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George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
shosier266 Reviews | 2.97/10 (266 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Fred and George Weasley’s troublemaking careers didn’t start the day they reached Hogwarts. In fact, they had been honing their mischief-making talents for years with the help of a feisty little Muggle girl named Annie Jones from Ottery St. Catchpole. Their secret friendship continued even after the twins began leaving for Hogwarts, as the children kept in touch via owl post. It deepened into something more as teenagers, when George and Annie discovered an attraction to each other that they couldn’t resist. Their love struggles to survive one of the most trying times in the magical world – the Second War – and its devastating consequences. A happily-ever-after awaits them… eventually. Rating and warnings for later chapters. In this chapter, seven-year-olds George and Fred make an interesting acquaintance in a bowtruckle-infested oak tree, and a friendship is born.
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Reviews for George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography
Awww, the poor parental units. Well, they had to let go sometime. Loved your description of George's feelings as he was letting Merrie go. And yay to Art and Roxy! :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I felt a little like I was channeling my own dad there for a little bit (he had three girls, too).
Awwww, love the little stories in this chapter! Leave it to George to want more Naked Days now that the children are out of the house. And describing the romantic interests of the children and their teen-aged awkwardness (or lack thereof)--priceless! :)
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! Perhaps George's behavior is wishful thinking on my part, being a mom of young ones. And I'm currently working on a spin-off story about the "next generation" kids and their adventures/romantic travails.
Response from lyn_f (Reviewer)
Excellent! I'm so glad to hear you'll continue in this wonderful G&A universe!
Nicely done! I liked how you made this into a teaching moment for Janie. Hopefully she realised that words can hurt just as badly as physical blows.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I wanted George to be the one to share Annie's story with their daughter... but I also couldn't resist adding Annie's point of view on the matter, too.
A great summary of what happened in a wonderful family.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I think they're pretty wonderful, too!
Aww, it was so beautiful to finally have them figure out what they're feeling. You're doing a great job making me sympathise very much with the two teens and their separation.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I'm feeling very warm and fuzzy
Fabulous chapter! I love the development f their relationship, away from Fred, but not forgetting that he is still part of this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Yea for laying groundwork!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Ah, Fred. What *will* they do about Fred? (snicker)I'll tease you with this: Fred has an impressive role yet to play in the relationship, IMHO.Thanks for the review!
Oh... she warned him to keep his appendages intact! Oh, dear!Talk about UST, that was some mess of letter writing to get to a pair of notes that could, if you squint and look sideways, be construed to say that they like each other.Brilliantly true to life.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Tee hee hee! Thank you! I'm not the sort of person to get mired in teen angst. I really don't enjoy it much and have little patience for it in real life. That's probably why I gravitated toward the twins in the first place - they're probably the least angsty of the bunch. That being said, one cannot be an adolescent in the throes of a hormonal crush and not be a tad angsty, in my opinion. So I threw a dash in there. ;)
wonderful!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you!
So this is where it starts being more George and Annie? They are cute the way the scam together. I can see her gathering ingredients and even making smaller preparations that will eventually go into their concoctions.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I promise romance will commence soon, to all my patient readers! The boys and Annie are fifteen during the summer of 1993, and I think if it wasn't for all their shared innocent history, something might have started between them this summer. But they remain blissfully oblivious of that potential for just a short while longer....
That is so awesome! Love the Neville twist at the end... who would have known he's be such the stud? :D
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Aw, thanks! I'm feelin' the Neville-love!
lovely as always. Loved the updates on Neville's life - it made me smile.thanks again for all your time and effort
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I adore Neville and wish I had the time, resources and inspiration to write him more.
We know why the twins letters are signed "George and Fred" - George writes them. But, why does Annie always write them to Fred and George? I can't wait to see how they explain this one.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I'm sorry to say I don't think there's any great significance to it. Annie has a contrary streak, so it might be simply because "Fred and George" are the opposite of "George and Fred." Just like "Love you more," goes one better than just "Love."That being said, things will soon be changing....
I was worried about Annie before, but I see she's starting to grow out of the tendencies that got her into so much trouble as a child. Having the right sort of people around us is quite helpful.The other boys she ran around with are comspicuously absent. Are they gone for good?
