Chapter 9
Chapter 9 of 46
debjunkWhat would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
ReviewedChapter 9
"Come on, let's go." Hermione said finally. It's getting late."
They turned to leave and were headed across the field when four large pops sounded and they were surrounded by four Death Eaters. Severus and Hermione whipped their wands out and stood back to back, ready for a fight.
"Voldemort has a warning for you, Mudblood!" one of the Death Eaters snarled.
Without waiting, Hermione blasted the man. At exactly the same time, Severus blasted one of the others and watched him fly backwards with a satisfying thud. The other two were prepared by now and started throwing spells at Severus and Hermione. The two kept their backs to one another and threw spells at their attackers. Severus sent another one of them flying, but he was replaced by the man Hermione had knocked out. Hermione shot a hex at one of the Death Eaters but barely noticed a spell coming for her. She barely had time to cast a Protego Charm to shield herself. Severus sent spell after spell at the Death Eaters, but nothing seemed to faze them. All four of the Death Eaters had now regained their feet and were shooting spells so quickly, Hermione and Severus were having a hard time keeping up. Hermione sent a flock of birds soaring toward the two Death Eaters facing her. The two men stooped low and started waving about, trying to shoo away the attacking birds.
"Nice one," Severus encouraged her.
"It works well on stupid boyfriends too," Hermione divulged as she cast a Stupefy hex at another Death Eater.
"Stupid boyfriends?" Severus inquired.
"The ones that go snogging other girls to make you jealous," Hermione said quickly as she shot more spells at the Death Eaters and ducked their own onslaught.
Severus grinned as he fought, but his grin soon disappeared as the two Death Eaters who weren't fighting off the birds turned and destroyed all of the attacking blight. The crouching Death Eaters rose with evil grins on their faces.
Soon, all four of them were sending hexes almost simultaneously at Hermione and Severus. Before the two could do anything more, strong ropes surrounded them and they stood helplessly in the middle of the attackers.
Hermione struggled with her bonds and growled at the Death Eaters. "Let him go; he's just a student. I'm the one you want."
"Hermione!" Severus growled.
"He's been seen with a Mudblood; he deserves what he gets!" came a voice to their left.
The first Death Eater came up to Hermione and put his masked face up to hers.
"The Dark Lord wants you to know he is not without compassion, even for someone as lowly as yourself. Leave your position at Hogwarts and discontinue your sullying of the purebloods that attend that school. If you do not leave, the next time we find you it will be your death."
Hermione snarled at him. "You think you're tough tying up a woman and a student?" She struggled to get at the Death Eater. "Does that make you feel like a man? Tell your stupid Dark Lord this: I will never give in to his demands. He will never make me cower in fright. He does not intimidate me in the least; he is nothing but a little man with little ideas."
Severus closed his eyes. He knew the Death Eaters would not take kindly to her blatant disregard for Voldemort's powers. As brave as she was, she was being incredibly stupid.
The Death Eater backed away and snarled, "How dare you speak against our Lord!"
He raised his wand and shouted some spells. The ropes fell away from them, and Severus was knocked to the ground, unable to stand. He heard Hermione scream and fall beside him. She continued to scream in agony as the Death Eaters disappeared and Severus struggled to get to a sitting position. He wasn't in pain; he just was incapable of moving and bearing weight on his legs. Finally, he managed to sit up and looked over at Hermione. She was unconscious. He had to get her back to Hogwarts.
He struggled to stand and picked Hermione up. He fell back to the ground and began again, this time able to support himself and Hermione on his wobbly legs. Turning on the spot, he Apparated back to the gates. He fell to his knees as he appeared in front of the wrought iron gates. Thankful he hadn't splinched either of them. He struggled to stand with her again and pushed the gates open, hurrying up the walk. Within a couple of minutes, and with much stumbling, he had entered the infirmary and placed Hermione on a bed. Severus sunk to the floor in relief and exhaustion. Madam Pomfrey rushed over and asked what happened as she waved her wand over the unconscious woman.
