I don't know ... Ron vs Severus vs Lucius, or possibly Severus and Lucius? Hmmm ... (wicked grin).  I guess that could be considered a terrible mess or terribly intriguing.  Update soon please!

What a fantastic story! I can't wait to see what happens.

I have a feeling that if Hermione goes to visit Ron, she will find something she does not want to see. Ah well, I am sure they will break up anyway. Perhaps Hermione is desiring Lucius because of the potion. It is likely that the book can affect peoples' emotions. I look forward to discovering to whom Hermione (or the book) chooses for her virgin's time. Would she actually have to collect her virgin's blood  after intercourse with a man? Or could she possibly make herself bleed which would count?Anyway, I am quite curious as to what happens next. Please update soon!

I have a sneaky feeling she is going to sleep with Malfoy and wind up with Severus (which would please me!).

That's a hard-learned lesson, indeed. This isn't much of a choice, but will she be able to return to Ron after all this?

This chapter was wonderful - love how you are weaving it together - cannot wait for the next one - super work...

OO so its to be a Lusmione tale is it----  ooo  should be good then!  Great start here BTWm looking forward to more.

Wow, this is very exciting!  I can't wait to see what will happen next.  Update soon pretty please?

Marvelous, intriguing beginning.... words are failing me.  I can't wait for the next installment of this story!

Already bookmarked it, but if I hit the refresh button repeatedly, will that make it update faster?   ;-) 

Very nice.  Good length to the chapter.  Kinda creepy how Lucius keeps him in a bed, but while Snape has Snow White's coloring, I can't imagine anyone keeping him in a glass box.  Looking forward to the next bit.

Absolutely fantastic - this has the making of a top fic with the plot being so interesting.  I cannot wait for the next chapter - Bravo

Stunning first chapter; completely engrossing. I am already chomping at the bit for the rest of the story. The dynamic you have created between Hermione & Lucius is positively electric -- both menacing and seductive to each of them. Wow! And the creepiness of the dreams, the shadowy figure, the book and Severus' corpse in the dungeons is simply spine tingling! Chills!!!! Thank you so much for taking up this challenge and producing something so fascinating!!

Oh my goodness, this is a lovely story! I'm entirely intregued, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Thank you so much for writing, and I look forward to seeing the next part!

This is quite interesting. I can't wait to see where it goes.

Oh wow, I'm totally hooked already!!! This is such a great post DH plot. Thanks for an awesome chapter and please update soon!! ~ Brena

I'm intrigued. I'd rather see SS/HG than LM/HG but I think I can live with it if that's how it ends up lol.

Wow! This is quite a powerful story and very well written.  The twist in the plot with the Dark book and Lucius actions really draw you in. I think you’ve captured Lucius beautifully and really look forward to reading just how you’ll interpret the ‘take notice’ part and ‘dare he say beautiful’ parts of your prompt. However, it’s Hermione that sought him out… interesting. Looking forward to your next installment.

Very Intersting - I can't wait to see how you take this further.

I love this so far. Lucius is very interesting the way you've written him. One minute flirting, the next calling her an idiot. I think the man may be a bit confused as to what he feels. It should be interesting seeing how their relationship develops.Adding this to my favs so I won't miss an update.  

Old Rickman eh? Clever. :p

I like this story a lot. It's exciting and it has Lucius in it which is always a plus. And it's not psycho!Lucius, it's Bad-Ass-but-polite!Lucius, that's a double plus.

And I also have a pairing wish for later on, but I know I likely won't get my way... Unless I know you, then it's possible that I might. And if I don't and I do then I want to know you. :p

I like how you keep Lucius in character and don't make him "soft".

Great start. Very interesting. Looking forward to more!

Ooo....intriguing! Looking forward to more!

I must hurry to the next chapter for more snape then.

Oh how sad. To totally screw up and not realize until its too late. and that's a kind of connection she'll never be able to get back even if they do patch things up! Anyways. I'm happy to see that there is still some hope foe them. Keep those Chapters coming! Cheers! ~Brena