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George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
shosier266 Reviews | 2.97/10 (266 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Fred and George Weasley’s troublemaking careers didn’t start the day they reached Hogwarts. In fact, they had been honing their mischief-making talents for years with the help of a feisty little Muggle girl named Annie Jones from Ottery St. Catchpole. Their secret friendship continued even after the twins began leaving for Hogwarts, as the children kept in touch via owl post. It deepened into something more as teenagers, when George and Annie discovered an attraction to each other that they couldn’t resist. Their love struggles to survive one of the most trying times in the magical world – the Second War – and its devastating consequences. A happily-ever-after awaits them… eventually. Rating and warnings for later chapters. In this chapter, seven-year-olds George and Fred make an interesting acquaintance in a bowtruckle-infested oak tree, and a friendship is born.
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Reviews for George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
Woo... nothing will be the same after this, will it? It's really sweet, the way she's discovering a preference. Now I wonder if George won't notice. Don't he and Fred wander into the woods with some Beauxbatons girls during the 94/95 school year?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Don't he and Fred wander into the woods with some Beauxbatons girls during the 94/95 school year?Would love to respond to this in particular, but for the sake of readers who want the plot to be a "surprise," I'll let it go for now. Tee hee hee.Thanks for being a consistent reviewer!
I love that you had her realize her attraction to George at a Quidditch match. It was the perfect backdrop to her frantic feelings. I can't wait to see if they disappear once she is no longer surrounded by magic (*grin*)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Me, too! This was a fun scene to write.Thanks for being such a consistent reviewer!
I do believe that someone is super lucky for the twins. Glad they were there both to protect her from herself and to explain that they didn't believe them. Fred is obsessed with kissing though. Surprised that George isn't.LOL. I love how you make them their own people.
It's really sweet that the boys decided to completely steer the conversation away from romance. At this point, such a thing would be divisive and Annie really needs this friendship. She's already going to have too much trouble because of the mean girls.If this fight comes off on Tuesday, things will get awkward. Somehow I expect Stephen and those boys will become aware of the twins.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
"See you next Tuesday" is British slang for a very offensive epithet. Fred was not offering an invitation to a fight. Nor did the Muggle girls interpret it as such.See = CYou = UNext = NTuesday = Well, you can guess the last, I think. And here is my absolute favorite website for British slang, if anyone's interested: http://www.peevish.co.uk/slang/ Hope you enjoy it!
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
Oh. (hands on hips) Well, now I'm almost disappointed. I was envisioning the Ottery St. Catchpole version of the Sharks vs the Jets. (From the show/movie West Side Story)LOL on me!I still see an actual fight in Annie's future over this. I can't imagine those girls will let it go. Worse yet, without an actual appointment, I fear Annie won't have anyone to help her, or that she'll have the wrong people try to help her and she'll get in a worse jam.
It's good to see that Annie has choices. I'm glad Stephen was so easily managed, even if it didn't seem that way at the time. Of course, I wouldn't put it past him to try something again at some point.I liked Andy, but of course he's no George.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Re: Stephen... very observant of you, my lovely
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
:)Andy is a sweetie, but I agree with you. Who could compare to George? Sigh.
A lovely story.
I am really loving this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I am posting new chapters as fast as I am able - our wonderful admins are inundated with new stuff to read lately, so I have to sit on my hands and be patient along with you.
Oh, I loved the change in George (& Fred). Too fabulous. Great explanation of why the twins managed OWLs. Andy was a sweetie. Do we see him again? Can't wait to learn what the surprise is.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
It would be nice to see Andy again sometime, wouldn't it? (cackling evilly). With Andy and the bar scene, I wanted to demonstrate that Annie is becoming an attractive young woman in her own right, especially so to people who see her for who she is, not for her history (or rather, her mother's history, like the Ottery residents do). It's not like George is her one and only option, here.A little patience on your part is required to learn about the surprise. When I originally wrote the next section, the following 3 chapters were all one big chapter. But since together they surpass 10,000 words, I've had to split it up (I can't manage to get the file upload thingy to work, so it's cut and paste, baby). Long story short, the surprise will be revealed in Chapter 15.Thanks ever so for your reviews! I love it!
I always think it is a gen, and the willpower sustain the spell. And an shocking idea that it is latent in the rest of us.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I think it must be genetic as well (I'm assuming you mean gene?). This discussion will be revisted much (much much) later in the story, because I find it fascinating!! Thanks for the review :)
Oh, I love this. As they're getting older, I'm enjoying seeing the little ways George is atuned to her. It's so great that Annie is at least partially responsible for the idea of WWW.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! And I never meant to imply Fred and George couldn't come up with everything on their own by it - they certainly could have. But I just couldn't resist having Annie plant the seeds for so many of the funny and cool things the twins were responsible for in the canon texts: lock picking, skiving snackboxes, and the WWW to name a few. I like that she contributes so much to their lives, even though she's a Muggle.And George is such a darling! Sigh. :)
What a great friendship you have you have captured! I enjoyed this chapter, especially the twins wanting to know about muggles going to the moon. You know they just thought it was rubbish before Annie confirmed it! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! Throughout the story, I tried to come up with examples of how muggle technology rivals, and even sometimes surpasses, what magic can do. It helps that George seems to share a fascination with gadgets and muggles with his father.
