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Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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ouch! this was a lovely bday but now I'm bracing for Voldy and about 20 years separation before SH get together again. oh, that's going to be hard. thanks for the flourless chocolate cake!!
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Oh, those cakes are to die for! The great thing about them is they last forever because you can only have a little bit at a time. Yes, the separation is coming soon. Wahhh! But there's light at the end of the tunnel.
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Oh, those cakes are to die for! The great thing about them is they last forever because you can only have a little bit at a time. Yes, the separation is coming soon. Wahhh! But there's light at the end of the tunnel.
Whew, a girl moves for a month and all of a sudden has dozens upon dozens of chapters to read! Not that I'm complaining as I get more of the story in one punch, but the anticipation does add something special sometimes! Absoultely great chapter, and the past few have been a delight to read also! I loved the way you solved the Lucius issue, and can't wait to read more of what you have planned for poor Severus. Imagine, detention on his birthday! Thank goodness for Hermione's quick thinking :P Thank you again for sharing this great story, and I can't wait to read more!
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I hear ya. I went away last weekend and it seemed like everyone decided to update and I had tons of things to catch up on. I'm glad you enjoyed your group of chapters. Sometimes that's nice, and sometimes it is fun to have the suspense! Well, you're up for some suspense now, as the next chapter needs to be added.
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I hear ya. I went away last weekend and it seemed like everyone decided to update and I had tons of things to catch up on. I'm glad you enjoyed your group of chapters. Sometimes that's nice, and sometimes it is fun to have the suspense! Well, you're up for some suspense now, as the next chapter needs to be added.
Old Moldy-shorts has a way of ruining the best fluffiness!! LOL Very nice chapter. She really went all out. It's nice, and sweet to think that he's got someone who's caring for him.
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Moldy-shorts, that's a good one. He does put a damper on one's day. I'm sorry to have wrecked a most fluffy chapter. These last few are some of my favorites in the whole story. It helps us to see how devoted they are to each other. Severus deserves that, I think.
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Moldy-shorts, that's a good one. He does put a damper on one's day. I'm sorry to have wrecked a most fluffy chapter. These last few are some of my favorites in the whole story. It helps us to see how devoted they are to each other. Severus deserves that, I think.
*sighs happily* Fluff!! So wonderful after all this doom and gloom I have been writing lately, lol! Lovely, my dear. I laughed at their little exchange over the color of his clothes. Black gets drab and so he switches to dark grey! Hahaha!! Now... what does Voldie want?? Am curious. Excellent job! ~kizzy
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Well, it might have been funnier if he had changed them to blood red, but, he's a man that doesn't stray far from his routine. Lol. Glad this brightened your day. Voldie wants to take over the world. But, in this particular reference, he wants Severus to do something for him. I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.
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Well, it might have been funnier if he had changed them to blood red, but, he's a man that doesn't stray far from his routine. Lol. Glad this brightened your day. Voldie wants to take over the world. But, in this particular reference, he wants Severus to do something for him. I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.
*Sigh*
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Heh, heh. I take it you enjoyed that? Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Heh, heh. I take it you enjoyed that? Thanks!
Looking forward to the update, haven;t seen it yet on ash so it means you are all caught up on both sites.
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Yes, I'm finally caught up with both. Thanks for reviewing on both!
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Yes, I'm finally caught up with both. Thanks for reviewing on both!
I liked the fluff. I usually do.
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The fluff is always fun. Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
The fluff is always fun. Glad you enjoyed it.
mission accomplished! but i'm glad she's staying a while. thanks so much and i look forward to what i know is coming.
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Can you believe she turned his opinion? I was a bit surprised myself. Of course, you do know what is to come, so I shall say no more. Thanks for sticking with this again.
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Can you believe she turned his opinion? I was a bit surprised myself. Of course, you do know what is to come, so I shall say no more. Thanks for sticking with this again.
I like that you had Dumbledore outline the reasons behind the 'why doesn't she just stay w/ him'. It gave a reality to things, rather than just saying 'accept it cause it makes the plot work'. I like them as the affectionate, yet not over the top 'romance novel' couple. I still can't get my head around Lucius behaving reasonably...I expect he's faking. Not b/c of anything you did, though. I'm just really stuck on the image of Lucius as a #@$*!.
