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Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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finnally a mention of lupin saying something about hermione. im definately disappointed how little it is though. and of course im disappointed at hermione not getting totured at the malfoys house- i was wondering how you would have done that.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Well, she did, actually, I just didn't cover it. I hadn't plans to change it, so I left it out.
glad one of the malfoys thought to repay snape for saving draco.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Incredible how some don't have much gratitude in them. Luckily, Narcissa was very grateful to Severus.
hmmm dont know the plausability of getting that much info out of snape in that memory...i guess maybe somehow if it works on the same principle as paintings...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think that is how it would work.
ah glad how they get around the vow was explained. “The entire summer, Harry? That’s almost an entire month! I hardly see you during the school year!” um isnt it over 2 months long? and ugh- remus and sirius not commenting on hermione is killing me.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I had to go back and look. The trial happened midway through summer vacation, so that's why Petunia said what she did.
ahhh, so harry got a glimpse of hermione in snape's memories. i wonder if his curiousity will get to the better of him. and alas no sirius and remus commenting on hermione. well with sirius alive- there is stll bound to be time to do so.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Given your comments, I probably should have added a little of their reactions. Oh, well. Live and learn, right?
oooooooh, is harry going to steal into snape's memories and find out about hermione?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Heh, heh. He might find out in SOME way.
awwwww, the scene with harry/hermione/snape and the paper was hilarious and very cute. and as much as i love dudley-he's stealing neveille's stuff.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
LOL. I guess he is. But Neville will find his own happiness.
ooo that was cruel- the student/teacher dance. its inviting inappropriateness to come sooner.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Severus is strong... very strong. He'll wait for her to become the right age.
oh i wonder how black and lupin will react to hermione being there as well as to harry's relationship with snape.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
They will keep much under their hats.
yay lucius, dudley and draco appear or are mentioned in this chapter. oh yeah- the hufflepuffs in book 2! they rocked- neat to see dudley part of that group and nice to see him make an appearance. and oh lucius-how humourous and having found out about her throuogh his son. though what reason will hermione have to go back in time if lucius doesnt pursue those ways?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Excellent question. It remains to be seen what the future will bring. Dudley mixes with the others but has his own group too. He's pretty much a perfect Hogwarts student! LOL
ooooh, so its confirmed that lucius knows. i cant wait to see him or draco! aww did you put dudley in hufflepuff cause he is fat? cause seriously i dont really see him exhibiting the traits unless they come latter though i understand the need, plotwise, to put him in another house.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
LOL. Weight really had nothing to do with it! Actually, I see a lot of several housees in Duddley. He definitely has Slytherin traits, and he could be brave given the right circumstances. It just didn't seem like he was a good fit for Ravenclaw, and Hufflepuff is kind of like the 'everbody who doesn't fit anywhere else goes here' house. I also thought it might be interesting, as we don't see too many Hufflepuffs along the way in stories.
Now ofcourse my review should have been with the last chaper, not with the first...Anyway.Did you realize it's a year on the day since you posted the first chapter?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I hadn't noticed! How cool is that? It was totally unplanned.
What a wonderful ride this has been!And a sequel, wow.That will be interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
yup as i thought, dudley stole neveille's wife. but oh poor ron getting warped like that! i hope hermione is fix him.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Unfortunately, Ron is a lost cause.
What a wonderful ending! I'm glad they are happy, personally I couldn't deal with that many kids (I have two and I'm pulling my hair out lol).
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I have three girls and summer is a big challenge. My six-year-old has taken to fit throwing and her sister has taken to teasing her ad nauseum. I'm thinking of selling one of them. Or maybe two...
huh, you know what would be incredibly interesting and would be something id be so suprised to see? if it created uite a different route for them-thus changing the person hermione is to become-essentially erasing the hermione that went back. and thus severus is left to mourn what had been and what he had lost and seeeing it in fromnt of him all those years of waiting. now that would be a twist.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Now, that's a bit like what actually happened, isn't it? Except that Hermione's return changed things back. But oh, how horrible it would be if things changed and he lost her.
i was wondering since you gave petunia magic if that would automatically give dudley powers- thus why i didnt like that change to the story- i feel it would now change things even way more- if he has dudley by his side -would he form the same friendships and would they be as closely bonded? would he go into slytherin now since draco is bound to be different and he knows of severus? i wonder how much of the things are you going to change.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think a big part of Harry is his Gryffindor traits. They don't change. He's brave and wants to protect his friends.
awwwwwwww- lots of petunia. super good. though with harry havinga happier childhood icould see him less willing to fight for the magic world and those that became his family like the weasleys.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think Harry is an honorable soul. He'd fight for right no matter what his background might be.
That was lovely, and I'm looking forward to your sequel. And my eight month old won't sleep through the night either, he's always hungry. It isn't Daddy's nose, though. It's his beard. The other day he had both his feet and one of his hands tangled in it. (My husband has a full beard, rather long).
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
LOL. They always find something, don't they? This was actually patterned after my own little girl... now six, who took a fascination to her then five-year-old sister's nose and sucked away. Better than a pacifier!
oh good. im very glad were seeing parts from the years inbetween. and yay petunia.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She's a bit different in this.
ooh, suprised her departurture happened so early in the fic-but that makes me excited for things to come. hmmm, i wonder if you will spend sometime from his pov the years after and when hermione was a student or will you go straight to the 25 yr leap.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
As you now know, there was a long 25 year fill in.
What a delightful ending. So cute the scenes of the kids all playing together. Thank you so much for this delightful tale.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks so much! It's been so much fun hearing from you throughout this.
What a great ending to a wonderful story! It was sweet and funny all at the same time... My favorite part was when little Emily yells, "Are we getting a dog?" Hopefully another sister or brother will be almost as good as a dog. Hee hee.Thanks for working so hard for so long to write all this! I look forward to any future stories from you! Five stars all the way.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you so much! Emily was patterned after my own Emily. I think a sibling will be almost as good, as you've said. But, maybe they'll get a dog too.
absolutely love that dumbledore came as a lemon drop. “No,” she said flatly, placing her hand on his shoulder. i jst really like line. Lucius Malfoy looked on with interest, wondering why Severus didn’t earn himself a detention with that kiss the same way he had. ^_____^ oh though now that theyh are out in the open i wonder how the mauraders and other death eaters will act.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You've totally made my day/days with all of your reviews. Thank you so much!
A truly brilliant fic with a wonderful epilogue that was the perfect icing of the cake! You should take much pride in this work, and thank you so much for sharing it with us! I hope your head have already start spinning with ideas for new wonderful fics to write about our favourite couple!!!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you so much,
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
! There's always some crazy idea spinning in my head. It's just a matter of what to do with them!