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George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
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Fred and George Weasley’s troublemaking careers didn’t start the day they reached Hogwarts. In fact, they had been honing their mischief-making talents for years with the help of a feisty little Muggle girl named Annie Jones from Ottery St. Catchpole. Their secret friendship continued even after the twins began leaving for Hogwarts, as the children kept in touch via owl post. It deepened into something more as teenagers, when George and Annie discovered an attraction to each other that they couldn’t resist. Their love struggles to survive one of the most trying times in the magical world – the Second War – and its devastating consequences. A happily-ever-after awaits them… eventually. Rating and warnings for later chapters. In this chapter, seven-year-olds George and Fred make an interesting acquaintance in a bowtruckle-infested oak tree, and a friendship is born.
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Reviews for George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
she's an excellent companion, willing and allowed to get covered in dirt and scolded for being late! I like her gran, too.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Annie was a joy to write, and as a character, very near and dear to my heart. I was one of those dirty (literally) little girls who ran wild in my little town, riding my bicycle everywhere. Dirt and bugs were my constant companions. What I would've done with a pair of magical playmates!! Sigh!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Ah, then you obviously can't have lived close to me for my mother always claims (my sister and) I were the most dirty and wild kids around. And I won't disagree. Adding F&G yeah, what a thought.
oh, my.
I've always thought that one cannot hide 7 redheads, six of which certainly adventurous, in little Ottery St Catchpool. Here's finally an idea what could have happened.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I very obviously agree!
Sore as they all will be the next morning, I think that wake was a good moment in the cycle of healing. There were some cute moments there all the way around. Cheers to George for cutting Harry down a peg or two. It will be better for Harry to not think of himself as so important. He'll have a more normal life.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks, Rose - as always - for the review! And I think the wake, far more than the memorial ceremony, was crucial for the young people left behind after the war. Harry was likely in a right state at the end of the war, so it would probably take him a little while to get himself set straight again - George was only too happy to help!
I love you forever for the attack on Harry's idiotic hero complex. It's amazing how few people seem to fully get how stupid he can be. You have a fan for life, even if you hadn't already. (I'd not sure that the syntax of that sentence is exactly perfect, but you know what I mean.)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
It was my pleasure! I love Harry and the stories, but as they wore on, he started to strike me as something of a self-absorbed whiner (internally, mostly, but still). Granted, he'd lived through a lot of muck to complain about, AND he was a teenager, so the odds are reasonable that he'll grow out of it. Fingers hopefully crossed.Thanks for the review!
I love the way you handled this - ESP Harry's apology (what a dork!) Just to let you know, I'm still reading, as quickly as each chapter is posted. I've had so much going on that I've pretty much had no energy to do anything and have set aside all the WIP I've been reading with the exception of yours. I still love everything you are doing with this - just not enough energy to post a review. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you, and I'm so pleased you're enjoying my story so much! That means a lot to me!
What a delicious compilation of all the emotions they must be going through at that very exciting time. I'm sure everything will go well, but it's good to see them working for their dreams.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Grief is a very complicated process. Life certainly goes on, and I couldn't imagine either George or Annie to be the wallowing type. I didn't want them to be callous or in denial about their loss, but they are the sort to put their shoulders to the wall and work for what they want (though what they want is seldom what authority figures want for them, ha ha!).Thanks for the kind review!
Nawww, I love all these happy chapters. Poor Verity, though...
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Verity, like most of the wizarding world, is still struggling to deal with the losses of the war. And one of the many issues George has to deal with is the fact that he looks like a dead man to almost everyone who sees him.My favorite thing to write is the banter between George and Annie when they get really playful.
Their house sounds absolutely gorgeous! Also, I spot magical twins... Poor Annie, she's never going to have a moment's peace.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I'm so jealous of their house.And... well spotted!
