New Chapter for Time's Treasure
Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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Oh please let him survive.Let someone put a spell on him from the Order that will alert them of his impending doom.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sounds like a great plan, but the Order hates him. They think he's a mur-diddly-urderer. But something has to happen, right?
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Yes, because you know that we the reader wants a happy ending..Yippee fairytales..
That sucks! I know that you wouldn't kill our Severus and that he'll slither his way out of this somehow but it still sucks how you letf him chained to the wall like that. It's so cute how Hermione and Severus are dancing around eachother like this. Even though she doesn't know what happened you can still see the chemistry between them and its awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next (as always)! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
(More chemistry to come...) But I'm jumping the gun. Being chained to the wall is better than being dead, right? You'll see how he escapes this... IF he escapes it!
wonderful, Hermione to the rescue?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Hmm, can't say, but that would be cool.
Please don't let him get hurt too bad before sending him back to Hermione. He's already waited 20-odd years for her. What a gent.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I know, he's suffered so much already.
Well, I figured someone would have figured out Severus's true loyalties but I have high hopes things will still work out.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, and Bella was always suspicious of him. Unfortunately, her plan worked out for her.
You are evil, evil evil!!!! Or, you're going to turn this around and have it be a double, double play!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I am evil. *Hangs head in shame* You'll have to see what happens.
Oops. Should have been more careful. Constant Vigilance! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Constant vigilance indeed! He didn't take a close enough look before he left.
No No you can't leave it there!
Please update soon.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
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Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry! I'll get another update up soon.
ACK!!!!! now that you've changed history - erm, the future - whatever - how can Severus and Herms get together??? please hurry with the update!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
You'll have to wait and see. Sorry, I know that's the standard author's answer, but it's true.
Send Dobby! Send Dobby!!! Quick, before I totally hyperventilate!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Good idea, but you'll have to see what happens.
Not fond of the cliffie! But, not surprised. Bella does have a way of making trouble!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, she's so evil she makes me want to spit. I think she's almost worse than Voldemort.
How is that though I know he must survive for the rest of your plot to work you still manage to make me panic?!? Excellent skills, dearest. We're getting so close to the two of them being reunited, I can't wait. =]
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! It's hard not to panic when poor Severus' life is in such danger.
Augh! How did they see inside his house? The twist you did in the story regardiing Severus is horrible! grrr He has to get through this! He has to.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I don't think they saw inside. They saw Dumbly arrive and enter. They saw him leave. Then Severus came out with the sword and disappeared. They put it all together, the nasty jerks. It is a terrible twist, I'll admit it. I'm just evil.
No, not fond at all. I hope he gets to live to see his Hermione again.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry to do that... but not sorry enough to change it.
Much nicer to have friends who cared about him when he was recovering. :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Isn't it, though? It makes everything easier to bear.
Absolutely prodigous! This definitely the best Sev/Herm I've ever read, when's the next episode!!????
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow, thank you so much! That's quite the compliment! I'm working on the next chapter, it should be hitting the queue very soon.
Great installment! I'm glad you had Harry see the memory of Hermione, and acknowledge that there was something odd about how Severus recalled his time with her. Wouldn't it be funny if Harry realized they fall in love before young Hermione does? I hope that the part where Severus is envisioning the blending of young Hermione and His Hermione is indicative of their memories and experiences blending when His Hermione returns to her present. Wonderful foreshadowing!The potion brewing scene was adorable, plain and simple. I wonder if sharing that close experience with Severus will make young Hermione have a deeper, more heart-wrenching reaction when she find Severus wounded during her 6th year?Speaking of 6th year, could Lucius' eagerness to show his loyalty be shared by Draco, resulting in Draco's assignment to kill Dumbledore, or will Lucius still do something it offend Voldemort to the point of exacting revenge by giving Draco such a dangerous task? And wouldn't it make for a great catalyst for future events if unwittingly another Horcrux came to be in the possesion of the Malfoy family, perhaps as a 'gift for Mother'? A future reign of possessed terror, anyone?I can't wait to read the next Chapter. Keep up the kickin' work.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
! Lots went on here, huh? I think Harry will wonder, but not put two and two together about Hermione in the past. He's got so much else on his mind right now!I have to thank you for reminding me about the 6th year scene when Hermione finds Severus passed out. I had forgotten about it, and wanted to include it, so your mention was timely. ;) *switches to story and types furiously.*Lucius will push for Draco's involvement with Dumbledore. He wants his kid to be as influential as he is. Mwahahaha!What a great and completely evil idea to have a Horcrux remain. Sorry, that's not the plan here, but it's a wonderful idea for a story.As for the merging of the two Hermione's, it did forshadow their merging memories in a way. It also represented his memories and thoughts on both of them becoming one as she gets closer to the age of His Hermione.
I so love this story and I love the fact that you kept Sirius alive. And Neville getting his shot at Bellatrix. Great stuff!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! I always thought those two got a bum deal. (Sirius probably more than Neville, as he actually died!)
i LOVE your version of book 5! neville should have gotten a crack at barmy belle. great stuff, my deb. you totally rock! (or have i told you that before?) thanks so much (me blowing kisses)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Ah, my dear, you always make me smile. I almost wish Neville had killed the oddball Bella, but I don't think he would stoop so low.
I love you I love you I love you!!! You brought the doll into here from your Yule Edition!! Yah!! I hugged myself when she hugged him! Unfortunatly, if Moldie butt could get Bell out once he can do it again.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yuh, yuh, that's so true. And we will see our evil Bellatrix again later on. (I think she earned her death in canon.) I couldn't resist with the doll. I'd planned on her appearing a bit later on, but this chapter seemed to want to have her comforting appearance too.Thanks
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
, I love you too!
I like that the quills are gone and no more can arrive. I always thought something should have been done about her detentions.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I do think that the teachers' hands were tied with threat of dismissal if anything happened. But without knowing who stole those quills, it's hard for her to seek retribution. Mwahahaha!
Well, of course I will leave a review to make you happy, although it gets quite boring because it's the same thing all over again: I love it!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks,
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
! Glad you're lovin' it. Lots to come with the evil sixth-year approaching. Mwahahaha!
you're making me nervous! with all these changes, will Hermione still need to return to the past? she's not going to fall in love with icky Sirius, is she?? eeps! do those Horcruxes still need to be found and destroyed? thanks for the new chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Eeew, icky Sirius and Hermione will not fall in love. He's got other things in his future anyway. Dun, dun, dun, dun! The Horcruxes are going to be found, and Hermione will go on her extended camping trip in year seven. As for the return to the past... you'll have to wait and see. Everything will be revealed. Hopefully to everyone's satisfaction!Thanks, June!
I loved the little deviations from canon. Especially Neville getting Bellatrix! and Severus saving Hermione from the Toad. However, why on earth didn't Severus just Oblivate Harry when he saw teh memory of Hermione teaching? Seems like a recklass thing not to do?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Well, he could have, but he's built a relationship on trust with him. He's trusting Harry to keep his secret.