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Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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Allies are better than enemies.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Of course they are! There certainly won't be a great love between Severus, Remus, and Sirius, but at least Severus knows the truth.
Still enjoying the trip... I wonder if the fact that Severus knows about Pettigrew will change the future very much...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Not very much. The rat will still bring back Voldemort. Stupid rat.
Loved the update and the wait was well worth it. I got a real giggle that you called the fish and critters in the lake 'sea life.' I was always told that a lake was fresh water and the fish and critters were aquatic life, who knew! LOLI thought it very in character for Harry to have the money given to the Weasleys, although I personally thought that Dumbledore could have been a bit more creative! Breaking and entering to leave a deposit? Oh, well.I really liked your twist on the "Shack' event, Severus taking a moment to think before reacting was great - and he now knows the truth! Whoot!Let me guess - the Yule Ball is next?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sea life, lake life, aquatic life. Maybe the lake is like the Great Salt Lake in Utah. Hopefully not, because that lake stinks so bad you can't get near it. Pardon my faux pas in any case. Dumbledore's too busy creating his own plots to be creative in the depositing of money to the Weasleys. Maybe if the Golden Trio hadn't stunned Severus in canon, he might have taken a second to listen to what was going on. But he was so bent on revenge, he probably wouldn't have believed any of it.Oh, yes, the Yule Ball is next. Double Whoot!
Another excellent chapter. I am really enjoying how you've changed the details of the original canon events without making it all bunnies and sunshine. It's amazing how a little love really could have changed everything for Severus. I like it that you're not rushing the tale either, by seeing these changes in the time-line and reading about the feelings of expectations and impatience that Severus is having it makes the story more moving. I'm definitely looking forward to the coming chapters, especially if you revisit the two times that young Hermione finds Severus after he returns from the Death Eater meetings. Perhaps that might spark some emotions in the young Hermione? I am still really hoping that you have Hermione come back to a not entirely changed future though, perhaps another dire situation but one that Hermione would have insight on from her previous experience in the original time-line. Oh by the way, is the older Hermione going to retain the memories from her previous time-line and have them blend with the memories this Hermione has?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Although bunnies and sunshine are fun to read, having everything that way isn't very realistic. Even though I love happy endings, getting there isn't always easy. I'm glad you're not put off by the length of the time period between Hermione's departure and her eventual return. I know it's hard to wait when you want everything to be happy again between them. Now that she's getting a bit older, Hermione's relationship with Severus will become closer. That's about all I can say about that. Then there's your final question. I can't really answer that without giving too much away. I can say that Hermione will retain her old memories.
Response from dawnstar (Reviewer)
Sweet! Thanks for answering without spoiling anything.
gosh, my deb, i hope it was nothing too serious. great update. is it my imagination or is there a bit more than the previous one? there seems to be more detail in this one. and a wonderful amount it is. thanks so much, deb. i hope you're feeling much better. (me blowing kisses)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
It was a stomach virus... the worst possible illness that ever existed. At least, that's what it feels like when it's happening! I'm all better now and not so melodramatic about the whole thing. I've been editing as I've gone along. I've added some. Most of it is feelings on Severus' part in this chapter. It feels a bit more well rounded this time around, I think.
Drat! I was hoping they'd catch the rat this time. Oh well, I'm just glad everything is moving along as well as it is. I'm sorry to hear about crazy life and illness. I hope you're feeling better! Much Love ~Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm much better, thanks.Yes, the rat is tricksy. At least Severus knows the truth this time around. I always felt badly that he had been hexed into oblivion and missed out on all of the reveal.
I am glad you posted and I hope you are feeling much better. This chap was well worth the wait - very enjoyable. I look forward to an update!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you, I am well again! Yay! And so are my kids. Even bigger yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I think the next one should be well appreciated. I'll have it up soon.
Your killing me with this year by year thing lol, but's it's a wonderful story and I can't wait for more. Great job!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry! I know it's frustrating. (Think of how Severus feels.) I can't help my overactive imagination. Thanks for sticking with it. I promise, there will be a reunion, it'll just be a while.
