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Time's Treasure

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Time's Treasure

debjunk

695 Reviews   |   695 Ratings, 0 Likes, 265 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 174,630 Words 50 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Original Character

What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.

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Chapters (46)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Part II: Waiting for you: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Part III: Returning to You: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Epilogue


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10/10

snivellusgirl

I think Hermione's doing her best, I'm not sure if it was a good idea to tell Severus so much, because how is that going to affect the future? Especially when he's her teacher?  But who can blame her? I mean, I'd tell him anything he wanted! great job, I can't wait to see where this is going!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She's definitely doing her best.  Time is a funny thing, and she can't be sure now what the future will bring.  I too would have the impulse to tell him everything.  Uh huh.She's done what she has to with Severus, now she has to see what her efforts will bring.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She's definitely doing her best.  Time is a funny thing, and she can't be sure now what the future will bring.  I too would have the impulse to tell him everything.  Uh huh.She's done what she has to with Severus, now she has to see what her efforts will bring.

0/10

rhiannon113

Okay, hats off to you b/c no one but no one can ever make me dislike Dumbledore. Great writing!! I don't know if Hermione is being smart or not. I think she's being a bit more impulsive than usual, but not in an OOC way. I just wonder what's going to happen. Nice hook!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Wow, that's high praise!  Thanks!  She is a bit more impulsive, mostly because this younger Severus is a bit more open than the jaded, bitter man that she knew growing up.What's going to happen?  Here it comes, wait for it, wait for it . . . you'll see.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Wow, that's high praise!  Thanks!  She is a bit more impulsive, mostly because this younger Severus is a bit more open than the jaded, bitter man that she knew growing up.What's going to happen?  Here it comes, wait for it, wait for it . . . you'll see.

10/10

sinbad

I think she is being quite smart in her dealings and relationship with Severus.  She went back in time to make certain changes.  How would she do that if she didn't interact with the people who she's trying to change?  Besides she's dealing with Slytherins, being honest and forthright will keep them on their toes!Smooth flowing chapter, lots of points of interest and I really liked how she dealt with James.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Definitely a good point about the Slytherin angle.  Interaction, and close interaction at that, is definitely the key here. James is quite a character.  Personally, I think he's snotty and full of himself.  His friendship with Sirius seems to bring out the worst in him.  I wonder if they weren't as close of friends, would he be such a git?  I suppose we'll never know that one.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Definitely a good point about the Slytherin angle.  Interaction, and close interaction at that, is definitely the key here. James is quite a character.  Personally, I think he's snotty and full of himself.  His friendship with Sirius seems to bring out the worst in him.  I wonder if they weren't as close of friends, would he be such a git?  I suppose we'll never know that one.

10/10

blue artemis

I'm not sure what I feel about her relationship, to be honest.  I like that he knows her reality, and that he cares, but I can't see Albus condoning a relationship between her and a student.  Anyway, I'm enjoying the story and that was a good chapter.  

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks for your opinion on that one.   Albus condones outright mistreatment of a fellow student, so who knows what he'll condone when it comes to a relationship.  Okay, enough of my anti-Dumbledore rant!Time will tell what will happen with these two.

Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)

Oh, Albus is not my favorite character.  I'm guessing he would be fine if it was Sirius she had a relationship with, but Severus?  Hee. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks for your opinion on that one.   Albus condones outright mistreatment of a fellow student, so who knows what he'll condone when it comes to a relationship.  Okay, enough of my anti-Dumbledore rant!Time will tell what will happen with these two.

Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)

Oh, Albus is not my favorite character.  I'm guessing he would be fine if it was Sirius she had a relationship with, but Severus?  Hee. 

9/10

E Stelex

Nice character development & I am enjoying your plot as well.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  That's quite the compliment.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  That's quite the compliment.  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

10/10

blue artemis

She's huggy with Harry too, so I don't think it is that strange.  I like this so far. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, good.  I'm glad it doesn't seem odd.  She's got a big heart and it just breaks when her friends are in pain.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh, good.  I'm glad it doesn't seem odd.  She's got a big heart and it just breaks when her friends are in pain.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.

