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Time's Treasure

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Time's Treasure

debjunk

695 Reviews   |   695 Ratings, 0 Likes, 265 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 174,630 Words 50 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Original Character

What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.

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Chapters (46)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Epilogue


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10/10

WriterMerrin

You are to be thanked, honored, hugged, and showered with adoration for getting us this chapter ASAP!  Thanks for not keeping us in suspense.  Your solution was quite unique, and (best of all) it only took one scene so they could be reunited quickly.  Poor Sev.  Time to start cherishing their time together :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks, Merrin!  I hate having Severus dead for more than a few minutes, so I know how everyone else must feel.  I don't think either one of them will take their time together for granted.  It's a cherished blessing on both sides.

0/10

dawnstar

Ok, Shark averted!  Very nice twist

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

*Jaws theme plays in background.*Thank you!  I'm glad I had you all stumped!

10/10

MuseAmusant

YAY!!!

I'm glad Severus finally got an apology from Lily (about time) and that she was able to set things to right for him. Knowing how long he had waited for his Hermione to come back, I couldn't imagine Severus passing up the opportunity to return to his love.

So Lucius is dead and gone ... but now we get a visit from the Weasley Wanker?!

Oh the HORROR!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It was a really easy choice for him, too.If it's not one evil git, it's another.  Hopefully, Ron can be... civil.  (Not likely.)

10/10

June W

(big sigh of relief)  yay!!  I did feel a bit anxious at Lily's warning, as if Severus was going to get offed again sometime.  careful, Severus!  poor Draco, but he did know beforehand that his father's death was a possibility.  I hope the Order supports Draco in his grief and as he remakes the Malfoy family reputation.  okay, you are forgiven -- chocolate moose for you!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I don't think he'll let himself be offed again!  I think Draco has found a family within the Order, and they will support him.  He's still got his mum, and they'll comfort each other too.Mmm, chocolate mousse is much better than live moose!

0/10

RhiannonAvon

What a wonderful life insurance policy.  If Harry and Snape weren't friends, I bet it would irritate Harry to no end that he indirectly saved Snape's life.I'm glad Snape came back, not ready for this story to end yet...unless you say it's over, at which point I can't argue. =)Looking forward to the next chapter =)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

You're probably right about Harry.  Although by the end of DH, he had a good respect for the man.  Maybe he could look past his mummy's influence and be accepting that he had a hand in saving Snape?There are about five more chapters left, so... it's not quite done yet.  But we're winding down.

9/10

MlleGigi

Severus lives!   Woohoo!!!!!!!   You sneaky thing, you!  That possibility totally came out of left field -- never even saw it coming...Of course, now that Hermione and Severeus are reunited and Lucius is dead and Severus has been brought back to life...I think it's high time for a few lemons, don't you???

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm really sneaky.  Actually, I'm surprised I left all of you in the dark.  (Everyone's so clever, I was sure someone would guess something about the life debts.)  As for the lemons... well, this is rated T. 

10/10

indigo_rose

Nope, never saw it coming that way!  But it was good, and I'm glad Sev's back in the land of the living (although if it had been me, I would have twisted the knife for one more chapter before bringing him back... but I'm a meanie, so it's a good thing I don't write any of these)!  So, Lucius is gone and Severus and Hermione are back together; it would seem that the end of this story may be near, unless something unexpected happens.  I've really enjoyed it, and hopefully a little sequel with everyone's kids will pop up in the future.  I'd love to see how a child of Sirius and Petunia's would turn out! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The end is somewhat near.  There are about five more chapters.  I thought about extending the torture about his death, but I know I hate when Severus dies, and all of you were so lovely in your demands for justice... I just couldn't hold it back.   <---- Not as bad as I could be.

10/10

blue artemis

Quite forgiven.  I like that Harry's life debts were repaid that way.  It was nice.  And I'm glad that Lily acknowledged that she was at fault also.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It gave Severus and Lily a closure that they didn't ever have when she was alive.  Thanks!

10/10

sinbad

Nice surprise.  I liked the way you brought Severus back.  I had not even considered Harry's life debts being repaid by Lilly.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you! 

10/10

Nessa

Of course your forgiven! What a brilliant idea. Glad to see him back where he belongs. No more shocks now, my heart can't take it lol.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There's smooth sailing from here.  No more sudden-death.

0/10

rhiannon113

Thank you for bringing him back. That was so clever to use the 'life debt' angle to bring him back. I'm loving the relationship that they have. =]You're amazing, dearest!*hugs*Rhiannon

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

*blushes*  Thank you, hon.  I'm glad you enjoyed their 'reunion.'  Poor guys.  They're always being pulled apart.  Well, it won't happen again.  They're stuck with each other now.