Wow, that was fun! I'm so happy about Severus' relationship with Harry. I'm sorry it took so long to read/review! Anyways I'm off to read the latest installment! Keep those updates coming! Cheers! ~Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks Brena,Severus and Harry have grown to like each other quite well. They won't always agree on everything, but they will have a decent friendship.
Third year down. Good. I cannot wait until this is all over. This story was so interesting in the beginning, but this retelling of the whole saga brought the plot to a rash stop. I wish it could have been over and done with in one chapter. That is, of course, my personal opinion.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I appreciate your opinion. I knew that some would feel this way, and I can totally understand it. In posting this, I've contemplating shortening up this time period, but my main reason for doing it (other than to show timeline changes) is to give you an idea of how long that wait is for Severus. It's no walk in the park. Yes, this almost seems to be a different story, but they will be reunited, it'll just take a while. I'm glad you're sticking around, though. Many would raise their hands in frustration and drop the whole story.
I love that Harry gave money to the Weasely family. Nice set up. I am getting really anxious to get to the reunion! It's becoming painful to see them together, and him knowing he can't be with her for a while. Next chapter should be interesting...Lucius, the Yule Ball, the tasks....and of course I can't wait for your insight on the return of Moldy-shorts!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I know, I know. It's so hard not to see them together and in love. And instead of making the time go by quicker, I'm just extending all of the years by two chapter. (I'm cruel that way.) I too want them together and happy, but, if Severus has to wait, so do the rest of us.
Oh, I hope you feel better, deb! *sends you an improperly clothed Severus with bowl of hot soup* What was the most painful for me in this update was Severus' conversation with Hermione. How hard it must be for him! To not really know how to connect with Hermione, who he loves and has shared so much with in the past/future. But, I have also been enjoying you reinterpretation of canon immensely!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I am feeling much better, thank you! i so enjoyed that Snape you sent. The soup was okay too. I'm glad that the canon twists are fun for you. They're certainly fun for me, but not everyone has my tastes! It really is hard for Severus. She's not even mature right now. He can only communicate with her on a student/kid level. But things will get better as she grows up. Better and harder all in one.
Don't feel bad, I have a story I would love to update, however I also have a special needs child so I don't get to do as much with it as I would like.Great chapter, I love how you keep turning things around in canon.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I simply enjoy twisting things, I guess. It's a heap of fun.I'm sure you're incredibly busy with caring for a child with special needs. I know it must be a bit of a burden, but I'm sure you receive great blessings too. There are a couple of Down's Syndrome kids in the church I attend. One little girl is eight. She squeals and has to hug me fiercely every time she sees me. I love every minute of it. It seems that what these children lack in 'every day' skills, they make up for in love.
This is the best! Severus' interactions with Hermione are so delicately done, letting us see some of his pain without it being weird. I love seeing how some things change, but mostly things have to appear the same on the surface. Brilliant!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you're pleased. Yeah, I didn't want it wierd. He can cherish her as a youth, yet still know the difference between her and his love.
I like your version of Potter perhaps better than canon. Of course, myself being a bona fide Snape addict, this is unsurprising. I cant wait to read more of this, purely to see Hermione grow and be reunited with Severus. Of course, 25 years is a long time to wait, and he will perhaps have fallen out of love with her at this point? I hope not. It would cause me great distress!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He's a pretty faithful guy. It will be more evident as time goes by what he will decide. As for Harry, I think his different upbringing helped him to be not quite as judgemental as he was in canon.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He's a pretty faithful guy. It will be more evident as time goes by what he will decide. As for Harry, I think his different upbringing helped him to be not quite as judgemental as he was in canon.