0/10

snuggleslut

aw no gun jumping romance, but hugs are nice

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sorry.  There'll be bits and pieces in a couple of chapters. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sorry.  There'll be bits and pieces in a couple of chapters. 

0/10

kimjo2

love this story!!!  more please with un bel dei(sp) on top?  thanks you lovely you!                              (they don't have one that sings)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm so glad you love it so far.  I'm going to go for my voice type and ask for Una voce poco fa on top, although Un bel di is not without its charm! --These guys look like they're singing.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm so glad you love it so far.  I'm going to go for my voice type and ask for Una voce poco fa on top, although Un bel di is not without its charm! --These guys look like they're singing.

0/10

kimbee73

Lucius is such a cad. Any way...I like that you are taking the relationship slow. Especially since he hasn't made up his mind about being a Death Eater yet. Maybe....he won't. That would sure change a lot of things.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, it would change everything!  He'll make up his mind once he's heard everything.  And Lucius is quite a cad.  What a horrible flirt!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Yes, it would change everything!  He'll make up his mind once he's heard everything.  And Lucius is quite a cad.  What a horrible flirt!

9/10

sinbad

Lucius making a pass at Hermione was a nice touch.  His reaction was funny as heck.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think he needed to be put in his place.  Of course, Severus is right, and it won't take him long to be back to himself.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I think he needed to be put in his place.  Of course, Severus is right, and it won't take him long to be back to himself.

0/10

Muggline

Well, Severus has a lot on his plate now. I wonder how you will continue this. If Severus does not become a follower of His Dark Snarkiness, he probably won't hear the prophecy, maybe Lily and James will survive...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh the possibilities are endless!  I would love to tell you exactly what happens, but, I can't.  This story is long and hopefully you will like what happens.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Oh the possibilities are endless!  I would love to tell you exactly what happens, but, I can't.  This story is long and hopefully you will like what happens.

0/10

smurfgirlz

Nice Chapter!  :)  hehe I loved the way you had Lucius portrayed, interesting that he would lose his composure (in my eyes, he seemed to faulter and actually be unsure of himself at that moment) when he heard of her being muggle-born...can't wait to read more!  Thank you again for sharing this story! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He definitely faltered.  He's used to everything going his way and knowing everything about everything.  He had no idea how to respond to her!  Thanks you for reviewing and for your kind words.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He definitely faltered.  He's used to everything going his way and knowing everything about everything.  He had no idea how to respond to her!  Thanks you for reviewing and for your kind words.

0/10

rhiannon113

Very Interesting! I keep shouting, 'Aw, he needs someone to be nice to him' alternated w/ 'OMG! Don't, he can't be a spy or protect Harry if you keep going!!'  great perspective on the story, and I love the OOC Snape next to the very in-character Hermione. Also, Lucius the boy-letcher, how funny!Can't wait for more!!!!  Write-on...

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Fear not, I think you will like how it all ends up eventually.  (I hope that's not too forward of me, I'm not trying to imply that my story is perfect or anything.)  I'm glad Hermoine is in character.  She's a bit difficult to pull off, I think.  As for Severus, he'll be a tiny bit more in character when he's not relating to Hermione.  At least for now.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Fear not, I think you will like how it all ends up eventually.  (I hope that's not too forward of me, I'm not trying to imply that my story is perfect or anything.)  I'm glad Hermoine is in character.  She's a bit difficult to pull off, I think.  As for Severus, he'll be a tiny bit more in character when he's not relating to Hermione.  At least for now.

0/10

kimjo2

ooohhh!  a sequel!  yes, please!  thanks so much for this lovely story.  smoochies, always!                                             (me blowing smoochies)

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks, kimjo!  It'll take a bit, but it'll happen.  It's in the teeny-tiny baby stages right now.