I really loved how the boys explain magic to Annie. The marrying of magic and muggle was fabulous. You do such a wonderful job of describing each characters responses. I love how you have made Fred and George individuals.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
This stands as one of my favorite chapters. I think it really establishes a special connection between Annie and George that isn't there with Fred, much as she cares for him, too.
Great story. I've been enjoying the way Annie's skills, for lack of a better word, are used by the boys at school or in other capers. I feel bad for the way she feels so left out in the cold. I'm worried that her local friends are going to expect more than she's willing to give soon.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Annie is a strong girl in many ways, but her Achilles heel is her self esteem, poor thing. When people put you down for so long, it's hard not to give them credence, even when in your rational mind you know it's crap. And imagine if your best friends could do magic, and you couldn't - what a blow!
I'm glad that Annie found Jane - I think its good to find someone who can teach you the art of the game. LOL at the plastic wrap!! As for Annie's other mates - man, boys really don't think much beyond their penis', do they? even when their penis isn't getting any more than talk. Glad she set Stephen straight, even if it doesn't work.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I couldn't leave Annie completely alone and at the mercy of the Ottery denizens (especially Stephen) without her being warped into a criminal, I figured. She needed Jane to keep her focused and grounded while the twins were away. The plastic wrap was a throwback to my college dorm days. Ha ha ha.I love your phrase, "Even when their penis isn't getting any more than talk." Brilliant! Well put! :)
I like the story very much, I hope she is going to ditch the losers.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. And Stephen's crew are proving to be a poor substitute for Fred and George. Poor, lonesome Annie :(
Boys never listen to girls - do they? I love how you are developing this relationship and the love, love you more. I LOL at the love you more and more and more!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Tee hee hee. Annie always tries to one-up the twins. The letters were a riot to write - I'm glad you're enjoying them!
They are so sweet and innocent as children. :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! These early parts were so much fun to write.
Cute, is nice to have inside story about the twins.
haha, i love this
so very cute =)
I've been reading this story and not reviewing for quite a while - sorry - but you have an amazing talent for reducing me to tears. In the last chapter, when Annie spoke about Meredith, and now with Ben.And I keep wondering - is Annie's mother still out there somewhere?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you so much for your kind review!Annie's mother had been a heroin addict for several years by the time she abandoned her newborn in search of a fix in 1978. People like that aren't long for this earth. BUT... having said that... the answer to your question is yes, in a manner of speaking.Sorry to be so frustratingly cryptic. You don't have too much longer now before all is revealed. Hang in there!
WOW, that was totally unexpected!! You did certainly hint at it often enough, but every time you drew my attention elsewhere. I hope George has a mild calming draught ready for his parents, so they don't drown Ben with questions. What kept Ben's magic from developing? Some frustration that he hasn't revealed yet?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks!Who knows what makes a Squib a Squib? If you believe (the younger) Fred's theory, all of us have the "magic" genes within us - only a smaller percentage of the population have them turned on. Genetics is always something of a random crap-shoot, anyway. One of the several stories I'm toying with writing after this is Ben's. Who knows when or if I'll get around to it, but it is something I think about.
I have to admit I laughed at the running discussion about the Eau de Centaur and Essence of Putrescence. There will never be a dull moment for those two.Meanwhile, the short real conversation between the two of them was brilliantly pulled off and very typical of both of them. It was practically cans on a string, but the best scams are the simplest.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Umbridge did force them to put their devious minds to work for them, didn't she? But George and Annie were more than up to the task!And now that George is finally free of Hogwarts... and of age... and fully licensed for apparation... hmmm. (laughing conspiratorially).
I love this story!!!! but please!!! annie and george need to meet!! keep up the great work! happy holidays!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
It wasn't my fault George and Annie were forced apart for two years... blame JKR (ha ha ha)I promise the next chapter will be more to your liking!
I admire your perseverance in taking your time and not rushing this. I would be very tempted to zoom right to the payoff at this point, but the story wouldn't be as good.I feel so bad for Annie. She's been cut off from her good influences right when she needs them most. If there's a good side to this chapter, it's that she didn't have time to run into the bad influences.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you for understanding! And I agree. It's a big part of why I chose for them to realize their attraction to each other at a point that coincided with the beginning of Goblet of Fire, ensuring that even if they wanted to, nothing could be done about it for a good long while.That being said, I hope you find the "payoff" is worth it! Coming up: George and Fred's final year at Hogwarts! Yay!
Interesting theory that Fred said. I'm sure you'll reveal more at the end regarding Annie's ancestors. ;) Nice trip through memory lane through pictures. My heart ached with Annie as she told her story to everyone present.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Actually, I never figured out how to sneak the rest of her parentage into the narrative. So here's a special "extra" for you...Annie's father is a drug dealer of Mediterranean descent, hence her dark, curly hair and golden skin tones. He and Carys had a relationship of convenience - she came to him for an occasional "free" hit - there was no romance involved whatsoever. Both are long since dead, succumbing to the inherent dangers of drug-addiction and criminal lifestyle.Molly has the right of it, in fact. Generations ago, a Welsh witch renounced her magic and married a Muggle. There's been an unbroken line of single girl children ever since, ending with Annie. The twins are the first boys born in the line for a couple hundred years or so.And thanks for the reviews!