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A Change is Going to Come
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NOW COMPLETE!!! An accident with a Time-Turner in 1993 sends Hermione Granger back to 1973, and she is unable to return.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
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love it! Now, I wonder what will happen so that she ends up kissing Viktor? Hmmm, drama will soon be unfolding I'm sure
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I'll keep that to myself. But it will be interesting with Viktor Krum and Severus' reaction.Thanks!Livvy
Poor Hermione and Severus, waiting for Hermione to grow up is painful. I enjoyed the chapter, especially Moody taking Draco to task. I can't help it, it's funny, lol. It was so sweet of Severus to make sure Hermione knows he still loves only her.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Yes, it is funny :) Hermione really did need to feel reassured that Severus still wanted her. But, rough times ahead.Thanks!Livvy
:D I loved this! I completely forgot about Krum in Hermione's fourth year. God, Severus is going to go ballistic....
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
That's pretty accurate. His jealous streak is going to cause a whole lot of problems.Thanks!Livvy
Yay! Nothing like a bit of snogging to wipe away the insecurities. Can't wait for the next chapter :) A~
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Sounds good it me! lol! Coming up: Viktor Krum and more of the mysterious Moody!Thanks,Olivia
whooo boy! wait til she finds out who "moody" is! superb update. thanks so much
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It'll be really interesting, for sure!Thanks,Livvy
I didn't think about Crouch not knowing her. And is the scene with the teeth coming up? Was that a threat from Dumbledore regarding her relationship with Lily?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Dumbledore can be one ruthless bastard when he wants to be. Nice little blackmail number he pulled on her. No, there won't be the teeth scene because she already had her teeth changed in third year. But more on Crouch and Moody next.Thanks,Livvy
Nice over view of the first part of the year.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks!Livvy
This was great!! Will Hermione and Krum get together? I can't wait to see how Snape reacts!
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It will definitely be interesting!Thanks!Livvy
just now caught up - love the plot line - can't wiat to see how you pull it all together - keep up the great work
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! I put a lot of work into the next chapter. I hope you like it!Thanks!Livvy
Despite them being in love, I find him kissing her at this age a bit revolting. He's the adult here and should have had some self-control.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
That's why he stopped and said it wasn't right. And he was put off by it, that's why he stopped it. He doesn't want a girl, he wants a woman. Actually, they both are adults. She is just living in a younger body. It's all very frustrating for them both.Thanks!Livvy
Wonder if a year will make him anymore comfortable?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I am sure. The difference between fifteen and sixteen can really make a change in a girl.Thanks!Livvy
Wow, No Snapes were injured in the writing of this chapter! The only 'sticky' part is the wolfsbane bit. Not having taken the potion wouldn't affect the fact that Remus transformed, only how dangerous he would be. Hermione's comment makes it sound like he was changing because he hadn't taken it. The way the scene plays out, she would have had no knowledge of whether he'd taken it or not.I really empathized with HG at the end, the feeling rejected. Very poignant.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Darn! I never caught that part. I'll have to tweak it now. Yeah, that rejection feeling really sucks. Well, only a handful of chapters and they will be together again.Thanks!Livvy
WOW! Another fabulous chapter! With the summer break coming up, I wonder what our Potions master and Hermione will be doing.
Their goodbye kiss was so sweet and so not-enough, but it was the most Severus could bring himself to do even though he loves her completely. The images of his father and what he tried to do to Hermione that summer day so long ago still haunt him.
I noticed that you had replied to a reader's comments for this chapter that even though Hermione would celebrate her sixteenth birthday in three months, Severus might not "do anything about it." And in reply to a reader's review in an earlier chapter you hinted that Hermione would accept Viktor Krum's invitation to the Yule Ball. This coming chapter, all of fourth year, is going to be extremely painful isn't it? My heart is going to be broken again right along with Severus' and Hermione's.
This time-turner story is one of the best I've read. The angst and UST are palpable, but knowing it is Potions Under Duress is what keeps me going! I love it.Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thanks! Yes, you are right on the money with the whole Krum being the monkey in the wrench. But there will be a very good reason why Hermione decides to accept his invitation to the Yule Ball. This year will be full of twists and turns different from the GoF we all know so well. I hope you enjoy it!Thanks!Livvy
I loved it when Hermione gave Draco a roundhouse punch. "She had had enough of his shite!" LOL!
When the boys woke her from her nap – she'd actually slept through Charms – I had to wonder if they will recall her comment about Regulus and Travers if they ever see their names among a list of Slytherin graduates... Hummmmm. Thank goodness she is dropping Divination because our Hermione is wearing herself to a frazzle! It must be harder than nails to be in love with Severus, knowing he is in love with her, and be a thirty-four year old woman in a fourteen or fifteen year old body.
