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George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
shosier266 Reviews | 2.97/10 (266 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Fred and George Weasley’s troublemaking careers didn’t start the day they reached Hogwarts. In fact, they had been honing their mischief-making talents for years with the help of a feisty little Muggle girl named Annie Jones from Ottery St. Catchpole. Their secret friendship continued even after the twins began leaving for Hogwarts, as the children kept in touch via owl post. It deepened into something more as teenagers, when George and Annie discovered an attraction to each other that they couldn’t resist. Their love struggles to survive one of the most trying times in the magical world – the Second War – and its devastating consequences. A happily-ever-after awaits them… eventually. Rating and warnings for later chapters. In this chapter, seven-year-olds George and Fred make an interesting acquaintance in a bowtruckle-infested oak tree, and a friendship is born.
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Reviews for George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
I love the gift garden gnome, and oh I do remember being that age -- anywhere and everywhere, and up against the ... <cough> ahem, nevermind. :o)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! And yes, it was fun to revisit that aspect of adolescent hormones. Glad you enjoyed it!
awwww, poor annie
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Yeah, the girl has it a little rough in some ways. Thankfully, she's also got the twins to see her through. :)
You make this so real, I'm in awe. I can't imagine how Molley survived those years.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
In so many ways, I wish I was half the mom Molly is. I'm equally grateful I only have two boys. :)
absolutely wonderful young gred and forge!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I hope you can tell they're my favorite!
I so feared this chapter, but you took a wonderful approach to this difficult aspect.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you. It was a challenge to write, but I'm pleased with it... I haven't read through it yet without tearing up.
lovely and heartbreaking. I'm not sure I'm ready for your tale to be over with.... you made me cry. I'd like a few more installments btwn the kids starting school and all the grandbabies arriving.thankyou for all your time, hard work and efforts. I appreciate it.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! It's been my pleasure to write and post, and thanks for all your reviews. I am working on a few spin-off stories, one of which you asked for in an earlier review: Sasha & Charlie's tale! I'm also working on a Ted Lupin/Victoire Weasley fic that heavily features Gearge & Annie's offspring. Hope you'll watch for them and give them a read! :)
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
thanks - I'll be sure to keep an eye out. I've enjoyed "your" universe and am sure will be interested in how your characters grow.hopefully I won't have to wait too long... :)
Who needed the songs to cry - I fought tears the entire chapter (although when I saw his age, I knew that Annie's long life was coming to an end and new George wasn't far behind. I will miss this story as it's one of the few things I still am reading. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! It's been my pleasure to write and post. So glad you've enjoyed it!
Holy unexpected cliffie!! I mean, I should have expected something would have resulted from his hound dog days - but WOW.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks!
Talk about poetic justice! Glad the house-elf had a good benefactor and a place to go. :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I thought so, too! Thanks!
Wow. Of course, one would have to suspect there might be a little Fred (or few) running around there. Glad they discovered each other.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Point of fact (which didn't make it into the text) Fred (the elder) took Annie's impromptu birth control lesson to heart and was reasonably diligent in his "safety" efforts. However, these things are not fail-proof, and... voila!
Aw... of course some monsters are very real. I'm glad that they're starting to get to the bottom of the whole Malfoy thing.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
A little bit of drama and action to spice things up a bit. And I felt George needed to try to achieve some closure with the Weasley-Malfoy feud. Though it's not exactly done yet....
My, but you did make them clever! Would've been fair to have the point rain into two houses, wouldn't it? George will hopefully make a full recovery. Loved the excitement Art showed despite knowing quite well what awaits him. Is there anyone we know in Ted's dorm who could pep him up?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
We only ever got to experience Sorting from Harry's point of view in canon. I wondered what it would be like for a kid brought up within wizarding society to experience the tradition.
That's a fun way to cover a lot of ground. And then you tossed Umbridge in at the end like that. What could possibly go wrong?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Tee hee hee! The answer's found in the next chapter.
Another great chapter, loaded with action, but deeper insights into personalities and the wizarding world woven in without disturbing the read.I LOVE how you show Ron here. He suffers from the circumstances more than from his own personality--which is actually a fine one. Ron entangled in the lingerie of his much-feared sister-in law, that was priceless!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! My impression of JKR's Ron was that of a sometimes hapless but otherwise generally capable fellow. As great as Harry is, it can't be easy being his best friend. I enjoyed giving Ron some talent as well as moxie here. And draping him in bras and panties was just a bonus.
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
just for the records: we Muggles DO NOT usually dry our lingery-any washing--in the living room. We use a space that's more remote and less likely to see visitors. But with several small children to supervise, I assume Annie can be excused.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Oh, I know! You're right! But the design of Mole Hill is really an enormous great-room with a few small bedrooms leading off it. When the weather's nice, she hangs everything outside. But if it's rainy, then she takes advantage of the hearth and open space in the great-room. She probably should've hung something less intimate on the line closest to the hearth, though! ;) Like maybe jeans or the kids' clothes.