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It would have been nice to take the easy road and not explain Hermione's need to return, but that kind of falls flat. As for Lucius, you'll have to wait a while and see what becomes of him now. He might be faking, or maybe he's not. It is hard to imagine him as a good guy, though, I have to agree. But it's not impossible.
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It would have been nice to take the easy road and not explain Hermione's need to return, but that kind of falls flat. As for Lucius, you'll have to wait a while and see what becomes of him now. He might be faking, or maybe he's not. It is hard to imagine him as a good guy, though, I have to agree. But it's not impossible.
Finally got through to him!
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Can you believe it? Even Hermione really didn't think it was possible!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Can you believe it? Even Hermione really didn't think it was possible!
Although I hate to see them hurt like this, I am very curious what the world will be like when she returns - with a reformed Lucius and Severus around through these 25 years...
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We'll find out eventually. She has to leave first!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
We'll find out eventually. She has to leave first!
Well, I hope we have a kinder, more gentle Lucius in the future. Good chapter, lots of fun to read.
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We'll see. He'll be different, that's for sure.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
We'll see. He'll be different, that's for sure.
great update...but i know what she's going as 'cuz i read ahead! love this story even the second time. thanks so much
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It is kind of a fun costume, isn't it? Thanks for reading it the 2nd time around.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
It is kind of a fun costume, isn't it? Thanks for reading it the 2nd time around.
I'm glad she got him out of that mood. Severus needs to believe in himself. And I really like that Lucius is able to compliment her. Lastly, I think someone needs to kick James in the ass. Good chapter.
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It would be so nice if someone kicked James. But I don't think it would do any good. Severus really does need to believe in himself. Hopefully, Hermione can continue to help him see his worth.It's hard to believe that Lucius can say anything nice to her. It's like a miracle!!
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It would be so nice if someone kicked James. But I don't think it would do any good. Severus really does need to believe in himself. Hopefully, Hermione can continue to help him see his worth.It's hard to believe that Lucius can say anything nice to her. It's like a miracle!!
I loved the way Hermione spoke with Lucius, she is really breaking ground with him.
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Lucius appreciated it too. If she can make him see that Muggle-born wizards and witches aren't so bad, the world might be coming to an end. You might want to get your 72-hour kit ready.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Lucius appreciated it too. If she can make him see that Muggle-born wizards and witches aren't so bad, the world might be coming to an end. You might want to get your 72-hour kit ready.
ok. I know my reviewing is a bit late But I reallllllllly hate Dumbledore!! That Jack ass deserves to die!!!! how dare he make severus take the mark!! update the story I really like it. ^^
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I really don't like Dumbledore either. I go from hating him to just disliking him, depending on my mood. He concentrates on the end too much, ignoring the means. A man like that, no matter which side he's on, can be dangerous.
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I really don't like Dumbledore either. I go from hating him to just disliking him, depending on my mood. He concentrates on the end too much, ignoring the means. A man like that, no matter which side he's on, can be dangerous.
Sometimes it's hard not to read these characters as OCC - rather than of a different direction as a result of early changes.Lucius is fun! Curious to see where Lily/Severus go.Can't wait to see the ball!
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Yep, they're OOC-y alright, but Hermione did set out to change the world! If only she knew. I guess she will eventually, when she returns to her time. Lucius is a lady charmer. I almost like him like this.
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Yep, they're OOC-y alright, but Hermione did set out to change the world! If only she knew. I guess she will eventually, when she returns to her time. Lucius is a lady charmer. I almost like him like this.
Luius being a reasonable, nice person is scarier than a basillisk with diarrhea!!! I'm really looking forward to the ball!
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It is quite scary. The man does nothing without a reason. Of course, he's quite the dual personality. He can be a sweet as honey or as nasty as a viper. He's just choosing to be sweet. Hopefully, Hermione can convince him permanently that Muggle-borns aren't inferior.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
It is quite scary. The man does nothing without a reason. Of course, he's quite the dual personality. He can be a sweet as honey or as nasty as a viper. He's just choosing to be sweet. Hopefully, Hermione can convince him permanently that Muggle-borns aren't inferior.
