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Time's Treasure
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What would happen if Severus found out what his life would be like as a Death Eater before he got the Dark Mark? What would happen if Hermione was the one to tell him. AU SSHG A time turner fic.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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I think Hermione's doing her best, I'm not sure if it was a good idea to tell Severus so much, because how is that going to affect the future? Especially when he's her teacher? But who can blame her? I mean, I'd tell him anything he wanted! great job, I can't wait to see where this is going!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She's definitely doing her best. Time is a funny thing, and she can't be sure now what the future will bring. I too would have the impulse to tell him everything. Uh huh.She's done what she has to with Severus, now she has to see what her efforts will bring.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She's definitely doing her best. Time is a funny thing, and she can't be sure now what the future will bring. I too would have the impulse to tell him everything. Uh huh.She's done what she has to with Severus, now she has to see what her efforts will bring.
Okay, hats off to you b/c no one but no one can ever make me dislike Dumbledore. Great writing!! I don't know if Hermione is being smart or not. I think she's being a bit more impulsive than usual, but not in an OOC way. I just wonder what's going to happen. Nice hook!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow, that's high praise! Thanks! She is a bit more impulsive, mostly because this younger Severus is a bit more open than the jaded, bitter man that she knew growing up.What's going to happen? Here it comes, wait for it, wait for it . . . you'll see.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Wow, that's high praise! Thanks! She is a bit more impulsive, mostly because this younger Severus is a bit more open than the jaded, bitter man that she knew growing up.What's going to happen? Here it comes, wait for it, wait for it . . . you'll see.
I think she is being quite smart in her dealings and relationship with Severus. She went back in time to make certain changes. How would she do that if she didn't interact with the people who she's trying to change? Besides she's dealing with Slytherins, being honest and forthright will keep them on their toes!Smooth flowing chapter, lots of points of interest and I really liked how she dealt with James.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Definitely a good point about the Slytherin angle. Interaction, and close interaction at that, is definitely the key here. James is quite a character. Personally, I think he's snotty and full of himself. His friendship with Sirius seems to bring out the worst in him. I wonder if they weren't as close of friends, would he be such a git? I suppose we'll never know that one.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Definitely a good point about the Slytherin angle. Interaction, and close interaction at that, is definitely the key here. James is quite a character. Personally, I think he's snotty and full of himself. His friendship with Sirius seems to bring out the worst in him. I wonder if they weren't as close of friends, would he be such a git? I suppose we'll never know that one.
I'm not sure what I feel about her relationship, to be honest. I like that he knows her reality, and that he cares, but I can't see Albus condoning a relationship between her and a student. Anyway, I'm enjoying the story and that was a good chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks for your opinion on that one. Albus condones outright mistreatment of a fellow student, so who knows what he'll condone when it comes to a relationship. Okay, enough of my anti-Dumbledore rant!Time will tell what will happen with these two.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Oh, Albus is not my favorite character. I'm guessing he would be fine if it was Sirius she had a relationship with, but Severus? Hee.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks for your opinion on that one. Albus condones outright mistreatment of a fellow student, so who knows what he'll condone when it comes to a relationship. Okay, enough of my anti-Dumbledore rant!Time will tell what will happen with these two.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Oh, Albus is not my favorite character. I'm guessing he would be fine if it was Sirius she had a relationship with, but Severus? Hee.
Nice character development & I am enjoying your plot as well.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! That's quite the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! That's quite the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
She's huggy with Harry too, so I don't think it is that strange. I like this so far.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, good. I'm glad it doesn't seem odd. She's got a big heart and it just breaks when her friends are in pain. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh, good. I'm glad it doesn't seem odd. She's got a big heart and it just breaks when her friends are in pain. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
aw no gun jumping romance, but hugs are nice
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry. There'll be bits and pieces in a couple of chapters.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry. There'll be bits and pieces in a couple of chapters.
love this story!!! more please with un bel dei(sp) on top? thanks you lovely you! (they don't have one that sings)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm so glad you love it so far. I'm going to go for my voice type and ask for Una voce poco fa on top, although Un bel di is not without its charm! --These guys look like they're singing.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm so glad you love it so far. I'm going to go for my voice type and ask for Una voce poco fa on top, although Un bel di is not without its charm! --These guys look like they're singing.
Lucius is such a cad. Any way...I like that you are taking the relationship slow. Especially since he hasn't made up his mind about being a Death Eater yet. Maybe....he won't. That would sure change a lot of things.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, it would change everything! He'll make up his mind once he's heard everything. And Lucius is quite a cad. What a horrible flirt!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Yes, it would change everything! He'll make up his mind once he's heard everything. And Lucius is quite a cad. What a horrible flirt!
Lucius making a pass at Hermione was a nice touch. His reaction was funny as heck.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think he needed to be put in his place. Of course, Severus is right, and it won't take him long to be back to himself.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I think he needed to be put in his place. Of course, Severus is right, and it won't take him long to be back to himself.
Well, Severus has a lot on his plate now. I wonder how you will continue this. If Severus does not become a follower of His Dark Snarkiness, he probably won't hear the prophecy, maybe Lily and James will survive...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh the possibilities are endless! I would love to tell you exactly what happens, but, I can't. This story is long and hopefully you will like what happens.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Oh the possibilities are endless! I would love to tell you exactly what happens, but, I can't. This story is long and hopefully you will like what happens.