Wow. I thought it was very interesting that you decided to have severus tell harry about the incident with james & hanging him upside down. Even though Hermione has had a major influence on him, I still got the impression that he was still quite a private man. What did you base the decision of snape being willing to tell hary about that incident on? Just curious. ;)I also think it's adorable what you've done with Dudley and him thinking he's a ladies man. That's cute and I think it fits him wonderfully. :) I also enjoyed the short walk he and harry took. Those two being friends instead of enemies had to have made quite an impact on them both. It was nice seeing a snippet of Lucius, too. I wonder how that's going to change when he finds out she's back from her time travel bit in the future. :) Happy writing!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
With Severus and Harry, he's trying to build a relationship of trust with Harry. He wants to help with his journey against Voldemort. He also wants Harry to know that he knows how he feels being ostracized by the whole school. I think when the whole conversation started, Severus had no intention of going into such detail. He just wanted Harry to realize that he couldn't let his feelings get in the way of his defense capabilities. As the conversation progressed, however, things just snowballed. The timbre of the conversation had Severus be more forthcoming than he normally would have been. By the time Harry was asking just who had done it, Severus knew that he needed to be truthful with Harry. If Harry found out the truth in the future, their relationship would be damaged and he wouldn't be able to help him in the way that he hopes to be able to. Also, although he is still very private, as allies, he recognizes that he can be a bit more forthcoming with Harry. They have spent almost two years training and learning about each other at this point.It's interesting to ponder what Harry could have been like if Dudley had been more friendly. We catch a snippet of that in DH when Dudley finally grows up a little. It's interesting that he seems to be the most mature out of all of the Dursleys, even at a young age. I just couldn't resist the 'ladies' man' comment. His high regard for himself is showing up in different ways now that he's not such a bugger.As for Lucius, his meeting with Hermione when she's back will be an interesting one. That's about all I can say on that!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
With Severus and Harry, he's trying to build a relationship of trust with Harry. He wants to help with his journey against Voldemort. He also wants Harry to know that he knows how he feels being ostracized by the whole school. I think when the whole conversation started, Severus had no intention of going into such detail. He just wanted Harry to realize that he couldn't let his feelings get in the way of his defense capabilities. As the conversation progressed, however, things just snowballed. The timbre of the conversation had Severus be more forthcoming than he normally would have been. By the time Harry was asking just who had done it, Severus knew that he needed to be truthful with Harry. If Harry found out the truth in the future, their relationship would be damaged and he wouldn't be able to help him in the way that he hopes to be able to. Also, although he is still very private, as allies, he recognizes that he can be a bit more forthcoming with Harry. They have spent almost two years training and learning about each other at this point.It's interesting to ponder what Harry could have been like if Dudley had been more friendly. We catch a snippet of that in DH when Dudley finally grows up a little. It's interesting that he seems to be the most mature out of all of the Dursleys, even at a young age. I just couldn't resist the 'ladies' man' comment. His high regard for himself is showing up in different ways now that he's not such a bugger.As for Lucius, his meeting with Hermione when she's back will be an interesting one. That's about all I can say on that!
Very nicely done. I like how Harry is interacting with Dudley and Severus. I think it's a good thing for Severus to tell Harry about his dad when he asked. It builds an honest relationship between the two. Poor Hermione, her second year didn't work out too well. Looking forward to year three. Wonder how Harry will take to Sirius, now that he and Severus are friendly.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! They're relationships are both very different in a good way, I think. Hermione really did have problems this year, didn't she. At least she didn't remember being petrified for so long! As for Harry and Sirius... you'll see. Mwahahaha.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! They're relationships are both very different in a good way, I think. Hermione really did have problems this year, didn't she. At least she didn't remember being petrified for so long! As for Harry and Sirius... you'll see. Mwahahaha.
