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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

BrenaMarie

Wow. Its so crazy that I just don't know if I can believe Severus or not. I mean I want to believe him but he's a pretty good liar too. I hope Hermione remembers what she needs to make all this crazyness make sense. I'm off to Chapter 21! Cheers ~ Brena

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's a very good liar. :)

10/10

BrenaMarie

Holy Crap. I'm kinda glad I waited for a few chapters to post because I'm so anxious to see how this fight goes down. I'm so happy to see Hermione sticking to her guns. I just hope it carries through in the next chapter. Cheers! ~Brena

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! I have the next one coming up tonight or tomorrow. :) Hope you enjoy.

10/10

sassy19

yea!!!! great chapter

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

0/10

kimjo2

yes!!  finally a hint!  i felt as sad as hermione did reading severus'  letter.  they doooo belong together!  thanks so much for the lovely update.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

:) thanks! more up tonight

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

:) thanks! more up tonight

10/10

kizzy7

Am dying to find out what she forgot!! Severus' letter was so sad... I can't help but feel sorry for him.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, I feel sorry for him, too. :( LOL MOre up soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yeah, I feel sorry for him, too. :( LOL MOre up soon.

0/10

June W

eeps!!  does it make a difference that she didn't break the portrait over her head, but against the wall?  I sure hope all goes well (i.e., badly) with Lucius and Cissa.  goodbye, Ron - please!  thank you for the new updates!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you enjoyed. I'm thinking the Malfoys will get theirs. Hehe

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you enjoyed. I'm thinking the Malfoys will get theirs. Hehe

0/10

Guinnevere

Eh, NOW I know where I've been getting the memory nudges in this story, it's one of the classic story types: Psyche and Eros, Isis and Osiris, or Beauty and the Beast, maybe.Very good! She's "burned" her shadowy husband with her lamp of revealment, and now she has to search for a way to win him back.Lots of good stuff, Southern. Good chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! :)

0/10

lauren marie

wow, I just started reading this like two days ago and I absolutley adore how the story is progressing so far.  Malfoy's deception was so well played, I really didn't see it coming and I'm loving your portrayl of Snape here.  Please update soon! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm so glad Malfoy was tricky enough. :) Thanks so much for reading.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm so glad Malfoy was tricky enough. :) Thanks so much for reading.

0/10

mock_turtle

wow!  wow wow wow!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

  :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

  :)

10/10

Maddie

Fantastic chapter. However, no matter what Severus says I have a tendancy to believe him. I am so confused. Is he just a brilliant manipulator who does not want to let her go because she is his possession? Or, did Hermione really choose to hide memories of her previous affection for her Professor and Severus loved her prior to the bonding? If that is so, why play this game with the Malfoys? What purpose could they possibly have--they have proved they hate his wife. If Severus truly loved Hermione, surly he would not want to subject her to the abuse from his so called "friends?"

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's got a smooth tongue that's for sure. I'll have more up to answer your questions soon (I hope they're all answered!) , and I hope you like where this goes. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

He's got a smooth tongue that's for sure. I'll have more up to answer your questions soon (I hope they're all answered!) , and I hope you like where this goes. :)

10/10

faula_tara

thankyousomuch i started reading at chapter 15 at 2 am its now 8 am i even managed to get the kids off to schooli am really pleased witht he way htis ended ill look forward to more of your workhugs and chocolate julie

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you so much! I'm sorry you lost sleep but am pleased you felt it was worth it! :) xoxoxooxx

10/10

la Chatelaine

I'm just glad you suffered no more than property damage although that is quite bad enough.  I am more surprised and pleased that you managed to update at all.  As for the ongoing, I'm all confused and disconbobulated.  Suddenly everything that was almost right seems to be not so right anymore.  Brrrr!  Well, the only thing wrong with life is that one has to live it chronologically, so if you must, you must...Welcome back. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. :) More up soon!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you very much. :) More up soon!

10/10

braye27

What a wonderful first chapter!  Nice and long so you could set the stage for the chapters to come.  And I loved that "Mr Rickman" is the owner of the bookstore and that Snape alive at Malfoy Manor.Beth

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

It's been a while since I've been on the site! Nice to know people are still reading. :)

0/10

debjunk

Yay, I finally caught up!  Now I can say, hurry up and update again soon.  As if you had nothing better to do.  "Lord Thingy" made me laugh as did much of the articles in this chapter.  I especially appreciated the sacking of Rita Skeeter.  Pest.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

A big pest! :) Glad you enjoyed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

A big pest! :) Glad you enjoyed.

0/10

debjunk

Ha ha, Lucius deserves every single bad dream he gets!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Big time. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Big time. :)

0/10

debjunk

I'm glad they talked and there's good reasons for what happened.  It will help when Harry and Ron come storming in.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading!

0/10

kimjo2

loved the different format!  i am all agog to see how lucius will sleeze his way out.  thanks so much for the update

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I will have Lucius confronted, but... you know how that goes. haha

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I will have Lucius confronted, but... you know how that goes. haha

0/10

debjunk

OK, I'm going to bed.  Great chapter.  It's like a comedy of errors.  At least Herm's friends know what's up now.  Not that they can do anything about it.  Stupid Malfoy.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~grin~ It's always better when your friends are in the know.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~grin~ It's always better when your friends are in the know.

0/10

debjunk

Would you quit making such great chapter cliffies?  I need to go to bed, and I can't stop reading. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Bad, bad SW :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Bad, bad SW :)

0/10

debjunk

So did Malfoy Imperious Ron?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~winks at you~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~winks at you~

0/10

debjunk

Now I'm really puzzled.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Awesome. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Awesome. :)

0/10

debjunk

I can't wait to see what Draco has to say.  Luckily, the answer is only a click away!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I love that about completed stories--no waiting! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I love that about completed stories--no waiting! :)

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debjunk

Welcome back indeed!  I never trusted Lucius.  I just couldn't put my finger on what was up.  Still can't really.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

:) He's so easy to not trust, isn't he?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

:) He's so easy to not trust, isn't he?

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debjunk

Oh yeah, that last dream was so nice.  You've set up such a feeling of dread throughout this.  It's captivating, but it's also nice to see there will be some positive things going on as well.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :)

0/10

sunny33

That was quite a different way of getting the information across.   I particularly liked Luna's pieces.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :) Luna was fun

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. :) Luna was fun

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