10/10

BrenaMarie

You killed him?  Seriously?  Wow.  I wonder how you're going to work this one out to be a happy ending.  Please update again soon.  Much Love ~ Karen

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I did.   I'm shooting for an update tomorrow.  We'll see how that works out.  Hugs! --Deb

10/10

magialuna

Ahhhh I thought it said this story was complete! And then there is no more one more chapter... I feel like screaming.  IS there going to be one more chapter soon?  I must know!  Must!  What happens!!! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There are about five more chapters left, so no, it's not complete.  The next one should be up in a couple of days.  I'm just doing the final editing on it.

0/10

kimjo2

poor hermione...having to kiss lucius!  great update, take two!  thanks so much, my deb                                         (me blowing kisses)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Aw, you know what's coming. 

0/10

WriterMerrin

Well, that certainly was unexpected.  I had wondered how such a dumb idea could work out in their favor, as though Lucius could be beaten in his own home, but you had that all figured out all along.  I have a couple of ideas for solutions, and they both involve Time Turners. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yeah, I know.  I'm really evil at heart.  I just mask it in sweetness so you wouldn't suspect anything.  Unfortunately, nothing ever goes as planned, and Hermione's bad feelings were definitely merited.We'll see what happens.  Soon, probably.

10/10

indigo_rose

Wow!  That is harsh!  But there's got to be a way, or you wouldn't have written these forty chapters so far...  Hmm.  I can think of a few possibilities of how things might be put right somehow.  First, there's the obvious re-use of the Time-Turner.  Second, there's Severus' words to Harry all those years ago when he started the duelling lessons, that intent determines the outcome of a spell.  What happened when Hermione cast that uber-Avada Kedavra?  In the back of her mind, she wanted Severus to not be dead; could the spell have taken the life force from Lucius and his flunky and given it to Sev?  Third, Severus is always going on to the first years that the art of potion making can allow you to "put a stopper in death".  Finally, we have the amazing basilisk Strengthening Solution which appears to do more than what it says on the tin.  I'm going to have to read over the previous chapters to see if I can glean anything from them as to what is going to happen!

Moose, huh?  My sister was bitten by a moose once.  No, really!  She was carving her initials into the side of the moose when...

(The people responsible for leaving this review have just been sacked.  The rest of this review has been completely redone at the last minute and at great cost.) 

Great job!  Moose or no, I expect a new chapter in short order! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Those are all awesome hypotheses.  You'll see soon if you're right.

0/10

dawnstar

OK, I'm meaning no offense here but I'm just feeling like you're revving up the story-cycle to jump a literary shark.  And sharks are way scarier than moose.  Guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Well, sharks really are scary, so hopefully, things will work out.

10/10

BrenaMarie

So, I was going through my emails today...and noticed that I never actually left a review for this chapter.  I left one for 38 and not 37...whoops.  You know I think you're awesome right?  This story is amazing.  :-)  Much Love ~ Karen

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Well, I think you're awesome too!Deb

10/10

ApollinaV

So sweet.  And I like this more even form of everyone, less hot/cold dramatic.  It's very sweet.  Sigh.  The story is going to end soon, isn't it.  Things are wrapping up so nicely.  Crapola.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

We've got a few more chapters to go.  It's not all over yet!

10/10

ApollinaV

I love how she revealed her true self to Severus.  And I can't wait until Harry gets it.  That was too funny where he admonishes her for running off... yeah, she did run off, but probably quite a bit farther than he imagined.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

You're so right!  But  he found out soon enough.  Thanks, AV

10/10

ApollinaV

I never stopped loving you.  I would have killed you if you did.  Fantastic parting shots!  This chapter was all sorts of wonderful.  And I think it was truly necessary.  I'm just so sad Severus is insecure about the othertime line.  Hermione is just going to have to show him how much HE means to her.  Not the other bat of the dungeons.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

You're right.  But it was a good thing ultimately for both of them.  It's one thing to conceptually understand what happened, but an entirely different thing to see it unfold before your eyes!

10/10

ApollinaV

This hits the mark.  It fits the bill.  It's just perfect.  Wee!  Reunion is so sweet.  Perfection.  Bravo

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad she's back too.  It seemed like forever!

0/10

ApollinaV

Oh no!  And this is why HG/RW just doesn't work.  But Potions not Arithimancy?  I am worried

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He's much worse in this than he ever was in the other timeline.  I think this is what could have happened to him had he let it.

0/10

ApollinaV

Ugh!  Make it go away.  I'm so ready for the Final Battle and Hermione's return.  Only Hermione's not going to show up after the Final Battle.  She still has a few years after that.  Now I'm getting cranky.  Now I want the sweetie at the end.  Impatient, I know.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

*Chocolate truffle?  *I know, I know.  It's hard to wait.  But their reunion is coming soon.

10/10

ApollinaV

Oh no!  *covers eyes*  I can't look!  His cover blown!  Nonononono.  You are killing me woman.  Killing me.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sorry... but at least you know he's all right now.

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