At least she had been able to talk to Remus and had his assurances that he would never betray her. Surely that will give her a bit less to worry about.
The way you handled the scene at Hagrid's was very well done! And the episode in the Shrieking Shack was bloody brilliant! The entire time my heart was in my throat, and I was praying that Severus wouldn't do anything foolish, that Sirius wouldn't say that he knew Hermione from his childhood, and that no one would die in the Shrieking Shack. I take my hat off to you.
Whew! I'm worn out!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It was a hell of a chapter to write! Yes, about Regulus and Travers... it was clever of you to pick up on that. Harry is many things, but he doesn't forget a lot. He knows the devil is in the details. Harry won't be forgetting that any time soon.Glad you liked how I chose to work the Shrieking Shack incident!Thanks!Livvy
This chapter really illustrates why Hermione is having such a hard time. No matter what she does where Harry and Ron are concerned, all they can see is an interfering "used to be best friend." I would make the same decisions that she has made where the boys are concerned, but putting up with their wrath would be a major pain.
Her going to tell Severus about Harry's determination to go to Hogsmeade the next weekend turned out to be a blessing. Being able to sleep in his arms that night helped so much; I think they both needed that time alone with each other. When they were talking about her sixteenth birthday and what it would mean, I was thrilled when the magic enveloped them once more. It would be so lovely if they could marry on that day. It's not so very far away, only one year, six months, and two weeks. But anything can happen in that time, and I'm so afraid that something will interrupt their plans. And then the horrid about Buckbeak came. Urg!A very emotional chapter! My heart was happy and sad by degrees. Well done.Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I'm glad you liked that they were able to spend the night together in the innocent way they did. Sometimes, you just need to be held, you know? Oh, yes, More drama to threaten our lovers' happiness during fourth year, no doubt! At least I will try to make it really interesting!Thanks!Livvy
I loved the kiss! I can’t wait for them to reunite after the summer is over. I’m sure a bit of time away from the magical world will do Hermione some good. I wonder if she’ll come back looking more like his curvaceous Hermione. Lord, if the sexual tension between them is so palpable know, I can only imagine the agony they’re going to experience as she continues to mature. Oh and Victor Krum is up next, this should be interesting. Although, I do hope there are some juicy moments such as this one to help get us through to the long wait to her sixteen birthday.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Oh yes, Viktor Krum and the Yule Ball will bring a lot of tension and jealousy into the picture - it'll be fun *grins evilly*Thanks!Livvy
Heartbreaking, yet so sweet! Well, let's see how they are holding up during the TWT...
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Hee-hee. This should be interesting. I hope you like how I worked it!Thanks!Livvy
I absolutely love this, but ughh Severus has to wait over another year for her to turn 16, right? :/ I can't wait for the next chapter...how many more are left?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It won't be much longer. I know the Unresolved Sexual Tension is really getting to them-and to the readers, but fourth year will bring a lot of distractions.Thanks!Livvy
Awwww that was definately different to the book, but I kind of liked the little twist. It's so hard to read about the two of them unable to show love for each other. *sigh* Can't wait for more!A~
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I know, it's such a tease, isn't it? *grins evilly* But it won't be long now.Thanks!Livvy
Interestig angle to the chapter. Severus knew, lied and let Peter escape? Yuck. I suppose you had too.The kiss, so sad. but how much will only 3 months make in giving her 'curves?'
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Unfortunately I had to let Wormtail escape. Severus knew the score. Oh, and a growth spurt over the summer? Could make a great deal of difference, not that he'll do anything about it.Thanks!Livvy
I wait in anticipation for each of your chapters. Wonderful chapter,
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you! The next chapter will be a much longer one. On to fourth year!Thanks!Livvy
.....I'm confused as to why when Hermione asked if Severus was a Death Eater and when he said yes, she acted like she did. Didn't she know he was a Death Eater before?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Hermione thought those days were behind them. Sure, she knew Voldemort would come again, but Severus would be openly fighting on their side. So his bluntness of it all was disconcerting.Thanks!Livvy
Why, oh why, do you want to make me cry? So much angst!!! So much longing!!! Oops, that's another story, isn't it?
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
I know, I am such an angst-ridden writer :) Don't worry. In no time at all, it will be over, the waiting, and the wanting and they will be together again.Thanks!Livvy
beautifilly done. thanks so much
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
Thank you!Livvy
Wow -- this has been a rough few chapters -- I hope Hermione turns 16 next chapter! Good work -- looking forward to more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of A Change is Going to Come)
It will be a little while. Remember, fourth year. But I'll try to make it as painless as possible :)Thanks!Livvy