. who were the 4 who had annie's violet eyes?
so only these 3 suggested improvements...i couldn't write a fanfic to save my life. but i can be a backseat driver!
this story kept me company through a bout of flu and cough. so i thank you once again!
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
eeks! what happened to the paragraphing? i left proper paragraphs, not this big ugly chunk!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks for all the lovely & sweet reviews... what a fuzzy holiday gift for me! And thanks for the spin-off suggestions, too. I did have several in mind (including one for Ben, a kind of diary or journal of his discoveries from his point of view) and even managed to write one... "Here Be Dragons" is archived here on TPP and is Charlie and Sasha's love story. I don't write much fanfic anymore as I'm busy working on original fiction. Please visit my website at www.shanynhosier.com for more info
i've to say, original character fanfics aren't my first choice, and i only started reading this because i've exhausted hgss and dmgw etc. fanfic lore,... and this was completed. but this chapter made me tear twice afresh. which is a feat and makes me realise authors writing about my fav pairings don't seem to be able to plumb my emotional depths as well. this is a nice vision of heaven, one that i'm not so sure i agree with,... but it makes for good thinking. thanks for being a writer of stamina and complexity, with enough moments of freshness.
guess nobody japanese reads this site as yet... as they aren't particularly good at English. but don't worry! once they do, they'll certainly leave a review or contact you to give feedback. only, will you still be around to edit the jap translation or reading the responses? :,)
"Did I miss the memo declaring my house a bloody
common room?"
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hahaha! and your last two plot twists are marvellous! at least as a fanfic writer you can get away with anything but they are simply brilliant and creatively darn awesomeness! :))
so sweet. i'm sure this would have helped angharad in her insecurity or jealousy about not being a witch and having magical powers, if she hadn't already found peace within herself.
"We found each other just in time to help each other
through our darkest hours" - awwww! maybe that's what i lacked... i didn't open my mouth, just thought it tacitly with my ex-fiance. sometimes, i am not enough encouraging. they are quite a model of positive relationships though!
loved the fact that bill and ron were totally inept goal keepers when it's a child scoring!
what a wonderful plot bunny! i wish sasha and charlie were bi though. polyamory yummy with jane. what happened to her?
well done! nice bit of action there! :)
i've no idea what quote by jkr u used, it went by so swimmingly. i was so engrossed with the flow! thanks once again for your time and commitment in writing!
awesome... not sure if i'd before left a review or read this all without reviewing thus far only because i was transfixed by your brilliant interlocking of fanfic and jkr's original story. i think yours take much more planning to integrate annie's life but thanks so much for writing this. you have a wonderful gift that you are exercising!
you're an awesomely fresh writer. it's definitely a talent you have!
hahaha, didn't know this story would be such a fount of useful information!
thanks for the thought u've put into this chapter.
i'm so happy to be having such a story to sink my teeth into! it's awesome and worthwhile reading it.
I'm so happy that Annie finally gets to see the wizarding world. sniffle :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I just feel bad it took this long for her to get a chance!
oooooh, they are in *so* much trouble, aren't they? <grin>
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Yes indeedy! But George was born for trouble... :)
Awww. I can't even imagine twins, Anne's lucky to have Molly nearby, and endless other Weasleys for help.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Me neither! Better her than me, I say. :)
Poor Angelina, that has to be rough on her. Have we really seen the last of Stephen?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Poor Angelina... and poor George. His own grief is quite complicated.
A mother of seven would definitely know when a bucket was needed. I'm sorry I suspected poor Michael.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Molly certainly knows what she's about.
Wow, I'm glad Meridith remembered Anne's stories. They should fess up and move Anne into the Burrow. I'm getting concerned.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
For Annie's sake, I needed her to come clean to Meredith, such as it was. And anyone would be concerned!
Hmmm, still suspicious of that dog. And stephen. I'm just the suspicious sort.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Oh, that Stephen! ;)
Appariton lessons with fred and george, what fun :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! Apparition = fun... ghoul = not fun, at least for Annie. :)