You've not left me disappointed at all. Another excellent chapter. The part in the infirmary while Hermoine is petrified was very sweet and so indicative of the new, patient, caring man that Severus has become. So many times authors will lace this type of interaction with so much innuendo or smut that it losses the sweetness of having her be Severus' lost love. I loved the bit with Dudley proclaiming to be the 'ladies man'. Way too funny. I also noticed how you've made Narcissa out to me the blood-line obsessed member of the Malfoy family. That could definitely become a great catalyst for putting a different spin on some of the events in the coming years.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
It just wouldn't have been right to have any type of innuendo in there, I think. She's just a kid. Severus knows who she will become, but she's not that person yet. He doesn't think of this Hermione in that way. If he did, that would be a major eew. He does long for her to become His Hermione, though. How could he not?The 'ladies' man' seems to have been a big hit! It just shows how self assured Dudley is. It comes out a bit differently than it did in canon, which is hopefully refreshing. Lol. As for Narcissa, I've never liked her much. I think it's the image of her face always contorted into a disgusted look that turns me off. Although without her, Harry would be dead, so I guess she's forgiven. That expression says a lot about her anyway, I think. So, yup, she's the purist in this.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
It just wouldn't have been right to have any type of innuendo in there, I think. She's just a kid. Severus knows who she will become, but she's not that person yet. He doesn't think of this Hermione in that way. If he did, that would be a major eew. He does long for her to become His Hermione, though. How could he not?The 'ladies' man' seems to have been a big hit! It just shows how self assured Dudley is. It comes out a bit differently than it did in canon, which is hopefully refreshing. Lol. As for Narcissa, I've never liked her much. I think it's the image of her face always contorted into a disgusted look that turns me off. Although without her, Harry would be dead, so I guess she's forgiven. That expression says a lot about her anyway, I think. So, yup, she's the purist in this.
That's a much nicer version!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks, Sunny. I think so too!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks, Sunny. I think so too!
if only it could have been like that. i always thot sev and harry had a lot in common and could have gotten along well. lovely update and i am enjoying even more this time, i think. thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yeah, in a different world... oh, wait, that's what this is. Ha ha. (Nasally Nelson from the Simpsons laugh.) They really do have a bit in common. Less than stellar childhoods, both ostracized to some extent. Anyway, glad this is even better the second time through!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yeah, in a different world... oh, wait, that's what this is. Ha ha. (Nasally Nelson from the Simpsons laugh.) They really do have a bit in common. Less than stellar childhoods, both ostracized to some extent. Anyway, glad this is even better the second time through!
Still enjoying the ride...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
So glad that you are!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
So glad that you are!
Sorry, but I really don't buy the "I don't hate James," thing. I cannot believe, even for this 'new' Severus that he didn't harbor resentment for James. The way he hated Sirius - it doesn't fit. I do like how Severus tried to soften up the recounting of his father. The incident of the potion ingredients was cute. I enjoyed this.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think much of this is him trying to soften everything for Harry. Also, distance and not seeing the bloke for years has a way of tempering the thoughts. I bet if James appeared in front of him, he'd stil harbor quite a bit of resentment toward him. But from Hermione he learned that his hatred caused him insurmountable grief and he doesn't really want to fall into that again. So his comment that he finds hating to be a waste of time is derived from his knowledge of his 'other' future.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think much of this is him trying to soften everything for Harry. Also, distance and not seeing the bloke for years has a way of tempering the thoughts. I bet if James appeared in front of him, he'd stil harbor quite a bit of resentment toward him. But from Hermione he learned that his hatred caused him insurmountable grief and he doesn't really want to fall into that again. So his comment that he finds hating to be a waste of time is derived from his knowledge of his 'other' future.
I'm sorry if you've already covered this, but what does Petunia do for a living? She'd need some means of support, I was curious. I am wondering if Hermione's feelings for him are changing. He's so much nicer now. That may make her more attracked to him, but could it also go the other way? How much of the 'bad-boy loner' was what attracked to?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I haven't covered Petunia's livelihood. To be honest, she appears often in this fic and I haven't even given it a second thought! Any suggestions? She's coming up in the next chapter. We'll find out then.As for Hermione's feelings, she's just a kid right now. She respects her professor as a teacher and thinks he's smart. That's it. As time goes on, things might change. I think for Hermione, her attraction was more the unsung hero thing, rather than the bad-boy loner angle. That's an interesting angle, though. Wouldn't it be a shame if she just 'liked him as a friend' by the end of this? (Don't worry, she left his time loving him, those feelings won't change, they've already happened.)
Response from rhiannon113 (Reviewer)
OMG! Please don't let it be friends only by the end...I'd just die! LOL I kind of think it would be cool if Petunia had a semi-magical career. Maybe the Muggle Liason office? As an assistant or something? I don't know. I just find that I'm quite curious about her since she's a real parent figure to him now.