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
I completely agree about being influenced by one's companions!And as for Stephen and his gang being gone for good - now that would be entirely to convenient, wouldn't it? Where's the drama in that? :)
That was a fun scene in the mud. I love Fred and George and you have perfectly captured their personalities.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I love Fred and George, too. I am a real sucker for a smart ass, though.
This is a great take on the early Weasleys. I like it! Anything with the twins is brilliant!
And now the fun begins - poor Annie, her life will be a bit tougher now. I do hope they find a way to write.
The scene with the mud is great! I'm also enjoying seeing the differences in Fred and George and how they relate to Annie. I love writing and reading about the twins. They are too much fun.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Ditto! I love the Trio and have no major issues with JKR's stuff, but I couldn't help thinking through practically the whole series... "I WANT MORE FRED AND GEORGE!" They were completely underutilized!
That must have been quite the shock - to realize that someone you love doesn't believe you are telling the truth.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks for the comment!As a mom of two young boys, I can tell you they come up with some pretty crazy stories sometimes. Watching them as they get "into" the story, I suspect that in some ways, it can be difficult for them to separate "reality" from what they see or remember or wish really hard for in their imagination. It makes no logical sense whatsoever, but they really commit. Sometimes it's important to argue with them and set them straight. Other times, it's a lost cause. Gotta pick your battles.This is what I see happening between Meredith and Annie. If an eight-year-old with demonstrated social issues (Annie doesn't have many friends and often gets in trouble at school for fighting and the like) who spends a great deal of time alone (you suspect) in the forest, then comes home rattling off stories about magic... well, I can understand Meredith's skepticism. But yeah, it is a blow to Annie, for sure (although she had suspected it on some level before this). Life as a Muggle who *knows* about magic might be as difficult as growing up Muggleborn, I think. At least in this day and age.... maybe not in the "burn all the witches" time frame.Thanks again for the review! I hope you'll keep reading the story
I read this in its entirety over the weekend. Lots of good stuff in it. I like how you managed to tell your own story and still stay within Canon. Well done!A couple of things I didn't like, though:Michael the dog. What was the point of introducing him into the story only to kill him off a couple chapters later? It felt like you had originally intended to make him an Animagus and then changed your mind. Fred's son. Again, what was the point? He stars in one chapter and we never hear anything about him again. This doesn't ring true; I can't see the Weasley clan letting go of this bit of Fred. Especially not after the long setup of how badly he was missed.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks for a great review, and I'm very flattered you read it all in one sitting! And thanks for your constructive criticism, too - I do appreciate it. As for Michael the dog - I never intended him to be an Animagus, but I did want the reader to wonder about that very possibility. First and foremost, I needed him to be a distraction during the home invasion - something to allow Annie a precious few seconds to get her weapon ready. As far as Fred's son, Ben, is concerned, it's true he doesn't factor in much in this story - he didn't appear until quite close to the end, and I rationalized that getting George & Annie's story wrapped up was more important than focusing on him. I've always intended to write his own stand-alone story some day. But you're right, the Weasley clan never let go of him and kept him close and involved in their lives as much as he let them. Thanks again for such a great, detailed review!
Oh, that's funny! Everyone will have to try to suprise them again and often. It's the sort of thing that makes life worth living. Fun chapter, as always. Now I have to wonder if Arthur was really snoring there....
I liked the way that "full of " and "Art" came together. George IS full of art, among other things. ;) I hope Annie was paying attention to that potentially useful euphemism.That's a reasonable compromise that they found. I'm glad it's going to work out.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
You know, that was completely unintentional and I never noticed it before you pointed it out.
Ooooo! I like it, I like it a lot! I am very excited to see what happends :) All the trials and tribulation of youth and friendship!Keep on writting!
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed it. You are my very first reviewer! :)
lovely as always. anything that makes me chuckle as i read it makes my day.thanks for all your time and hard work - and to your betas as well - i appreciate it
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!Apart from the admirable work of several of the admins here at TPP, I have had no betas. I would like to reiterate how wonderful the admins here have been, and thank them once more for helping me learn so much about self-editing. The credit for my grammatical & punctuational improvements and the fact that I've recently achieved Validated Author status in large part goes to them!
It's nice to have a chance to bring the pieces of Annie's life together. There are times when she must feel lonesome for Muggleness.
Response from shosier (Author of George & Annie: An Unofficial Biography)
Just couldn't leave Jane in the dark forever. :)