0/10

kimbee73

I like this story and I can't wait to see how you have Hermione relate to Lucius. She seems to know how to talk to Severus though. Update soon!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad you think she's doing a good job with Severus.  Her mission with Lucius will take some effort.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad you think she's doing a good job with Severus.  Her mission with Lucius will take some effort.

0/10

kimbee73

Very intriguing start. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you.  Hopefully you'll enjoy what happens.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you.  Hopefully you'll enjoy what happens.

0/10

Antigone

Well, I just got around to starting this fic now, and I like it so far. I'm excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad you found it and like it. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I'm glad you found it and like it. 

0/10

Muggline

It seems strange that she just chats about the future like that, not fearing any changes in history she might cause. Please tell me that this is not going to be an agonizingly sweet "we are all great big Cheshire Cats" story...That being said, I am curious about the next chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She does fear for the future.  She was reticent to discuss any of this with Severus, but Albus told her to tell him whatever she felt was relevant, so she's embraced that wholeheartedly.  I'm not exactly sure what you mean by the Cheshire Cat remark, forgive my ignorance, but this won't be a sickeningly sweet story.  Of course, Hermione has already changed the future with her appearance in the past and the things she has already told Severus.  However, everyone will not be living behind white picket fences by the time she returns to her present, I assure you.  There will be plenty of twists, turns, and danger.  That's about all I'm willing to divulge at this early stage of the game.  :)   Thanks for your input.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

She does fear for the future.  She was reticent to discuss any of this with Severus, but Albus told her to tell him whatever she felt was relevant, so she's embraced that wholeheartedly.  I'm not exactly sure what you mean by the Cheshire Cat remark, forgive my ignorance, but this won't be a sickeningly sweet story.  Of course, Hermione has already changed the future with her appearance in the past and the things she has already told Severus.  However, everyone will not be living behind white picket fences by the time she returns to her present, I assure you.  There will be plenty of twists, turns, and danger.  That's about all I'm willing to divulge at this early stage of the game.  :)   Thanks for your input.

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite interesting.  You've taken a few years off of Malfoy, but that works for this. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I have de-aged him by a little bit, but I wanted Hermione to be able to relate to both Lucius and Severus well, and the only way I saw that happening was if they were both of age.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

I have de-aged him by a little bit, but I wanted Hermione to be able to relate to both Lucius and Severus well, and the only way I saw that happening was if they were both of age.

9/10

aura

“I was your teacher!” he exclaimed.Hermione smiled. “Yes, and now I’m yours. You had better hope I don’t hold a grudge.”   *giggle/snort*Some really clever lines in this. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  I'm glad you found that part entertaining. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thank you!  I'm glad you found that part entertaining. 

0/10

kimjo2

oh goody!  the game's afoot!  more, please, nice lady.  prettyplease with an aria on top?  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The game is just beginning.  Hmm, what aria should I accept?  There are so many to choose from.  How about O mio babbino caro? 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

The game is just beginning.  Hmm, what aria should I accept?  There are so many to choose from.  How about O mio babbino caro? 

0/10

sunny33

Lucius may be a harder nut to crack!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He definitely will be, but his interactions with Hermione will be fun.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

He definitely will be, but his interactions with Hermione will be fun.

9/10

sinbad

Nice light read, just what I needed after the day I had!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sorry your day wasn't great, but I'm glad I could lift your spirits a little.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Sorry your day wasn't great, but I'm glad I could lift your spirits a little.

0/10

smurfgirlz

I'm enjoying this story, would like to see where it leads to :)  Hehe I like young Severus - and I'm kinda anxious to see how a young Lucius responds to having a "mudblood" teacher...lol  Thank you for sharing this story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lucius' response will not be as 'refined' as his usual manner.  ;)  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Lucius' response will not be as 'refined' as his usual manner.  ;)  Thanks for taking the time to review!

10/10

sinbad

I think you are on to a great idea and I look forward to seeing where you will be taking us.

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  This should be a little different than most time turner fics. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)

Thanks!  This should be a little different than most time turner fics. 

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