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Time's Treasure

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Time's Treasure

debjunk

695 Reviews   |   695 Ratings, 0 Likes, 265 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 174,630 Words 50 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Original Character

What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.

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Chapters (46)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Epilogue


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sunny33

She seems to be getting through to Lucius, at last!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes.  It's taken some time, but at last Lucius sees some good in Muggle-borns.  We can only hope that he will continue to see the light and change his future wicked ways.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes.  It's taken some time, but at last Lucius sees some good in Muggle-borns.  We can only hope that he will continue to see the light and change his future wicked ways.

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WriterMerrin

I love how you're portraying Hermione's struggle.  It does seem that they need Severus to be a spy, and this time things *can* be different.  I'm looking forward to reading it!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Things can be.  We can only hope that they are and that her trip into the past winds up being for the better.  Poor Hermione is tearing herself up.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Things can be.  We can only hope that they are and that her trip into the past winds up being for the better.  Poor Hermione is tearing herself up.

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cmwinters

If you can't listen to the song "Burning Bright" by Shinedown, at least look up the lyrics (they're on my LJ).  It may well be the Snapey-ist song I've ever heard (the chorus is "the more light shines through me, I pretend to close my eyes; the more the dark consumes me, I pretend I'm burning bright")Snape would not be Snape without the Mark.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I went over to youtube and listened to it.  Great song.  Incredibly Snapey.  I especially think that the second verse is very fitting.  That Mark is awful for him, but he definitely wouldn't be Snape without it.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Found an interesting article you might like to read; just posted that in my LJ today.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think this describes our beloved Potions master completely.  I liked the whole article, but especially liked when Miller said that "A hero does the right thing because it’s the right thing.” I always found it hard to believe that Snape acted solely because of his love/obsession for Lily.  That can only take you so far.  I don't think it's possible to have that be the main reason for 20 years of heroism on his part.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Agreed.  It's fine that they were friends, it's fine that he loved her. But for it to be his ONLY reason for *existence* since he was nine, that really cheapens his character.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I went over to youtube and listened to it.  Great song.  Incredibly Snapey.  I especially think that the second verse is very fitting.  That Mark is awful for him, but he definitely wouldn't be Snape without it.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Found an interesting article you might like to read; just posted that in my LJ today.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think this describes our beloved Potions master completely.  I liked the whole article, but especially liked when Miller said that "A hero does the right thing because it’s the right thing.” I always found it hard to believe that Snape acted solely because of his love/obsession for Lily.  That can only take you so far.  I don't think it's possible to have that be the main reason for 20 years of heroism on his part.

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Agreed.  It's fine that they were friends, it's fine that he loved her. But for it to be his ONLY reason for *existence* since he was nine, that really cheapens his character.

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rhiannon113

Okay, brilliant. I couldn't work out how you were going to keep him a Death Eater, but also effect the future. Well done. Real page turner, or scroll downer, as it were. =]

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Scroll downer, lol.  Yeah, it just wouldn't work out right if he wasn't a spy, I think.  That story would be a bit TOO different, I think.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Scroll downer, lol.  Yeah, it just wouldn't work out right if he wasn't a spy, I think.  That story would be a bit TOO different, I think.

10/10

decmeadow

I don't think Severus would be the way he is in the present without the Death Eater background.  It gave him character, courage, and strength... and the morals and honor to do what's right were proven time and time again.  But right now, past Severus is thinking he isn't capable.. and there's no way that he could learn how to be the man he is to become without being a death eater.So I agree with you full heartedly.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There's just something about Severus Snape that is so enthralling.  His courage and determination to go through with the most horrible things to help the cause make him someone hard to ignore, and easy to admire.  Without those DE experiences, he definitely wouldn't be the man he becomes.  Even if he were to be an honorable Order member, many of those awful things he endured made him the man he is in the future.  I really feel he would be lacking.  Maybe happier, but nonetheless, lacking.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There's just something about Severus Snape that is so enthralling.  His courage and determination to go through with the most horrible things to help the cause make him someone hard to ignore, and easy to admire.  Without those DE experiences, he definitely wouldn't be the man he becomes.  Even if he were to be an honorable Order member, many of those awful things he endured made him the man he is in the future.  I really feel he would be lacking.  Maybe happier, but nonetheless, lacking.