Severus told her quickly and she exclaimed, "Her insides are like they've been set on fire. She's got burns all over her organs!"
Madam Pomfrey waved her wand over Hermione once again.
"Augamenti interno," she chanted to stop the spell's progress. She then set to work repairing Hermione's internal injuries.
Severus pulled himself up and collapsed on the bed next to her. He had barely made it to the infirmary, he was so weak. Finally, Poppy had finished with Hermione. She turned her attention to Severus and waved her wand over him. He immediately felt better. She went over to her supplies and procured a potion, which she had him drink.
"If you had brought her in five minutes later, Mr. Snape, I don't think she would have survived," she told him as she watched him down the potion. "She owes you her life," Poppy continued. "Now, you need to rest here tonight. You can go in the morning. Professor Granger, however, will probably be here for a few days." She rose and left the room.
Severus looked over at Hermione. She was still unconscious. He thanked Merlin that he had gotten her here in time. He wouldn't have been able to forgive himself if she had perished. Scooting his bed a little closer to hers, he continued to watch her, hoping she would regain consciousness soon. If she could just open her eyes and speak to him, he would know that she would be alright.
He sighed in relief a little while later when Hermione's eyes slowly opened. She looked over at Severus.
"Are you alright?" she asked him in a weak voice.
He smiled at her. "You're the one who almost died."
She grimaced. "I knew I was in too much pain to be dead."
"Madam Pomfrey said you would be fine in a couple of days."
"What about you?" she asked.
"I'm just a bit weak. I can leave in the morning."
Hermione reached her hand out to Severus. He reached over and took it.
Looking at him with tears in her eyes, she whispered, "Thank you for saving my life."
He gave her a tentative smile. "What else are knights in shining armor for?"
Hermione smiled back at him. She took her hand back and looked up at the ceiling. Her mind went over the events that had gotten her to the infirmary. She berated herself for being taken by surprise. With the relative nothing going on in this time frame, she had seriously let her guard slip. The whole incident made her recall Mad-Eye Moody's favorite saying, 'Constant Vigilance.' She had really dropped the ball this time, and it had almost cost her life and Severus' as well.
"I'm sorry I endangered you, Severus," she told him. "I was caught by surprise. I should have been ready for an attack. I wasn't."
"Hermione, they popped out of nowhere. Even if you had been prepared, there were too many of them. They would have subdued us eventually."
Hermione sighed. "I suppose you're right. I'm still sorry."
"Don't apologize. I would have felt terrible if you had been alone."
She smiled ruefully. "That's funny, I would have felt better."
"So you think that being dead would have made you feel better?"
"Okay, you're right, it's better to be alive, even if every part of my body feels like it's on fire. I just wish you weren't caught up in all of this."
"You'll recuperate and I'm fine."
"How did they find us, anyway?"
Severus looked at her for a moment. "I would assume one of my housemates told their parents that you were to chaperone today. The parents must have gotten back to You-Know-Who and he gave the order to his men."
Hermione nodded, deep in thought.
"Are you going to go back to your own time then?" Severus asked tentatively.
She huffed at him. "Hardly! I'm not nearly finished with Malfoy, and I won't be intimidated by that despot."
"Hermione, he won't stop until he's killed you."
Hermione looked at Severus in determination. "He'll have to catch me first."
Severus regarded her in exasperation. He didn't know whether to admire her bravado or think she was foolish for not returning to her own time and to safety.
Noticing his expression, she gave him a caustic look. "And what kind of message will I be sending if I just pack up and disappear? There are enough people in our world that turn a blind eye or hide themselves in the face of danger. I have never been one of them, and I'm not about to start now!"