Nice Chapter! :) hehe I loved the way you had Lucius portrayed, interesting that he would lose his composure (in my eyes, he seemed to faulter and actually be unsure of himself at that moment) when he heard of her being muggle-born...can't wait to read more! Thank you again for sharing this story! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He definitely faltered. He's used to everything going his way and knowing everything about everything. He had no idea how to respond to her! Thanks you for reviewing and for your kind words.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He definitely faltered. He's used to everything going his way and knowing everything about everything. He had no idea how to respond to her! Thanks you for reviewing and for your kind words.
Very Interesting! I keep shouting, 'Aw, he needs someone to be nice to him' alternated w/ 'OMG! Don't, he can't be a spy or protect Harry if you keep going!!' great perspective on the story, and I love the OOC Snape next to the very in-character Hermione. Also, Lucius the boy-letcher, how funny!Can't wait for more!!!! Write-on...
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Fear not, I think you will like how it all ends up eventually. (I hope that's not too forward of me, I'm not trying to imply that my story is perfect or anything.) I'm glad Hermoine is in character. She's a bit difficult to pull off, I think. As for Severus, he'll be a tiny bit more in character when he's not relating to Hermione. At least for now.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Fear not, I think you will like how it all ends up eventually. (I hope that's not too forward of me, I'm not trying to imply that my story is perfect or anything.) I'm glad Hermoine is in character. She's a bit difficult to pull off, I think. As for Severus, he'll be a tiny bit more in character when he's not relating to Hermione. At least for now.
ooohhh! a sequel! yes, please! thanks so much for this lovely story. smoochies, always! (me blowing smoochies)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks, kimjo! It'll take a bit, but it'll happen. It's in the teeny-tiny baby stages right now.
I like this story and I can't wait to see how you have Hermione relate to Lucius. She seems to know how to talk to Severus though. Update soon!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm glad you think she's doing a good job with Severus. Her mission with Lucius will take some effort.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm glad you think she's doing a good job with Severus. Her mission with Lucius will take some effort.
Very intriguing start. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you. Hopefully you'll enjoy what happens.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you. Hopefully you'll enjoy what happens.
Well, I just got around to starting this fic now, and I like it so far. I'm excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm glad you found it and like it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I'm glad you found it and like it.
It seems strange that she just chats about the future like that, not fearing any changes in history she might cause. Please tell me that this is not going to be an agonizingly sweet "we are all great big Cheshire Cats" story...That being said, I am curious about the next chapter!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She does fear for the future. She was reticent to discuss any of this with Severus, but Albus told her to tell him whatever she felt was relevant, so she's embraced that wholeheartedly. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by the Cheshire Cat remark, forgive my ignorance, but this won't be a sickeningly sweet story. Of course, Hermione has already changed the future with her appearance in the past and the things she has already told Severus. However, everyone will not be living behind white picket fences by the time she returns to her present, I assure you. There will be plenty of twists, turns, and danger. That's about all I'm willing to divulge at this early stage of the game. :) Thanks for your input.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
She does fear for the future. She was reticent to discuss any of this with Severus, but Albus told her to tell him whatever she felt was relevant, so she's embraced that wholeheartedly. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by the Cheshire Cat remark, forgive my ignorance, but this won't be a sickeningly sweet story. Of course, Hermione has already changed the future with her appearance in the past and the things she has already told Severus. However, everyone will not be living behind white picket fences by the time she returns to her present, I assure you. There will be plenty of twists, turns, and danger. That's about all I'm willing to divulge at this early stage of the game. :) Thanks for your input.
That was quite interesting. You've taken a few years off of Malfoy, but that works for this.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I have de-aged him by a little bit, but I wanted Hermione to be able to relate to both Lucius and Severus well, and the only way I saw that happening was if they were both of age.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
I have de-aged him by a little bit, but I wanted Hermione to be able to relate to both Lucius and Severus well, and the only way I saw that happening was if they were both of age.
“I was your teacher!” he exclaimed.Hermione smiled. “Yes, and now I’m yours. You had better hope I don’t hold a grudge.” *giggle/snort*Some really clever lines in this.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! I'm glad you found that part entertaining.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thank you! I'm glad you found that part entertaining.
oh goody! the game's afoot! more, please, nice lady. prettyplease with an aria on top? thanks so much
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
The game is just beginning. Hmm, what aria should I accept? There are so many to choose from. How about O mio babbino caro?
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
The game is just beginning. Hmm, what aria should I accept? There are so many to choose from. How about O mio babbino caro?
Lucius may be a harder nut to crack!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He definitely will be, but his interactions with Hermione will be fun.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
He definitely will be, but his interactions with Hermione will be fun.
Nice light read, just what I needed after the day I had!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry your day wasn't great, but I'm glad I could lift your spirits a little.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Sorry your day wasn't great, but I'm glad I could lift your spirits a little.
I'm enjoying this story, would like to see where it leads to :) Hehe I like young Severus - and I'm kinda anxious to see how a young Lucius responds to having a "mudblood" teacher...lol Thank you for sharing this story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Lucius' response will not be as 'refined' as his usual manner. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review!
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Lucius' response will not be as 'refined' as his usual manner. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review!
I think you are on to a great idea and I look forward to seeing where you will be taking us.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! This should be a little different than most time turner fics.
Response from debjunk (Author of Time's Treasure)
Thanks! This should be a little different than most time turner fics.