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kimjo2

yes, since he has known hermione i can see him choosing to be a death eater.  love this story.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you so much!  He certainly understands what an evil thing Voldie is.  Dumbledore surely caught him when he was at his weakest, though.  Typical of the conninving old wizard.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you so much!  He certainly understands what an evil thing Voldie is.  Dumbledore surely caught him when he was at his weakest, though.  Typical of the conninving old wizard.

10/10

sinbad

Well, Severus's spying saved everyone, so I can see why Albus asked him to do it and even why he accepted.  I can also see why it was such a disapointment to Hermione. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Who would want to see his suffering all over again?  Poor girl.  She's the only one at this stage who knows what he suffered.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Who would want to see his suffering all over again?  Poor girl.  She's the only one at this stage who knows what he suffered.

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sunny33

I see where you are coming from.  He can still be the noble, self-sacrificing spy, yet not carry the burden of guilt and shame that he did originally.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

So true!  It'll help him be a better person.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

So true!  It'll help him be a better person.

10/10

blue artemis

I can see how it is necessary to your story, but I agree with Hermione, Albus needs to be told off. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That man needs to be told off by everyone, not just Hermione.  But she will have to do.  You know Hermione, she lets her opinion be known. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

That man needs to be told off by everyone, not just Hermione.  But she will have to do.  You know Hermione, she lets her opinion be known. 

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Antigone

As much as I hate to admit it, Severus needs to be a spy. With out him on the other side, the Order doesn't have much of a chance. I hope the get together though, even with the age adn time difference...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He really does need to be the spy.  No one else could really do as good a job as he can.  His position is unique.  Time will tell whether Hermione and he get together.  I'm sure you won't be disappointed. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He really does need to be the spy.  No one else could really do as good a job as he can.  His position is unique.  Time will tell whether Hermione and he get together.  I'm sure you won't be disappointed. 

10/10

cursingjarvey

best chapter yet, in my opinion. i love how you made it so that the time line is going the same as it did originally, but so under different circumstances.update soon!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks so much!  The story will continue in that light, with the differences in the timeline highlighted.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks so much!  The story will continue in that light, with the differences in the timeline highlighted.

10/10

tacdogs

Thanks for the update, I really am enjoying the story. I can understand why you're having Severus become a spy... I hope he's right when he says things could be different, since he's starting out as a spy this time. But still!!! He's in for terrible times. Anyway, I think the story is great and am looking forward to reading more.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It's heartbreaking to think of the things that could possibly happen to him because of his spydom.  But he's willing to risk his life to help the cause, and that in itself is a different motive.  That alone will illicit different outcomes.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

It's heartbreaking to think of the things that could possibly happen to him because of his spydom.  But he's willing to risk his life to help the cause, and that in itself is a different motive.  That alone will illicit different outcomes.

10/10

E Stelex

No, please don't have him join the Death Eaters.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

So sorry.  I know part of it will be horrible for him, but he will be a great asset to the Order, and for Dumbledore.  Of course, Dumbledore doesn't really deserve to have a great asset, but, what can you do?  He's the puppet master, everyone else is just a puppet.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

So sorry.  I know part of it will be horrible for him, but he will be a great asset to the Order, and for Dumbledore.  Of course, Dumbledore doesn't really deserve to have a great asset, but, what can you do?  He's the puppet master, everyone else is just a puppet.

0/10

rhiannon113

Hermione rocks, as do you. Can't wait for the next!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  You rock too.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  You rock too.

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kimjo2

loved it!  he can be my knight ant time.  thanks so much for this wonderful update!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Wouldn't that be the best?  Thank you for the wonderful review!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Wouldn't that be the best?  Thank you for the wonderful review!!

10/10

decmeadow

Yikes!  Having your insides burned is not exactly my idea of a good day!  Hope she can still have children ^_~

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She can!  Poppy is an excellent healer and Hermione will make a full recovery.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She can!  Poppy is an excellent healer and Hermione will make a full recovery.

