My very first thought about your faniction was, Severus Snape which get Ooc? This is difficult, but you mastered this challenge really wonderful, without getting Severus too fluffy. :D And of course you formed a very good plot, it holds on everything I like. Excitement, humor, romance, some difficulties and Hermione and Severus getting in a relationship in a conceivable way.  Your story is marvelous and I loved to read every line. Thanks for writing and sharing.Best wishes

yay!  I've been waiting for that engagement for a while now!

Oh man, that stinks.  I hope something in the paradox makes it so they can really be together.  I hate to think of Snape going through all that torture (physical and mental) just to end up dead anyway.  and just when they got back together! (darn ol Dumbledore anyway, it's all his fault)

I have to wonder if Hermione is changing the future she knows by divulging so much or if the future she knows is because she's divulged so much and we get to hear an alternative explanation for it...I can't wait to find out!  Reading on...

I really enjoy a good time travel fic.  Thanks for all your hard work writing this one.  It was a joy to read!!

This is a great story!!!!  Thank you!

Good job!   this was a really good story 

i think Hermione's being responsible.

I think that Hermione starting a relationship with Severus at this point would be opening a huge can of worms that might result in more pain than it's worth.  On the other hand, it would make Severus happy :)

Yay!  A good ending.  It's nice to see Harry and Severus getting along, as well as their respective offspring.  And how Snape responds to Hermione being pregnant again, despite all his comments at the picnic, great job.Looking forward to your future stories.  =)

I like how both the bride and groom think the other is going to leave them at the altar.  Nerves nerves nerves.  I hope I don't have them when I get married.  Yay for them finally ending up together, I'm glad.  I'm looking forward to seeing what's in the epilogue.

A good fluffy proposal which suits the new Snape.  I loved his behavior in Hogsmeade about breaking up the snogging couples at Madam Puddifoots.Off to read more

Poor Snape, a bad excuse is no reason to blow up at Hermione, especially when it obviously not the truth.  Plus he shouldn't have called her out of her class, should have waited till they both had a break, and then maybe he would have realized he was being an idiot.  But it seems they've worked it out and Hermione's realized that this Severus Snape is not her original Severus Snape. Off to read some more.

It would have been fun to see Severus hex Ron, but I think he made his point awfully clear.  Ron deserved it anyway.  And good for him for reassuring Hermione that she is in fact not plain and is beautiful.  Boyfriends should do that.

Yay lots of Babies! I want one!!!! What a wonderful ending to a fabulous story. I'm so happy that I've been along for the ride since the beginning and what a wonderful ride its been. Fabulous Job! Much Love Always. ~ Karen

Wow. Amazing job hon! Seriously the detail you put in was just perfect! The RoR sounded breathtakingly beautiful and their ceremony was nice and simple. The kissing the bride scene reminded me of my wedding... of course I would think about how gusy I am over my honey in times like this. Thanks for letting them get married! Talk to you soon. Much Love ~ Karen

Four kids... know ALL about that! :)

Great story! I loved it!

What a great wedding....and I am reading this on my 10th anniversary. I remember my wedding. I couldn't take my eyes off my husband much like Severus couldn't take his eyes off Hermione. Thanks for letting me remember that....

That was a really great chapter....

that was disappointing. i was so happy to see ron but yo u totall went the route i thought you might.

Such a sweet ending. Brilliant my dear.

awwww lucius.

hermione better go to ron and try to find fix their friendship . otherwise she is a terribly crappy friend to just accept that as it is without even trying to fight for it like she fights for everything else. especially if she talked about how close her and ron were in her timeline.

oh yeah, im still “Yes, time travel, as in I told you not to wait for me.”pset that neveille didnt to be as cool here as he was in the original time line.   but oooo i cant wait to see all the things that will occur with hermione trying to fit in with this timeline. and will she confront lucius. and good for him for taking over the ministry.    oh and “Yes, time travel, as in I told you not to wait for me.” ^______^ i smiled so wide there with that line.