He knew Hermione had been a war hero, but he had not realized just how brave she truly was. Here she was, willing to risk her life, just so she could make a better future for everyone. Could he ever do such a thing? He didn't know. He was quite fond of his life and did not know if he would be so magnanimous as to risk it for others, especially those he didn't even know. Of course his future self had done just that, hadn't he? Perhaps he did have that kind of bravery within himself.
"You're incredibly brave, Hermione," he said finally.
She scoffed at him. "I have always just done what I had to do. Bravery never had much to do with it."
He looked at her skeptically, but decided to drop the matter. They lapsed into a companionable silence, each filled with their own thoughts. Severus continued to marvel at Hermione's lack of fear. She might make light of her bravery, but he knew it took an incredibly strong person to stand up to You-know-Who like she had. He truly admired her. She always spoke her mind, no matter the consequences. Her sharp tongue had been something he had appreciated about her from the beginning of their relationship. He did hope, however, that she could learn to keep it in check when faced with danger in the future. He sincerely doubted it though.
Hermione, however, gave no thought to her supposed bravery. She was thinking of the incident that preceded their attack. The memory of his kiss seared into her mind. She had never felt like she had when he had kissed her. He had sent shivers throughout her entire body. Whenever she had kissed Ron, or Viktor for that matter, it had just been pleasant. This kiss had been all consuming. She realized that she wanted him to kiss her like that all the time. But that couldn't happen, could it?
Hermione felt a pang of guilt for pushing him off. She knew he was probably hurt and confused, but he had not shown any of that. She couldn't do it. She couldn't fall in love with him; it would be too hard. He would be left alone when she needed to return to her time. She had seen what the absence of Lily had done to him. Vowing she would not be the source of him pushing everyone away or of him pining away for a woman who was unattainable, she concluded that any relationship with him would be impossible. Hermione turned away from Severus and tried to sleep. Before she knew it, she had drifted off, dreaming of his lips on hers and his arms encircling her.
A/N: Next up: Dumbledore's wicked proposal.
Hope you enjoyed this chapter. As you might be able to tell, even though Hermione has sworn off Severus, she can't keep her feelings for him from growing. Thanks everyone, for your support, for reading, and especially for those who review. I really enjoy reading your comments.
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My very first thought about your faniction was, Severus Snape which get Ooc? This is difficult, but you mastered this challenge really wonderful, without getting Severus too fluffy. :D And of course you formed a very good plot, it holds on everything I like. Excitement, humor, romance, some difficulties and Hermione and Severus getting in a relationship in a conceivable way. Your story is marvelous and I loved to read every line. Thanks for writing and sharing.Best wishes
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Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks so much! Yes, the OOC-ness can be challenging. I tried to keep him where I think he might have been given a different chance at life. I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks so much for your review.
yay! I've been waiting for that engagement for a while now!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
~does a jig~ Yep, it was a long time coming.
Oh man, that stinks. I hope something in the paradox makes it so they can really be together. I hate to think of Snape going through all that torture (physical and mental) just to end up dead anyway. and just when they got back together! (darn ol Dumbledore anyway, it's all his fault)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, just about everything is Dumbledore's fault. :) An that truly would be a terrible tragedy.
I have to wonder if Hermione is changing the future she knows by divulging so much or if the future she knows is because she's divulged so much and we get to hear an alternative explanation for it...I can't wait to find out! Reading on...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! We'll find out that even small things do change things somewhat.
I really enjoy a good time travel fic. Thanks for all your hard work writing this one. It was a joy to read!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks so much! I obviously love time turner fics too.
This is a great story!!!! Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Aw, gee thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Good job! this was a really good story
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
i think Hermione's being responsible.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She does too! Thanks!
I think that Hermione starting a relationship with Severus at this point would be opening a huge can of worms that might result in more pain than it's worth. On the other hand, it would make Severus happy :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
*Grins* It would definitely make Severus happy, but IS it the right thing to do?