Aw... poor George. I like the "part seagull" line. I may have to use that one.Annie's having some moments of accidental magic, isn't she? HmmmmI'm glad that she's encouraging George to move forward just a bit. It will be good for him.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks, Rose! The inspiration for the "seagull" exchange came from my hubby. And yeah, Annie's doing what she can to keep George (and herself) moving forward through the healing process.Accidental magic... tee hee hee
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
I was reminded of last fall when we were on the safari ride at Disney World last fall. I knew the baby's diaper was wet, but when we got out, my shorts and shirt were covered. We're talking a flock of seagulls. I had to buy a change of clothes. With seven children that was the first time that ever happened to me beyond a drip or two.And it's definitely someone having accidental magic. Maybe it's the twins, but they're not the ones who wanted the baby powder at that moment.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
You're right. George wanted the powder.
Wow, I didn't realise how behind I was in reading this story. I'm looking forward to having time to catch up on this soon!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Welcome back!
Charming! I like the thought of them making their own home together.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I think it's an important thing, especially to George, to keep them looking forward rather than behind.
I like the sound of their house!I did wonder why things like size would be a problem, couldn't they expand with magic and such? But there again, Annie wouldn't necessarily appreciate living in a house that was bigger on the inside, I suspect I'd find it hard to adjust to. And then having their own house makes it special and personal. So yay. =]How long now until the twins are born?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I really love their house, too! As I saw it, the problem was not size so much as independence. JKR went to some lengths stressing that magic and electricity don't mix, and Annie can't operate much of anything in the Burrow on her own without magic. For her to have any semblance of independence, their house would pretty much need to be thoroughly Muggle, but in a very retro way, so she could use a minimum of electricity but not rely on it too much. Just one of the many issues of contention with a "mixed" marriage such as theirs.Annie became pregnant in early-mid February. I'll let you do the math. (squee!)
*takes a deep breath* It's a long time since I wrote a review, because it's a long time since I read fanfic not sent to me via msn and instantly responded to, so I'm possibly a little out of practice. Not to mention that fact that I've got 39 chapters to cover... so I'm sorry if this gets either incoherrent, ramble-y or (most likely) both.Anyways, you really had me hooked from the very first chapter. I had 1,500 words of English essay to write today, but once I'd started reading I just couldn't stop. You made me love Annie and gain a lot of understanding of and love for the twins. I think Fred and George were excellent peripheral characters to choose to write a long story like this about, because although JKR wrote enough about them that we *thought* we knew them, as I was reading I realised how 2-dimensional her portrayal was. I don't mean she wrote them badly, just that because they weren't vastly important, we didn't get a lot of details. I find that a lot of fanfic which adheres to canon can start to become implausible, because I constantly ask why, if all that is written was going on, no one ever mentioned it. But with this I find that everything makes perfect sense.Also, I admire your bravery with this. Not only have you written an exceptionally long story (with, as I gather, much more to come), but you've sustained your plot so well that I was perfectly happy to read through their childhood at the pace you set. Actually, I was glad of it, because the way you dealt with the growth of their characters was really lovely, and made perfect sense. (Edit - on re-reading I've noticed that I used that phrase twice, but I don't want to zap one of them, because I can't decide which. :p)I think the things that stick in my head most are: the hilarious letters, the happy beach days and the wedding. Especially the wedding. I'm a sucker for the awww factor, even though I can't seem to write it properly myself (and not for lack of trying).One last thing (what was I saying about rambling?) - your characterisation is absolutely spot on.I shall return for more of this story, coursework or no coursework (and there certainly is coursework - 805 words to go...). So... more please!~Meda~
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you, thank you, darling person! You have made my day (and definitely week, possibly month)! I'm so happy you're enjoying my story. It was a lot of fun to write. I agree with everything you said regarding JKR and the twins - they were my favorite peripheral characters from the get-go. Probably because I'm a sucker for a smart-ass (exhibit A: my husband). Fred and George both really spoke to me... I felt like I really "got" them.I am particularly proud of Annie. I set out to create someone perfect for George (but not PERFECT, herself), and I like to think I managed to avoid the dreaded Mary Sue label regarding her.There are lots more adventures in store for our happy couple! I hope you continue to enjoy the tale. I am in the habit of shoving the next chapter in the queue as soon as the previous one gets posted, so there's always something new on the horizon....