Oh, and in honor of Talk Like a Pirate Day (last Sunday!) Wonderfully fun!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!
where's charlie!?! Bring him back soon please? ( and maybe Sasha?)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Aww... Sorry, hon. Charlie and Sasha just aren't the main drive of the narrative. They do pop up here and there, but only occasionally.Still, I love that you're asking for them. Hmm... maybe a spinoff story, someday? Thanks for the review!
Aw... the family keeps growing. There are troubles here and there, but life is all about dealing with such troubles.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
This little comment makes me so very happy, Rose! For this is exactly what I intended this little stretch of the story to convey. Major or minor issues, we've got to muck through them all, and it surely helps to have love and family by your side when you do. Maybe it's a little too sappy, not enough angst or drama, but there you have it.Thanks, Rose, for making my day!
Hm, Hogwarts is in for some changes, right? Actually Tom Riddle had this level of control, even using it against other children... and it WAS fatal that no one noticed it earlier.I'm very relieved that they're not supposed to sleep with the older children. George can finally remember Fred without the pain, that's wonderful. How exactly the pure bloods were home schooled is not at all told in the books, that's true. What a nightmare it should have been to even out the differences in the first year! A great chapter, as always!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
You make a very good point about Tom Riddle. JKR seemed to make him a victim of his circumstances, almost irredeemable at birth with his penchant toward cruelty arising at a very early age, yet stressing that his choice to use his power for personal gain made him into the monster he became. But I wonder if Dumbledore (or some other wizard) had found Tom earlier, rescued him from the orphanage, attempted to foster him in a caring environment... could things have been different? Or was the die already cast?Perhaps as Headmistress, Minerva took this notion into consideration, deciding it was better to have a firm hand in guiding such precocious magical talent, yet keeping the wielders firmly entrenched in the safety of home and loving family at night and on weekends?What an interesting concept to think about. Thanks, as always, for a thought-provoking review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
JKR didn't elaborate much about when/what behaviour is inherited or fostered. Not in Harry, Snape or Hagrid, nor in Riddle. Very much is black-and-white and defined from the beginning; as in a Grims' tale. Snape being the exception, but not through fostering or parental care. So we can freely speculate the what-ifs. Yes, I agree that McGonagall would ponder about this, as a Headmistress and also since she was a Hogwarts student together with Riddle & Hagrid.
Yea Gods, F&A are worse than F&G! Meaning well, thank you!As much as I agree to formal lessons to prevent havok, does it have to be at Hogwarts? What about a private tutor? Surely George has the means for it? Seeing how much he hated the place, I'm surprised he'd not think of an alternative. Actually, he should be searching for it by all means... Loved how Minerva reacted! Oh, yes, half of the parents have little geniusses at home. Will she have a word with the sorting head to please spread the hordes of Weasleys more widely this time? Bill/Fleur offspring to Ravenclaw for a start? Percy's brood... hmmm. I've never considered Minerva close to 'anchient' though! She is around Hagrid's age, i.e. in her seventies, isn't she?Oh, now George missed visiting Hagrid. he'll have to do it next week, with the two rascals in tow. Yeah!!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks for another great review! I just can't imagine the "next generation" anywhere but Hogwarts... and neither can George. He recognizes his children are not miniature versions of himself, and while he'd be sympathetic (and likely responsive) to their complaints, I don't think he'd forego the formal education route without trying it first. After all, they very much enjoyed their studies at Annie's school (they begged her to teach them how to read - that's how it all started). And I think Minerva seems ancient to him, whether she is or not. I'm not sure if the Sorting Hat is open to suggestions from anyone but the Sort-ee, but, by all means, Minerva can give it a go! :)I always love to read all your observations/predictions,
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
! It's fascinating to see the possibilities readers see, some of which I never intended, others I did. The whole process is so amazingly illuminating!
Aw... time just won't stand still.Somehow I see Flitwick offering to be a private tutor once he meets them...
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I know! (sniff)
This chapter brought tears to my eyes. Nicely done (from someone who's been there...both women's experiences.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you so much for your kind words. And my condolences, hon.... Me, too.
Aw, poor Hermione and Ron. And poor George and Annie, adjusting to this new phase of their lives before they're really ready to do so.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Yep. Some people get to make the choice themselves, others get the choice foisted upon them.
another good one!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you!
... and the blood carries the magic? Well, I'm not so convinced as it would give the magical world too many opportunities to multiply, but good for Annie! She should still take recovery seriously, and her dear family should as well.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Listen to your instincts,
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
! Blood is a powerful magical *ingredient* of many potions, but whether or not it could confer magical ability seems doubtful to me, too.