Yay! A good ending. It's nice to see Harry and Severus getting along, as well as their respective offspring. And how Snape responds to Hermione being pregnant again, despite all his comments at the picnic, great job.Looking forward to your future stories. =)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's nice to see Severus happy, and I think he'd think that another little bundle of happiness would be quite nice.
I like how both the bride and groom think the other is going to leave them at the altar. Nerves nerves nerves. I hope I don't have them when I get married. Yay for them finally ending up together, I'm glad. I'm looking forward to seeing what's in the epilogue.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Well, I'm sure everyone is a little nervous. Hopefully, by the time you get married you'll be pretty sure of your future spouse's intentions. But then again, those nerves can do funny things.
A good fluffy proposal which suits the new Snape. I loved his behavior in Hogsmeade about breaking up the snogging couples at Madam Puddifoots.Off to read more
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He may be fluffy, but he loves seeing those students in trouble.
Poor Snape, a bad excuse is no reason to blow up at Hermione, especially when it obviously not the truth. Plus he shouldn't have called her out of her class, should have waited till they both had a break, and then maybe he would have realized he was being an idiot. But it seems they've worked it out and Hermione's realized that this Severus Snape is not her original Severus Snape. Off to read some more.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He really blew it here. I think if he hadn't been so exhausted he would have done just what you've outlined. But sometimes we act without thinking. At least Hermione realizes the difference.
It would have been fun to see Severus hex Ron, but I think he made his point awfully clear. Ron deserved it anyway. And good for him for reassuring Hermione that she is in fact not plain and is beautiful. Boyfriends should do that.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Boyfriends definitely should do that. Even when their loves aren't feeling particularly down.
Yay lots of Babies! I want one!!!! What a wonderful ending to a fabulous story. I'm so happy that I've been along for the ride since the beginning and what a wonderful ride its been. Fabulous Job! Much Love Always. ~ Karen
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks, Karen! Glad you got on and rode all the way. It's been a long journey, but I think that Severus and Hermione are finally happy and Severus doesn't need to pine away for his lost love any longer. She's right there in front of him.
Wow. Amazing job hon! Seriously the detail you put in was just perfect! The RoR sounded breathtakingly beautiful and their ceremony was nice and simple. The kissing the bride scene reminded me of my wedding... of course I would think about how gusy I am over my honey in times like this. Thanks for letting them get married! Talk to you soon. Much Love ~ Karen
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
They were destined for marriage. And I'm glad I brought up good memories for you. That's part of the point of this chapter.
Four kids... know ALL about that! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
LOL. I have three myself. And with summer here, I wish the fighting would just stop!
What a great wedding....and I am reading this on my 10th anniversary. I remember my wedding. I couldn't take my eyes off my husband much like Severus couldn't take his eyes off Hermione. Thanks for letting me remember that....
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Aw, I'm glad I brought back such lovely memories. It's fun to reminisce about such a happy occasion.
That was a really great chapter....
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you!
that was disappointing. i was so happy to see ron but yo u totall went the route i thought you might.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I did. Sorry. I don't always make him evil incarnate like he is here. But, when dabbling in this AU fic, not everything turns out peachy.
Such a sweet ending. Brilliant my dear.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks so much!
hermione better go to ron and try to find fix their friendship . otherwise she is a terribly crappy friend to just accept that as it is without even trying to fight for it like she fights for everything else. especially if she talked about how close her and ron were in her timeline.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She wouldn't just abandon Ron. She remembers how he was, so will give him a chance. What he does with it... now that's a different story.
oh yeah, im still “Yes, time travel, as in I told you not to wait for me.”pset that neveille didnt to be as cool here as he was in the original time line. but oooo i cant wait to see all the things that will occur with hermione trying to fit in with this timeline. and will she confront lucius. and good for him for taking over the ministry. oh and “Yes, time travel, as in I told you not to wait for me.” ^______^ i smiled so wide there with that line.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Hermione will have a lot of catching up to do! It will boggle her mind for a while.