Response from MoonlitMeda (Reviewer)
You reminded me of something I neglected to say - the Mary Sue factor. Yup, you avoided it well, but you had me quaking with the 'violet eyes'. I was raaather glad when she went a little off the rails in her teens.
what a lovely posting!!! how fitting that George and Annie are having twins - hopefully helping to heal the loss of Fred.thanks for all your time and effort - i appreciate it each week;
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! All I can say about the twins is I'm glad it's Annie, not me. Writing this story has been my pleasure. I'm so glad you enjoy it.
Aw... two! Rock on, Annie! I'm glad that everyone is happy with that. It's a nice thing to help them get beyond Fred's death, too.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! That sort of thing can run in families, so biologically, I felt like I had that perogative. And Annie's pregnancy is definitely something that's helping them heal.
Phew! That was tense, but it worked out. I knew Molly wouldn't be too upset. What a relief to have it all in the open!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Molly might have a hair-trigger temper, especially when it comes to Fred and George's nonsense, but she's also a mother through-and-through. She knows he's found his girl, and that's a relief for her, too. Aw, her little chicks are pairing up!
Whew! At last that's out in the open! :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I think Annie and George are relieved as well!
Sounds like she would be a great Occlumens. Are you sure she hasn't got any deeply suppressed magical power? ;)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Tee hee hee! More on this matter in a VERY later chapter, Sunny33!
oh how much will Annie and George have to deal with? Life really has thrown them for quite a few curves hasn't it? Lovely story, once again thanks for all your time and efforts
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
You are so welcome! Writing it has been my pleasure! Thanks for the reviews!Life has been a roller coaster for our couple lately... I've been getting all my ducks in a row, so to speak, before the end of DH (dum dum dum!).
That was a good death, beautifully done. I'm sorry thatMeredith and Molly never got to meet; I'm sure theywould have got on well. I worry every time Annie goesout alone, now - the fact that she could go running atnight shows that she doesn't really fully understand whatDark wizards are capable of.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I still get a little tearing reading it. And yes, Annie's running is risky, considering what we as readers know. And George's response, insisting on coming with her, both illustrates he has a better idea of what might happen yet also a similar amount of naivete.Thanks so much for reviewing!
I keep reading and not posting reviews, but this chapterwas handled so well, it spurred me into reviewing. Itwas so interesting to see this from a Weasley perspective, and you managed all the emotion verywell. I do have concerns for the safety of Annie andher Gran if it gets out that a Weasley is involved with aMuggle. I love Meredith and hope nothing happens toher.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! Now Annie is truly in the thick of it, isn't she? For this story, I wanted to create Muggles that weren't stupid, or cruel, or close-minded - in short, no Dursleys. Annie learned about the magical world as a child, when she was perhaps more open to the idea, and while Meredith may not have a clue what's *truly* going on, you're right in that she's pretty well "guilty by association" at this point.And I love Meredith, too!
This story really has me hooked. I particularly liked theexplanation for George & Fred failing so many exams -they really were bright boys, so the deliberate plan theyhatched made perfect sense. I do hope Annie managesto keep the upper hand with Stephen; that's aninteresting sub-plot.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it! And Stephen is an interesting source of drama
I'm really enjoying this - I do feel so sorry for Annie attimes, not being accepted and now separated from herbest friends. The mingling of the Muggle and Wizardstories is handled very well.I just have to mention though, that the word you wantis "bollocks". (The old English was "ballocks", but itchanged long ago.)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I've always been fascinated by the fact that not all Muggles are ignorant of the magical world (Muggleborn's parents, for instance, or wizard-Muggle marriages) and I wanted to explore this concept in depth.And I'm glad you find Annie sympathetic