Oh yes, and I forgot last time: I nearly choked when Dudley said he was a ladies' man!! Nice one!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I haven't covered Petunia's livelihood. To be honest, she appears often in this fic and I haven't even given it a second thought! Any suggestions? She's coming up in the next chapter. We'll find out then.As for Hermione's feelings, she's just a kid right now. She respects her professor as a teacher and thinks he's smart. That's it. As time goes on, things might change. I think for Hermione, her attraction was more the unsung hero thing, rather than the bad-boy loner angle. That's an interesting angle, though. Wouldn't it be a shame if she just 'liked him as a friend' by the end of this? (Don't worry, she left his time loving him, those feelings won't change, they've already happened.)
Response from rhiannon113 (Reviewer)
OMG! Please don't let it be friends only by the end...I'd just die! LOL I kind of think it would be cool if Petunia had a semi-magical career. Maybe the Muggle Liason office? As an assistant or something? I don't know. I just find that I'm quite curious about her since she's a real parent figure to him now.
Oh yes, and I forgot last time: I nearly choked when Dudley said he was a ladies' man!! Nice one!
If Lucius is a fairly good guy now, how did the diary come to be in Ginny's hands? Malfoy maliciously put it in her bag. What would be your take on that?Fun story by the way
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
A very good question. He's still a Death Eater. (Well, former DE at this point.) He likes power and feeling in control. He's not fond of the Weasleys, as they are blood traitors. Most importantly, as we have seen in DH, the pull of a Horcrux is often difficult to ignore. I wouldn't put it past the diary to have put the idea into Lucius' mind, therefore giving it the ability to resurrect it's master.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
A very good question. He's still a Death Eater. (Well, former DE at this point.) He likes power and feeling in control. He's not fond of the Weasleys, as they are blood traitors. Most importantly, as we have seen in DH, the pull of a Horcrux is often difficult to ignore. I wouldn't put it past the diary to have put the idea into Lucius' mind, therefore giving it the ability to resurrect it's master.
I can't wait for the next chapter, my mind has been in overdrive wondering how you are going to handle Riddle's Diary and the Chamber of Secrets since it seems that Lucius was influenced by Hermione enough not to hate Mudbloods and Blood traitors so much. Perhaps Lucius never gets the Diary? Or maybe the Diary doesn't influence the opening of the chamber at all and will be used as a plot device later. Could Voldemort use the Diary to possess Lucius after his body is destroyed a 2nd time, creating the reason for the Hermoine of this time line to go back to the past anyway all to arrive back from her previous trip to find the situation unchanged, but the details altered enough to offer a solution to the problem. Oh the possibilities with a fluid, ever changing space time continuum. Love it, love it!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow! That's a lot of speculation. Hermione did convince Lucius about Mudbloods, but they really didn't cover the blood traitor angle. I think, too, that Lucius used Ginny not only because of her status, but because of her age and innocence. I hope it won't disappoint you too much to know that that part won't really change. I love your ideas though. Too bad this is all written already! The chapter is up for validation, so it will be posted soon. I could have used your ideas before, as I had a hard time with 2nd year. Hopefully it will be satisfying anyway. It will deal more with reactions to what's going on and relationships with each other.
Response from dawnstar (Reviewer)
I'm sure it be great. And if you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of feel free to shoot me an email.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! I will.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow! That's a lot of speculation. Hermione did convince Lucius about Mudbloods, but they really didn't cover the blood traitor angle. I think, too, that Lucius used Ginny not only because of her status, but because of her age and innocence. I hope it won't disappoint you too much to know that that part won't really change. I love your ideas though. Too bad this is all written already! The chapter is up for validation, so it will be posted soon. I could have used your ideas before, as I had a hard time with 2nd year. Hopefully it will be satisfying anyway. It will deal more with reactions to what's going on and relationships with each other.
Response from dawnstar (Reviewer)
I'm sure it be great. And if you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of feel free to shoot me an email.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! I will.