10/10

decmeadow

Uh oh!  I think we're going to find out what happened to that tree!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hmm, we may just do that!  But that will be in the FUTURE!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hmm, we may just do that!  But that will be in the FUTURE!

10/10

sinbad

Personally, I think that since Severus knows she is not from his time and knows she will have to go back sooner or later he won't waste his life 'pining' for her.  The Dark Lord's previous hold on him has been broken.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

You're right, Voldie's hold had definitely been broken, but Hermione really doesn't want to hurt him.  You know how she is, always worrying about everything.  And she might not attribute his pining for Lily to Voldemort either.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

You're right, Voldie's hold had definitely been broken, but Hermione really doesn't want to hurt him.  You know how she is, always worrying about everything.  And she might not attribute his pining for Lily to Voldemort either.

9/10

Maggie

Excellent!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks very much!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks very much!

0/10

sunny33

It's a bit like trying to stop any bad habit.  You know it's bad for you, but it feels so good.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, you are so right!  But are they really that bad for each other?  We'll have to see.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, you are so right!  But are they really that bad for each other?  We'll have to see.

10/10

blue artemis

Wow, I really like their relationship, so I hope something can be worked out. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hermione will need to come to her senses.  You know how stubborn she can be when she makes her mind up about something.  It will take some time.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Hermione will need to come to her senses.  You know how stubborn she can be when she makes her mind up about something.  It will take some time.

10/10

tacdogs

I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this story! Even if there are time paradoxes - that's ok!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad that's okay and I'm glad you're having fun with the story.  Time paradoxes are a bit challenging, but they create so many possibilities!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad that's okay and I'm glad you're having fun with the story.  Time paradoxes are a bit challenging, but they create so many possibilities!

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rhiannon113

Very interesting. I'm a little wrong-footed by Hermione giving the game away to Severus. I'm wondering how it'll all resolve now. Very nice. I also love the way their relationship is developing! Clever, really.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks.  I'm glad you are enjoying their relationship.  Things will be different for Severus, but some things will stay the same.  I really can't go into it too much without spoiling everything.  Okay, here it comes . . . you'll see.(I know, the most hated words in review responses!)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks.  I'm glad you are enjoying their relationship.  Things will be different for Severus, but some things will stay the same.  I really can't go into it too much without spoiling everything.  Okay, here it comes . . . you'll see.(I know, the most hated words in review responses!)

10/10

sinbad

I love how we are getting to know Severus as a youngster.  I think Hermione's mission has already worked for him.  She'll have to work on Lucius a bit more still, although I have seen some head way with him as well.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There has been a bit of headway for both of them, but Lucius will be the tougher nut to crack.  He needs to actually see that Muggle-born witches aren't what he thinks they are to be convinced.  And even then, he many not change his opinion.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

There has been a bit of headway for both of them, but Lucius will be the tougher nut to crack.  He needs to actually see that Muggle-born witches aren't what he thinks they are to be convinced.  And even then, he many not change his opinion.

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sunny33

but if he changes his personality and becoming a Death Eater, would she have ever needed to go back in time.  I am confused, time travel does my head in! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Ahh, the paradox of time travel.  It will make Hermione's head explode too when she returns to her present, but I can't say much more about that.Forgive my quoting Star Trek here, but this is one of my favorite quotes from the show.  It's from Capt. Janeway on Voyager.Time travel. Ever since my first day in the job as a Starfleet Captain I swore I'd never let myself get caught in one of these god-forsaken paradoxes. The future is the past, the past is the future. It all gives me a headache."

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Ahh, the paradox of time travel.  It will make Hermione's head explode too when she returns to her present, but I can't say much more about that.Forgive my quoting Star Trek here, but this is one of my favorite quotes from the show.  It's from Capt. Janeway on Voyager.Time travel. Ever since my first day in the job as a Starfleet Captain I swore I'd never let myself get caught in one of these god-forsaken paradoxes. The future is the past, the past is the future. It all gives me a headache."

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