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Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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Great story so far!I'm glad they both have a place to just relax and be themselves...Can't wait for more!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think they both enjoy getting away from everything too. And it's really solidifying their friendship.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think they both enjoy getting away from everything too. And it's really solidifying their friendship.
yay! more excellence. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You are very sweet to say so. Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You are very sweet to say so. Thank you!
this is great, i can't wait for the next update (no pressure)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
No pressure felt, really, none at all. *Author begins to bite nails* There will be a new update again soon, I promise.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
No pressure felt, really, none at all. *Author begins to bite nails* There will be a new update again soon, I promise.
I am very curious where this is leading...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
This is quite a long story, and will lead to some interesting and surprising places. I hope you enjoy where it leads.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
This is quite a long story, and will lead to some interesting and surprising places. I hope you enjoy where it leads.
Wow I normally don't like time travel stories, but this is good. I want to keep reading.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, I'm so glad you like this! Thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, I'm so glad you like this! Thank you!
but still he had to go thru it. thanks so much for the update!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you. Yes, he did in Hermione's past, but now he has a chance for a different kind of life in his future.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you. Yes, he did in Hermione's past, but now he has a chance for a different kind of life in his future.
It will be interseting what repercussions for the future you will write. Hermione seems to think that to change things here will change things for the better in the future. Really on the balance of probability it could go either way...Cheers.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She does have hope that things will change for the better, but as you said, it definitely could go either way. And even something that changes for good, can turn out not to be what she had hoped for in the long run.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She does have hope that things will change for the better, but as you said, it definitely could go either way. And even something that changes for good, can turn out not to be what she had hoped for in the long run.
good choice, but who will be Dumbledore's spy?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That remains to be seen, now, doesn't it? That will be revealed eventually.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That remains to be seen, now, doesn't it? That will be revealed eventually.
I can't wait for more....... hurry please!lol
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Okay! But I can only update as quickly as this can be validated, don't forget! I will have the next chapter in the queue very soon.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Okay! But I can only update as quickly as this can be validated, don't forget! I will have the next chapter in the queue very soon.
I really liked this chapter. I think if Severus really understood what he was getting into he would never have joined Voldermort. Again praise for breaking the mold!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That seems to ring true. He really was not pleased with his decision once he understood the implications and he worked for the rest of his life to make up for his mistakes. I just think he could never truly forgive himself.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That seems to ring true. He really was not pleased with his decision once he understood the implications and he worked for the rest of his life to make up for his mistakes. I just think he could never truly forgive himself.
Great chapter! I loved how he thought things through ... now I can't wait to see where you're going to go with his decision! hehe what will change and what will stay the same? hehe :) Thank you again for sharing this story, I can't wait to read more! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, we are in for a fun ride. But Hermoine needs to concentrate and help Lucius too, so we will be in this time frame for a bit yet. Of course, some changes will happen in this time too, just as a result of his decision.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, we are in for a fun ride. But Hermoine needs to concentrate and help Lucius too, so we will be in this time frame for a bit yet. Of course, some changes will happen in this time too, just as a result of his decision.
I'm glad that is the choice he made. I think having a friend other than Lily helped him get over his obsession.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think you're right about his obsession. And knowing what he knows now, he would have been quite foolish to take the Dark Mark and start that cycle all over again.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think you're right about his obsession. And knowing what he knows now, he would have been quite foolish to take the Dark Mark and start that cycle all over again.
This is a great chapter. I hope Severus changes his fate.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
We will find out really soon whether he decides to join the ranks of the Death Eaters or not. Thanks!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
We will find out really soon whether he decides to join the ranks of the Death Eaters or not. Thanks!
Will he really believe her, or will he second guess what she has told him and join anyway in a misguided attempt to get to Voldemort?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow, great question. He will believe her, but that subplot you suggested is quite interesting.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow, great question. He will believe her, but that subplot you suggested is quite interesting.
love it and u
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Aww, thank you!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Aww, thank you!
I really hope Severus gets to change his fate. But then again, if voldemort still gets into power, now the side of the light is one spy short....
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You're right. It will be if Severus chooses not to take the mark. But perhaps less guilt on his part will be worth it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You're right. It will be if Severus chooses not to take the mark. But perhaps less guilt on his part will be worth it.
That was really an amazing chapter. I really did like it. I can't wait to see your next one.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! I'm glad it pleased you. Poor Severus has a lot to think about in the next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! I'm glad it pleased you. Poor Severus has a lot to think about in the next chapter.
Great story so far! I like the premise very much, it is different twist. I especially like how Hermione is older than Severus and treats him more like a younger brother than a student or love interest. (Although I do hope that comes along later!)I look forward to more chapters.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, this is a romance, so surely there will be some romance later.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, this is a romance, so surely there will be some romance later.
I think that was an excellent technique you used to make Severus see reason. Having Hermione tell him exactly what happened and what he had to do to change his life was inspired. Most time turner fictions follow the rigid rule of 'not changing the time line' so this was a breath of fresh air.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
This fic, unlike most, will have fun changing the timeline beyond imagination.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
This fic, unlike most, will have fun changing the timeline beyond imagination.
glad to see Hermione kick Malfoy's arse. That made me laugh out loud. I want to hug Snape. Of course I ALWAYS want to hug him. can't wait for more!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Mmm, who doesn't want to hug Snape? Anyhoo, it was lots of fun making Malfoy eat his words. I'm glad you found it funny.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Mmm, who doesn't want to hug Snape? Anyhoo, it was lots of fun making Malfoy eat his words. I'm glad you found it funny.
excellent update!!!! i just want to put my arms arround him too. thank you so much
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, you can't help feeling for him, having all of that thrown at him within two days. Poor guy. I'm glad you enjoyed everything.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, you can't help feeling for him, having all of that thrown at him within two days. Poor guy. I'm glad you enjoyed everything.
I can't wait to read the next one (gnawing on fingernails)... what will he do, oh what will he do....
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
The next one will be up soon as it is already in the queue. I can say this, he will do a lot of thinking.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
The next one will be up soon as it is already in the queue. I can say this, he will do a lot of thinking.
this is great, I am glad Hermione beat Lucius only wish it was more public for him some embarrassment would do him good, but problable would not have helped with becoming friends with him. Looking forward to next update
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That would have been funny if it had been in public, especially during the Defense class he's so proud of defeating. Lol.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
That would have been funny if it had been in public, especially during the Defense class he's so proud of defeating. Lol.
Interesting chapter! hehe I loved Hermione's supperiority over Lucius, then to have her catch and discipline James and Sirius was priceless! :)hehe I am a bit concerned about the future if Severus decides to not become a Death Eater - imo, his decision to join Voldemort and his subsequent decision to go to Dumbledore define his character...how would the world change if he didn't make the first decision - would Snape still teach? Would Harry die his first year when Quirrel curses his broom if he doesn't teach? For that matter, if Lucius' opinion on "Mudbloods" changes, will Draco initially change Harry's opinion on Slytherin house, thus changing that aspect of the story? hehe I can't wait to read more! Thank you so much for sharing this story!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I agree with you about his being a Death Eater defining his character. I can't tell you what happens, but I will make more comments about that as the story goes along. We are quite along the same wavelength on that.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I agree with you about his being a Death Eater defining his character. I can't tell you what happens, but I will make more comments about that as the story goes along. We are quite along the same wavelength on that.