Now she's got herself in a right mess... I guess she should leave for her own time soon, before things get too intense.
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She probably ought to, but she's not done with Lucius. Hermoine won't leave her mission unfinished.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She probably ought to, but she's not done with Lucius. Hermoine won't leave her mission unfinished.
Good chapter, I think the best part was the duel. I'm glad someone is taking the marauders in hand. Should Hermione warn Severus about the snake I wonder...My next to favorite part was the threat to Dumbledore. I think it was good to put him on guard a bit. Hermione may not be as powerful or experienced as he but in this case it's the thought that counts and she is sneaky. She might be able to get him to suffer a bit from a hex.
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Hermione already told Severus about Nagini when she told him about his future. He is aware of the risk he's taking, although, I don't think you can ever prepare for being tortured.I'm glad you liked these developments. It was fun to knock some sense into all of those annoying people.
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Hermione already told Severus about Nagini when she told him about his future. He is aware of the risk he's taking, although, I don't think you can ever prepare for being tortured.I'm glad you liked these developments. It was fun to knock some sense into all of those annoying people.
Running in the corridors - 5 points; hexing another student - 20 points; answering back - detention; being made to duel Severus - priceless!
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I'm still chuckling at that. Those sneaky gits deserved it!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm still chuckling at that. Those sneaky gits deserved it!
Well, I hope she decides to go with it. He knows she is from the future. Obviously, things can possibly work at some point. Anyway, I love that she had them duel him one on one, the Marauders needed a lesson.
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They certainly did. Never mess with Hermione when she's gotten no sleep! I really don't think the Marauders ever got what they deserved at this time in their lives. Slaps on the wrists and "Now don't do that again, boys," really don't cut it. Hermione went through all the channels available to her to no avail, so she took matters into her own hands.As to whether she'll go for it or not with Severus, she needs some more coaxing. She really doesn't want to hurt him.
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They certainly did. Never mess with Hermione when she's gotten no sleep! I really don't think the Marauders ever got what they deserved at this time in their lives. Slaps on the wrists and "Now don't do that again, boys," really don't cut it. Hermione went through all the channels available to her to no avail, so she took matters into her own hands.As to whether she'll go for it or not with Severus, she needs some more coaxing. She really doesn't want to hurt him.
I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story! I've always been a fan of time turner fics, and this one is great because she was able to tell him she's from the future. Thank you so much for this wonderful story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Cheers! ~Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, thank you so much! As you can see, I wanted a few twists on the usual Time-turner fic. It always makes me upset when Hermione is all secretive, disappears, then reappears as an 11 year old, making Severus' head explode. Time travel in itself makes your head explode. Who needs double the trouble! Severus knows what he's getting into from the start here. Lots to come.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, thank you so much! As you can see, I wanted a few twists on the usual Time-turner fic. It always makes me upset when Hermione is all secretive, disappears, then reappears as an 11 year old, making Severus' head explode. Time travel in itself makes your head explode. Who needs double the trouble! Severus knows what he's getting into from the start here. Lots to come.
oooh, sticky situation! i know hermione's so smart with books, but how will she deal with these emotions? but i can't blame her - how could you not fall for him? :) great chapter!
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I don't know how anyone in that situation couldn't fall for him. She thinks she's right, though. Maybe she needs a book telling her it's okay for her to change her mind! Quick, somebody send her a diary or something! I think she'll need to bang her head against the wall some more before she knocks some sense into herself.
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I don't know how anyone in that situation couldn't fall for him. She thinks she's right, though. Maybe she needs a book telling her it's okay for her to change her mind! Quick, somebody send her a diary or something! I think she'll need to bang her head against the wall some more before she knocks some sense into herself.
Oh Hermione... if only you saw a scenario where Severus would see you as the light at the end of the tunnel after you return to your time...I can't wait for the next chapter.
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We can only hope that she will get to that point. Face it, the girl's got it bad. She can be very stubborn, though, once she's made her mind up. Few have the ability to change it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
We can only hope that she will get to that point. Face it, the girl's got it bad. She can be very stubborn, though, once she's made her mind up. Few have the ability to change it.